Akallas

Name: Akallas

Age: 540 years old but looks 20 years old

Gender: Male

History:

Akallas was born to a family of four, later six, in London. His father was a cold, dubious noble while his mother was the warm, caring daughter of a rich, greedy merchant. He was raised under the heavy education that came as a responsiblity of a noble. His father stubbornly forced his son to take the education despite his wife's onjections at an early age. He grew up, however, healthy and wise. He had problems, though, because he always picked fights with the local bullies in London, often losing and coming home bruised. Later, when he finished his basic education in London, he moved to New York and attended Harvard. He graduated after five years with a master's degree in archaelogy.
He moved to India and began to excavate several ruins in Northern India. There he found several books written in ancient Japanese. It was then his life changed.
Akallas kept the existance of the books a secret from his collegues. He traveled to Japan and began to learn Japanese. It took him four years to become completely fluent in the language. He returned to London with his ancient books and began to read them. They were full of knowledges to many fields of science and spiritual powers. He came to accept that all the written words in the book were true because he believed such thing would not be found in ancient ruin in India if there wasn't some importance in the book's content. Soon after, he began to practice some of them.
Despite knowing so much about the hollows, shinigamis, and the balance that the two keep under control, Akallas was not able to do anything because he had no ability to sense the reiatsu.
Then the World War 2 broke loose and brought hell to Earth. It was during the World War 2 that he became aware of reiatsu and his powers grew.
By the time WWII ended, he had mastered one of the powers the books described as "Caedas fur Furis," which means 'Blood Raider,' and he also mastered Grata Faxum, which means 'Beloved Fire.' He fought against hollows, trying to improve his two other powers that he learned from the books he came to call "Teacher's Edition to Spiritual World." But the real name of the book is unknown to him for he cannot read the words on the cover. Too faded.
He kept himself quite for the last few centuries, watching and sleeping. A lot of events had occurred and he liked them all, though he didn't really appreciate the idiots trying to fight against hollows and shinigamis without a good reason.
From 2009, he had decided that he will make his powers grow. He began to work as a mercenary for a corp that no longer exists. The Caedas fur Furis was the first power he gained full control over, practicing daily for a decade. From their, he began to make techniques that he would use. When the corp was disbanded, he went into hiding to Northern Canada.
While he spent the last two centuries hiding in Canada, he read through his books, and practiced the abilities written in there. One of them was called Melchsee's Door. It took him a long time and over a hundred gallon of blood to master this power.
When he was training this power, he learned that Melchsee's Door was a dangerous ability for himself and his victim. First, it rips his victim apart and second, when he uses this ability, his brain as well as his soul is taxed. He did not know why his body is taxed. He still doesn't know. He lost several limbs trying to control the door over the last century, but thanks to his Caedas fur Furis, he managed to get several parts of his "neighbors" and attach them to himself. And suck up their blood for later Blood Replenishment.
Melchsee's Territory was a technique he gained through an accident.
He was training to use multiple Melchsee's Lance on October 15, 2361. He had been giving programs to his lances, taxing himself over the limit. Then he accidently gave one of the lance a order to fire the "lance" at himself. The small Door flew out of his hand and stopped a two yard above him, and fired at him. When he saw it coming, it was too late, and it pierced his shoulder. But much to his amazement, the lance did not pierce him but envelop him like a second, flexible skin. He understood that his Door could not pierce him and decided to make a tehnique that would make his power envelop him. Which is now the tech Melchsee's Territory, Akallas's ultimate defensive technique.
In 2400, he moved back to United States under the name of "Tyler Walker," and attended the University of Los Angelos. He got himself a Master's Degree for Business Administration. In 2409, he moved to Karakura Central. He is currently just another somebody on the streets of Underground Karakura.


Looks: A white haired man wearing a black hooded cloak. Underneath the cloak, he wears black leather body armor. When he is out in middle of a city in living world, he dresses like a businessman. He has purple eyes. He has a tatoo on his wrist that reads "Dios per favor me perdona." His hair is short, sandy and stubborn. He doesn't have much brawn but he still has a excellent slim figure. His white hair is the evidence of his age while his tight young skin is the evidence of his ability's power. Under all the clothes, he has hundreds of scars he received while fighting people over his life. But most of them are from WW2.

Personality: He is kind to those who are kind to him, although he may or act as if he is uncaring, sometimes. He really hates cold and calculating minds who has nothing to do but kill others, but has no desire to provoke a fight so he just ignores those type of guy and/or girl. He can become cold and cynical when something about where or what he is doing is not what he likes, for example, when he is looking at himself in the mirror.. He is often random when something excites him.

Likes: Chocolate, animals(mammals), trees. Shinigami

Dislikes: Himself, poetry, bugs, hollows

Doesn't care about: Humans shouting against shinigamis.


