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Re: Chirijiraden-The God Blade
Thu May 10, 2012 10:08 am
YOU SHALL NOT PASS....WITHOUT SOME EDITING.
I don't mean to be a debby downer or anything, but this needs some editing if you wish for i to be approved. I love the detail and everything else but i feel that there are some parts that need to be 1. Further detailed or 2. Removed. So i'm gonna do em' in the form of numbers.
1. The sheer cutting power of this weapon is ridiculous to the point of being able to cut through close to any physical object imaginable; there are few minerals/materials tough enough to withstand a direct hit from this weapons blade.
Need more detail on what it can cut through besides just a few minerals/materials.
2. Objects hit by this sword cannot be recreated.
This needs to be further detailed imo. As a full out existence wipe shouldn't be allowable IMHO as there are ways to bring back things through certain means. There is also the fact that i'm not too trusting of a sword of this power in a guy who has a high tier's hands. If it were given to a lower-tiered character, say, a 4 or 5 tier, i'd see this being a plausible weapon to use.
3. . If the entire person's body is set aflame, they die, permanently. As in, they are no longer in the spiritual cycle; no matter what, it is impossible to bring the user back to life. This usually takes about 7 of the user's own post's to take effect, and cannot be slowed down by willpower or any ability-negating effects. It could be said it's called the "God Blade" because in legend it can cut even gods, or because not even gods can bring the user back to life. Either way, it's a funky sword, isn't it?
While i would normally consider this to be fine, and while it is your own character, i can't allow this on the grounds that there are way too many ways for characters to be brought back to life. So I need a better drawback or for you to say that it does something else along the lines of disabling them in a battle.
So yeah, what i really want is more detail. Mostly in what the sword can cut through and examples of who's regeneration it'd work against.
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Re: Chirijiraden-The God Blade
Tue Sep 18, 2012 10:44 pm
Moving this to innactive customs!
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Re: Chirijiraden-The God Blade
Sun Feb 10, 2013 7:45 pm
Alright... Putting a LOT of trust in you that you use this properly, but seeing as how I believe you can handle it and have adjusted it properly, Enjoy.
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Re: Chirijiraden-The God Blade
Thu Oct 03, 2013 11:01 pm
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