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Naru naru
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General Information
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Name: Naru Naru .
Appearance Age: Mid Teens .
True Age: 2100
Gender: Male
Powers : Earth and flame.
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Overall Apperance
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Appearance:
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Personality:
Naru Naru, is kind to most, which is part of his out going nature. This is from the close bond he shares with his hollow and his , zampukto So naru naru. will be extremely freindly, to others untill they are proven unworthy of that, kindness. If you cross him he will forgive you twice, but after that dont continue or he will, take offense at you
This is since naru naru has a strong sense of right and rong probably which was taught to him, by his zampukto, and his hollow. Though usually being quiet around those he does not know. Because, he feels akward talking around people he does not know.
Naru Naru hates smoking since, the smell is repungant and greatly, bothers him to the max .So if you smoke around him, Naru naru may get up and try to be nice by walking else where . But in some cases naru naru will just walk over, pickthe cigarrette from your hand then toss it to the floor, and put it out . Also, he has a strong sense of right and rong, and is very loyal to those who he finds nice ,kind and freindly towards him.
because of the experiences he has went through he treasures what he is given , and will protect it at all costs.
Being slightly klepto matic, he loves shiney things though. He will not steal from other people occasionally ,something will go missing from a shop, with the money for it left with no explanation how it got there on the counter. Since Naru Naru will pay for anythign he takes to be fair to the people who that would affect since he does not want to hurt anyones feelings.
Nerd , His personality is also nerdy. since in the spare time he had when he was not training nor , fighting with his zampukto and hollow he would read as much as he could .Being as he is a avid reader, loving to see new things from books, and let them take Naru Naru to distant lands.
Adhd Naru naru ,has a hyper active disorder which causes him to be self aware picking up every little crystal clear detail of anothers movements. This allowing him to in a fight, clearly see whats around him quickly and effectivly. Though he does not act hyper active, in truth he is . This shows sometimes because he will figit every now and then when he is sitting down .
Bi Polar , Naru Naru is aswell bi Polar from issues which plague him from the war long ago, though Infact Naru Naru has gotten better and better , at keeping it in ,and now, usually he will not be found upset .Or sad in any manner, if he is and you dont know him, dont come up and be rude since when hes sad hes highly irritable. Because of his mood swings, some times he may be happy, Then suddenly sad or mad, for no real reason just bare with him in these times and it will surely work its way out.
Depression. Is another thing naru naru has .Because of the war long ago, which caused him for awhile to be in a state of depression. Naru Naru though then found his Hollow and Zampukto, though sometimes he is still depressed. But over all this is not usually something that comes up , day to day. Being as it rarely comes up even once a year at the least. So this is not something that really matters.
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Zanpukto
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Zanpakutō Name: Akuma tsuki (known as diablo in the inner world)
Akuma tsuki means devils moon.
Zanpakutō Spirit Appearance: The form of it has red skin, the imperial looking , Form having a long and airy apearance, Always being seen with , the hollow that also lives within me.As they coexist in perfect harmony, the wreath on his head being made from almost blood, aswell as the eyes being volcano red. Though it is seen carriing two swords, now ever since i got a hollow .One for my bankai, one for my ressurection. Now, its form is slim and nice looking, a black cloak flapping out from it, having bone like spikes coming out of the hand that now held my ressurection, The other being dusted with the blackened chains, which covered it showing , the blade of my bankai .
His jaw being angled sharp, being a strong jaw, and his neck being covered by a armored plating almost like a guard ..His left eye being covered in a eye patch mutch like kenpach. His teeth being pure white though having a jagged conture to them .
Aswell he has a affinity, for earth ,Though the blades are different in there unreleased forms. aswell because of the bond he shares with dragon fang and naru naru, he has a ability, called Earth spawn allowing for his earth afinity to be seen through his zampucto.
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Zanpakutō Spirit Personality:
He is much like the inner hollow that Naru Naru has , known as Dragon fang, in personality, because basically they share a brain in the sense of, personality , and morals.
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Inner World:
Ashes cover the land, as a barren exspance of hueco mundo sands seems to be lined with ,The gotai ten ruins that seemingly where there for ages. A light moon and dust always coming from the south east. This also being a place that is in the middle of no where. The white buildings and sands seemingly completmenting each other. At the end is a massive crator, where a throne of illustrious black and white colors sit .On this throne sits Diablo whome seemingly sits there always, His eyes looking alot like the moon in the sky, though being tinted red, as if the moon was dyed in blood of those that where killed.
The crater is cracked and jagged, being a place where Ryū kiba, or the hollow that is within me , Made, from exploading the bed rock with his gaping mouth, slowly hollowing out the crater for which he would sleep. Diablo only allowed this because he needed a place to make his throne which he would sit on .Also enjoying his new companion deciding he should, Make a way to satisphy both of the needs that he had at the moment.
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Sealed Zanpakutō Appearance: The twin blades Are elegant one being hard, though a earthy, presence is about , it allowing ground sometimes to shift around him , this being due to diablo's earth affinity, causing the blade to hum like, so since, naru naru, is bonded to them to the point there powers can be easily seen through his unreleased blades. the earthy one, being Called Akuma Tsuki after his zampukto or devils moon . which seemingly though is light, as a feather, emmense reitsu coming off its core. His harmony though within this bond also caused the origional blade to alter since there reitsu has basically bound together as one. So they all use the reitsu they have in a shared manner.
The second one is abit different though Because of his vizardization he got, a second blade called ryu kiba, Causes for a clear dragonic like flame to form around it, The flames tanglign up the arm that grasps that sword .Aswell the flame is occured from the reitsu skill of Ryu Kiba, which uses the constant friction in the reitsu particles in the air to basically create the flame . the reitsu from it being equally as emmense as Akuma tsuki, though not of earth affinity but of flame. This blade though having a white solid blade within the center of the flames equally hard as his other blade
In continuation, the blades themselves have a keen form of energy within the manifested elements. This simply put is able to cause the form or subjection of the powers to increase and change due to the manner of his abilities. but to add on the flames can be in tempest mode or Subjective defense mode. the modes are different depening on there power output. Due to the face it is used for different purposes over all. Depending on what is actually needed.
Incandescence: By Changing the rate of vibrations it can cause the blade to narrow and warp, simply put it will be able to vibrate fast enough to literally cause the blade to slip through molicules which make up a hierro or other armor. By doing this it then causes a increased state of energy within it. Once bypassing a hierro or armor, it will function to slow down the vibrations, this is why the blade can cause damage internally even when the strike was external. The blade once incandescence is in play, will seem to become see through, even though it retains the normal flaming demeanor which is found to be around it.
Also because of this particular trait, the blade itself can also subtly change or extend up to a certain length in distance in a instantaneous action. But because of the fact its tricky to mess with the amount of added mass or energy from a object which is passing through the change in state. It can only extend and contract up to 3 times a post. While the blade also can be used with something known as Cadescence but this is only used in shikai or above . Which is the opposite of this entirely. Also because of this though the blade can be many things but at the same time. Is only one particular thing. Also Incandescence has another simple purpose when it comes to reishi or spiritually powered attacks:
The blade can not only bypass hierro but simply put in the manner of how it works, the vibrations serve another purpose with the zampucto. The high vibration speed allows for the disruption and dispersion of executed attacks, Because of this, the blade can be able to slice through cero’s and or Kidō skills and so fourth. But this is because of how incandescence works. And now of how it can be executed. Though this can only be used when in sealed form due to how it generally works. Incandescence only activates when facing hierro or armored objects.
Bone crushing Spiritual pressure: Due to incadescence being released the Pure reistu signature on naru naru is just that, truely and positivly enormous. Being able to crush the ground inwards when fully released. It is something almost like being ash and smoke in a single area. Its truely enourmously potent as it it dangerous.
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Release Phrase: May i show the bond we share. Akuma Tsuki.
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Shikai Information
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Shikai Appearance: A seemingly normal, form, other then, now, a slight sheene covers naru naru. His blade splitting into two, chains now, seemingly spiraling up his arms. The black like chains being made of a hardened substance, exactly, like the sheild of the soul society is made of. This seemingly cibrates, almost fuzed with his skin. His form now, seemingly luminous, the pale skin showing lightly. His hair aswell legnthening some to cover his eyes.
now, a black tattered cloak forms around him, as now That seemed to billow out lightly, in a whitened form. Though the air around this form, constantly, vibrates with repulsive particles, . The black cloak seemingly made of dragonic like scales, as they also harden on the skin, which seems to be more reptilian like, now, as it hardens to form, the pale skin like illusion that most see . His eyes now having a light mercury form to them. As gold dusts the inside of his iris . making it more illustrious and amazing then before . Aswell, he becomes more hollow like, though aswell in a sense, this is a more true form of himself .Being as he is a wonderfull form which has been a long time, slowly made. through a harmony between the two forms of his hollow and shimigami .
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Shikai Abilities: Breeze step : This power, allows for the base of his speed to be boosted even more, as now, he can cause after images with his movements, which sometimes cause cause huge gusts of wind to form around him. This is from the slight power boost of the reistu that is being used in the arms and feet. This power having a forcefull effect which can cause denting in the ground and area around it, because now, the limbs also thanks to the reistu are un restrained this is one of the main reasons in the huge boost in speed.
