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I. Basic Information


» Name: Kegare Okihana
» Alias: Mère Alizarine (Mother Alizarin), Ali

» Age: 256
» Gender: Female

» Association: Former Gotei

» Appearance:

Kegare "Ali" Okihana [Tier 4-1, Hazard Rank D] PROF_sample_163c4af652483816339139f79ff8dc7c

Kegare is taller than your average japanese woman at 5'11". She has a fit, curvy build and has soft, smooth skin. Her complexion is a little on the pink side, but since she's sequestered herself she's come to be a bit paler over the years, and has even diminished what was once a firm, toned body into something softer and not quite as slim as she once was.

She has incredibly long, silky red-pink hair which reaches all the way down past her rear when let down and unbound, though in it's ponytail it usually reaches just to her lower back. This hair while wild, is generally left unkempt and all over the place, giving her a somewhat untamed look when she isn't dressed up for her work.

Her facial features are gentle and smooth, but with a strong, confident chin and a smile that almost daring, making her startlingly good at hiding her feelings since her natural smile is so cool and calm. Her eyes being a fierce, shining blue that bleeds intelligence and craft only adds to that look of daring. At first glance, one might feel like Kegare was an older sister, or an upperclassman, or even a bully.


I. Personality


» Personality:

Kegare was at one point a rather bright and aspiring woman. She had strong goals, was well-liked thanks to her sociable personality and good looks. She enjoyed the attention and felt that she had an obligation to the soul society because of that gift, she sought to use her popularity to inspire others to not only be good people, but be BETTER people, and seek to improve themselves and some of these sentiments survive in fragments in who she is today.

But other personality traits have surfaced as well. First and foremost she is tired and somewhat jaded. Not in the sense that she feels nothing matters, for she STRONGLY feels that individuals can have strong influences on the world, she simply has been through such that she doesn't feel she has it in her to BE that change. Her failures plague her and it's not uncommon for her to dip into bouts of depression and self doubt. Depression she generally squashes under unhealthy habits and her new occupation. She feels that there is no point in valor or heroism, and that trying to do the right thing can just set yourself up for failure as you fail to meet your own expectations. As such she is a hard realist and often plays the devil’s advocate in most situations.

Her Motto is: Prepare for the Worst, and Expect to fail anyway.

I. History


» History:


Kegare was born in the soul society, into an upstanding Family. While her family did not garner much influence, they were a respected line of shinigami that had served in the Gotei for generations. Naturally when she came to adulthood, she entered the Shino academy. Because of her pretty appearance and likeable personality she was quite popular and made a name for herself in helping her peers better their own skills rather than focusing on her own means of improving. Because of this, she did not graduate quite as quickly as some of her siblings, but she still managed to graduate.

After graduation, Kegare joined the Gotei under Squad 12 and became a respectable member of the Bureau Research and Development, often finding herself studying the enemies of soul society, however since Hollow studies were taboo thanks to incidents revolving around Vizards, she instead focused her research on the various types of demons that could be found throughout the worlds. An endeavor that would pay off in the future.

While Kegare was not in the gotei for the third world war, she was active at the time of the infamous Demon Incursion. Following the occupation of the Gotei by demon forces, Kegare attempted to continue her research, making good of a bad situation by trying to gain as much information on their occupiers as possible. This however, ultimately, drew the wrong kind of attention, from one particularly dumb, but nasty Demon named Ur.

Mistaking her intellectual endeavors as some sort of infatuation with demons, the demon managed to restrain and kidnap the woman, imprisoning her and attempting to get her to admit these perceived intimate feelings that he believed she had for their race as he slowly began to form an obscene obsession with her. However, she refused to entertain his obsessive assumptions and continued to refute any attempts at getting any such deranged confession out of her. Ultimately this led to a particularly ill-conceived plan. Ur decided that if Kegare would not give in to her love for demons, then he would make her into a davana based solely around such an infatuation with them.

Before she knew it, Kegare found herself in the center of a ritual, Ur intending to pry the core of her soul out of her body as a sacrifice and create a davana to his design and then force it to occupy her corpse, giving him the adoring slave he so desired.

As fate would have it, Kegare was well versed in knowledge, however conjecture and theory-based, around these Davana creation rituals. Being bound, she had no hope of simply breaking free and taking out her kidnapper. Her only hope was to trick him.

