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Hyamarui Hikamori
Mon Oct 17, 2011 12:50 am
S H I N I G A M I
B A S I C I N F O R M A T I O N
Name: Hyamarui Hikamori
Gender: Male
Age: 800
Appearance:
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P E R S O N A L I T Y
Personality:In a nutshell, Hyammarui is ;lazy,careless and oblivious to everyone but his own thoughts.His lazy nature normally gets in the way of completing tasks and most importantly his training.He is also one known to give up quiet often even if the situation becomes dire.He grew up with the words "Nothings worth loosing your life for, so do what you must to survive."With this etched into the back of his mind he is able to get out of tight situations with the slightest of ease.However what he lacks in bravery he can perfectly make up for in wit.Being able to outsmart his opponents and of course the reason as to why he is still alive to this day.He isn't boastful of this fact however, after all there's nothing proud about being a smart coward.
Likes:Mangas, he is mainly interested with the stories and funny character designs and plots.He hasn't Favorited any particular series but he keep a collection somewhere around his home.Music is fine though he doesn't listen to it very often because he doesn't own any musical device whatsoever.
Dislikes: What makes this man's blood boil with enough hatred to cripple a man with fear would be none other than being insulted by his opponents.Comments such as Asshole or pussy is strongly not recommended in referring to this man as his rage could end you right there and then.Sarcastic gestures are fine once he knows their not sincere however rude comments and a snooty attitude certainly end up with pure rage and a crater the size of three foot ball fields.
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B A C K G R O U N D
History/Background:
Now your probably wondering how Hyamarui came into being and of course your expecting a sad story with his family dying and becoming a shinigami for justice,peace and free rice balls.Well, no.Nothing of this sort had ever transpired and i doubt it ever will.And no it's not because I'm not in the mood to write a ridiculous tale about him going on a journey for power and aiding his allies in combat against evil forces but in fact Hyamarui is pretty much a normal man who made his way like any regular shinigami,
Disappointed I'm sure, but this may be something different from what your normally used to.Hyamarui was Born in the soul society and naturally became an orphan in his tender years when his mother passed away after giving birth.Okay so i said there wasn't going to be any ridiculous sappy crap but i couldn't have his mom running around like a useless Npc,best to dump the body and get on with Hyamarui's story.So after being orphaned he roamed the streets of soul society befriending most people he met and of course the giant who had guarded the entrance to the famous Seireitei the HQ of all shinigamis.
The Giant and the boy enjoyed talking about the mysterious and dreadful tales of the hollows and the heroic deeds and justice of the shinigami.And so naturally they became his superman and Lex luthor.Locked in an eternal struggle with good always being the victor.And so he idolized the shinigami and one day aspired to be one.Years went by as the giant slowly learned of his friends motives to become a shinigami and training him in a few himself had remembered.
After Hyamarui had completed learning from the giant,he decided to join the academy and truly become an official shinigami and placed within their ranks.The academy was something to remember as he trained day in and day out.Learning Kido spells and enchants. As well as sword skills which he had failed upon numerous occasions.Never the less he had still passed the the traditional training routine and entered through his final exams.
The exams where unforgiving and cruel but by avoiding most combat against the hollows or getting rid of the weaker ones he had passed the exams with ease and was given a zanpakuto as his reward and the honor of being called a shinigami. Months have passed,having trouble cooperating with his zanpakuto and such
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Zanpakutô Spirit Name: Arsenius (Greek mening Manly)
Appearance:
InnerWorld:
Innerworld
Sealed Zanpakutô Apperance :
Sealed Zanpakutô Abilities:
N/A
PhatomTech: None
Release:Open the path of Spiritual Enlightenment,Render Yourself,Arsenius!
Shikai Description:Image Here
This is attained once he sacrifices The sealed form of his zanpakuto .The blade begins to crumble to pieces and the handle begins to rot shortly after his hands become engulfed in a dark and reddish aura seeming to have increased his overall strength and Kido spells significantly.
Shikai Abilities:
Warning Shot
This ability is done when using both his own reaitsu to amplify the size of the aura covering his hands and fire a small orb of both the condensed form of his reaitsu and the aura emitted from his hands that explode and showers the area with beams of energy.This attack the wide scale does very little damage and is normally used to spot out enemies in hiding or simply draw them out.The attack can compromise his energy and stamina if used in continuum.
Purge
The attack is done by using his reaitsu to focus the aura emitting from his hands and fire it in a single blast burrowing through the surface of the ground and hitting his opponent dealing some level of damage depending on the person's own strength to endure the blast.The attack takes a considerable amount of time to focus (1 post) and uses up a lot of stamina.
Purge Synergy
Purge Synergy occurs when contact is made on the enemy in their most vulnerable point in battle and delivers a stronger concussion to that of regular attacks.This leaves behind a trail of energy that afflict the foe's nervous system for a short time possibly to stun or immobilize them.The attack's after affects wont occur if that person has a high durability or defense and the attack must land on the opponent.