Aswell this caused the added affect in the bankai, to triple his speed still, as his hollow and his inner zampucto fuse for the, final form. but now, this causes the slight change in his reistu to make it much more hollow like in nature, then it was shimigami like .Now, aswell the breeze step can cause the air, to chagne becoming deceivingly, strong depending on how fast he moves. This ability, is a natural foot work ability. Because he cannot use Hadō or Kidō. This aswell causes the energy burst, to send a kind of force aroudn the move in question .The swings force adding the brute stregnth to it, that carries it down the feild with devistating affects, . Aswell this allows for a special counter affect in combat, allowing for something called, Heavy Grace
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Inferno incinerate : This is a move that is also, a natural affect from the dragonic nature of the hollow inside him .Using the heat from the hollows reitsu caused by conflicting vibrations in the reitsu, thus this highly condensed reitsu will trail around him, in a firey, Cloak, covering his blades and the chains on his blade .Aswell as causing a flaming tail to form on the back . This flame due to breeze step, can sometimes shell off and expload with highly condensed reitsu, when it does .Being somewhat like a bara. This can also be slung from his slashes Bringing us to the next combat oriented skill.
But aswell the incineration , can cause a licking tounge like, affect around him, when the wind hits it just right .This sometimes can account for any water around his general area, Begginning to Heat up, and boil . From the immense heat that the skill itself generates. Making steam rise around him in some manners. But in other times .It can be used to melt ice , and sometimes, is a reason for fires starting around him, if he is in a medow. But aswell the reitsu from it, can cause a heavyness in the air, the ash and suit which form from the fires form, sometimes collecting on those he is fighting. Which can in extreme cases cover them in a mound of the crap .
This move is weakened unless in ressurection/ bankai form to allow for it to be useable.
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After affects of inferno incinerate:
The reitsu can leave a unusual growth stunt in the area
for afew days at most, because of the trace, but nothing that wont clear up after that the land only being mildly scorched, unless it is ussed in ressurection, even then not being that bad.
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Flare dance: Flame dance uses the flames that are made from incineration, causing the natural flames, to be dispersed by spiraling high velocity slashes .This sometimes being able to flare up into a wave around Him, Depending on how hard Naru Naru slashes, this flame can ignite on others, using a Effect they have which burns the skin of the opponent known as Flare Ignition, This can engross the enemy in billowing flames, which can clump together to creat a flaming storm .Using reitsu it can amplify into a full out hellish situation
The flames aslo in flare dance seemingly with each slash will bud out to form long, flaming tendrils , this being the form for shikai, Besides his speed this is the other thing that Naru Naru has in this form .
Aswell using the after reitsu, this can engross itself for several turns in a flaring mass of flame, The opponent being givin a burn status for those turns in which, the flames will slowly cause sores and openings in there skin, from the high temprature the flames can be used at. This being much more effective then any cero.
But the flames cause a sizzling effect in the air aroudn them . The brightness of them on impact. though from the sudden white hot flash bang like, release of the reitsu on impact, being able to temperarorly stun or blind others who are near for a moment. Though not severly, enough to cause perminant damage.
This , aswell is like a natural part of Naru Naru in his shikai, his hollows dragonic nature being part of the shikais form allowing for fire to well up from the friction between the reitsu of his body . Constantly making a supply of flames for him to use. But these flames can also cause singing on his hairs and leaving him smelling oddly of , smoke and decay. Flare dance though has some different moves within it, as it consists of A set of combat moves , known as the seven sins. Which are the seven moves this allows for Naru Naru to use. This is weakened in the shikai form, so its not full power, as are all the moves to allow for him to be able to use them. Full power only comes out in ressurection/ bankai form .
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Seven sins move one Flaming tsunami:this is the first of the slashes .Using a high amount of the flame around him, to create by, condensing it at the tip of his left blade, a dangerous, pillaring explosion from the release of the flame, this then widens out, slowly forming ,a massive Wave of flame this being , able to surround him and blast out, him being the epicenter. Allowing for A decent moving , flow around
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Bankai Information
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Bankai Appearance: Naru naru pretty much looks like he does when he is in his shika. But in this form. Now, he gets, a fur like, cloak around his other, this one having a skull pendant to it. Signifying the bankais, form this allows it to flap in the wind, his head, now getting pitch black horns which form from the top of naru naru's head. his eyes now, look a silverish color. His, blade now, staying the same, but now fusing to his hands, making it so that, he cannot move them. The blades style being the same, but now the blade itself, has two chains dangling from the hilts. Aswell now ,a hot like layer encases his form, like a furnace, Though this being only seen either when he walks into ice, or from the heat waves that show around him .This being from the constant friction of his reitsu which can cause flames, to form when they are needed.
But aswell the air around this form is always seemingly to spiral some from the cold air constantly hitting the hot air , of his skin .Allowing for a wind to always be present around him.
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Bankai Abilities: Phantom, swords technique, which allows for his speed to triple to the point his foirm can move causing a flash bang behind him. In a simple thrust of his foot. This being from the fact, his reitsu is sacrificed to this making it have a amazing thrust, and speed power which is very hard to keep up with. Because once he hits his fastest , he can momentairly vanish from site, flickering out like a phantom, Making it insainly hard for someone to hit him. In adition, each of his strikes, from the swords, disperse shredding gamma waves, from the tips making a repulsive force, this slowly can contaminate. The skin surrounding the cell wall of the form. Aswell as make slowly, a uselessness or, shredding of cells, allowing for the opponent. To be slowly shredded on the cellular level. Though The draw back is he can only, use cero's and none of the shimmigami's Hadō or bakudo. Since . This form changes his reitsu, even after the first use making it impossible for him to use those moves. this accomplishes the feat of having devistative damage with rapid attacks .Using this in quick sucsession, causing him to be able, To slash multiple enemys within a second ,through his light stepping technique.
The gamma rays are made of the hollow like reistu ,that becomes more apparent in his Bankai form since now, aswell, this ability, causes a reist like weight to drag down, but , Aswell the reistu with this, is what causes the sped up affect, of this move .Aswell as the added affects of breeze step since each of these speed moves. Transpheres onto the higher state. The flash bangs this causes making it more devistating then the breeze step. But aswell much much faster. And besides this , this movement , causes a longer trail of flames to leave behind him, from the heat that is left over from the anitionall Flames themselves. Aswell now, he has a hardened shell, from the burnt, suit that has encased his skin, causing the Form of it, to be blackened in some area's. Aswell his teeth seem to be more jagged because of phantom step .
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Phantom blade: Alowwing for his blades when covered in the extreme flame round him, to heat the matter of solid walls and striking area's to a gasious compound causing it to be easily, slipped through marring or damaging internal organs which are soft ,and of a different hardness, aswell as if you are hit enough, it can cook you, from the inside out. Causing your organs to become a heated hard mess of crap .Due to the basic make up of the reitsu that is used in this technique , it Can only though be used against those who use heirro since the fleshy skin of non hierro types, will not become gasious because of the softer make up of the matter density. within the skin. This is why it can only be used, against hierro types, aswell as because of this it unless used agenst hierro types, cannot harm others but can cut through walls and other hard solid objects.
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Inner Hollow & Mask
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Name:Ryū kiba (Dragons fang )
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Inner Hollow Description: My inner hollow, is made to look slightly, in my shape. The claws on its hands being huge .The back of it peircing the sky, weighing in at 200,000 pounds this monster is as tall as the empire state building, but all this reitsu is drained into my system, from the phantom sword technique. Tahe head of this hollow has rows of fangs, and no eyes. Huge dragon like wings, wrapping out of the area around him. Causing for a hellish wind to pass through the inner world being destroyed every time rebuilding itself. Chains of servitude cover the hollows wings, clanking in the wind its roaring causes .These reminding it of how it was caught by shimigami then bound to me. His wings seem to be made of flame, and ash, which constantly covers the area, . The shene of the hard skin having red markings running down it, almost like tribal marks. These being a big part of this hollows identity, More or less the horns aswell, are massive having barbed poisionous like ends to them making it dangerous to be speared by them . The Hollow, is a dragonic like hollow aswell no loving characters in his eyes.
Though aswell, a dense flame seemingly , Forms around him allowing for naru naru's flame attribute, Because of the make up of the flames, they can be made from the friction of reitsu in the air, making it easy to mass produce over a broad spectrum this can be seen as a fog around dragon fang.
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Inner Hollow Personality: My inner hollows personality, is the exact same as the inner shimigami, Its seemingly rigid, and does'nt speak much haing a quiet and caring personality.. Though also being devilish in nature, it can get up to no good in extreme cases .Loving fighting, for the training it brings, they both urge for me to fight harder aswell as longer then most should .Aswell he has a strong sense of right and rong not wanting anything to happen .