Hijacking the ritual once it had begun, she managed to ram the blade Ur had intended to use into his chest using her knee, but she knew this would not be enough to kill him. With no other options, she finished the ritual herself, offering up his soul as the catalyst in the creation of the Davara. In an instant, Ur’s Za Koa core collapsed on itself, being crushed out of existence as a void was torn through his chest, obliterating him. But in the process, a Davana was born, but rather than into a waiting corpse vessel, it was implanted and fused into her very being. Having been desperate, she based this Danava around a Fairy Tale from her youth:

The Girl who Fell Through the World. A story about a young woman who falls through the world to a magical land to escape her problems, but having not learned from her mistakes is forced to repeat them, spreading her failures through this new land and destroying it. When she finally had left that magical world in ruins, and she finally returned home: she could not even muster a smile, as after all she had been through even this old familiar place didn’t feel like home.

From this, the Origin of Rueful Hubris was formed and the Davana fused with her completely, twisting her zanpaku’to and her soul in entirety as she felt as if her entire soul were being mulched and remade. when she finally escaped from the prison, she promptly fled to the world of the living, terrified that her corrupted body might somehow harm her fellow Gotei. Escaping to the world of the living along with a gigai she had created herself, she went to the world of the living and went into hiding in Madagascar, focusing on gaining proper control of these new powers and this corruption of her soul. Years later, when she finally gained a handle over her new abilities, she learned that the Gotei had purged the demons from the sereitei. And while this was an incredible moment of joy for her, she also found that she couldn’t possibly go back. Anti-demon sentiment had grown considerably, and even the few spiritual individuals she had come to know in the world of the living had stories of demons and even ziamachi shinigami being put under incredible scrutiny, even isolated incidents of particularly zealous anti-demon shinigami going so far as to give the atmosphere of a witch hunt. Her home had changed, and although she knew that if she put in enough work she could be accepted back, she wasn't sure if she could trust herself.

At first she became determined, focusing on learning more about her new condition and finding a way to turn herself back. But experiment after experiment failed miserably, and in time she fell into despair. Not only this, but her new powers would bring to mind her own shortcomings. Her lacking performance in helping push back the demons during the initial incursion. So many comrades she had failed to save. And of course, her ultimate fall from grace in becoming this twisted hybrid.

In time, she gave up on trying to fix herself, or even trying to carry on the duties and principles that she had once held so dear in her heart. Her attempt to maintain a healthy life as a human in the world of the living began failing, her gigai’s physique began to decline in her depression, and she was unable to even find herself a normal job. In her sink of failing self worth, she began working as a prostitute, initially for a seedy inn. She began to drink and abuse drugs, but what ultimately saved her was seeing other humans fall into hopelessness alongside her. Young women who felt the world had failed them, throwing themselves away. Even though she had lost the will to help herself, she still maintained the will to try and help others.

Cleaning herself up for the most part and weaning herself off hard drugs, she promptly started moving up among the prostitutes, and in the end, she wound up killing the inn owner in his sleep using her powers. Taking over the establishment, she maintained the business, but began rehabilitating those in her employ that showed a willingness to save themselves using the money made by those who were beyond saving. She herself even moonlighting as a prostitute when she wasn’t performing her duties as a matron in order to collect information on other establishments. At least, that’s what she told herself.

For all of this sudden good she was doing, she was still addicted to alcohol and in truth she’d even grown addicted to the feeling of separating herself from rational thought and modesty whenever she handled a client. Maybe it was her new demonic side, or maybe she was simply that desperate to separate herself from the failure she had once been, but in any case even with her side work of charity, she still continued managing her whores and servicing her own trusted clientele. And, rarely, in the event that one of her girls shows signs of budding spiritual abilities: takes them under her wing. Unintentionally starting an all-female spiritual gang: Les Merles (The Blackbirds) when some of her girls that she rehabilitated began banding together and began serving as local protection against hollows and other malevolent spiritual beings.

Initially Kegare rebuked these actions but finding that she was unable to stop them, eventually came about to leading the group so that at the very least she could keep an eye on them. And even if she wasn’t able to help herself out of her own sinkhole of a life, she’d do everything for her girls.



I. Equipment


» Equipment:

I. Racial Techniques/Abilities/Skills



I. Atma Vatou


» Atma Vatou Name: Pillar of Dying Hubris

» Atma Vatou Appearance: Takes the form of a spear which separates into four vertical segments of equal length. The spear itself has a spiral pattern along it's length and a deep blue hue to the metal itself. The entire weapon is a single piece of metal. The weapon itself extends 3 meters in length and has a general thickness of about 2-3 inches.

