Yorokobi(Yori) [6-0]
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Yorokobi(Yori) [6-0]
Thu Jan 14, 2016 2:07 pm
» Name: Yorokobi
» Titles: Yori
» Age: 17
» Gender: Male
» Affiliation/Rank: Non-Affiliated
» Appearance Description: Yori is a short, thin, and athletic adolescent. He is younger of two brothers and holds a very distinct appearance . His hair is short and cut off the side, almost like a rooster. His eyes shine a breathtaking yellow , close to resembling gold, and are almost lifeless as a peers through most things he pays attention too. At most times Yori is seen smiling to cover the thoughts racing through his mind . Only his brother, who he’s unnaturally close to, would notice the trouble and frustration in the youth’s eyes.
His appearance includes a white long sleeve collar shirt and black pants. His left arm bears no noticeable significances , but his left arm is that of an androids. To make a long story short Yori underwent surgery to replace his arm due to an accident that occurred a year ago around his 16th birthday.
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» Personality: Calculative: Yori plays the role of a sweet and innocent teenager. He is constantly seen smiling during conversation and cracking jokes when things become awkward or when others become in their feelings. He seems like a great friend on the outside as he offers advice and consoles those around him but Yori actually carries a deeper motive to his actions.
When around his brother or alone , Yori is opposite of what his facade displays. He becomes cold and maniacal while still retaining a polite personality. This often makes people question whether most things he says are a joke or whether he is serious. Since most people see Yori as somewhat of a jester he uses his talent to help him better read his opponent and discover weaknesses while also posing himself as an ally instead of enemy.
He is the smarter of two brothers, constantly stuck in a book pertaining to science of bio-android technology. He figures it is the only way to further understand the experiment the hospital was currently conducting with his newly obtained arm. he is currently studying to become a bio-engineer and is determined to become the youngest bio-engineer alive.
» Likes: Books, Information, Equations, Experiments, and his brother interests.
» Dislikes: The difference in power between human and all other races. Loud Music. Lazy people who he considers waist of skin. Unfinished experiments.
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» Background: Yorokobi was born the younger of two brothers. His older brother Itami constantly watched over him as it seemed he would never be able to take care of himself. As an adolescent he lost both parents in a fire and was sent to an orphanage along with his older counterpart. The two did whatever was necessary in order to survive and made a poor living picking up odd jobs from the locals of Karakura town. One day as the two were making a delivery for the local bakery they were approached by a truck while crossing the street. Both were ran down by the oncoming traffic but Yori seemed to suffer more than Itami. As he awoke in the hospital the only thing he could remember was the two kids crossing the street. Yori yearned to know his past almost immediately but maybe it would be better if he left it alone.
Yorokobi was the unlucky of the two. Many of days in the hospital was spent under heavy sedation and surgery. When he was finally allowed a bit of consciousness he was told of the accident and his amnesiac brother. Strolled into the room that the two of them shared, he brought infront of a gray-haired youth that he only remotely knew. Even still, he smiled. Cause through all the confusion he knew he had someone to call family.
The two of them shared small conversations and from an unnatural tether seemed pleased with each others company. When they were released Itami enrolled him in school, he found it weird and a waste but went along with its just to please him. In the school, it was proven that Yokorobi was beyond those of his class. He excelled in all studies and make it known, though nicely, that no one could compete.
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» Racial Powers: (If your character has any sort of special Anima Stone Strength, Soul Sorcery, Soul Dash or Soul Detection; place it here.)
» Evolution Powers: (What kind of powers has your human obtained from evolving? IF they have, state them here.)
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» Soul State Evolution Stage 1 Abilities: (Optional. Leave blank if you do not want powers )
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» Soul State Evolution Stage 2 Abilities: (Optional. Leave blank if you do not want powers.)» Soul State Evolution Stage 3 Appearance: (Optional. This will be at least 1 to 0 tier level characters, however. You may fill this out, but the app will ultimately be up to the staff member who reviews it)
» Soul State Evolution Stage 3 Abilities: (Optional. Leave blank if you do not want powers.)