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R P S A M P L E
Roleplay
Sample:
Hyamarui Kept walking
down the sidewalk, bumping into a few people as the streets were ever
crowded.The city wasn't at all what he had expected and certainly didn't
imagine it to be so crowded.He cocked the right corner of his tanned
lips stopping a moment to gaze towards the night sky.The stars adorned
the sky like white crystal jewels complimenting the shimmering glow of
the moon."This isn't the time nor the place to stay and take in the
scenery,though i surely wish i could" he sighed and mumbled to
himself before taking another step and lowered his head to watch where
he was going.
*BEEP,BEEP* he heard, something buzzing in
his left pant's pocket.He reached inside and took out a gray cell phone
with a key chain dangling from the antenna.With a click of a button a
message had appeared on it's screen, opening to show details towards a
new objective adding to his current mission.Without delay he took a turn
towards a dark alley way and had disappeared within the shadows.
He
finds himself on top of an office building looking out towards the
edges of Karakura Central and into the Slums of the previous Settlement
it formally was known as.The co-ordinates he was sent were very precise
as he could see 5 hollows trying to break through the barrier."Hmmm,
if the barrier gives away for just a moment, this may pose as a
threat,but it is rather foolish for a small army of hollows to up and
decide to break through a formidable barrier only to be taken down by
Shinigamis once there weakened by its effect" he thought to himself
for awhile and decided to act swiftly so as not to draw out the
situation and took a step off the building and began to walk on a thin
invisible platform before disappearing once again.
"Hollows
beware,this isn't a city for the likes of your kind" a voice was
heard coming from behind the group of hollows that paused in their
attempts to shatter the barrier.One standing from behind the three
hollows that stood in front of the barrier had turned it's head around
only to hear the sound of metal ripping through flesh and its body
disappearing within an instant. The others had looked around to see
their comrade gone and a Shinigami wearing his blade."I get it now. .
. this part of the barrier leads to a system of alleys ways so once one
of you gets through you could find refuge in the alleyways until you
were healed and could feed upon the souls that would wonder around
carelessly,very good plan though with one flaw and that is it wont
happen" he cocked the right corner of his lips once more feeling
pretty smart with himself.
The Hollows screamed with rage
charging towards him.One in particular had a gorilla like form with
huge arms,small legs and tusk protruding from it mask. His first victim
he noted in his mind swinging his blade in a diagonal and slashing the
chest of the burly Hollow. The others that charged from both sides
suddenly ran up into each other as he disappeared into a
flash,reappearing on the back of the hollow who had charged from his
left.He sank his katanna into its neck ripping its head off and the
other jumped up to tackle the shinigami but it was to late as the
katanna came swinging upwards and slashed its body in half before
disappearing.He sheathed his blade and smiled excited.
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S K I L L S H E E T
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General Skills
- Durability: Adept
- General Speed: Adept
- Strength: Advance
- Weapon Skill: Beginner
Racial Skills
- Hoho: Adept
- Kidou: Adept
- Zanjutsu: Beginner
- Hakuda: Advance
Sōkotsu (双骨, '"Double Bone"') :Stronger than Ikkotsu it is a powerful two fisted move that can shatter one's oponent.
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Re: Hyamarui Hikamori
Tue Oct 18, 2011 12:03 am
Gin use the check list int eh future
Comments/Notes:
Alright detail is needed for your shikai, and you need 10 sentences for personalty i counted 6
NOW
"Wrath of Olympus
Once collecting enough reiatsu to coat his spare, he hurls it towards his opponent ,surrounding it in a shroud of black energy with a red outline. once it strikes a massive Pillar of energy appears and wipes out anything within a mile of the blast. It takes a considerable amount of time to charge such an attack.The attack is wasted if the opponent manages to dodge or defend against it. "
Fix that saying you can destroy anything IN A MILE RANGE? You have NO IDEA how over powered that move is. shiaki is 20% of a soul reaper power while bankai is the full 100% that is a BANKAI level attack for a simple shikai. so rewrite, and give better detaill to this app till then WIP
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- Name [x]
- Appropriate Age [x]
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- Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [x]
- Appearance is Not Claimed [x]
- 10 sentences for personality [0]
- History is of appropriate length [x]
- Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [o]
- Powers are described reasonably enough [o]
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Alright detail is needed for your shikai, and you need 10 sentences for personalty i counted 6
NOW
"Wrath of Olympus
Once collecting enough reiatsu to coat his spare, he hurls it towards his opponent ,surrounding it in a shroud of black energy with a red outline. once it strikes a massive Pillar of energy appears and wipes out anything within a mile of the blast. It takes a considerable amount of time to charge such an attack.The attack is wasted if the opponent manages to dodge or defend against it. "
Fix that saying you can destroy anything IN A MILE RANGE? You have NO IDEA how over powered that move is. shiaki is 20% of a soul reaper power while bankai is the full 100% that is a BANKAI level attack for a simple shikai. so rewrite, and give better detaill to this app till then WIP
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Re: Hyamarui Hikamori
Sat Dec 03, 2011 9:20 pm
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I envy because of the heart.
I glutton because of the heart.
I covet because of the heart.
I am prideful because of the heart.
I sloth because of the heart.
I rage because of the heart.
Because of the heart...
I lust for everything about you.
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I glutton because of the heart.
I covet because of the heart.
I am prideful because of the heart.
I sloth because of the heart.
I rage because of the heart.
Because of the heart...
I lust for everything about you.
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