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Tsubine
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Wed Sep 12, 2012 3:22 pm
500 years later, Kade Hiroshima finds her remains, Devilman & Kade revived Kagura giving her a newer and stronger sugiura body from the Sugiura they just killed. Kade renamed Kagura since she wasn't a demon anymore and the woman known as Kagura was gone. Akasha was born that day and she started serving under Devilman for a little while, she still had some feelings for her second master Kade. At the time, Kade was a much kind & nice demon then Devilman which she became his guardian they both had some sort of an connection. Years later, The remaining members of the Devilman Army had to seperate which Kade gave Akasha a final order to protect his son Yuuta despite whatever happens to him. Akasha agreed to the kind hearted demon Kade Hiroshima final orders...

Woah, that's not how things work. You can't "implant" someone into a deceased spiritual body.

Enhanced Shunpo: She started teaching himself how to use sonido with her new skills it proven to have better results within training and on the battlefield. Taki is shown to used her shunpo speeds along with her reflexes to gain the upperhand on a enemy or find ways to outmanever them. She have enough speed to match and espada's sonido or enemy's shunpo for a brief amount of time.
You have "sonido" in the first sentence, change it.

Ryuuja No Mai: This move summons several tornadoes to attack her enemies. They can pick up and throw opponents into the air as well as ripping them to shreds with massive wind power. It is her strongest attack and seems to be a bit weaker than bankai or stronger based attacks, and was deflected by it on one or more occasions. In the manga, it is more simply called Dragon Dance.

Change the "in the manga" part, as well as any reference to the Inuyasha Series or FMA. Xing does not and never did exist here.


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Wed Sep 12, 2012 5:11 pm
I still see A LOT of Xing references.


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Age : 30
Location : Gracemeria

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Mon Sep 17, 2012 7:15 am
New Japan

Where the fuck is New Japan?

Also, lower the Kidō stuff to about 30.

Sugiura may be able to learn Kidō, but not many.


You know what?
Fuck it.
This is denied for being a 99% rip from Wikis.
The stuff doesn't add up and it's just a pain to look at.
Come back with not-so-much copied things and I'll re-check it.


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Tue Sep 18, 2012 9:07 pm
> Moved this to denied <3
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