» Atma Vatou Abilities:
A spear fashined from a pillar of belief, manifesting as a result of her understanding of her origin and as a result gaining the ability to rip the weight of their failures and sins from their very soul as fuel for this weapon.

If at any point this weapon pierces a target's body (Puncture all layers of skin and reach the tissues beneath (Muscle, Organs, ect), Kegare's energy reserves are replenished based on the "virtue" of the target, however the Metric occurs from the point of view of Kegare and in actuality is simply based on the target's race. This energy is generated by offering up the target's Sins and Failures to Nidhanna as a tribute in exchange for the energy.

"Innocents" Human, Iramasha, Quincy - A beginner-level ability at the target's tier

"Neutral Shini, Fullbring, High-Spec, Danava - An adept-level ability at the target's tier

"Cruel" Arrancar, Vizard, Demon Hybrids - An advanced-level ability at the target's tier

"Despised" Hollows, Demons, and Sueki - Several advanced-level abilities at the target's tier


This process is so thorough that Sinners and Hollows slain by this weapon have their Failures and Sins consumed completely and entirely, cleansing the spirit and reintroducing them back into the soul cycle.
A target can only supply Kegare with this energy once since the process drains them.

When the spear itself is separated into it's four segments and planted into the ground, a field is generated within the bounds of the space the segments occupy, draining targets within of their Failures and Sins from everything within this area every post as though they were pierced, any creature which dies within this field is treated as if it were slain by the spear itself. The maximum size of this field is a 50 meter radius (Increasing to 100 meter radius at Tier 2 and a 1km radius at tier 1) . Targets drained of their failures within the Aoe, but without having been Pierced by Pillar of Dying Hubris, will not provide Kegare with energy.



I. Origin Powers


» Origin Name: Rueful Hubris

» Origin Power: An Origin which revolves around one's failures in the past and the regret and pain attached to it. Specifically, failures that came as a result of shortcomings from the person themselves, loss that they are in some way directly responsible for.

» Origin Abilities:

Howling Martyr

One of the purest forms of hubris is in to blind one's self to consequence or harm in order to achieve one's goal.

This ability amplifies this concept. When inflicted on a target, the target will completely lose the ability to feel any pain, discomfort, or even anything that would be in their way such as the sensation of pressure or restraint.

However, this is very severe, and as a result can be deadly. In this state, a target can significantly hurt themselves simply trying to walk up the stairs as pressure and pain are stripped away. The act of taking a step without actively looking where you’re going can cause someone to crush their leg and mash it into a rock they weren’t aware was in their way, as they have no senses which would warn them to stop applying pressure through the limb. One’s grip on one’s sword can become so tight that their muscles rip, their tendons fray, and their fingers become locked and unable to peel away.

In order to keep from destroying their body, an individual must be meticulously aware of every motion they are partaking in as well as spatially aware of their environment lest they injure themselves.

Individuals whose defensive capabilities exceed their own natural strength have nothing to fear from this side effect as they can simply endure any would-be damage from heedless action. Additionally, strong enough regeneration can overcome this weakness and can make this ability dangerous to use as it can immunize a target against pain and fatigue so long as they have the energy to put themselves back together.

This ability is initiated through physical contact with a target and channeling a small amount of Reiryoku into them. It's effects last for 2 posts. Targets with Focus higher than her Origin Embodiment are capable of enduring this ability without suffering damage to themselves so long as they dedicate a portion of their focus to restraining themselves and moving carefully.

This ability can be used 3 times per thread.


Shreds of Regret

With this ability, Kegare is able to explore the past of her targets . By focusing on someone she is making physical contact with, she can connect to their memories.
Using this ability, Kegare is able to explore a target's memories and experiences.
She is even capable of entering a shared meditative trance with a target in which Kegare generates an internal illusion from a person's memories. Thus, she and the target can experience singular memories together.
With Advanced Origin Embodiment she will even be capable of manipulating and splicing memories together in order to generate unique experiences and memories for her and the target to experience.
This is a Story ability and cannot be used on Unwilling Characters without OOC Consent.




I. Skill Sheet



General Skills
  • Durability: Adept
  • General Speed: Adept
  • Strength: Adept
  • Martial Skill: Adept


Danava Skills
  • Origin Embodiment: Adept
  • Origin Focusing: Adept
  • Atma Vatou: Adept
  • Eternal Partner: Adept


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Adept
  • Mental Deduction: Adept
  • Focus: Adept


I. Role Play Sample


» Roleplay Sample:

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Thu Sep 09, 2021 5:44 pm
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>Kegare was born in the soul society, into a minor Noble Family.

