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• Name: go's bye Nikusui
•Real name Raiko Saki Mischevang
• adopted name Aimi Shizuko Nakamura
• True Age: 2206
• Appearance Age: 17
• Gender: Female
• Orientation: loyalty family

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• Appearance:

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• Bone Appearance: its on her right hand

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• Hollow Hole: left shoulder right over the shoulder blade

• Reiatsu Colour: crimson red

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•Normally: how she acts most of the time.
*Nikusui’s behavior is odd, eccentric or peculiar as she normally acts like a whiny fool.
*Nikusui can come off as being childish or just plain stupid. But really she just is selfish and doesn't care about most people. This is not to say she can’t make friends but it’s unlikely.
*Nikusui is happy and upbeat most the time and loves playing tricks or teasing people for her own amusement as she is playful in nature.
*Obsessive ruminations without inner resistance, often with dysmorphophobic, sexual or aggressive contents;
*Dysmorphophobic: she is extremely body conscious commonly freaking out over possible disproportion in her body. It would be wise to not talk about any part of her body or look at one part to long or her paranoia will react. She will take it that you think something is wrong with that part and that she is a freak. She won't ask or say a word she will simply lash out at you in the attempt to make you as disfigured as she things she is.. or worse
*Sexual: she takes an exception to sexual advancements... Rather it's a good thing or a bad thing only can be told with time ... but it is widely known she tends to kill and eat her mates.

• Jointed personality traits: traits that both personalities share
* Detachment: Nikusui feels completely detached from the world and its troubles only looking out to feed her own wants and that of her family.
*Gluttony: Nikusui is always hungry and is commonly seen eating. Its rare to see her with out food of some kind…and nor would you want to see her that way... if she starts to feel hungry and has no food any thing around her may become her meal. This is presumed to be the reason she eats her mate's a lot

• In a battle personality: Schizotypal Personality Disorder
*Blunted affect: lack of emotional reactivity shown by little animation in facial expression or vocal inflection and Expressive gestures are rare
*Emotional coldness, to protect her self from emotional "damage" she has quite simply locked them away. She had become an heartless cold monster that feel no remorse or regret for anything she might do. With the only exception to this being her family
*Suspiciousness or paranoid ideas; Nikusui is terribly paranoid of people and that's tends to make her keep a wall up between her and others.
*Occasional transient quasi-psychotic episodes with intense illusions, auditory or other hallucinations and delusion-like ideas, usually occurring without external provocation.

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•History:
•Life: life as Raiko Saki Mischevang started by being born in a very small town in the year 206AD. That ranged 200 miles away from karakura. Raiko was one of the younger sisters of the Mischevang family. Being rather primitive the village life moved at a slow pace if at all from what she could remember. Raiko admired her sisters for their hard work Raiko her self was a weak child but other wise normal. Because of her lack of physical ability she never went too far from home. Raiko would stay in the house and not go out in the daytime that much but not being out in the sun's light that often gave Raiko's skin a lighter complexion that really made her red hair stand out. She was far too young to even think of taking a husband being only 7 years of age but that did not stop the stares of men. She looked up to her elder sister Nyssa so very much. When Raiko was younger she would try to find reasons to stay with Nyssa’s at night. Being so physically weaker than the others Raiko was scared of lots of things. She could not hunt like Mikako. Even the smallest of animal made Raiko scared. Nor was she smart like Nyssa… there was a lot that all her sisters could do that she simply could not. But she could prepare the food and help her mother cook it as well she could get the water from the well… with a fair amount of effort. Taken from what she called home. Raiko was deeply saddened from her pillar of strength being gone. Now that Nyssa had gotten married and left the village she really did not know what too do.Tho Raiko did not know it yet she to was about to leave the village against her will.

He came in the dark of night.

