Micheal 'Rola' Karondai [0-5+.Shinigami.]

Previous Application: Rola was approved at 1-2 previously. Also currently holds the title for 'First CHaracter on PH'

• Name: Micheal 'Rola' Karondai
• Titles: The Afterburner
• Gender: Male
• Appearance Age: 30
• Age: 702
• Affiliation/Rank: The Ambassador to the Zero Division

• Appearance Description:

Rola is a very customised looking male. He is dark skinned and has a relatively large black Afro on his head. He stands at around 6'2 and is very muscular mainly due to his driivng habits causing him to kick, punch and spin things inside his car just to get round a corner without exploding. Even though he is usually exposed to such danger, he is always smiling. He wears a smart white shirt with black buttons and patterns that go up to his neck. Over this he wears a long green coat with large black cuffs and collars that he bought from a store several years ago and doesn't remember the name of. This coat cannot but done up in the middle because there are no zips or buttons here.

His lower half is dressed in baggy beige pants with a brown belt across his waist. He also has straps around his thighs for where he can place his guns if need be. he also wears a pair of brown boots. He doesnt look like much of a driver, nor does he look like a factory worker. In fact, he looks like he is in cosplay or dressing up for a science fiction convention. He calls this outfit his 'winning attire' or 'racing gear'.

• Appearance Picture:

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• Personality: Rola is a hard working man with a lot of support coming from his will to protect his friends and allies. Rola does not step down from a challenge and will often strive to perfect his routine be it in battle or simply messing around. because of his nature, he will usually end up throwing himself into dangerous situations but always ends up making the best come form the worst cases. His cheerful personality and his clear attitude on the world make him a very aspiring role model.

Rola also has an unparalleled adoration for several things based around technology: Guns and Cars. Because of Rolas Zanpakutō, he is never without a weapon on his disposal. Training for several hundred years with pistols, rifles, rocket launchers, machine guns, shotguns, heavy weapons and pretty much any gun you can think of, he has adapted himself to be the master of ranged technology. It isn't an oddity to see him lugging a large gun on his shoulder as he walks around.

This is only one of his favourite things. he has had a love for cars ever since he was a small boy in the human world. He watched races and found them outstanding. From this, he developed and became a racer. From his death to today, he has teamed up with his ultimate bankai and driven many cards, some not even revealed to public before. Seeing Rola's name on the score board of a race is never out of the question. In fact, it would be strange if he wasn't there already winning.

But all this manly weaponry and vehicles doesn't make Rola a sour man. He lives for his friends and fights for their rights and their smiles. He will never leave a good friend frowning and will raise his weapons to fight for a batter tomorrow.

• Likes:
Guns
Cars
Driving
Training

• Dislikes:
Fighting
Hurting people
Coldness
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• History:

Ever since he was a child, Rola loves cars more than anything. His dream was to become the worlds greatest racer and to defeat anybody that challenged him. Only when he was six he would sit in front of the TV with his toy cars, screaming to imitate the engine as he watched his favourite racing shows. Broom Broom was literally his first couple of words. Soon after he gained this love for cars, he found that his father was an actual racer himself.

This just made his love for cars stronger. His dad was a professional and he was a fan. One day, he would be just like him. Watching TV, he would always make note of the red car with no roof. this was his fathers of whom would smile at the camera every time he won a race.

A couple years later, and Rola had built his own Go-kart of of spare parts his dad would give him from his car. Soon, he would have a miniature version and race it around the street all the time. However, this was the start of something terrible to happen to his family.

One day when he was driving around his little go-kart, he found a strange footprint in the road. It wasn't a hole and was definatly a creature. This got him psyched as he was always interested in creatures too. Some were very fast and that got him excited. He drove off in the direction of the footprints with a big grin on his face. little did he know, 5 hours later, he would die.

The footprints he found lead up to a powerful demon of a creature. White mask, thick skin and claws. It spotted him a mile off and killed the boy with ease.

He awoke in a strange village in a completely different place. He wasn't sure about where he was and was scared as he didn't know where his house was. This place was different. Known as rukongai. Rola wandered for a while before coming across a small gathering of children his age. they weren't exactly happy to see another homeless child, but they took him in regardless.

After a couple of years here, he grew an understanding of what had happened. he was slain by a hollow and a Shinigami passer by had attacked it before it could attack Rolas spirit. This sent him to rukongai of which he ended up here. Soon, he grew suspicious of The Shinigami and had a go at the academy. After a good couple of years, he managed to pass, failing about five times before hand.

