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Thu Mar 17, 2022 6:34 pm
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» Name Of Character: Kegare Okihana
» Link To Character: https://www.platinumhearts.net/t22123-kegare-ali-okihana-tier-4-1-hazard-rank-d#147074

» Upgrading:

Current Origin Powers:






Reworked Powers:


» Why: Kegare's Powerset does not match modern standards for grading and as such I intend to bring it down into reasonable levels.

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Mon Apr 11, 2022 7:01 am
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However, this is absolute, and as a result can be deadly.

For clarity's sake, please reword this as no power should be considered absolute from a balance perspective.

Targets can intentionally restrict themselves to moving at a speed equal to 2 ranks below normal in order to avoid injuring themselves while this effect is active so long as they dedicate their focus to the task...

If you can restrict your speed? Could you not also restrict your strength or other attributes to minimise the effect of this ability.

Targets with Willpower higher than their Focus stat can only benefit as if their Focus skill were 1 rank lower than normal as their tendency to bull through a challenge can work against them.

And, whilst I appreciate that Willpower is what might motivate a person to push through mental barriers, this seems more fitting to go off low Mental Deduction rather than high Willpower as one would have to be pretty stupid to just ignore these effects and overexert their body.

This ability only uses a small amount of energy and as such there is no limit to how many times this effect can be applied

An ability that totally overrides a target's senses only takes a small amount of energy and has no restriction on Kegare herself? This seems like an incredibly advanced technique and yet she can perform it at will without limitation on herself

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Mon Apr 11, 2022 10:44 am
Removed the word "absolute"

Removed speed clause, only focuses on Focus Stat.
Removed Willpower check.
Induced restriction on uses per thread.
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