Wanting to know more is also a thing he loves to do .Since exploring is a urge that is in his blood. More or less aswell, he feels restless, but loves company, and more then anything else. A way to know others better and make freinds. More or less being docile unless done great injustices too. Then he will go beserk, thrashing through the hill side, untill nothing is left but destruction and mayhem. Aswell he has a soft spot for sweets and the one who he lives within. Since over the many years . they have gotten to know each other. since the only way he could actually, live untill now, was to get to know naru naru. since if he did not, he would surely be dead by now.
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Inner Hollow Powers: Inner hollow has no powers, but his hard skin, which is the only thing it has being a huge help to this form, Causing it to seemingly just have a impenitrable, hide, being the hide itself makes up for almost half the hollows weight, causing for its skin to be extremely rigid. From the massive reitsu it has, making it more denser because it needs a shell hard enough to keep his reitsu from leaking out all the time and destroying everythign around it. but aswell, The molten lava that comes around him, has something known as, Soul fire. Which is a ghostly like fire, that slips through physcal objects, slowly, burning them from the inside out.
He also from the bond he shares with Akuma Tsuki and naru naru, has a ability called, Emperors Flame Spawn, allowing the flames of his dragonic nature to be seen from naru naru's ressurection blade.
He also has a uncanny nack for bara's and cero's
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Hollow Mask Appearance:
It looks like a strange, anbu mask, which allows, for some hardened scaly mass to form on the mask. Aswell as the white form, of the mask seemingly comes out, to hav
e black elongated stripes on the sides.
Aswell the mask goes back to go down his spine, spiked spines stickign from the bone. To add onto it, purple glowing eyes can be seen through the opening of the eyeholes on the mask. the rest covering the lower part of his neck. Giving off a white luminous radiance.
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Vizard Powers
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Vizard Powers:
Natural powers : Flame emperor.
Flame emperor is a huge base manipulation, since his form uses a dangerous flame type, release. Which is from the nature of his dragonic hollow, dragon fang. this fire is known as dragon fire. this having a serious power like, cloth that moves around him, From intense heat emitted by his reitsu that is not being used. This can be used like a sheild. Because of the lack of Kidō he has , Is put into his speed and this. Known as flame emperor, or Devils shroud, it allows for a decent protection since this can trail out around him in a cloak of sorts. and offense in different circumstances. Depending on what it is. it is enough to burn others or, cause Decent explosions around him, aswell, whipping out around him, if it needs to, from how much it is Or how much it will be, It depends on how much of the flame he lets out. aswell this flame can grow , depending on how much friction is between naru naru's reitsu, causing for , a blinding flash sometimes, this causes the flames to rush out in all directions.
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Earth Emperor: This allows for the changing in the land scape around him depending on how much reitsu naru naru puts out. It can change depending on what he needs to happen .And a sudden reitsu burst will occur, when the land changes from the ethernal, Thread laced reitsu within the ground responds to his .Reitsu, them being on the same frequency, Allowing for the increase of land tilt and other things. But the draw back is this can use alot of his reitsu so he uses it sparingly.
Aswell this allows, for earth based techniques causing devistating affects.
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Resurrección
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Resurrección Appearance: They look like there bankai state ,But the eyes now, are covered up by a mask, his legs now, covered in a white, bone structure, a hole forming on his chest. Doubled over. Showing the lightness of his scaled skin .Aswell as two pairs of bat wings rip from his back .A dragonic like tail whipping side to side. This form having a luminous reishi like vibrations around it, the energy, now going through the roof, but his hair aswell turns a mid night black.. His hands fused still with zan pucto, but now strange like glass almost forms grip the shoes on this form .Creating a suction like mass .This making it so that ,a nice and soft surface alowwing for maximum speed is used.
While this is part of it the blades, are made from a hard type of mineral, which is constantly charged with reitsu causing for a kind of pressure on the blade, which Will throw others back off balance which can aloww for the maximum pressure.
Aswell a flaming cloak goes over him, being insainly, hot as besides this, a flaming fail, forms over him, as now, his body is covered in a unending flame .This flame coming deep within, this power, causing it to rise up, more and more ,as it welds out, this is caused by the flames that are constantly generated within him. At a demonic rate.
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Resurrección Abilities:
Phantoms ghost:Now, his phantom technique is still in play, but it gets doubled by the , Phatoms ghost. Which now allows from the glass like substance on the feet to be boosted even further, by adding a repulsive reistu like wave, on the bottom of the feet . This contrasts and adds a fricrtionless space for it to run .Aswell now using breeze step it can cause, sonic booms behind it , of deafening sound, or make the ground around him give out in different manners on the weakest points. This also ,allows for a passive , which causes his blade, to repluse almost agenst any one that is fighting him or is near him. But aswell the flames that lick aroudn him turn blue , activaing a colbat like fire which is high density , aswell causing winds to rip at high speeds from the updraft it can cause .
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Flame emperors sun bala:This causes for the flames around him, to be able to contort into a mass which can be used .By the formation of bala styled reitsu into them . So that he can fire off huge sun like flaming bala's , This can only be used, In the higher forms. f him .Since he cannot use this in his normal form . Aswell this is an attribute of his flame .Using its heat it generates a repulsive pillar when they hit. These being only stronger then most bala variants. And can only be used in his shikai forms and above. But this aswell, causes a reaction with the grass And land scape around it known as Landscape Scorch , this can cause sand around the craters of the bala to actually, Turn to hardened volcanic shale or even slick obsidion, and in some cases crystal clear glass, which is utterly Impossible for most to step on. Though this aswell, can leave residue on the spot, that is severly hot, for afew turns known as Vapor trace. This causes the remininants to super heat the area around where it hit for afew turns at most.
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Earthen Gullotine: This one Is different then the others only being able to be used in his ressurected form .This forms a tremor through the ground causing it to uproot around the feild, with one swing, Reitsu that hammers into the ground then after the vibrations of its basic matter Reveberates through the ground in a series of after shocks. Each one getting strong then the other, before the whole land scape will erupt into a naucious mess of spiked debri, and sometimes spikes made of earth .
Aswell the spikes, can move up decently, big . The ground after this will become a turmoily mass , or spieks and chunks of gravel, causing the ground to seem like it is moving in waves, Before it either will cave in , or If he stabs his blade into the ground one more time, a razor sharp gullotine will screech from the earth made of flaming reitsu, and earth particles, Causing a super heated furnace to flare out in the affect area.
Causing drastic Volcanic reminants in the land scape even after the fight is done from the scarred earth .Which will be now scorched together, and highly unstable like suit.
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History
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300 ad. the war
The year i died,
and lived.. Truely as one.
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It was the year 300 ad, it was a crystal clear night one that was common in the gotai thirteen. Simpe errands where being ran through out the area. Everything being quiet . Now suddenly alarms blared , Exploading everywhere, . First people stopped in confusion, before pandimonium just broke loose. people ran, in dissaray, as they had been in utter fear,. The captians yelling for there, men to become orderly and contained. These members where frightened from the Arrancar that had been sited, Being as they where not normal at all even in how they seemed. since this one inflicted terror on everyone around like a disease that needed to be contained. Naru Naru Pulled out his kantana, and got ready to fight. Though this decided unknown to naru naru ,His fate for the futures to come. Naru Naru, rushed out to meet the attackers, Though now seeing how powerless we where agenst them. Not even putting scratches at all on them, No matter how hard we tryed. His amazingly thick hide making it utterly impossible. It was pitifull even our head captian could do nothing. Right before my eyes, the captian was cut down, Blood spraying everywhere in violent array. Comrades exploading everywhere, from huge cero's that seemed to fly everywhere in a insane pace, that no one could seem to match. Naru naru and the remaining people fought back, As hard as they could to no avail. After two years went by .Naru Naru, he launched forward trying to strike at the male arrancar but before he could even get nere, As a female arrancar, slammed her boot into him, after delivering a series of cuts. Blood spattering out of his mouth and ribs, as a huge dust cloud formed from where he had fallen. now slowly diing , His eyes began to close. Naru naru's will is what changed him that day though. waking up something deep inside him, though not enough to completely release it. For now this energy, was enough to begin to sustain him, while fallig . His eyes slid shut. The world going completely black.
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400 AD THE AFTER MATH
Slowly Naru Naru's eyes slid open, looking around slightly, getting accustomed to the light that was thick with smoke and debri, of decaying life forms, and rubble from the after math of the war. The sickening stentch that followed was almost enough to make Naru Naru's form bend over and wretch up everythign that he had in his stomache. Ribs hurting ,and body racked with pain , Naru naru began to get up slowly, his mouth slick with blood still, after resting for one hundred years. Though his blade seemed to be changed at the hilt, Being much more elaborate and , cross peace, On the kantana. His heart feeling almost like it was being eaten away slowly at some force , which sickened him to his very core. like a hollow. This idea was absurd to him thought. Shakin the idea off naru naru, Began to pick his way around the huge, landscape which seemingly , never ended. Bodys which where in different stages of decomposition strewn acrost, the mine feild of rubble and oulders. Blood running from there veins of the wounded that is. The sickness slowly day by day getting worse, and he picked his way around for 100 years .Looking for any suvivores, Though at the end his heart hurt so bad that it was a never ending torcher for Naru Naru.
