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Tue Mar 15, 2022 2:26 pm
Added energy adjustments based on Target Tier.

And uh.... No? A scratch from what I understand is a surface laceration that penetrates the top layer of skin, but not lower layers of skin. As stated, a Pierce has to penetrate the skin (all layers) and then hit tissue underneath (Muscle, organs, ect).
Have added this disclaimer in the description of the requirement.
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Tue Mar 15, 2022 2:43 pm
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Alright, "a few notches" was not specific enough. That's on me I guess. So I'll give you a scale that I'm happier with.

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Human, Iramasha, Quincy - A beginner-level ability at the target's tier

Shini, Fullbring, High-Spec, Danava - An adept-level ability at the target's tier

Arrancar, Vizard, Demon Hybrids - An advanced-level ability at the target's tier

Hollows, Demons, and Sueki - Several advanced-level abilities at the target's tier

Also, I've been informed that energy cannot simply be generated. It has to come from some other source, so who or what is providing the energy that Kegare gains?

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Tue Mar 15, 2022 3:02 pm
Adopted the scale.

Specified that the absorbed Karma is sacrificed to Nidhanna and traded for energy.
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Tue Mar 15, 2022 3:32 pm
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Alright, we're another step closer.

The references to Karma make this ability feel considerably detached from the Origin, to a degree that is not represented by Adept Origin Embodiment.

All references to Karma could be removed and instead have it work against the target's failures or loss etc. and this ability would be more tenable with the skills provided.

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Tue Mar 15, 2022 3:43 pm
Reworded to Failures and Sins.
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