Zero

Name: Zero Idoaki

Age: 20

Appearance: https://2img.net/h/i261.photobucket.com/albums/ii61/burdgeeboy/paladino.jpg

Height: 5' 9"

Background: As a young child Zero was taken in by the Soul Reapers for training to see how well humans could learn the ways of the soul reapers and because he was alone with no one to take care of him, however that ended when he lost the will to fight against a single hollow. The Soul Reapers made Zero an outcast and was forced to watch helplessly on Earth. Now Zero takes up the Sword to once again battle Hollows by his own hands.

Personality: fearless, swift, strong, and wise in battle. doesn't talk much unless he's got something on his mind

Battle Style: Sword made of gold that's a 31.5" long and 10 in wide

Likes: friends

Dislikes: foes

Fear: lose of power

Powers: Super Armor gained when in a pinch and it increases his power to take hits, Battle Sword comes with the super armor, it gives him one energy blast that can cut down a Hollow's power by half

(You CANNOT fill the skill levels in until your tier is assigned. )
Skill level: Hand to Hand: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill level: Speed: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill level: Powers: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master

Strengths: Sunlight that gives him double the strength it lasts until nightfall

Weakness: Darkness cuts his strength in half it lasts until daybreak

RP Sample:[b] "I don't care what those Soul Reapers say",Zero told himself, "I will fight the Hollows again. They can't make me give up ever again. only then will they understand that Human's can be just as strong as the Soul Reapers. If I can't do that, then they will never see what they can teach other humans. But what can I do to start? I should know this, but I just don't know what to do." as he looked around he was alone under the moonlight with nothing to stand in his way, "The only person that ever understood me was my master, but without him I don't have a clue what to do next." shakes his head" why am I even talking to myself anyways?"

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Zero Idoaki wrote:

HUMAN

Name: Zero Idoaki

Age: 20

Appearance: https://2img.net/h/i261.photobucket.com/albums/ii61/burdgeeboy/paladino.jpg

Background: As a young child Zero was taken in by the Soul Reapers for training, however that ended when he lost the will to fight against a single hollow. The Soul Reapers made Zero an outcast and was forced to watch helplessly on Earth. Now Zero takes up the Sword to once again battle Hollows by his own hands.

This isn't very detailed or elaborate at all. Why did they take him in? And why as a child? Why did they train him? This really doesn't make sense. Why would shinigami train humans to fight when they have their own armies and vastly superior power? You should fix this....

Personality: fearless, swift, strong, and wise

Come on, with this, I barely know the guy. Make it a little longer, at least.

Battle Style: Sword made of gold

How big is the sword? How wide? How long? Does it have any powers? How strong is it?

Likes: friends

Dislikes: foes

Fear: lose of power

Powers: Super Armor, Battle Sword

Super armor and battle sword? What the hell is that? describe the powers better please. This doesn't make any sense.

(You CANNOT fill the skill levels in until your tier is assigned. )
Skill level: Hand to Hand: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill level: Speed: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill level: Powers: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master

Thank you for not choosing your skill levels yet. High five man!

Strengths: Sunlight

Explain what this strength does to him. How does it effect him? Why? How much does it help him? How so? Think man, add some detail.

Weakness: Darkness

Explain what this weakness does to him. How does it effect him? Why? How far can the damage go?

RP Sample: I don't care what those Soul Reapers say, I will fight the Hollows again. They can't make me give up ever again.

Hell no.... we need actual roleplay, not a gypsy pawn shop quote. Make at least one legible paragraph.

You refused to fix this, and failed to produce proper change.

DENIED.