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500 AD DIABLO AND DRAGON FANG.
Now a figure that was black as night came out, becoming Naru naru forward almost, Though curiously, naru naru naturally followed. Before he knew it the whole area began to feel like it was changing, Blackened exspanses forming around, him As the land scape itself dissapeared, sloly but surely, two forms now having formed, Instead, one being a huge dragon like hollow, The one that was cloaked in a lininen cloak being much smaller, Before his voice came out in a decent deep tone, speaking to Naru naru. "Do you accept us as we have you for a long time. we needed you to wake up. "
Naru naru replied "Course i do" Now, a new power seemingly rushing into naru naru, as this startled him he talked to both of them slowly, in a meditative like manner as they seemingly conversed. debating they learned things about one another with a respectfull interest. Him being a strange zampuckto.. He learned though this being long ago. Known as devils moon, or Akuma Tsuki, Was the one with the linen cloak, slowly at this point, the foundations of the seiretey had been built around his form, which had been hidden under a rubble pile which they did not bother to move or change. Unlike others instead of Exploring, Naru Naru would spend the next 1000 years or so training. With his only two freinds, he would work with them together.
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600 AD
LOSES Kidō IN speed training
it had been one hundred years since he had first entered his own inner world. Now the two that where his zampukto and hollow began to push naru naru's Speed. Naru Naru ran, with Diablo or Akuma Tsuki chasing on his heels in fast presuit, for this was his inititiative to speed up, and not get caught .Since t now, When diablo caught him, he would Be kicked hard and true, the force slamming him through a building in his inner world. Naru Naru got no rest though he had to get up, and continue to run faster and faster. Never able to slow down, or he would be kicked merselessly , through a building, This was a exercise his inner zampukto Akuma Tsuki or Diablo though of to push his speed and improve it to make it much much faster . Maximizing, the speed he could use, in his normal form, just for being able to keep this in his shikai, and be able to get the most out of his shikai, But for this he had many years of training before he was granted a shikai. But he aswell had much more bonding to do before he could even use shikai aswell . Bruises began after awhile to form on naru naru .But naru naru never stopped being chased by Diablo, Slurs issuing from Diablo's lips. These being intended to Speed Naru Naru up, and it workec causing him to slowly .Build in speed and , Somehow always dug inside himself to push faster when ever Diablo seemingly was begginning to catch up, This also was building up his speed and durability. Because he had to be able to sustain these speeds for a very very long time or it would be impossible, For him to really use his shikai to its best capabilities . Now, while he began to get faster, and more durable, this allowed his hollow and zampucto to actually pour more of there power into him. But soon Naru naru Got pretty quick using jutting rubble from the previous loops to press off causing himself, to move like the wind, dust filling the air like a contininual torcher. Slowly, he needed to get better before he could attempt his shikai.
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700 AD SWORD WORK :
now just after finishing his speed training he got no break, being forced now to do, Sword work, being tossed a sword, Diablo rushing naru naru now, with a endless stream of attacks, Each time, he missed it would send him flying back into a wall because of the force of the flat side of the blade. Causing him, to crash through a building. Now, as he slowly got up ,Diablo Assaulted naru naru, With , another stream of , assaulting blows, which rained in on him from all sides .Each time, the forces shatterig bone and causing intesne pain to form in his ribs ,And other places. Naru Naru Now, gritting his teeth began to see a pattern in the onslaught of blows which never ever seemed to end a frontal slash coming at him. Before naru naru's natural reflex's began to get into speed, blade flicking around to parry, before Naru Naru kicked out sending diablo through a wall , Before now coming forward to test Diablo with a counter onslaught of slashes whih seemed to continue on forever, as it went back and forth .Constantly, one gaining the upper hand suddenly before then the other would make a come back, honing his blading skills took time, but, Slowly but surely. he actually began to Get extremely Used with the Sword in his hand causing it to flick in and out with parries.
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800 ad
barra training from Dragon fang.
This day naru naru got a new teacher. His other sitting back in a Throne like chair getting ready to actually, Watch this new fight ,as the massive dragon like hollow flicked its tail out, Producing a Huge bara which slammed into Naru who could not produce a strong enough barra, causing him to Blast into a wall . His form now groaning while Naru naru got up, looking up at the massive hollow. Which now, he began to focus on his reitsu, before firing a blast back , the result being just a weak bara which did hardly any damage if any at all, Working more and more though over a set period of time, causing it to began to build in power, and , Accuracy, as he slowly over time was able to , begin to build up, more power and reitsu, so that he could actually blast more bara's. Aswell as when he only started out, being able to produce maybe 2 bara's now, he could stream out many of them, after he began to exhange flurried blows with his hollow Companion, causing explosions to light up the sky, . Before now, Naru Naru pressed himself even harder, slowly before long being able to kick out bara's from he feet aswell, which was a most interesting trait for him in his opinion. This is because not only does he have the ability to use bara's This aswell ,is from the uncanny nack of , being able to shoot bara's from his feet since in his bankai, he has no use of his hands. Now, the bara's began booming back and forth in the sky, like a dangerous game of dancing, and fire works. Alowwing for a deafening booming sound to emit from the area around him.
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900 ad.
playing with fire.
Naru naru, had began to notice , that in his shikai state heat had began to rise up around him in a dangerously , hot manner .First being hardly noticable, the more used to shikai he got. The seemingly more potent it was, at first though it was hardly a flame once a day .But slowly now, the wind blowing around, he concentrated alone, working on cultivating that flame through holding it longer and longer .The periods that he could do this though .As he began to slash down .Creating flaming weak cresent projectiles, each seemingly leaving him drained. Naru Naru vowed though he would get much stronger, so little by little day by day, he threw more and more of these flames in his inner world . Using the break that His teachers gave him to train harder .To perfect this particular skill. Now naru naru, watched the billowing flames and craters he had caused, watching before letting the flame once more roar up aroudn him, in a hap hazard manner .This time he waited and waited. But something inside him seemed to have opened, the flames now ,Being rising in potency, and ferocity, to cover him in a cloak Of which he did not know how it got there. But all the same he just grinned, allowing himself to embrace this new flame, Forcing it out around him testing truelly how far it would go . Over all though he then flicked his blade down .The wind causing naru naru's blade to his before a raging cresent projectile flung from the confines of his blade. This now scorching the ground, soon causing it to harden like glass. This perplexed Naru Naru for some time, before he decided not to care. some things where just better unknown in his opinion and so thats how it stayed. Unknown and out of mind, which was a releif for Naru Naru to be truthfull.
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1000-1600 AD
Reistu building
So that naru naru could keep up multiple things at once, Slowly diablo, meditated with naru naru, showing him how he could build his reitsu by doing this .Teaching naru naru, how to build onto his reitsu using this technique, now Naru Naru grinned some the light dimming and changing around him, in odd fashions, while he closed his eyes breathing in deeply , allowing for the air to fill his lungs, While he meditated.
The power and basic nature of this meditation allowing soon for his reitsu to begin to climb more and more .Though not to the point it was over flowing .Because of the power that would be collected within him .
Most of all though this allowed him time to reflect and think about what would happen when he actually got back to the real world, But things always seemed to go away once he meditated for long enough .A sense of ease covering around him like a forest surrounding him. this allowing him to gather his thoughts much more easily , So that he could figure out what he was going to do once this was over. But now, he had a long good time to become composed, And figure out what to do.
Slowly it was growing within naru naru .His reistu was before he simply ,allowed it to close within him, this time, dragon fang and diablo, was actually pouring there energy within him, allowing for his own to increase alot, while causing the three of them to fuze in reitsu, this causing a perfect unity between them which would help in the following years to come. but now he closed his eyes, years passing while he meditated, before waking up, his skills still sharp as knives though from the hundreds of years they where ingrained within him.
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1600-MODERN DAY AD.
FARE WELLS.
Naru naru had learned all he could from them for now, Causing, a need for farewells but now , as naru naru, seemingly, looked out at them curiously. not knowing what the bad mood they where in was about .Sadly though soon it dawned on him, ,as he sighed, looking, at them before slowly, he saw that, it was something, that was inevitable, so now, He sighed lookin around before he began to stride off, waving . Though naru naru's fare well gift was actually his bankai and ressurection. So now he had smiled, Nodding his fare wells, He began to slowly wake himself up, the force of it, causing this to take 600 years slowly. of hard work, being he was so long aleep, his blood beginning to flow around, his form slowly, now wakign up bones and slowly his muscles aswell began to wake up, before long now, his eyes slowly slid open, a strange light, opening up above him, as Naru Naru got up, shakign his head, before walking up towards the surface. The sky being blue as he remebered it .But he had to leave this place.. The gotai 13, was not.. his home anymore.. So now.. a door slowly opened up, Causing a portal to somewhere different, a land under the sky to open up . Now not hesitating he got into it, apearing in the world of the living once more.
And this is where the modern story begins . The next chapter. wonder what will happen.
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Name: Naru Naru .
Appearance Age: Mid Teens .
True Age: 2100
Gender: Male
Powers : Earth and flame.
