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Thu May 17, 2012 1:35 am
Edge wrote:Custom Iramasha Gem
  • Name: Celestial Gift
  • Type: Stat Boost
  • User Type: Ancient Angel(Van)
  • Info: Gifted to Vandesdelca directly from the Soul King
  • Effects: This Iramasha gem is extremely powerful, probably one of, if not THE strongest gem in Vandesdelca's possession. When activated, this gem increases every single one of Vandesdelca's skills up one level; so Adept is increased to Advanced, and Advanced is increased to Master. Master skills arent increased to Grandmaster, though that certain skill still gains a good boost (same for Grandmaster skills), for 3 of his own posts. As stated before, this gem is easily one of Van's strongest gems, however, like all strong things, it has its own drawbacks.
  • Drawbacks: Due to the intensity of the boost granted by this gem, it puts considerable strain on Van's body, to the point of even being able to tear his muscles apart. However, due to his increased willpower and pain resistance, he ignores the pain while it is activated. Thing is, the moment it deactivates, is the moment he truly feels his muslces be, essentially, ripped apart. This makes it extremely difficult for Van to perform even basic actions like walking. Also, when the effects are over, he loses a great supply of energy, pushing him to near-exhaustion levels.
  • Notes: This is a last-ditch gem, only used when he is getting beaten badly or if he is near-death.

This is good. Approved.

Edge wrote:Custom Iramasha Gem
  • Name: Energy Absorption Gem
  • Type: Energy Absorption
  • User Type: Ancient Angel(Van)
  • Info: This Gem was personally created by Vandesdelca himself
  • Effects: Basically, this gem, clearly, absorb energy. However, it may not be so simple. It absorbs wasted energy. Energy released by Vandesdelca when changing forms or simply when releasing his spiritual energy/pressure is stored in this gem to be used for later. Say he releases 95% of his power, but 3% of his power is sent into the surroundings, etc. Instead of not doing anything, it is instead sent directly into this gem, which can help fuel Van later on in fights when he is low on energy, or he can use it to fuel anything from his most basic attacks, to his more powerful attacks, and can also be used to make his spells more powerful as a whole.
  • Drawbacks: If destroyed, this gem releases all energy inside of it in a large explosion, with its size and power depending on the amount of power inside the gem at the time of destruction.
  • Notes: N/A

That doesn't look like a drawback, more like an advantage. Please put an actual drawback.

Edge wrote:Custom Iramasha Gem
  • Name: Sensory Gem
  • Type: Sensor Type
  • User Type: Any (Van for now)
  • Info: Created by Vandesdelca Iramasha
  • Effects: This gem's effects are rather simple. It detects invisible, or just not visible to Van, life forms, attacks, etc, etc, and "tells" Van exactly where they are. This can work for pretty much anything, and really helps when fighting opponents that love camouflage, hiding, or blending in, as they can be detected. Abilities that involve merging one's self with an element are safe; this gem cannot detect them due to them really not having a body at all.
  • Drawbacks: N/A
  • Notes: N/A

No. Not without drawbacks or some sort of activation. Fix that.

Edge wrote:Custom Iramasha Gem
  • Name: Illusion Breaker
  • Type: Sensory
  • User Type: Any (Van for now)
  • Info: Created by Vandesdelca Iramasha
  • Effects: This gem, as alluded to by its name, "breaks" illusions. Illusion-type spells/abilities/effects used on Van/his direct surroundings are broken, cancelling their effects, and returning whatever was affected to its original state. Illusion-type abilities in this effect include those that "affect" reality by making something "look" like something else, while in reality things arent different. This also includes illusions that would alter Vandesdelca's mindset, or make him perceive something as something else.
  • Drawbacks: Illusions affecting other people aren't negated by this gem's effects.
  • Notes: N/A

Again, no. No draw backs, activation times : nothing. Fix that.
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Mon Jun 04, 2012 1:00 pm
Mmmkay. I'm satisfied with this =w= Approved, and don't abuse it ~
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