Kidō

Name: Abysmal Lightning
Type: Offensive
Number: 35
Effects: The User points at their target and shoots out a dark-bluish streak of lightning from their pointing finger that can pierce its target, plus if it hits it's target it does not shock its opponent but numbs that part of their body and if a skilled user performs this technique it can freeze that body part. Someone like Kenpaichi could resist or break the ice of an advanced user or someone with High durability. The paralyzed(or numb) depends in the user and the target example would be if a Master used this technique on a advanced durability character they would remain numb or paralyzed for around 2-3 posts. If that body part if frozen then you use either break the ice on that body part or melt it off. People that could resist this technique must have high durability or must have great skill in Kidō so they could counter it
Incantation: Know the darkness in my heart, Abysmal Lightning
Notes: can only be used three times per battle and if used without incantation it can numb the users hand and in extreme cases their whole body. It numbs the user for about 1-3 posts depending on the level of their Kidō only someone very skilled could bypass it though meaning Advanced at least. On average the freezing lasts around 5-7 posts.


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Uhm... First of all.. I'd wait on your character before I get this checked, but since i'm here. I'll talk.

Well... the issue I have is how long if the person gets hit is numbed/Paralyzed, can they resist it? How can they resist it, Do you mean by a skilled user a person that's a practitioner of Kidō can make it deadly? Uhm... How long does it numb the user who uses it if they use it without incantation, can someone skilled in Kidō bypass Incantation? And how long if it did numb someone's body how long does it numb for.

Someone like Kenpaichi could resist or break the ice of an advanced user or someone with High durability. The paralyzed(or numb) depends in the user and the target example would be if a Master used this technique on a advanced durability character they would remain numb or paralyzed for around 5-10 seconds. If that body part if frozen then you use either break the ice on that body part or melt it off. People that could resist this technique must have high durability or must have great skill in Kidō so they could counter it. It numbs the user for about 1-3 seconds depending on the level of their Kidō only somone very skilled could bypass it though meaning Advanced at least.

Hmm.. So only really only High level Kidō users? Hmm... It's interesting Uhm.. Hm So Basically someone with Advanced skills in Kidō could survive this. Got it.

Almost approvable, Just one question How long does the tech last for?

ht etechnique only takes about a second to shoot and the freezing lasts 5-7 posts and the numb last 1-3 posts

Looks pretty good put your edits into the original post, then I'll approve it.

Done

Glorious, Your First Kidō is approved! Any mod can check behind me if they feel it's too powered, but I like it, You can post this up in your profile now.~