The villagers were normally cautious of outsiders but this man had been here several times before. A tall broad grizzly of a man who come to the village from time to time in order to trade goods. Raiko was sitting by the well mourning the loss of her sister to the man she married… she hated him so for taking Nyssa away from her. As Raiko cried three men in the village were making a deal … selling something that was not theirs to sell. Due to an unfortunate death the village has been without a blacksmith for a long time so farming tools and basic metal works were badly needed for the town’s survival. the outsider had come here looking to trade his goods and did have a fare amount of what the village needed but was looking to take advantage of the towns situation and was asking far to height of a price for them. So the deal was struck with out so much as them asking for her mother or father’s consent they agreed that the man could take Raiko as payment. She was called over to the three men and in that day and age girls had to obey or they would be punished severely. With out a thought she walked to them. The tall bear like man standing before her this brute would smile at her as two of the men moved to her sides and one behind her. Under the dark of night no one would see the man be hind Raiko strike her in the back of the head with enough force to make her unconscious. Rapping her in cloth and placing her body in the back of his horse drawn carriage. She was taken far far away.

Traveling..
Now at 8years old she was forced into servitude to a man who didn't even care enough to tell her his name. Traveling dirt road and mountain trails. It was upon that trail where he took her innocence and by forcefully robbing her purity it was this act that was the first step into her descent the dark abyss that would consume her soul. Her mind not being able to understand what was happening and her body shutting down there was nothing she could do. She could not get the words out to tell him to stop not that he would even if she did. No all Raiko could do was lie there as silent tears fall from her eyes. At that very moment is when she felt it for the first time. What she can only call a void…a unfillable emptiness come over her. It did not last long be for fading away.

The first village…The first escape attempt.

The man and Raiko keep traveling tell coming to another village. It had taken them over 3 weeks to get to hear maybe more she had done lost track of time. He paraded her around the village like a prize treating her like nothing more than an object in which he was the owner. But that was the truth infect. In this area slavery was widely popular and it was not uncommon for someone to sell their children for money or for their children to be forced in to labor or servitude to repay a debt. The fact was that Raiko was his property now to do with as he likes. She knew this will and was obedient to his every whim no matter how must she hated it knowing full well resisting him would only cause her more trouble and pain. But that night they stayed in an inn after he was asleep she managed to get out of his grip Gathering her clothes and putting them on as fast as she could. Running down the inn stares in her mind she could see visions of home and her family that were awaiting her back there. But as she ran across the main hall the innkeeper’s son would tackle her to the floor as his father would go to awaken the man. her master took her to the stall that his horse was being kept in. he tied her to a wooden support beam and gave her five lashes across her back with a whip meant for the animals. Each swing of the whip was cutting into her flesh. The pain would have been intense normally but Raiko's mind was blocking all feelings of her Mortal coil and focusing on her fears. Fear that she will never be free again, fear that he might kill her and fear that she will never see her beloved family. This fear combined with her hatred that she now had for people and the shame she felt would flow in to the abyss that was forming in her soul. The emptiness swallowing her heart Raiko never disobeyed ever again becoming cold and doll like. At lest on the outside. On the inside she would start to fantasize about killing and continuing to feed the malice in her soul.

Years passed and the man grew board of her so he took her and a load of goods to a town that at the time was called sakai but in the present time goes by osake changing its name somewhere in the 14th and 16th century. The man dressed her up nice so that she may look her best. She walked with him as he sold his things to many shops and stalls and after that was done they retired to an inn that was most peculiar with lots of red paper lanterns and ribbons adorned on its windows and doors. The man took his time with her that night savoring it. It was in the morning that Raiko was taken to the owner of the place that was a woman in her early 30s named Ayano Katsumi Nakamura. But as it would turn out the place that she had slept that night was no inn at all but a brothel and she was to be the newest girl being sold for 3 ryo Gold coins worth rufflely upwards of 896.77$ each in to days USD “not counting historical value of the coin” . The reason she got such a high price was for her beauty along with her showing full obedience as well her age was a big factor being only 11 she would have a long life to work at the brothel and would bring in lots of customers.

Life in the brothel had a routine to it and Raiko quickly be come one of the top girls. She would wake every morning before the sun would rise to cleanse her self of the night before after that she would fetch the water needed for cooking. She and 3 other girls would make the food in the mornings and those two girls would have the rest of the day until night fall off. Raiko however would take part in the housekeeping duties and laundry staying busy well into the afternoon in which she would help with the next meals preparation and cooking. The only times she broke this routine was if a patron come in during the day to request her. Raiko was popular amongst the women of the brothel for all the help that she did and her popularity with them was only rivaled with that of the men in the town. She would commonly see more than ten patrons in one night. The men of the town found her emotionless way of acting to be like that of a noblewoman but no other woman in the town could match her beauty. Raiko did feel an normality to her life now these women were not her blood sisters but there was a level of sisterhood amongst them.