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Information: If you need any help understanding Chi, please click this thread and read all the information. It is fully optional rather or not you want your character to use Chi. So if you choose not to have it, simply cross it out or remove it. Fully Awakened Humans have to be approved by [THEFROST] as they are extremely rare.
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» Chi Powers: (In this section please put what type of powers they can do in this state and what type of Chi abilities they have)
» Awakened Appearance: (Please Describe how your character looks when they are in their awakened state)
» Awakened Powers: (Describe what type of powers your character gets from awakening.)» Fully Awakened Appearance: (Describe what your human looks like when Fully Awakened)
» Fully Awakened Powers: (Describe what powers your human gets in this state)
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General Skills
- Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
- General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
- Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
- Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Will Skills
- Willpower/Determination: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
- Mental Deduction: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
- Pain Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
- Focus: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Human Skill Sheet
- Anima Stone Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
- Soul Sorcery: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
- Soul Dash: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
- Soul Detection: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Chi Skills
- Geppo: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
- Vindeca: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
- Tekkai: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
- Yang Surge: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
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Ira continued on his journey mildly stopping in wooded areas to rest. He had decided it may be best that he not use his magic seeing as it had previously alerted his village once before. ”Lowkey is the way to be .” , thought Ira to himself. As he began to prepare for camp a platoon of villagers passed by on a nearby road. This seemed like an opportune moment to Ira. ”No more walking, finally.” , he thought to himself. As he began to approach the band of what he thought were travelers he wonder exactly what he would say. What story could he possibly make up for going to Magnolia.
”Hi I‘m Rajin. Mind if a catch a ride to the nearest village .” The travelers were reluctant at first but ultimately decided it may be worth their time. As they began to continue on their journey , Ira decided to nap in the back of the caravan. Little did he know, these weren’t travelers. They were bandits and they planned to rob him of everything he own. At the moment, he only carried the mementos of his idol. The bandits searched his things as he slept peacefully only to find a book and a broken flute. ”How trivial… He’s poor and dumb. Just our luck . Guess he as good as dead.” ,the bandits mumbled amongst each other. They thought they’d found a lost boy for whom they could hold for ransom. What they were about to find out was that he was something way worse than them.
The bandits stopped the caravan and surrounded Ira who laid asleep in the back. Each carried a knife or sharp instrument to some sort. Ira immediately woke to the mild sense of danger. He was keen to these types of situations. ”Hey guys I didn’t know we were having a party.”, he spoke calmly. ”Is it my birthday already? , he yawned slightly. The bandits immediately struck for the finish blows, only to find that their knifes broke at the touch of Ira’s skin. ”Tsk…Tsk. Now why would you want to do that? Are you forcing me to relieve you of the stress of life?” Ira grabbed the leader by his throat. The others saw the life drain from their former comrades body. They had lost their will to fight. They had also pissed off the wrong kid. Ira pulled down his mask to show an almost menacing smile.”Let’s have some fun . , he chuckled as rip a limb off yet another bandit.
After about thirty minutes all that lay left were rags and limbs. Ira proceeded to burn them as he didn‘t see the need in people knowing what he had done. When he finished, he made sure to keep a vial of blood from the leader. It may come in handy. Ira took the bandits caravan and headed for the town of Magnolia. He was upset his time had been wasted and it was already daybreak. ”There really is no sleep for the wicked.”
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Re: Yorokobi(Yori) [6-0]
Thu Jan 14, 2016 2:46 pm
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Just one problem here, and that is the background history. Nothing about the content, but it is a bit shorter than the minimum. Try going a little more in depth over it. Even if they don't remember anything, you could explain the context of how things started and etc. The appearance could also use a bit more detail.
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Re: Yorokobi(Yori) [6-0]
Sat Jan 16, 2016 2:29 pm
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Re: Yorokobi(Yori) [6-0]
Sat Jan 16, 2016 4:34 pm
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With the minimums all being met, I can now APPROVE this at the starting tier of 6-0. Welcome to the cool kids club.
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Re: Yorokobi(Yori) [6-0]
Sat May 21, 2016 6:19 pm
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