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Human Special Ability Information

Ability #1
Name: Caedas fur Furis (Blood Raider)

Description: Caedas fur Furis is a abilty that allows Akallas to control blood at a limited range whether its basic structure is spiriton or atom. He can make the blood dense enough to make a weapon or a wall. He cannot, however, loosen a crystal structure of blood back into its liquid form although he can break them down into large shards that he can manipulate. If there is a wound- large one, not a little scratch - he can suck the blood out of the injured person. He must have, however, touch the blood that he uses for any activity.

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Techniques Infomation

Name: Blood Hole

Description: Insert his own blood into the enemy's body. The blood that enters the enemy then spreads through out the major organs and clings on like a scab on the organ's walls. This process takes five minutes. Then Akallas uses his ability to pull his own blood out of of his enemy, leaving large holes on the enemy.

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Name: The Red Juggler

Description: A large red shield in shape of a joker mask appears to protect Akallas. This red shield is not made out of blood but out of reishi. Like a Quincy, this shield's strength depends on the environment.

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Name: The Needle Throne

Description: The Thorny Throne is a technique Akallas uses when a lot of his blood and/or blood he touched is spilled on the ground. He uses them to create a field of fine, thin needles that pierces the enemy. The length of the spike depends on the pool size of the blood that it comes out of.

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Name: Blood Replenish

Description: This is a techinique that keeps the body's cells in perfect condition. This also keeps the skin tight and wrinkle-less. However, the down side of this techinque is that he needs a car battery and he needs a stash of compatible blood. He can be knocked out unconscious while his body "fixes" itself back to its youthful state. Process is painful.

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Name: King's Bloody Sword

Description: This techinique is much like Byakuya's bankai, Senkai Senbonzakura Kagayoshi. Except the swords are replaced with line threads of liquid blood he touched. The liquid threads are barely visible, being only a few drops wide.

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Name: Regeneration

Description: This technique is a passive ability that helps Akallas heal wounds at a fast speed. Though it is not fast as a hollow's high speed regen, it is fast enough to keep him alive.

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Ability Name: Melchsee's Door

Ability Description:
Creates a blackhole like huge orb, black in color of course and its diameter being 2 meter, that devours nearby reiatsu that comes out in attack form (Example: Ichigo's Getsuga Tenshou and Cero). The absorbed reiatsu is transferred to Akallas and it builds up witin him. The reiatsus that he absorbs are one-time usage-once he uses a reiatsu of certain someone he took from, it does not come back. The orb is always hovering above the ground level but with command, it does dig through the surface. It continues to absorb reiatsu that it can find. But when it reaches its limit, there are two possible results:
1. If it had too much at too little time, it will break down like a shattered glass orb.
2. Or it will go out of control and unleash branch like attacks that indiscrimately attacks anyone with reiatsu-in attack form or not- and it stabs the taget.
However, this possess a danger for Akallas, for being a human, despite being SUPERhuman, he cannot control too much of someone else's reiatsu. He can, however, refuse to absorb the reiatsu his Door has absorbed, forcing the reiatsu to leak out of him. This can lure lots of lesser hollows.

Techniques:

1. Melchsee's Lance
Desc: This technique is a improved version of Melchsee's Door that he can manipulate easily, unlike the original form which is absolutely no control at all. It is a small orb that fits in the hand and he must fire it like a Quincy fires a arrow but he does it with more of a slingshot like technique. He commands the orb of its activates but he is limited to programming a Lance up to five activities and he can control only two of them.
Example Programming of the Lance:
1. Move ten meters forward.
2. Station yourself ten meters off the ground.
3. Find the nearest source of reiatsu.
4. Fire the lance at the target. (Lance being a long black pole that comes out of the orb.)
This is a offensive/defensive tech.

2. Melchsee's Disc
Desc: By setting a program for Melchsee's Door to stay put in front of him and limiting its reiatsu tracking to 5 meters, Ageha creates two discs that absorb any reiatsu attacks that are directed toward him. Unfortunately, when the discs absorb enough reiatsu energy, it activates Melchsee's Door's basic feature which attacks all reiatsu energy indiscriminately.
This is a defensive tech.

3. Melchsee's Vortex
Desc: Sets several smaller Melchsee's Door, more than four, to spin around Akallas connected by rings.
This is a defensive technique.
Attack Mode: Splash
Desc: It disintergrates the rings that connects the Melchsee's Doors, forcing the Doors to fly at high speed towards anywhere but where Akallas stands and a circular area around him (2 meters in diameter). He does not have to use this to dissipate the Vortex.
Offensive Tech. One post.

4. Melchsee's Window
Desc: Akallas sends several of his Melchsee's Door flying and programs them to stop in a straetegic position around him in two circular rings. He also forces their limited range of attack, which is in a huge insect leg like form, to three meters. Whenever the Melchsee's Doors detect a reiatsu within its range, it instantly forms a leg to attack.
This is a defensive/offensive technique.