six years later Ayano who ran the brothel become bedridden from an illness and Raiko now being her right hand and top girl took over the brothel in her stead acting in accordance with Ayano will. Raiko now had the name Aimi Shizuko Nakamura being adopted by lady Ayano and having her name changed fully. Now known as Aimi her routine had changed in the morning she would bee in her mothers room getting lessens on how to run the brothel. The other girls would become jealous of her knowing many of them had been living here longer and if Ayano was to die Aimi would bee the right full heiress to the brothel and Ayano's wealth. Gathering up their tips equal to 20 silver pieces they set a plan in motion. Paying a man known to have gambling debts the silver to take care of Aimi permanently. It happened on a bright sunny spring day. Rice was starting to run low so Aimi took it upon herself to get more before the noon meal. Walking from the brothel down the street passing many people along the way she got to the shop just fine. Buying rice and other things went smoothly as well. On her walk back home there were lots of people talking all around her as was normal in the market. Than she felt it…a piercing cold pain in her chest and something warm flowing down from it. Aimi had been run-through with a tanto the tip of the blade barely showing through her breast. The attacker had come from be hind plunging the tanto where he thought her heart might be and his aim was true for the blade slipped past the chest bones and through the heart with one quick/strong thrust. As the man would try to pull the blade out he would find him self unable and running off in to the alleyway. Aimi seeing the blood dripping down would fall to the ground where she could do nothing being paralyzed from the pain until death set in. As a soul Raiko felt a sense of freedom but thought it odd that she steal felt hungry all the time. Raiko tried to go back home but was unable to find her way and ended up getting lost in the woods. As time passed the void in side her kept growing making her feel starving…it was unbearable. Raiko was walking thru the woods holding her stomach when she come to see a dear’s spirit walking less than 5 feet away. Looking at the deer she could feel some thing spiraling out of her from within the void and flowing thru her body becoming a dark aura. The deer spirit had become trapped under her spiritual pressure and could not run. Raiko walked over to it in a trance her hands gripping on to the deer’s fur like coat and bending her head lower so she could bite in to it. Eating the deer was a lot easier than she thought it would be but the hunger was steel there but at least it had gotten smaller so she was no longer starving. Raiko would spend the rest of her time as a Plus eating other souls if it was an animals soul or humans soul did not matter to her food was food.

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Raiko would become a hollow quickly she would enjoy eating all the souls she come across. One of the things she liked most was eating humans that where steal alive. Raiko had a power that let her appears as a young woman that she would use to lure her victim's with than she would use her acidic touch to remove the flesh off of her victim's body killing them slowly and painfully before eating them. It was around this time that people come up with the name Nikusui and said it was a monster that eats the flesh off its victim's. This was flattering to Raiko that humans was so scared of her they made her a mythological monster even if they wasn't right with all the details. So she took on a new name this time of her own will Nikusui. Over 10 years would pass and she would get to the point that human souls was no longer enough to keep her hunger at bay so she would go to the forest of menos in hueco mundo and become a cannibal and inevitably become a Gillian.

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Now being a Gillian she would never rest constantly eating to fill the emptiness inside her. She would attack the other Gillian and consume them so much that even with their low intelligence the other Gillian where scared and tried to keep away from her.

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As an Adjuchas her body was made to eat others and that she did. Raiko developed a lower form of Pesquisa so finding other Adjuchas was not a problem at all for her and with her ever growing power consuming them was not a challenge. Some arrancar would stand against her and they like all the others would end up being nothing more than food but they did give her an idea of trying to remove her mask. So she buried her self deep within the floor of the forest of menos and focusing her energy her mask started to become warped than bursting into a liquid form wrapping her body in a hard bone-like white shell. Several months passed while she was in the ground and finally the white shell would start to crack and chip away she had become an Arrancar. Bursting up from the hole she was in Nikusui felt completely starving to the point of pure insanity she would devour every hollow with in a 4 kilometer area no mater what class they was rather it was a normal Hollow or even a another Arrancar she did not care or have control over her self all she could only think about was how hungry she was

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• Sealed Zanpakutô: her Zanpakutô is known to be a scythe but like her the size and shape of her scythe changes at her will.
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•Bala (虚弾 (バラ), Bara; Spanish for "Bullet," Japanese for "Hollow Bullet") a technique of firing her hardened spiritual pressure against her enemies. Less powerful than a Cero, but it can be successively fired at 20 times the rate.