From there on, he lived in the sereitei as a Shinigami. Nothing more would allow him to get back to the living world. he knew that if he ever went back to meet his family again, they wouldn't even know of his presence. But ever since gaining his new power, he felt at ease. No more shall Hollow hunt human. That much he was sure of.

Rola decided to spend a lot of his time in Soul Society without leaving. it was here that he amde several new friends: One being a special little girl names Ayane Redwood. This girl needed somebody to look after her in her sisters tsead and Rola took it upon himself to do so. Welcoming her into his squad after he had become a captain, he gave her a place to stay and train.

It was with Rolas inspiration that Ayane found love and moved on with her life. Several years passed like this until Ayane's unfortunate death. During her time with her lover, Rola managed to train both of them to the point where even Ayane and the boy became potent captains. Her passing shook both Rola and Poliro's hearts as whom they considered a great friend had died. Rola took this upon himself to move on in life and make something of himself. Abandoning his position.Rola strove for greater heights. Living in a solemn town far away form Soul Societies eyes, Rola began to train.
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• Reiatsu Color: Orange

• Zanpakutô Spirit Name: Brethendil

• Zanpakutô Spirit Appearance:



Brethendil is a very small chick that sits on Rola's head half the time when summoned. There is little to actually say about Brethendil in this state except the fact that she is about big enough to be caught in your hands easily. oh, and her feathers are golden.

• Inner World: The inner World of Rola and Brethendil matches a large car manufacturing Factory in the middle of a wasteland. here, Rola tends to keep an eye on brethendil and modifies her body etc. This wasteland is a perfect place to drive because there is nobody here to get in the way. The factory itself is a great place to sit down and do some engineering as well.

• Sealed Zanpakutô Appearance : Rola's sealed Zanpakutō is a combat army knife found within his green jacket. One edge is serrated and the entire thing is jet black with a single red line down the cutting edge.

• Sealed Zanpakutô Abilities:

Intense focus: Rola has an insane amount of skill precision when it comes to stabbing and shooting. His sniping skills are absolutely outstanding even to a point where he causes his ricochet bullets to bounce off of objects miles away and come back.

• Release: Ride, Brethendil!

• Shikai Description:

Rola uses a pair of twin pistols with interesting features. by ramming the barrel of one into another, the guns form a rifle with sniping capabilities. The guns themselves have three magazine chambers that hold reitsu, and fire different amounts of bullets depending on which form the gun has taken.

• Shikai Abilities:

Rola's guns have very special characteristics. Each one is different and provides different buffs and nerfs to his attack. Because of the way the guns are made, they are capable of shifting modes to grant these additional abilities. To understand how this effectively works, you must crack open the gun. When the trigger is pulled, a spark fires off the bullet. Underneath the barrel are three containers, all stores with reitsu from Rola. When the spark is created, it darts into the containers one by one and spins around them in a single rotation before vanishing. This makes a sound like revving a car. Rola can force the sparks to only apply to a single container, causing three sparks to appear and circle simultaneously. He can then remove the container with the sparks inside, slam it back in and change the guns form due to the reitsu he put into it. Each form is hidden within each Container and not just one form can be found in each. Rola needs to remember which forms are where and how to burn them into the gun. Once the container has been put back in, the gun will glow momentarily before dispersing energy, revealing it's new appearance.

All of Rola's guns gain special benefits when he continues to fire them without stopping. After 3 seconds of no shooting, the consecutive extra on his abilities are lost until he can fire again. The guns to the right of the gun specified are what the weapons look like at maximum consecutive shots. At this point, every shot does maximum damage and applies maximum effects. The maximum damage dealt would be similar to average humans being shot even to characters close to Rolas level. On average, it would take 100 shots to reach maximum damage.

The Following are his gun types in order:

Rust: Used as a simple training weapon. The gun features no added bonuses nor any detriments.

Metal: The bullets fired from this gun are able to pierce metal. AT first they seem to do very little other than deal some damage. However, every bullet fired within 3 seconds of each other raises rate of penetration to a point where having armour is barely noticeable as long as he keeps firing his guns.

Neon: Each bullet fired form the guns are coated in an electrical current that shocks targets hit. They feel a nerve wrecking jolt that can mess with their muscles if concentrated on. At first the feeling is hardly noticeable until Rola fires consecutive shots. Each consecutive bullet within 3 seconds of another applies heavier shocking effects.

Snow: Each bullet creates a chilling effect when they hit their target. Each consecutive bullet is colder and colder until actual freezing is possible. It is not that noticeable at first until several shots are fired where limbs shot move slower and feel cold, blood becomes harder to get round the body and total freezing can occur.