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Overall Apperance
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Personality:
Naru Naru, is kind to most, which is part of his out going nature. This is from the close bond he shares with his hollow and his , zampukto So naru naru. will be extremely freindly, to others untill they are proven unworthy of that, kindness. If you cross him he will forgive you twice, but after that dont continue or he will, take offense at you
This is since naru naru has a strong sense of right and rong probably which was taught to him, by his zampukto, and his hollow. Though usually being quiet around those he does not know. Because, he feels akward talking around people he does not know.
Naru Naru hates smoking since, the smell is repungant and greatly, bothers him to the max .So if you smoke around him, Naru naru may get up and try to be nice by walking else where . But in some cases naru naru will just walk over, pickthe cigarrette from your hand then toss it to the floor, and put it out . Also, he has a strong sense of right and rong, and is very loyal to those who he finds nice ,kind and freindly towards him.
because of the experiences he has went through he treasures what he is given , and will protect it at all costs.
Being slightly klepto matic, he loves shiney things though. He will not steal from other people occasionally ,something will go missing from a shop, with the money for it left with no explanation how it got there on the counter. Since Naru Naru will pay for anythign he takes to be fair to the people who that would affect since he does not want to hurt anyones feelings.
Nerd , His personality is also nerdy. since in the spare time he had when he was not training nor , fighting with his zampukto and hollow he would read as much as he could .Being as he is a avid reader, loving to see new things from books, and let them take Naru Naru to distant lands.
Adhd Naru naru ,has a hyper active disorder which causes him to be self aware picking up every little crystal clear detail of anothers movements. This allowing him to in a fight, clearly see whats around him quickly and effectivly. Though he does not act hyper active, in truth he is . This shows sometimes because he will figit every now and then when he is sitting down .
Bi Polar , Naru Naru is aswell bi Polar from issues which plague him from the war long ago, though Infact Naru Naru has gotten better and better , at keeping it in ,and now, usually he will not be found upset .Or sad in any manner, if he is and you dont know him, dont come up and be rude since when hes sad hes highly irritable. Because of his mood swings, some times he may be happy, Then suddenly sad or mad, for no real reason just bare with him in these times and it will surely work its way out.
Depression. Is another thing naru naru has .Because of the war long ago, which caused him for awhile to be in a state of depression. Naru Naru though then found his Hollow and Zampukto, though sometimes he is still depressed. But over all this is not usually something that comes up , day to day. Being as it rarely comes up even once a year at the least. So this is not something that really matters.
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Zanpukto
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Zanpakutō Name: Akuma tsuki (known as diablo in the inner world)
Akuma tsuki means devils moon.
Zanpakutō Spirit Appearance: The form of it has red skin, the imperial looking , Form having a long and airy apearance, Always being seen with , the hollow that also lives within me.As they coexist in perfect harmony, the wreath on his head being made from almost blood, aswell as the eyes being volcano red. Though it is seen carriing two swords, now ever since i got a hollow .One for my bankai, one for my ressurection. Now, its form is slim and nice looking, a black cloak flapping out from it, having bone like spikes coming out of the hand that now held my ressurection, The other being dusted with the blackened chains, which covered it showing , the blade of my bankai .
His jaw being angled sharp, being a strong jaw, and his neck being covered by a armored plating almost like a guard ..His left eye being covered in a eye patch mutch like kenpach. His teeth being pure white though having a jagged conture to them .
Aswell he has a affinity, for earth ,Though the blades are different in there unreleased forms. aswell because of the bond he shares with dragon fang and naru naru, he has a ability, called Earth spawn allowing for his earth afinity to be seen through his zampucto.
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Zanpakutō Spirit Personality:
He is much like the inner hollow that Naru Naru has , known as Dragon fang, in personality, because basically they share a brain in the sense of, personality , and morals.
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Inner World:
Ashes cover the land, as a barren exspance of hueco mundo sands seems to be lined with ,The gotai ten ruins that seemingly where there for ages. A light moon and dust always coming from the south east. This also being a place that is in the middle of no where. The white buildings and sands seemingly completmenting each other. At the end is a massive crator, where a throne of illustrious black and white colors sit .On this throne sits Diablo whome seemingly sits there always, His eyes looking alot like the moon in the sky, though being tinted red, as if the moon was dyed in blood of those that where killed.
The crater is cracked and jagged, being a place where Ryū kiba, or the hollow that is within me , Made, from exploading the bed rock with his gaping mouth, slowly hollowing out the crater for which he would sleep. Diablo only allowed this because he needed a place to make his throne which he would sit on .Also enjoying his new companion deciding he should, Make a way to satisphy both of the needs that he had at the moment.
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Sealed Zanpakutō Appearance: The twin blades Are elegant one being hard, though a earthy, presence is about , it allowing ground sometimes to shift around him , this being due to diablo's earth affinity, causing the blade to hum like, so since, naru naru, is bonded to them to the point there powers can be easily seen through his unreleased blades. the earthy one, being Called Akuma Tsuki after his zampukto or devils moon . which seemingly though is light, as a feather, emmense reitsu coming off its core. His harmony though within this bond also caused the origional blade to alter since there reitsu has basically bound together as one. So they all use the reitsu they have in a shared manner.
The second one is abit different though Because of his vizardization he got, a second blade called ryu kiba, Causes for a clear dragonic like flame to form around it, The flames tanglign up the arm that grasps that sword .Aswell the flame is occured from the reitsu skill of Ryu Kiba, which uses the constant friction in the reitsu particles in the air to basically create the flame . the reitsu from it being equally as emmense as Akuma tsuki, though not of earth affinity but of flame. This blade though having a white solid blade within the center of the flames equally hard as his other blade
In continuation, the blades themselves have a keen form of energy within the manifested elements. This simply put is able to cause the form or subjection of the powers to increase and change due to the manner of his abilities. but to add on the flames can be in tempest mode or Subjective defense mode. the modes are different depening on there power output. Due to the face it is used for different purposes over all. Depending on what is actually needed.
Incandescence: By Changing the rate of vibrations it can cause the blade to narrow and warp, simply put it will be able to vibrate fast enough to literally cause the blade to slip through molicules which make up a hierro or other armor. By doing this it then causes a increased state of energy within it. Once bypassing a hierro or armor, it will function to slow down the vibrations, this is why the blade can cause damage internally even when the strike was external. The blade once incandescence is in play, will seem to become see through, even though it retains the normal flaming demeanor which is found to be around it.
Also because of this particular trait, the blade itself can also subtly change or extend up to a certain length in distance in a instantaneous action. But because of the fact its tricky to mess with the amount of added mass or energy from a object which is passing through the change in state. It can only extend and contract up to 3 times a post. While the blade also can be used with something known as Cadescence but this is only used in shikai or above . Which is the opposite of this entirely. Also because of this though the blade can be many things but at the same time. Is only one particular thing. Also Incandescence has another simple purpose when it comes to reishi or spiritually powered attacks:
The blade can not only bypass hierro but simply put in the manner of how it works, the vibrations serve another purpose with the zampucto. The high vibration speed allows for the disruption and dispersion of executed attacks, Because of this, the blade can be able to slice through cero’s and or Kidō skills and so fourth. But this is because of how incandescence works. And now of how it can be executed. Though this can only be used when in sealed form due to how it generally works. Incandescence only activates when facing hierro or armored objects.
Bone crushing Spiritual pressure: Due to incadescence being released the Pure reistu signature on naru naru is just that, truely and positivly enormous. Being able to crush the ground inwards when fully released. It is something almost like being ash and smoke in a single area. Its truely enourmously potent as it it dangerous.
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Release Phrase: May i show the bond we share. Akuma Tsuki.
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Shikai Information
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Shikai Appearance: A seemingly normal, form, other then, now, a slight sheene covers naru naru. His blade splitting into two, chains now, seemingly spiraling up his arms. The black like chains being made of a hardened substance, exactly, like the sheild of the soul society is made of. This seemingly cibrates, almost fuzed with his skin. His form now, seemingly luminous, the pale skin showing lightly. His hair aswell legnthening some to cover his eyes.
now, a black tattered cloak forms around him, as now That seemed to billow out lightly, in a whitened form. Though the air around this form, constantly, vibrates with repulsive particles, . The black cloak seemingly made of dragonic like scales, as they also harden on the skin, which seems to be more reptilian like, now, as it hardens to form, the pale skin like illusion that most see . His eyes now having a light mercury form to them. As gold dusts the inside of his iris . making it more illustrious and amazing then before . Aswell, he becomes more hollow like, though aswell in a sense, this is a more true form of himself .Being as he is a wonderfull form which has been a long time, slowly made. through a harmony between the two forms of his hollow and shimigami .
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Shikai Abilities: Breeze step : This power, allows for the base of his speed to be boosted even more, as now, he can cause after images with his movements, which sometimes cause cause huge gusts of wind to form around him. This is from the slight power boost of the reistu that is being used in the arms and feet. This power having a forcefull effect which can cause denting in the ground and area around it, because now, the limbs also thanks to the reistu are un restrained this is one of the main reasons in the huge boost in speed.