•Cero (虚閃 (セロ), Sero; Spanish for "Zero," Japanese for "Hollow Flash," "Doom Blast" in the Viz translation) a powerful spiritual light fired by Menos Grandes and Arrancar.

•Descorrer (解空(デスコレール), Desukorēru; Japanese for "Loosed Void", Spanish for "Drawing Back/Opening"): A technique used by Espada-level Arrancar and sometimes others, to open a Garganta between the living world and Hueco Mundo.

•Gran Rey Cero (王虚の閃光 (グラン・レイ・セロ), Guran Rei Sero; Spanish for "Grand King Zero", Japanese for "Royal Hollow Flash") The ultimate Cero that can only be used by Espadas. It is so powerful, it distorts the surrounding space.
•Pesquisa (探査回路 (ペスキサ), Pesukisa; Spanish for "Inquiry," Japanese for "Probe Circuit") An Arrancar ability to measure and locate spiritual pressure.

•Resurrección (帰刃 (レスレクシオン), Resurekushion; Spanish for "Resurrection," Japanese for "Returning Blade") Releasing the core of an Arrancar' ability sealed in their Zanpakutō to regain the original powers of a Hollow.

•Sonído (響転 (ソニード), Sonīdo; Spanish for "Sound,"
Japanese for "Sound Ceremony") The Arrancar equivalent to a
Shinigami's Shunpo. Nikusui’s Sonído does not make a sound at all nor does it make a blurred image of her when she reappears.

•Soul-Body Separation: This technique allows a Hollow to forcibly extract a living spirit from his/her body. The soul is still attached by the Chain of Fate and can be saved but if it is broken
then the soul can prevent the Encroachment so long as he/she is placed inside a soulless body or animal.

•High-Speed Regeneration (超速再生, Chōsoku Saisei; lit. "Ultra-Fast Regeneration") is the ability that allows a Hollow to
heal most injuries very quickly, with the exception of the destruction of the head or vital organs. Ulquiorra states that most Arrancar gave up Regeneration for far greater strength.

•Enhanced Spiritual Power: possessing immense spiritual power she can hold her own in a fight even without using her Resurrección with her Reiatsu being enough to cripple most 4-0 tiers

•Highly Perceptive Combat: Nikusui has an ability to be very detail oriented when it comes to fighting. She notices her opponent's mannerisms and discerns with ease the reasons behind those actions and the weaknesses and strengths of her opponents. She is also able to look at unfamiliar attacks and figure out the way they work just by viewing it at least once

•Pro-Hand-to-Hand Combatant: Nikusui has little interest in actually utilizing her Zanpakutō in battle, preferring to attack foes unarmed with her own body as a weapon

•Supernatural Flight: Nikusui has an ability to fly with out the use of wings. In her Resurrección this allows her wings to be used for attack and defensive purposes.

•Phasing: Nikusui has the ability to use what she calls phasing through matter becoming intangible to the living world at will. Using this ability allows her to pass through solid matter. But only the solid matter of the living world that has no form of supernatural energy flowing thru it like Reiatsu, chaos energy and such. She CAN’T use this power to pass through solid spirit matter like in k-world, the SS or hueco mundo. Some hollows have shown to have this power.

• Unique Abilities:

•Immunity: immune to all known diseases and pathogens with the exclusion of character abilities.

•Hunger:" this is ment to be a limitation” Nikusui has an insatiable hunger that makes her need to eat constantly. If Nikusui goes with out eating for so long she will feel like she is starving and if not attended to she will start to act more erratically and become weekend from hunger.

*details on hunger: Nikusui can go 3 post with out eating any longer and she will start to feel the draw backs of hunger.

*from 4 to 6 posts with out eating she will suffer a temporary loss of 2 tire steps and start to become irritable. This is to say if she is a 2-4 and than she will become a 3-1 this last until she eats again.

*if 7 to 10 her Willpower & Cero/Bala skills will become downgraded by 1 each as well her behavior will become insane. This is to say if she is a Adept is the skill she will become a Beginner this last until she eats again.