Cannon: This gun can fire 3 bullets at once. Each bullet has fiery properties that detonate minute blasts when they hit their target like small firecrackers. Consecutive shots create bigger detonations up to grenade-like proportions that can blow off limbs.

Desert: Each bullet from this gun creates a slight blanket of dust. Consecutive shots create more and more until vision is difficult. At maximum potential, the gun fires smoke bomb rounds that fill the room with intense dust and gas to blind vision.

Future: Each bullet form this gun is actually a plasma infused lazer bolt that zooms off in a straight line and burns through what it hits. Consecutive shots increase firing rate to a point where a consistent stream of lazer can be fired to melt through things including people.

Neon Future: This guns bullets are small plasma pellets that bounce off surfaces. They do not deal effective damage until they start moving rapidly, but can be fired like a machine gun from the get go. Consecutive shots increase flight speed for the bullet.

Beast: This gun inflicts a decaying antibody into the target that eats away at flesh and cells. At first, the antibodies are generally weak and unnoticeable as the body begins to sting more than a usual bullet wound would. Consecutive shots create stronger antibodies that intensify the stinging sensation and hack away at cell structure. These last until the next shot is fired from Beast.

• Bankai Description:

Rolas Bankai is a relatively massive mechanical humanoid called Brethendil Ignition. The entire being of Brethendil in this form is made up of solid metals that match those of a Zanpakutō meaning this creature will break only as easily as a sword itself. it;'s feature match a humanoid with two legs, two arms and a head plus the torso and lower body. Around it's body however is a shell of bright red armour that makes up it;s frame. For a good idea of it's appearance, refer to the image above.

held in it's hand however is a mechanical stave. this machine acts like a pickaxe, halberd rifle. The weapon has two sides with pointed blades used to cut into enemies, surfaces and more. On the tip of the pole however is a barrel which can fire bullets that match Rola's gun bullets but about 4 times as many at once. This stave may also eject fire out of it;s tip, similar to a flame-thrower.

• Bankai Abilities:

Form Change: Brethendil is able to take on the modes that Rola activates. Whenever Rola changes his guns forms, Brethendils colours change to match it. This gives Brethendil the ability to shoot bullets that apply the same effects as Rolas pistols.

Ignition: Brethendil covers itself in a shield of fire that burns things that touch it. This shield of fire is literally a barrier veil that appears stuck to its body that glows red. On hit, instantly sets alight. Brethendil is unharmed by the fire.

MWU Benefits: Brethendil is pretty much a MWU or 'mechanised war unit'. This means it has been designed and trained to cope in dangerous situations, to react to minute details and to be able to come up with strategies and tactics faster than any human could similarly to a computer. However, Rolas bankai is not just highly intelligent, but also very strong. Its shell of armour can withstand intense heat to a point where melting it becomes a dream. This allows it to drive into lakes of lava and drive out completely unharmed. Rola performed this feat many times in his absence by racing eruptions from lakes of lava deep within the earth out of the volcano crater and down the side of the mountain.

However, it is not just heat the mech can withstand. The body of the machine is layered by super powerful metals and materials unseen by this worlds technology and generated by Rolas Zanpakutō spirit and reitsu pool. Brethendil can lift tanks and pull helicopters out of the sky. It can also catch missiles and throw them back. The bankai is renown for taking high powered explosives to the face and withstanding it as though it was a living shield. For example, a training method Rola used by firing a tank shell at Brethendil of whom had to stop it with its fist, absorbing the explosion.

Valkyrie Rockets: Brethendil hides two rokcet packs on its shoulders that open up and launch a barrage of up to 20 rockets that zoom towards targets with homing technology. On collision, the rockets will always explode, but they also splash effects of Rolas Bullet types. For example, Neon rockets cause a splash of plasma, Beast rockets splash dangerous antibodies and so on. These always apply 50% maximum potential. They can also be fired from the sides of the car in car mode.

Automated Reload: Whenever Rola reloads his pistols by switching ammo cartridges, Brethendil automatically restocks fuel, bullets, fire tanks and rockets out of reitsu.

Car Mode: Brethendil can attach it's stave to it's back, mould it's body to certain positions and turn into a car with it's own set of potential abilities:

Machine Gun: The front of Brethendil is capable of firing Gatling machine guns that apply Rola's bullet types on the enemy if it hits at a much faster rate of fire to double the general output. Reaching 100 shots takes half the time.

