Yoruichi Shihouin [PENDING]
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- BladeThe Hybrid King
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Re: Yoruichi Shihouin [PENDING]
Mon Feb 22, 2016 5:52 pm
[adm]Alrighty. First and foremost, you're pretty new around here so taking over a 0-2+ Canon, such as Yourichi, is a bit of a stretch. I hope that we learn to know you better and come to trust you like we do family, but until we gain a bit more trust with you as a person, this'll have to be denied.
Secondly, I want to just give a bit of advice. Using words like Bitch, Fucking, just general cursing doesnt destroy writing unless it's not fit for the character. In my honest opinion, your mannerisms and writing for Yoruichi are a bit sub par, if not on point all together. So, hopefully you can get more into the character next time. Until then, this will be revoked.[/adm]
Secondly, I want to just give a bit of advice. Using words like Bitch, Fucking, just general cursing doesnt destroy writing unless it's not fit for the character. In my honest opinion, your mannerisms and writing for Yoruichi are a bit sub par, if not on point all together. So, hopefully you can get more into the character next time. Until then, this will be revoked.[/adm]
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Re: Yoruichi Shihouin [PENDING]
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- HenrexTor'uk
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Re: Yoruichi Shihouin [PENDING]
Sat Apr 21, 2018 9:36 am
[adm]Due to the inactivity of the member that owns this app, and the fact that this application still has problems -- this will be placed in a "Pending" state. Anyone who wishes to apply for Yoruichi will first have to fix the problems with the app before being approved for combat.[/adm]
- RawkGod of Love
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Re: Yoruichi Shihouin [PENDING]
Mon Dec 06, 2021 11:10 pm
[adm]Archiving on account of a more recent version of the application.[/adm]
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