Aswell this caused the added affect in the bankai, to triple his speed still, as his hollow and his inner zampucto fuse for the, final form. but now, this causes the slight change in his reistu to make it much more hollow like in nature, then it was shimigami like .Now, aswell the breeze step can cause the air, to chagne becoming deceivingly, strong depending on how fast he moves. This ability, is a natural foot work ability. Because he cannot use Hadō or Kidō. This aswell causes the energy burst, to send a kind of force aroudn the move in question .The swings force adding the brute stregnth to it, that carries it down the feild with devistating affects, . Aswell this allows for a special counter affect in combat, allowing for something called, Heavy Grace
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Inferno incinerate : This is a move that is also, a natural affect from the dragonic nature of the hollow inside him .Using the heat from the hollows reitsu caused by conflicting vibrations in the reitsu, thus this highly condensed reitsu will trail around him, in a firey, Cloak, covering his blades and the chains on his blade .Aswell as causing a flaming tail to form on the back . This flame due to breeze step, can sometimes shell off and expload with highly condensed reitsu, when it does .Being somewhat like a bara. This can also be slung from his slashes Bringing us to the next combat oriented skill.
But aswell the incineration , can cause a licking tounge like, affect around him, when the wind hits it just right .This sometimes can account for any water around his general area, Begginning to Heat up, and boil . From the immense heat that the skill itself generates. Making steam rise around him in some manners. But in other times .It can be used to melt ice , and sometimes, is a reason for fires starting around him, if he is in a medow. But aswell the reitsu from it, can cause a heavyness in the air, the ash and suit which form from the fires form, sometimes collecting on those he is fighting. Which can in extreme cases cover them in a mound of the crap .
This move is weakened unless in ressurection/ bankai form to allow for it to be useable.
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After affects of inferno incinerate:
The reitsu can leave a unusual growth stunt in the area
for afew days at most, because of the trace, but nothing that wont clear up after that the land only being mildly scorched, unless it is ussed in ressurection, even then not being that bad.
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Flare dance: Flame dance uses the flames that are made from incineration, causing the natural flames, to be dispersed by spiraling high velocity slashes .This sometimes being able to flare up into a wave around Him, Depending on how hard Naru Naru slashes, this flame can ignite on others, using a Effect they have which burns the skin of the opponent known as Flare Ignition, This can engross the enemy in billowing flames, which can clump together to creat a flaming storm .Using reitsu it can amplify into a full out hellish situation
The flames aslo in flare dance seemingly with each slash will bud out to form long, flaming tendrils , this being the form for shikai, Besides his speed this is the other thing that Naru Naru has in this form .
Aswell using the after reitsu, this can engross itself for several turns in a flaring mass of flame, The opponent being givin a burn status for those turns in which, the flames will slowly cause sores and openings in there skin, from the high temprature the flames can be used at. This being much more effective then any cero.
But the flames cause a sizzling effect in the air aroudn them . The brightness of them on impact. though from the sudden white hot flash bang like, release of the reitsu on impact, being able to temperarorly stun or blind others who are near for a moment. Though not severly, enough to cause perminant damage.
This , aswell is like a natural part of Naru Naru in his shikai, his hollows dragonic nature being part of the shikais form allowing for fire to well up from the friction between the reitsu of his body . Constantly making a supply of flames for him to use. But these flames can also cause singing on his hairs and leaving him smelling oddly of , smoke and decay. Flare dance though has some different moves within it, as it consists of A set of combat moves , known as the seven sins. Which are the seven moves this allows for Naru Naru to use. This is weakened in the shikai form, so its not full power, as are all the moves to allow for him to be able to use them. Full power only comes out in ressurection/ bankai form .
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Seven sins move one Flaming tsunami:this is the first of the slashes .Using a high amount of the flame around him, to create by, condensing it at the tip of his left blade, a dangerous, pillaring explosion from the release of the flame, this then widens out, slowly forming ,a massive Wave of flame this being , able to surround him and blast out, him being the epicenter. Allowing for A decent moving , flow around
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Bankai Appearance: Naru naru pretty much looks like he does when he is in his shika. But in this form. Now, he gets, a fur like, cloak around his other, this one having a skull pendant to it. Signifying the bankais, form this allows it to flap in the wind, his head, now getting pitch black horns which form from the top of naru naru's head. his eyes now, look a silverish color. His, blade now, staying the same, but now fusing to his hands, making it so that, he cannot move them. The blades style being the same, but now the blade itself, has two chains dangling from the hilts. Aswell now ,a hot like layer encases his form, like a furnace, Though this being only seen either when he walks into ice, or from the heat waves that show around him .This being from the constant friction of his reitsu which can cause flames, to form when they are needed.
But aswell the air around this form is always seemingly to spiral some from the cold air constantly hitting the hot air , of his skin .Allowing for a wind to always be present around him.
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Bankai Abilities: Phantom, swords technique, which allows for his speed to triple to the point his foirm can move causing a flash bang behind him. In a simple thrust of his foot. This being from the fact, his reitsu is sacrificed to this making it have a amazing thrust, and speed power which is very hard to keep up with. Because once he hits his fastest , he can momentairly vanish from site, flickering out like a phantom, Making it insainly hard for someone to hit him. In adition, each of his strikes, from the swords, disperse shredding gamma waves, from the tips making a repulsive force, this slowly can contaminate. The skin surrounding the cell wall of the form. Aswell as make slowly, a uselessness or, shredding of cells, allowing for the opponent. To be slowly shredded on the cellular level. Though The draw back is he can only, use cero's and none of the shimmigami's Hadō or bakudo. Since . This form changes his reitsu, even after the first use making it impossible for him to use those moves. this accomplishes the feat of having devistative damage with rapid attacks .Using this in quick sucsession, causing him to be able, To slash multiple enemys within a second ,through his light stepping technique.
The gamma rays are made of the hollow like reistu ,that becomes more apparent in his Bankai form since now, aswell, this ability, causes a reist like weight to drag down, but , Aswell the reistu with this, is what causes the sped up affect, of this move .Aswell as the added affects of breeze step since each of these speed moves. Transpheres onto the higher state. The flash bangs this causes making it more devistating then the breeze step. But aswell much much faster. And besides this , this movement , causes a longer trail of flames to leave behind him, from the heat that is left over from the anitionall Flames themselves. Aswell now, he has a hardened shell, from the burnt, suit that has encased his skin, causing the Form of it, to be blackened in some area's. Aswell his teeth seem to be more jagged because of phantom step .
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Phantom blade: Alowwing for his blades when covered in the extreme flame round him, to heat the matter of solid walls and striking area's to a gasious compound causing it to be easily, slipped through marring or damaging internal organs which are soft ,and of a different hardness, aswell as if you are hit enough, it can cook you, from the inside out. Causing your organs to become a heated hard mess of crap .Due to the basic make up of the reitsu that is used in this technique , it Can only though be used against those who use heirro since the fleshy skin of non hierro types, will not become gasious because of the softer make up of the matter density. within the skin. This is why it can only be used, against hierro types, aswell as because of this it unless used agenst hierro types, cannot harm others but can cut through walls and other hard solid objects.
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Inner Hollow & Mask
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Name:Ryū kiba (Dragons fang )
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Inner Hollow Description: My inner hollow, is made to look slightly, in my shape. The claws on its hands being huge .The back of it peircing the sky, weighing in at 200,000 pounds this monster is as tall as the empire state building, but all this reitsu is drained into my system, from the phantom sword technique. Tahe head of this hollow has rows of fangs, and no eyes. Huge dragon like wings, wrapping out of the area around him. Causing for a hellish wind to pass through the inner world being destroyed every time rebuilding itself. Chains of servitude cover the hollows wings, clanking in the wind its roaring causes .These reminding it of how it was caught by shimigami then bound to me. His wings seem to be made of flame, and ash, which constantly covers the area, . The shene of the hard skin having red markings running down it, almost like tribal marks. These being a big part of this hollows identity, More or less the horns aswell, are massive having barbed poisionous like ends to them making it dangerous to be speared by them . The Hollow, is a dragonic like hollow aswell no loving characters in his eyes.
Though aswell, a dense flame seemingly , Forms around him allowing for naru naru's flame attribute, Because of the make up of the flames, they can be made from the friction of reitsu in the air, making it easy to mass produce over a broad spectrum this can be seen as a fog around dragon fang.
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Inner Hollow Personality: My inner hollows personality, is the exact same as the inner shimigami, Its seemingly rigid, and does'nt speak much haing a quiet and caring personality.. Though also being devilish in nature, it can get up to no good in extreme cases .Loving fighting, for the training it brings, they both urge for me to fight harder aswell as longer then most should .Aswell he has a strong sense of right and rong not wanting anything to happen .
Wanting to know more is also a thing he loves to do .Since exploring is a urge that is in his blood. More or less aswell, he feels restless, but loves company, and more then anything else. A way to know others better and make freinds. More or less being docile unless done great injustices too. Then he will go beserk, thrashing through the hill side, untill nothing is left but destruction and mayhem. Aswell he has a soft spot for sweets and the one who he lives within. Since over the many years . they have gotten to know each other. since the only way he could actually, live untill now, was to get to know naru naru. since if he did not, he would surely be dead by now.