Is there a specific story reason as to why there needs to be another minor noble family? Can't they just be a respected family for their efforts in the SS?

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And to be sure I understand right: is your character a hybrid demon in the sense that her body was used as a means to hold her danavahood? Or was there another danava that infused itself into her and is her spirit? I was asking because the wording confused me and I wanted to make sure I understood it right.

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>nti-demon sentiment had grown like nothing before, and even the few spiritual individuals she had come to know in the world of the living had many a story of demons and even ziamachi shinigami being hunted down and persecuted as they struggled with the cult left in Khala’s wake.

While it's true there are those who have grown to dislike demons and even gone out of there way to hunt them, the biggest sentiment on the living realm/SS is that they need to either adopt their culture or stay in their own realm. And, if they do come, they should be observed for the most part. So I'd say the wording is definitely off lore wise.

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The Shadow of the moon which it refuses to show the world. Using this power, Kegare is able to completely eliminate an object or thing from a target's perception if she at some point obscures it from a target's point of view by placing herself between it and the target. Once this object has entered the 'dark side' of Kegare from the target's perspective, that object no longer exists and cannot be sensed by any means. It does not, however, keep it from effecting them once it leaves this position and while it cannot be perceived by the target, it can still interact with them, though only at half strength (If a person is run through with a sword concealed by Dark Side of the Moon, the injury will only be half as bad). At will, Kegare can eliminate the alterations of an object effected by this, allowing it to be perceived by the target.

The biggest gripe I got is the fact that it the cannot be sensed by any means part. If this ability is gonna influence items, I'd imagine having some type of counterplay would balance it a bit better. Otherwise, that feels a bit wonky. It just feels like once it fades away, you are kind of fucked to take damage and I would like to see something to balance that out more.

The 2nd ability of her san I have no issue with really

What the moon chooses to show the world. This ability allows Kegare to alter the attention that targets are able to pay to particular objects effected by this ability, and by extension: her. By designating an object as the 'face' of the moon, it becomes the first priority for any target's attention. For each sense, so long as they are able to sense the designated Face of the Moon, they will be unable to keep track of changes in Kegare while they are able to sense it. (Example: IF a target is able to notice the presence of the designated face of the moon, Kegare will appear to be entirely still even if she is actually moving about and doing things).

This one just baffled me. This sounds like you are trying to make a will-based ability and should consult the will aspect of the skill sheet. I'd definitely have you rework this ability to work off mental deduction somehow. Otherwise, I'd have to deny it.

Mental Deduction: Mental Deduction refers to a characters ability to see past what the eye can see. Say your character is trapped within an illusion, would they have the mental deduction or power to overcome it? Or, for instance, would they be able to use their mental wits to overpower a possession? Could they stop themselves from being manipulated or controlled by a technique? Things like this are where Mental Deduction come in and give your character in edge in these situations. The higher your Mental Deduction is, the more your character will be able to fight off mentally. This skill is most closely associated with intellect, as it often relates to computation and calculative ability, but it's not necessarily denoting intelligence.

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One of the purest forms of hubris is in the suppression of pain in order to forge on. This ability amplifies this concept. When inflicted on a target, the target will completely lose the ability to feel any pain, discomfort, or even anything that would be in their way such as the sensation of pressure or restraint. However, this is absolute, and as a result can be deadly. In this state, a target can easily shred their own body to pieces simply trying to walk up the stairs as pressure and pain are stripped away. The act of taking a step without actively looking where you’re going can cause someone to crush their leg and mash it into a rock they weren’t aware was in their way, as they have no senses which would warn them to stop applying pressure through the limb. One’s grip on one’s sword can become so tight that their muscles rip, their tendons snap, and their fingers become locked and unable to peel away.

In order to keep from destroying their body, an individual must be meticulously aware of every motion they are partaking in as well as spatially aware of their environment lest they injure themselves.
Individuals whose defensive capabilities exceed their own natural strength have nothing to fear from this side effect as they can simply endure any would-be damage from heedless action. Additionally, strong enough regeneration can overcome this weakness and can make this ability dangerous to use as it can immunize a target against pain and fatigue so long as they have the energy to put themselves back together. This ability is initiated through physical contact with a target.