*11 General Speed & Strength along with another tire step will be downgraded by 1...And you should run because she is now suffering a FULL psychotic episode and is unpredictable in what she might do this last until she eats something.

• Shapeshifting: Nikusui has the ability to change her shape or being into that of another person, creature, species, or other entity by an act of will alone, but she doesn't gain the powers or treats of that being may hold. She more commonly used this to hide who she is from others.

•Rapid mind: This is an Ability made possible by her Highly Perceptive Combat. By speeding up her brains rate of thinking time looks to be moving slower allowing her to see incoming attacks easily and react to them without mercy. This Ability combined with her General Speed and Sonido can allow her body to move at the same speed that she thinks and by doing this she can avoid attacks easily and find openings to attack her opponent

•Full body regenerate: Nikusui can regenerate her body at a sub-molecular level allowing her to survive virtually anything as long there is a piece of her left in the world some where. This
kind of regeneration however takes 3 days time to complete but makes Nikusui have a near-immortality.
*Details on Full body regenerate: Nikusui cellular tissue stors a genetic map as well as an imprint of her soul. Nikusui is linked to her own cells by a crude form of telepathy and if the maine body was to die or even be completely destroyed the biggest piece will than start to regenerate her mind body and soul. The 3 day limit means that for 3 days minimum she will remain dead RIL time 72 hours than she will regenerate from a fragment of her self that was left behind some where. These fragments are not simply made out of thin air it’s a piece of her that have been left behind in an old thread. An Example of this is say someone used a hellacious attack on her that completely destroyed her. In a thread one week before a part of her body got cut off. The part of her body would have become like stone. Now that the main body is no more it would activate and start to suck Reiatsu from the area. After 3 days the fragment will fully regenerate her.

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• Resereccion Name: Corporeal necrosis

• Resereccion Release Phrase: Devour them and leave nothing behind.

• Release Actions: : placing her hand on the blade it will become a block orb that she eats. After eating it a red blood like mist will shoot out from her having many tentacles and heads that has razor like teeth but no eye. This mist will lunge out and attack the closes living thing to her but can be killed easily with reiatsu attack or by physically hitting the heads

• Resereccion Appearance:

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• Resereccion Abilities:

•Overwhelming Reiatsu: Nikusui's Reiatsu in her Releaseed form is vastly more than when sealed. When Releaseing it her spiritual pressure that she gives off takes on a life of its own becoming a blood mist.

•Tentacles: Nikusui's Releaseed form has two unattached wings that hold lots of tentacles with bone tips on them. These tentacles have a wide range of uses for attacking like whips or even used to pierce a target as well they can be use for defensive purposes or for binding her opponent in their grip like a snake. It should be noted that the tentacles can fire a bala from their bone tips.

•Wing shield: Nikusui's two unattached wings can expand and contract at her will and produce a light blue glowing Reiatsu barrier to help defend her self rather she needs to make it cover part of her body or all of it.

•Devastating punches: Nikusui being a mostly physical fighter can smash a 6 ton cub of steel into pieces with a signal punch if needed. She can do such a power full punch by spiraling hardened Reiatsu around her fist that upon contact with a target explodes in a fury of red Reiatsu waves that quite simply cuts its target to pieces. But as liveing things have their own Reiatsu this is weakened by how strong of a person she is fighting.

•Spell Absorption: Nikusui has the ability to absorb a percentage of the energy used in spell like attacks on her like magic spells, demon magic and Kidō thereby giving her back some energy and reducing the spells damage.

*Details on Spell Absorption: Any one that is 4 tires lower than she is well be absorbed. This is like if she is a 1-1 and they are 5-1 100% is Absorbed.

*2 to 3 tires lower 50%.

*Same tire to 1 lower 25%.
*1 tire more than she is 10% but any thing more will fully hit her as she would be unable to absorb it.

•Wing weapons: Nikusui's unattached wings can change their shape and be come weapons. She does not feel this is really using a weapon at all as it’s is really part of her body. A list of the known shapes blow
*Demonshuriken: A wing forming a large shuriken when thrown spins in an excess of 10,000 Rpms. She can call it back to her with crude form of telepathy.
*Sword: a sword 3 feet in length and is capable of concentrating a cero in to a quick energy blade attack that flows out of it like a wave when slashed
*Scythe: By far her favorite the blade of this Scythe vibrates at speeds up words of 10,000RPM's.