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Inner Hollow Powers: Inner hollow has no powers, but his hard skin, which is the only thing it has being a huge help to this form, Causing it to seemingly just have a impenitrable, hide, being the hide itself makes up for almost half the hollows weight, causing for its skin to be extremely rigid. From the massive reitsu it has, making it more denser because it needs a shell hard enough to keep his reitsu from leaking out all the time and destroying everythign around it. but aswell, The molten lava that comes around him, has something known as, Soul fire. Which is a ghostly like fire, that slips through physcal objects, slowly, burning them from the inside out.
He also from the bond he shares with Akuma Tsuki and naru naru, has a ability called, Emperors Flame Spawn, allowing the flames of his dragonic nature to be seen from naru naru's ressurection blade.
He also has a uncanny nack for bara's and cero's
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Hollow Mask Appearance:
It looks like a strange, anbu mask, which allows, for some hardened scaly mass to form on the mask. Aswell as the white form, of the mask seemingly comes out, to hav
e black elongated stripes on the sides.
Aswell the mask goes back to go down his spine, spiked spines stickign from the bone. To add onto it, purple glowing eyes can be seen through the opening of the eyeholes on the mask. the rest covering the lower part of his neck. Giving off a white luminous radiance.
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Vizard Powers
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Vizard Powers:
Natural powers : Flame emperor.
Flame emperor is a huge base manipulation, since his form uses a dangerous flame type, release. Which is from the nature of his dragonic hollow, dragon fang. this fire is known as dragon fire. this having a serious power like, cloth that moves around him, From intense heat emitted by his reitsu that is not being used. This can be used like a sheild. Because of the lack of Kidō he has , Is put into his speed and this. Known as flame emperor, or Devils shroud, it allows for a decent protection since this can trail out around him in a cloak of sorts. and offense in different circumstances. Depending on what it is. it is enough to burn others or, cause Decent explosions around him, aswell, whipping out around him, if it needs to, from how much it is Or how much it will be, It depends on how much of the flame he lets out. aswell this flame can grow , depending on how much friction is between naru naru's reitsu, causing for , a blinding flash sometimes, this causes the flames to rush out in all directions.
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Earth Emperor: This allows for the changing in the land scape around him depending on how much reitsu naru naru puts out. It can change depending on what he needs to happen .And a sudden reitsu burst will occur, when the land changes from the ethernal, Thread laced reitsu within the ground responds to his .Reitsu, them being on the same frequency, Allowing for the increase of land tilt and other things. But the draw back is this can use alot of his reitsu so he uses it sparingly.
Aswell this allows, for earth based techniques causing devistating affects.
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Resurrección
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Resurrección Appearance: They look like there bankai state ,But the eyes now, are covered up by a mask, his legs now, covered in a white, bone structure, a hole forming on his chest. Doubled over. Showing the lightness of his scaled skin .Aswell as two pairs of bat wings rip from his back .A dragonic like tail whipping side to side. This form having a luminous reishi like vibrations around it, the energy, now going through the roof, but his hair aswell turns a mid night black.. His hands fused still with zan pucto, but now strange like glass almost forms grip the shoes on this form .Creating a suction like mass .This making it so that ,a nice and soft surface alowwing for maximum speed is used.
While this is part of it the blades, are made from a hard type of mineral, which is constantly charged with reitsu causing for a kind of pressure on the blade, which Will throw others back off balance which can aloww for the maximum pressure.
Aswell a flaming cloak goes over him, being insainly, hot as besides this, a flaming fail, forms over him, as now, his body is covered in a unending flame .This flame coming deep within, this power, causing it to rise up, more and more ,as it welds out, this is caused by the flames that are constantly generated within him. At a demonic rate.
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Resurrección Abilities:
Phantoms ghost:Now, his phantom technique is still in play, but it gets doubled by the , Phatoms ghost. Which now allows from the glass like substance on the feet to be boosted even further, by adding a repulsive reistu like wave, on the bottom of the feet . This contrasts and adds a fricrtionless space for it to run .Aswell now using breeze step it can cause, sonic booms behind it , of deafening sound, or make the ground around him give out in different manners on the weakest points. This also ,allows for a passive , which causes his blade, to repluse almost agenst any one that is fighting him or is near him. But aswell the flames that lick aroudn him turn blue , activaing a colbat like fire which is high density , aswell causing winds to rip at high speeds from the updraft it can cause .
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Flame emperors sun bala:This causes for the flames around him, to be able to contort into a mass which can be used .By the formation of bala styled reitsu into them . So that he can fire off huge sun like flaming bala's , This can only be used, In the higher forms. f him .Since he cannot use this in his normal form . Aswell this is an attribute of his flame .Using its heat it generates a repulsive pillar when they hit. These being only stronger then most bala variants. And can only be used in his shikai forms and above. But this aswell, causes a reaction with the grass And land scape around it known as Landscape Scorch , this can cause sand around the craters of the bala to actually, Turn to hardened volcanic shale or even slick obsidion, and in some cases crystal clear glass, which is utterly Impossible for most to step on. Though this aswell, can leave residue on the spot, that is severly hot, for afew turns known as Vapor trace. This causes the remininants to super heat the area around where it hit for afew turns at most.
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Earthen Gullotine: This one Is different then the others only being able to be used in his ressurected form .This forms a tremor through the ground causing it to uproot around the feild, with one swing, Reitsu that hammers into the ground then after the vibrations of its basic matter Reveberates through the ground in a series of after shocks. Each one getting strong then the other, before the whole land scape will erupt into a naucious mess of spiked debri, and sometimes spikes made of earth .
Aswell the spikes, can move up decently, big . The ground after this will become a turmoily mass , or spieks and chunks of gravel, causing the ground to seem like it is moving in waves, Before it either will cave in , or If he stabs his blade into the ground one more time, a razor sharp gullotine will screech from the earth made of flaming reitsu, and earth particles, Causing a super heated furnace to flare out in the affect area.
Causing drastic Volcanic reminants in the land scape even after the fight is done from the scarred earth .Which will be now scorched together, and highly unstable like suit.
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History
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300 ad. the war
The year i died,
and lived.. Truely as one.
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It was the year 300 ad, it was a crystal clear night one that was common in the gotai thirteen. Simpe errands where being ran through out the area. Everything being quiet . Now suddenly alarms blared , Exploading everywhere, . First people stopped in confusion, before pandimonium just broke loose. people ran, in dissaray, as they had been in utter fear,. The captians yelling for there, men to become orderly and contained. These members where frightened from the Arrancar that had been sited, Being as they where not normal at all even in how they seemed. since this one inflicted terror on everyone around like a disease that needed to be contained. Naru Naru Pulled out his kantana, and got ready to fight. Though this decided unknown to naru naru ,His fate for the futures to come. Naru Naru, rushed out to meet the attackers, Though now seeing how powerless we where agenst them. Not even putting scratches at all on them, No matter how hard we tryed. His amazingly thick hide making it utterly impossible. It was pitifull even our head captian could do nothing. Right before my eyes, the captian was cut down, Blood spraying everywhere in violent array. Comrades exploading everywhere, from huge cero's that seemed to fly everywhere in a insane pace, that no one could seem to match. Naru naru and the remaining people fought back, As hard as they could to no avail. After two years went by .Naru Naru, he launched forward trying to strike at the male arrancar but before he could even get nere, As a female arrancar, slammed her boot into him, after delivering a series of cuts. Blood spattering out of his mouth and ribs, as a huge dust cloud formed from where he had fallen. now slowly diing , His eyes began to close. Naru naru's will is what changed him that day though. waking up something deep inside him, though not enough to completely release it. For now this energy, was enough to begin to sustain him, while fallig . His eyes slid shut. The world going completely black.
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400 AD THE AFTER MATH
Slowly Naru Naru's eyes slid open, looking around slightly, getting accustomed to the light that was thick with smoke and debri, of decaying life forms, and rubble from the after math of the war. The sickening stentch that followed was almost enough to make Naru Naru's form bend over and wretch up everythign that he had in his stomache. Ribs hurting ,and body racked with pain , Naru naru began to get up slowly, his mouth slick with blood still, after resting for one hundred years. Though his blade seemed to be changed at the hilt, Being much more elaborate and , cross peace, On the kantana. His heart feeling almost like it was being eaten away slowly at some force , which sickened him to his very core. like a hollow. This idea was absurd to him thought. Shakin the idea off naru naru, Began to pick his way around the huge, landscape which seemingly , never ended. Bodys which where in different stages of decomposition strewn acrost, the mine feild of rubble and oulders. Blood running from there veins of the wounded that is. The sickness slowly day by day getting worse, and he picked his way around for 100 years .Looking for any suvivores, Though at the end his heart hurt so bad that it was a never ending torcher for Naru Naru.
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500 AD DIABLO AND DRAGON FANG.
