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Kegare's Origin Power Modernization
Thu Mar 17, 2022 6:34 pm
» Name Of Character: Kegare Okihana
» Link To Character: https://www.platinumhearts.net/t22123-kegare-ali-okihana-tier-4-1-hazard-rank-d#147074
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- Current Origin Powers:
- I. Origin Powers
» Origin Name: Rueful Hubris
» Origin Power: Based everything around recklessness, failure, and loss.
» Origin Abilities:
Fall Through The World
One of the purest forms of hubris is in the suppression of pain in order to forge on. This ability amplifies this concept. When inflicted on a target, the target will completely lose the ability to feel any pain, discomfort, or even anything that would be in their way such as the sensation of pressure or restraint. However, this is absolute, and as a result can be deadly. In this state, a target can significantly hurt themselves simply trying to walk up the stairs as pressure and pain are stripped away. The act of taking a step without actively looking where you’re going can cause someone to crush their leg and mash it into a rock they weren’t aware was in their way, as they have no senses which would warn them to stop applying pressure through the limb. One’s grip on one’s sword can become so tight that their muscles rip, their tendons fray, and their fingers become locked and unable to peel away.
In order to keep from destroying their body, an individual must be meticulously aware of every motion they are partaking in as well as spatially aware of their environment lest they injure themselves.
Individuals whose defensive capabilities exceed their own natural strength have nothing to fear from this side effect as they can simply endure any would-be damage from heedless action. Additionally, strong enough regeneration can overcome this weakness and can make this ability dangerous to use as it can immunize a target against pain and fatigue so long as they have the energy to put themselves back together. This ability is initiated through physical contact with a target.
The Wailing Echo
With this ability, Kegare is able to force contextualization onto a target’s actions. By focusing on someone, she can force an incredible feeling similar to Deja Vu onto a person, based on their most recent mistakes. This ability will drag up memories circulating around the person and even pull them into reality, transforming the world around her into a scene from the target’s past in which they have failed or somehow contributed to their present suffering, loss, and mistakes. (Example, if a target was unable to save their child, Kegare would be able to summon memories of promises they were never able to keep, the memories of their daughter’s death and the situations surrounding them, and any part the person may have had in their demise). This ability thus forces targets to face NOT the consequences of present actions, but the actions that led to past consequences. Objects and living things summoned by this ability are real and not illusions, though they are constrained by Kegare’s energy levels and as such living things have their skills and tier limited to 2 levels below Kegare's (If her Speed is Elite, then the limit is Adept. This limit cannot go beneath untrained) or stronger than the person remembers them to be, whichever is the lower bar. However, targets with significant will will be able to shake off Kegare's access to their memories. Individuals with equal Will are able to bar Kegare from their memories the post after she begins using the power, however this is mentally straining and will rapidly wear out their mind especially if performing other mental tasks while keeping her out. Individuals of superior Will are able to do this a bit more easily and with only moderate mental strain. Individuals with Will at least 2 skill ranks above her own will be able to lock Kegare out before she even is able to start using the ability, though this will still require mental attention to maintain.
- Reworked Powers:
- I. Origin Powers
» Origin Name: Rueful Hubris
» Origin Power: An Origin which revolves around one's failures in the past and the regret and pain attached to it. Specifically, failures that came as a result of shortcomings from the person themselves, loss that they are in some way directly responsible for.
» Origin Abilities:
Howling Martyr
One of the purest forms of hubris is in to blind one's self to consequence or harm in order to achieve one's goal.
This ability amplifies this concept. When inflicted on a target, the target will completely lose the ability to feel any pain, discomfort, or even anything that would be in their way such as the sensation of pressure or restraint.
However, this is very severe, and as a result can be deadly. In this state, a target can significantly hurt themselves simply trying to walk up the stairs as pressure and pain are stripped away. The act of taking a step without actively looking where you’re going can cause someone to crush their leg and mash it into a rock they weren’t aware was in their way, as they have no senses which would warn them to stop applying pressure through the limb. One’s grip on one’s sword can become so tight that their muscles rip, their tendons fray, and their fingers become locked and unable to peel away.
In order to keep from destroying their body, an individual must be meticulously aware of every motion they are partaking in as well as spatially aware of their environment lest they injure themselves.
Individuals whose defensive capabilities exceed their own natural strength have nothing to fear from this side effect as they can simply endure any would-be damage from heedless action. Additionally, strong enough regeneration can overcome this weakness and can make this ability dangerous to use as it can immunize a target against pain and fatigue so long as they have the energy to put themselves back together.
This ability is initiated through physical contact with a target and channeling a small amount of Reiryoku into them. It's effects last for 2 posts. Targets with Focus higher than her Origin Embodiment are capable of enduring this ability without suffering damage to themselves so long as they dedicate a portion of their focus to restraining themselves and moving carefully.
This ability can be used 3 times per thread.
Shreds of Regret
With this ability, Kegare is able to explore the past of her targets . By focusing on someone she is making physical contact with, she can connect to their memories.
Using this ability, Kegare is able to explore a target's memories and experiences.
She is even capable of entering a shared meditative trance with a target in which Kegare generates an internal illusion from a person's memories. Thus, she and the target can experience singular memories together.
With Advanced Origin Embodiment she will even be capable of manipulating and splicing memories together in order to generate unique experiences and memories for her and the target to experience.
This is a Story ability and cannot be used on Unwilling Characters without OOC Consent.
» Why: Kegare's Powerset does not match modern standards for grading and as such I intend to bring it down into reasonable levels.
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Re: Kegare's Origin Power Modernization
Mon Apr 11, 2022 7:01 am
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For clarity's sake, please reword this as no power should be considered absolute from a balance perspective.
If you can restrict your speed? Could you not also restrict your strength or other attributes to minimise the effect of this ability.
And, whilst I appreciate that Willpower is what might motivate a person to push through mental barriers, this seems more fitting to go off low Mental Deduction rather than high Willpower as one would have to be pretty stupid to just ignore these effects and overexert their body.
An ability that totally overrides a target's senses only takes a small amount of energy and has no restriction on Kegare herself? This seems like an incredibly advanced technique and yet she can perform it at will without limitation on herself
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However, this is absolute, and as a result can be deadly.
For clarity's sake, please reword this as no power should be considered absolute from a balance perspective.
Targets can intentionally restrict themselves to moving at a speed equal to 2 ranks below normal in order to avoid injuring themselves while this effect is active so long as they dedicate their focus to the task...
If you can restrict your speed? Could you not also restrict your strength or other attributes to minimise the effect of this ability.
Targets with Willpower higher than their Focus stat can only benefit as if their Focus skill were 1 rank lower than normal as their tendency to bull through a challenge can work against them.
And, whilst I appreciate that Willpower is what might motivate a person to push through mental barriers, this seems more fitting to go off low Mental Deduction rather than high Willpower as one would have to be pretty stupid to just ignore these effects and overexert their body.
This ability only uses a small amount of energy and as such there is no limit to how many times this effect can be applied
An ability that totally overrides a target's senses only takes a small amount of energy and has no restriction on Kegare herself? This seems like an incredibly advanced technique and yet she can perform it at will without limitation on herself
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Re: Kegare's Origin Power Modernization
Mon Apr 11, 2022 10:44 am
Removed the word "absolute"
Removed speed clause, only focuses on Focus Stat.
Removed Willpower check.
Induced restriction on uses per thread.
Removed speed clause, only focuses on Focus Stat.
Removed Willpower check.
Induced restriction on uses per thread.
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Re: Kegare's Origin Power Modernization
Mon Apr 18, 2022 10:45 pm
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