In a supernatural setting, I'd imagine the person would have to pay close attention to themselves to make sure injuries do not go unnoticed. Generally, they would perform a full body check every constantly in battle, but I wouldn't say they'd go to that extreme. It's definitely dangerous, but I wouldn't go to that extreme. I think you'd need an additional effect to really get the character shredding pieces of their own body like that.

With this ability, Kegare is able to force contextualization onto a target’s actions. By focusing on someone, she can force an incredible feeling similar to Deja Vu onto a person, based on their most recent mistakes. This ability will drag up memories circulating around the person and even pull them into reality, transforming the world around her into a scene from the target’s past in which they have failed or somehow contributed to their present suffering, loss, and mistakes. (Example, if a target was unable to save their child, Kegare would be able to summon memories of promises they were never able to keep, the memories of their daughter’s death and the situations surrounding them, and any part the person may have had in their demise). This ability thus forces targets to face NOT the consequences of present actions, but the actions that led to past consequences. Objects and living things summoned by this ability are real and not illusions, though they are constrained by Kegare’s energy levels and as such living things have their skills and tier limited to 2 levels below Kegare's (If her Speed is Elite, then the limit is Adept. This limit cannot go beneath untrained) or stronger than the person remembers them to be, whichever is the lower bar.

If this ability is tapping into a character's memories, I'd definitely need you to add something that works alongside willpower as you are forcibly trying to access a person's memories and would need to work through the willpower system. [/adm]


Willpower/Determination: A character's willpower determines the mental strength and fortitude of a character. In essence, their drive, capacity to tap into their motivations to further empower themselves and trek on forward. To that extent, willpower doesn't simply denote mental strength, but the efficiency of application. It can range from reigniting your inner flame to engage in combat when you were previously incapacitated, to even spiritual and physical manifestations, such as regaining a certain amount of energy when you were previously depleted, or pushing the body to the limit to walk despite both legs being broken.


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Thu Sep 09, 2021 6:23 pm
1.Noble portion has been nixed I suppose. Wasn't a particularly relevant detail.

2. First one, her body was used as a vessel for her danavahood.

3. Shadow of the Moon has had counterplay added. or well specified since it wasn't really written out that only the object itself is concealed, not the efects it has on the world around it.

4. Added Skill significance to Face of the Moon, and also made the example a bit easier to understand. It basically plays off of the senses that the object can busy. If she makes a balloon the object of attention, then you can still smell, hear, and sense her spiritually since tghe balloon isn't occupying any of those senses. The ability basically makes an object distracting in every way that it is capable. As such, using something like a living thing would be much better since it would be able to distract more senses. However, I have added in the Skill significance as well. Technically Will and Mental Deduction would help, but in exchange for having two skills that can work against it, Focus can work against you.

5. Softened the language in the description to be a bit less extreme.

6. Added a Will check to lock her out of the ability with some mental effort.
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3. Shadow of the Moon has had counterplay added. or well specified since it wasn't really written out that only the object itself is concealed, not the efects it has on the world around it.

There are still a lot of things that have minimal impact to where there is nothing to see. I'd recommend having the object remain immobile while it's concealed because it would fit more with hte fact the moon never moves in a thematic sense and would add depth to using it in a more intelligent manner.

Added Skill significance to Face of the Moon, and also made the example a bit easier to understand. It basically plays off of the senses that the object can busy. If she makes a balloon the object of attention, then you can still smell, hear, and sense her spiritually since tghe balloon isn't occupying any of those senses. The ability basically makes an object distracting in every way that it is capable. As such, using something like a living thing would be much better since it would be able to distract more senses. However, I have added in the Skill significance as well. Technically Will and Mental Deduction would help, but in exchange for having two skills that can work against it, Focus can work against you.

Thank you for that. The edits you've made to it is fine, but Master and Grandmaster should be equal in their effects because treating master as just another step to grand master as opposed to it being hella hard to bypass descredits the skill itself.

6. Added a Will check to lock her out of the ability with some mental effort.

I have no issues with these corrections or any others not quoted.

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Sat Sep 11, 2021 4:53 pm
Added a clause which makes Shadow of the Moon deactivate when an object actively moves.

Combined master and grandmaster for face of the moon.

aaaand bazinga that should be it!
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Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Adept
  • Mental Deduction: Adept
  • Focus: Adept



Hazard Rankings
  • Power: D
  • Influence: D
  • Resources: D




Comments/Notes: Shunpo/Speed/Kido, move that down to adept, but you can leave the rest the skills as they are.

If you feel something is off, let me know.

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New Danava Skillsheet

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