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Sun Nov 27, 2011 6:26 pm
(Sorry I didnt use the format for it but there were so many it was hard for me to use it)

Spirit Storm Kido: Most of them are offensive unless specified. They are very powerful and only highly trained people can learn them. Viz created these because of his high level of reiatsu and since these kido consume so much reiatsu they were good way of getting rid of it, and many times they can be uncontrolable.

Spirit Storm #1: Blazing Inferno
Effect: Giant pillars of white and red fire erupt from the ground (or air) around the target. Each Pillar is about 15 feet in diameter and 50 feet in height.
Incantation: " Oh mighty gods of flame let your anger surge and and reach a fever pitch of doom, Blazing Inferno!"

Spirit Storm #2: Watery Grave
Effect: A torrent of water falls from the sky and the initial water does nothing but after a while the water turns into sharp spikes. Impailing whatever its touching.
Incantation: " Oh raging waters take back what is rightfully yours in an embrace of pain and suffering, Watery Grave!"

Spirit Storm #3: Withering Gale
Effect: A Storm of cutting air is thrown at the target. It weakens the physical strength of the object hit by it. The user points at the target and a twister extends from the users hand toward the target. It works in a way similar to Hado 58, Tenran but is is much more powerful.
Incantation: "Oh Crazed winds rip the world to shreds in your maddening turmoil, Withering Gale"

Spirit Storm #4: Searing Radiance
Effect: A big orb of pure light is shot at the target. The sheer radience of the light can blind those not strong enough. It has a very slight homing effect but controling it is very time and energy consuming since it moves very fast. It is the most powerful Spirit Storm and drains alot of the users energy. The size depends on how much reiatsu is used but caps out at 30 feet.
Incantation: " Oh shining heavens let your judgement be seen by those that seek your punishment, Searing Radiance!"

Spirit Storm #5: Dark Chasm
Effect: Small black orbs are shot out and follow the target. When they hit a body part they leave a dark spot that starts causing extreme pain to the target. As time passes the pain gets progressively worse until it is unbearable and eventually their body part can no longer function. It is temporary as it takes reiatsu to maintain the decaying process.
Incantation: "Those souls that have died in vain will dump all of their suffering on you, prepare yourself for upper Damnation, Dark Chasm!"
To call the effect off the caster says: "Their suffering has ended and so has yours."

Spirit Rush: These are less powerful kido, Each element has 3 different rushes; offensive, defensive and healing.

Spirit Rush: Fire
#1 Crimson Flame: A small blast of fire hits the target
#2 Fairy Fire: A protective flame Lessens the effect of fire attacks and burns things on contact.
#3 White Flame: Warm fire heals small wounds.

Spirit Rush: Water
#4 Aqua Crush: Globs of high pressured water attach to the target and apply pressure to it crushing somethings.
#5 Bubble Barrier: A bubble of water surrounds the caster, it absorbs hits and when it pops it can cause some of the damage to be inflected to things around the bubble.
#6 Wonder Water: Healing Water surrounds the target. It has a very weak healing effect but is great at removing impurities from anything that isnt destroyed by water.

Spirit Rush: Wind
#7 Air Trap: A Whirlwind surrounds the target causing it to be trapped inside. The bigger the target the longer the caster has to concentrate to make it. ( The whirlwind caps at 100 feet per tier after 4 [ meaning 4,3,2,1,0] it takes 1/4 of a post to concentrate 25 feet. If use instantly it creates a 10 foot whirlwind.)
#8 Wing Safe: Semi-transparent wings form around the user, protecting from physical attacks.
#9 Healing Wind: A calm colored wind blows through the area healing everyone in the area, no specific target. It heals everything in the area even enemies. 15 foot radius column (30 feet wide, 30 feet tall)

Spirit Rush: Light
#10 Light Flare: A burst of light is thrown at the target and it explodes on contact. Even though it looks like light but it is actually a ball of concentrated reiatsu.
# 11 Radiant Shield: A yellow shield surrounds the area around the target protecting from non-physical attacks. The Size can vary but it does not exceed 30 foot sphere.
#12 Healing Burst: A Burst of light heals and purifies things in a 15 foot radius ( 30 foot sphere). It heals everything in that area even enemies.

Spirit Rush: Darkness
#13 Demons Lance: A sharp lance of solidified darkness is thrown at the target.
#14 Anti- Matter: A very thin black plane forms infront of the caster that explode on contact, not damaging the caster.
#15 Miasma: A dark cloud surrounds the caster. The dark cloud contains poison that could paralyze, damage, or blind those caught in it except for the user. It is temporary. For every post they are inside they are inside the cloud they poison effects last for that same amount of time.


Last edited by Viz on Wed Nov 30, 2011 6:45 pm; edited 3 times in total
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Tue Nov 29, 2011 8:58 am
From how you've written this all, it doesnt hold enough information for me to vision it properly. Refer to the following issues.


Spirit Storm #1: Blazing Inferno

Needs some more description of the pillars themselves.

Spirit Storm #3: Withering Gale

What do you mean by storm?

Spirit Storm #4: Searing Radiance

Because of its power, just how big is this?

Spirit Storm #5: Dark Chasm

Temporary?

#7 Air Trap

How Big? Huge monsters would require a gargantuan amount of wind.

#9 Healing Wind:

This will heal enemies too from your description.

#10 Light Flare:

How does one throw a burst of light? it would sizzle in your hand then fade. Explain this better.

# 11 Radiant Shield:

How Big? Could the enemy stand in it too?

#12 Healing Burst:

Same as #9, this will heal enemies

#15 Miasma:

Temporary? Radius?






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Wed Nov 30, 2011 5:04 pm
Just a few things to look at.


Spirit Storm #4: Searing Radiance


The cap on this seems way too big for what it does.

Spirit Storm #3: Withering Gale

Whats a storm of cutting air? I don't see how I could throw one. Is it like a point and shoot wind blast?
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Wed Nov 30, 2011 6:49 pm
Everything seems to be in order. Approved, unless anyone catches something I missed.


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