5. Melchsee's Territory
Desc: This techinque intergrates Akallas with his Melchsee's Door without having him ripped apart. The Melchsee's Door intergrates with him on spiriton level making his skin look detail-less and smooth. The color is obviously black. While in this form, he can take on any damage in reiatsu and have none of them hurt him.
This is a defensive technique.

6. Raging King
Desc: This technique is a passive technique that automatically activates when Akallas becomes enraged during his form in Melchsee's Territory. This form causes the Territory's abilities to flucate out of control and creates a multi ring above his head. The rings - 10 meters in radius alone - produces infinite amount of Melchsee's Door that seeks out to kill. At first, there are four Doors that protects him aggressively. Every time, one of them dissipates or goes out of control to become the Tree of Death, two more are produced by the ring. Eventually, Akallas's body and soul cannot handle the amount of Door and it all gives away, but his body becomes fully restored in every aspect before it does.
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Power: Grata Faxum

Desc: Grata Faxum means Beloved Fire in Latin. (Correct me if I’m wrong.) This power allows Akallas to manipulate fire. He can feed the fire with reiatsu so that it grows or diminish it. This power allows him to create fire but the size of the fire and its power depends on the technique he uses. His fire does not hurt him.

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Techniques:

Fire Golem: Akallas creates a 20 foot tall creature made out of fire which he resides within and control it. The fire golem has two arms that can be used as a short and long range attack. The golem is, however, slow but fast enough to fight against unseated shinigami officers with ease.

Fire Golem’s Attacks:

Volcanus: The arms of the golem becomes like a set of machineguns that fires a fire ball five inches in diameter.

Burning Cross: The hands of the golem become a set of cross like weapons.

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Hellfire: Akallas’s favorite attack. This attack produces a black light producing fire. Hellfire is not something Akallas can manipulate, but only produce and throw. This fire is very sensitive to reiatsu and if it does touch a spiritual being other than Akallas, it will seek to overpower, as if it had a life of its own. Akallas cannot, however, produce this very often because it strains his body over the limit.

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Whip of Heavenly Flame: Akallas produces a burning whip that has no physical attribute other than fire. This whip is nine meters long but Akallas can make it shorter or longer at his will. This whip can burn a lot, but it is not hot enough to kill.

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Burning Tower: Akallas overloads this power for a millisecond, but enough to produce a yellow fire pillar that goes up to 90 meters high before it dissipates. Unfortunately, this technique is made to destroy lower level of hollows and Gillians one hundred meters around him.

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Children of Cerebus: This technique produces flaming dogs, much like the fire golem but these are very small, like the size of a grey wolf. They obey Akallas’s order and they can also attack as bombs. He can produce up to twelve of them in all.
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RP Sample

RP Sample:

The moon was high in the night sky as Akallas coughed as Akallas coughed and silently moved through the thick jungle of skyscrapers in New York City. The air was full of smoke from all the people smoking around him and the car exhales. The city wasn't pleasant to him but it was about time he found another victim to salvage some body parts to replace his organs with. A man in his late or mid teens would be perfect. 'And then I would be able to eat that barbaque my friend is going to make tomorrow without any hesitation!' he thought gingerly as he entered a night club.
He walked up stairs, humming silently, and opened the large metal door to the night club. The lightings in the large spacious room were vibrant with dark colors as well as light colors. A ray of red light crossed Akallas's face as he walked across the room. He stopped at the middle of a dance floor and took a look around the club. There were many people here but few were the desired victims... And all of them were girls. He didn't like hurting them unless it was a necessity so he tried to look for someone else.
"Come on, come on, I better finish this tonight before I get in trouble ..." he sang quietly as he continued his survey.

Hmmmm, now lets see the malfunctions of this app now, shall we?

1st off, if you ared going to make a 540 year old human. EXPLAIN HOW HE IS ABLE TO LIVE THAT LONG. Did he learn some form of immortality from the book. Was he possessed by a demon? (Ziamichi) Did he BECOME a demon? I know you put one little ability that states how you can replenish your blood supply, but still, INCLUDE HOW YOU COULD LAST SO LONG IN THE HISTORY!!!
Although you tried to be detail, some more detail must be made. 2 paragraphs for the Personality, and SOME of your abilities needs more detail. Two lines dust won't cut it. The more detail, the better.
And lastly, EXPLAIN YOUR HISTORY MORE. Tell us how much time he spent to perfect his abilities, when he learned a certain spell and such, and how he used it. You don't have to do this for EVERY one of them, only the most important...
NOW BACK TO WORK!

Read Blood Replenish techinque please to know the reason for immortality, or what it looks like.

Going back to work.

Edited

Well now...
Accepted: 1-2+

Skill level: Hand to Hand: Adept
Skill level: Speed: Advance
Skill level: Powers: Advance