•Estrella de la Muerte: Nikusui’s most powerful attack. a violent and powerful black & red Reiatsu flows into her weapons blade so that when she strikes her opponent the energy flows in to their body. At her will she can ignite this energy causing a massive explosion with them being the point of its origin. The explosions strength is so great it can easily blow up an entire mountain or level many city blocks to the ground. It possesses more destructive power than10 of her strongest cero's. This can only be used 1 time every 15 post and a max of 2 times in a thread

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General Skills

Durability: Adept
General Speed: Advanced
Strength: Adept
Weapon Skill: Beginner

Will Skills

Willpower/Determination: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Mental Deduction: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Pain Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Focus: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

Racial Skills

Perquisa: Adept
Sonido: Advanced
Cero/Bala: Adept
Hierro: Beginner

Wed Sep 12, 2012 8:35 pm

her most common Shapeshifting form. she taks this on so people can no tell how she is really.
• Name she uses in this form:Aimi Shizuko Nakamura
• Appearance Age: 15
• Gender: Female
• Appearance:
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Wed Sep 12, 2012 9:07 pm

I ask that when you reed this you take in to consideration how mush time I put in to this app as will what I am applying it for. It took me over a week to make and i really put my heart in to it.. It even made me cry once when writing it. as well i am applying it to the The Royals of shadow fall Infanta#6 position and would need a tier of 0-5 or better to get it. I just ask you to consider all the she has and all that went in to making her. I even went as far to give her a better looking app than the normal plane red one.

Sat Sep 22, 2012 5:20 am

Phasing To be clear, this is only human stuff right? She can't lol phase through energy attacks, or zanpakto/spirit based weapons?

Gluttony Absorption As much as this looks fun, if you look in the rules, this is banned. '.' you might wanna edit or change it DX

Time Manipulation This isn't time manipulation hun. It's more like advanced Reaction, so if you could change the name to something else?

Estrella de la Muerte Sorry hun, can you just take out Death Energy? That's about all there is wrong.

Lemme know when you're done fixing these <3

Tue Sep 25, 2012 7:06 am

Aivee wrote:Phasing To be clear, this is only human stuff right? She can't lol phase through energy attacks, or zanpakto/spirit based weapons?

Gluttony Absorption As much as this looks fun, if you look in the rules, this is banned. '.' you might wanna edit or change it DX

Time Manipulation This isn't time manipulation hun. It's more like advanced Reaction, so if you could change the name to something else?

Estrella de la Muerte Sorry hun, can you just take out Death Energy? That's about all there is wrong.

Lemme know when you're done fixing these <3

I add a part to Phasing that I think makes clear it only works on inanimate object in the human world.
up-pawn fully re-reading the rules I did find it. sorry I missed it the first time I read them. Gluttony Absorption has been fully removed and replaced with "•Immunity: immune to all known diseases and pathogens with the exclusion of character abilities. . " I've not give up on her eating others as it is part of her core being but so it don't break the rules she will gain nothing from it and this Immunity lets her eat others body's with out risk of sickness from doing so. but as it does say if some one has a biological agent in their Ability it steel works and would effect her.
Time Manipulation's name has me changed to Rapid mind.
Estrella de la Muerte is fixed.

Wed Sep 26, 2012 11:08 am

Application Checklist

Name [X]
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Gender [X]
Appearance Present [X]
Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
10 sentences for personality [X]
History is of appropriate length [X]
Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]

Will Skills

Willpower/Determination: Advanced
Mental Deduction: Advanced
Pain Endurance: Advanced
Focus: Adept

Comments/Notes: Welcome to the family!

Tier: 2-3

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Aivee Clean-Up Time!

This member has left the site or is inactive! Therefore, I am placing this into archives! Don't worry, if you want it back, simply post Here!

Sun Oct 20, 2013 3:14 pm

Archived per request

Thu Feb 06, 2014 9:23 am

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Archiving

User did not post in the activity check nor been active, so archiving.

Wed Jun 25, 2014 6:02 pm

Moved back to active on user's request

Raiko Saki Mischevang [APPROVED, 2-3]

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