Afterburner: Brethendil has twin afterburners on it's back. By activating these, Bretehndil can drive at an amazing speed capable of breaking the land speed record with ease without crushing Rola inside. By spinning the car around like this, Brethendil can create a spinning wheel of fire out of itself that burns anything nearby. Rola has also figured out a stunt where he leaps out of the car with the afterburners on in mid transformation creating a more spherical hurricane of flame that crashed into humanoid form.

Hydrolics: Brethendil is loaded with insanely potent Hydrolics. This allows the car to abruptly barrel roll out of harms way, jump up edges and more.

Free Brakes: Brethendil has four brakes, one for each wheel which are controlled by four separate pedals. This allows Rola to drift and roll easily.

Grinders: On the back of Brethendil beneath the afterburners are several bladed chunks of metal. Brethendil can turn itself around and spin the back of the car to cut things it comes into contact with. They are no longer than knives, but can still hurt.

Ultima

Afterburner Climax: Brethendil energises her afterburners with more energy than thought possible for it to withstand. By spinning in a circle, Brethendil will begin to emit amazing amounts of fire that creates a hurricane of flames as wide as the circles become. This will continue to rage for as long as Brethendil keeps pulsing fire. The car can then bounce itself, twisting itself onto its side and spinning its wheels on the edge of the hurricane. This keeps its momentum and allows the flames to stay even without the afterburners activated. This then leads into the following technique:

Valkyrie Nebula: Brethendil leaps off the edge of the flaming hurricane, holding out its hands and absorbing the fire all around it. The flames burst all across its body creating a blazing ball of flame as a protective barrier against attacks. The amount of fire absorbed creates a forcefield powerful enough to withstand almost as much as the mechanoid itself that lasts for 3 posts. This grants access to the following technique:

Equinox Combination: Brethendil holds out its stave, conjuring the fire only onto this and off its body. This causes the stave to vanish, turning into a pure flame great axe with a pickaxe side and cutting side. Brethendil will then dash towards it's target, swinging the axe in a flurry of attacks that get faster and faster applying whichever bullet type rola has applied at 100% every single swing.

Brethendil Ultima After ten swings with Equinox Combination, Brethendil leaps backwards, holding the axe in front of herself and spinning it rapidly like a propeller. Then, all of the fire courses out of the stave and forwards, creating an Afterburner climax on its side that zooms towards its opponent and detonates on an absolutely cataclysmic scale, rendering the area around it scorched, destroyed and covered in lava for half a mile all around.


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• PhatomTech: None

• Phantom Tech Abilities: None

• Phantom Tech Powers: None

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General Skills

• Durability: Advanced
  
• General Speed: Advanced
  
• Strength: Advanced
  
• Weapon Skill: Master
  

Racial Skills

• Hoho: Master
  
• Kidō: Beginner
  
• Zanjutsu: Advanced
  
• Hakuda: Advanced
  

Will Skills

• Willpower/Determination: Advanced
  
• Mental Deduction: Master
  
• Pain Endurance: Advanced
  
• Focus: Master
  

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Most of the app looks good, except for a few things.

Beast: This gun inflicts a decaying antibody into the target that eats away at flesh and cells. Consecutive shots create stronger antibodies.

I think a little more description is necessary, since these are antibodies literally eating away at a person. How exactly do they eat away at cells? Does it work in a way where it could potentially spread through a person's body. The most important parts: Just how strong and effective are they and how strong can they get? How can someone fight or attempt to fight its effects?

It would also be nice for a bit more of a description on the other bullets' effects from the other forms. The special effects all start weak, at least from how I'm reading this, but steadily become stronger as he continues to fire. Mostly just a general idea on how much an ability becomes stronger with each shot. About (don't need to be too exact, just an estimate) how many shots must be fired before Metal almost completely ignores armor? How much do the detonations on the cannon shot grow with each shot, and is there a limit to their size? Just add those kinda things to the bullets so I have more of an idea of their capabilities.

Once those descriptions are fixed up, it'll be approvable in my book.

Since this is just taking up unchecked space, moving to WIP

archiving

• Name [X]
  
• Appropriate Age [X]
  
• Gender [X]
  
• Appearance Present [X]
  
• Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  
• Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  
• 10 sentences for personality [X]
  
• History is of appropriate length [X]
  
• Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  
• Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  
• Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  
• Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  
• RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  
• RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]
  

• Willpower/Determination:Advanced
  
• Mental Deduction:Master
  
• Pain Endurance:Advanced.
  
• Focus: Master.
  

Comments/Notes:Good App. I hope to see this guy Around.
Tier:0-5+