Now a figure that was black as night came out, becoming Naru naru forward almost, Though curiously, naru naru naturally followed. Before he knew it the whole area began to feel like it was changing, Blackened exspanses forming around, him As the land scape itself dissapeared, sloly but surely, two forms now having formed, Instead, one being a huge dragon like hollow, The one that was cloaked in a lininen cloak being much smaller, Before his voice came out in a decent deep tone, speaking to Naru naru. "Do you accept us as we have you for a long time. we needed you to wake up. "
Naru naru replied "Course i do" Now, a new power seemingly rushing into naru naru, as this startled him he talked to both of them slowly, in a meditative like manner as they seemingly conversed. debating they learned things about one another with a respectfull interest. Him being a strange zampuckto.. He learned though this being long ago. Known as devils moon, or Akuma Tsuki, Was the one with the linen cloak, slowly at this point, the foundations of the seiretey had been built around his form, which had been hidden under a rubble pile which they did not bother to move or change. Unlike others instead of Exploring, Naru Naru would spend the next 1000 years or so training. With his only two freinds, he would work with them together.
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600 AD
LOSES Kidō IN speed training
it had been one hundred years since he had first entered his own inner world. Now the two that where his zampukto and hollow began to push naru naru's Speed. Naru Naru ran, with Diablo or Akuma Tsuki chasing on his heels in fast presuit, for this was his inititiative to speed up, and not get caught .Since t now, When diablo caught him, he would Be kicked hard and true, the force slamming him through a building in his inner world. Naru Naru got no rest though he had to get up, and continue to run faster and faster. Never able to slow down, or he would be kicked merselessly , through a building, This was a exercise his inner zampukto Akuma Tsuki or Diablo though of to push his speed and improve it to make it much much faster . Maximizing, the speed he could use, in his normal form, just for being able to keep this in his shikai, and be able to get the most out of his shikai, But for this he had many years of training before he was granted a shikai. But he aswell had much more bonding to do before he could even use shikai aswell . Bruises began after awhile to form on naru naru .But naru naru never stopped being chased by Diablo, Slurs issuing from Diablo's lips. These being intended to Speed Naru Naru up, and it workec causing him to slowly .Build in speed and , Somehow always dug inside himself to push faster when ever Diablo seemingly was begginning to catch up, This also was building up his speed and durability. Because he had to be able to sustain these speeds for a very very long time or it would be impossible, For him to really use his shikai to its best capabilities . Now, while he began to get faster, and more durable, this allowed his hollow and zampucto to actually pour more of there power into him. But soon Naru naru Got pretty quick using jutting rubble from the previous loops to press off causing himself, to move like the wind, dust filling the air like a contininual torcher. Slowly, he needed to get better before he could attempt his shikai.
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700 AD SWORD WORK :
now just after finishing his speed training he got no break, being forced now to do, Sword work, being tossed a sword, Diablo rushing naru naru now, with a endless stream of attacks, Each time, he missed it would send him flying back into a wall because of the force of the flat side of the blade. Causing him, to crash through a building. Now, as he slowly got up ,Diablo Assaulted naru naru, With , another stream of , assaulting blows, which rained in on him from all sides .Each time, the forces shatterig bone and causing intesne pain to form in his ribs ,And other places. Naru Naru Now, gritting his teeth began to see a pattern in the onslaught of blows which never ever seemed to end a frontal slash coming at him. Before naru naru's natural reflex's began to get into speed, blade flicking around to parry, before Naru Naru kicked out sending diablo through a wall , Before now coming forward to test Diablo with a counter onslaught of slashes whih seemed to continue on forever, as it went back and forth .Constantly, one gaining the upper hand suddenly before then the other would make a come back, honing his blading skills took time, but, Slowly but surely. he actually began to Get extremely Used with the Sword in his hand causing it to flick in and out with parries.
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800 ad
barra training from Dragon fang.
This day naru naru got a new teacher. His other sitting back in a Throne like chair getting ready to actually, Watch this new fight ,as the massive dragon like hollow flicked its tail out, Producing a Huge bara which slammed into Naru who could not produce a strong enough barra, causing him to Blast into a wall . His form now groaning while Naru naru got up, looking up at the massive hollow. Which now, he began to focus on his reitsu, before firing a blast back , the result being just a weak bara which did hardly any damage if any at all, Working more and more though over a set period of time, causing it to began to build in power, and , Accuracy, as he slowly over time was able to , begin to build up, more power and reitsu, so that he could actually blast more bara's. Aswell as when he only started out, being able to produce maybe 2 bara's now, he could stream out many of them, after he began to exhange flurried blows with his hollow Companion, causing explosions to light up the sky, . Before now, Naru Naru pressed himself even harder, slowly before long being able to kick out bara's from he feet aswell, which was a most interesting trait for him in his opinion. This is because not only does he have the ability to use bara's This aswell ,is from the uncanny nack of , being able to shoot bara's from his feet since in his bankai, he has no use of his hands. Now, the bara's began booming back and forth in the sky, like a dangerous game of dancing, and fire works. Alowwing for a deafening booming sound to emit from the area around him.
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900 ad.
playing with fire.
Naru naru, had began to notice , that in his shikai state heat had began to rise up around him in a dangerously , hot manner .First being hardly noticable, the more used to shikai he got. The seemingly more potent it was, at first though it was hardly a flame once a day .But slowly now, the wind blowing around, he concentrated alone, working on cultivating that flame through holding it longer and longer .The periods that he could do this though .As he began to slash down .Creating flaming weak cresent projectiles, each seemingly leaving him drained. Naru Naru vowed though he would get much stronger, so little by little day by day, he threw more and more of these flames in his inner world . Using the break that His teachers gave him to train harder .To perfect this particular skill. Now naru naru, watched the billowing flames and craters he had caused, watching before letting the flame once more roar up aroudn him, in a hap hazard manner .This time he waited and waited. But something inside him seemed to have opened, the flames now ,Being rising in potency, and ferocity, to cover him in a cloak Of which he did not know how it got there. But all the same he just grinned, allowing himself to embrace this new flame, Forcing it out around him testing truelly how far it would go . Over all though he then flicked his blade down .The wind causing naru naru's blade to his before a raging cresent projectile flung from the confines of his blade. This now scorching the ground, soon causing it to harden like glass. This perplexed Naru Naru for some time, before he decided not to care. some things where just better unknown in his opinion and so thats how it stayed. Unknown and out of mind, which was a releif for Naru Naru to be truthfull.
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1000-1600 AD
Reistu building
So that naru naru could keep up multiple things at once, Slowly diablo, meditated with naru naru, showing him how he could build his reitsu by doing this .Teaching naru naru, how to build onto his reitsu using this technique, now Naru Naru grinned some the light dimming and changing around him, in odd fashions, while he closed his eyes breathing in deeply , allowing for the air to fill his lungs, While he meditated.
The power and basic nature of this meditation allowing soon for his reitsu to begin to climb more and more .Though not to the point it was over flowing .Because of the power that would be collected within him .
Most of all though this allowed him time to reflect and think about what would happen when he actually got back to the real world, But things always seemed to go away once he meditated for long enough .A sense of ease covering around him like a forest surrounding him. this allowing him to gather his thoughts much more easily , So that he could figure out what he was going to do once this was over. But now, he had a long good time to become composed, And figure out what to do.
Slowly it was growing within naru naru .His reistu was before he simply ,allowed it to close within him, this time, dragon fang and diablo, was actually pouring there energy within him, allowing for his own to increase alot, while causing the three of them to fuze in reitsu, this causing a perfect unity between them which would help in the following years to come. but now he closed his eyes, years passing while he meditated, before waking up, his skills still sharp as knives though from the hundreds of years they where ingrained within him.
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1600-MODERN DAY AD.
FARE WELLS.
Naru naru had learned all he could from them for now, Causing, a need for farewells but now , as naru naru, seemingly, looked out at them curiously. not knowing what the bad mood they where in was about .Sadly though soon it dawned on him, ,as he sighed, looking, at them before slowly, he saw that, it was something, that was inevitable, so now, He sighed lookin around before he began to stride off, waving . Though naru naru's fare well gift was actually his bankai and ressurection. So now he had smiled, Nodding his fare wells, He began to slowly wake himself up, the force of it, causing this to take 600 years slowly. of hard work, being he was so long aleep, his blood beginning to flow around, his form slowly, now wakign up bones and slowly his muscles aswell began to wake up, before long now, his eyes slowly slid open, a strange light, opening up above him, as Naru Naru got up, shakign his head, before walking up towards the surface. The sky being blue as he remebered it .But he had to leave this place.. The gotai 13, was not.. his home anymore.. So now.. a door slowly opened up, Causing a portal to somewhere different, a land under the sky to open up . Now not hesitating he got into it, apearing in the world of the living once more.
And this is where the modern story begins . The next chapter. wonder what will happen.
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Skill Sheet
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General Skills
- Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
- General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
- Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
- Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Racial Skills
- Hoho: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
- Cero/Bala/: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
- Zanjutsu:Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
- Hakuda: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
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Re: Naru naru
Sat Sep 17, 2011 4:49 pm
reserved. going to check this torrorrow.
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Comments/Notes: From reading your Shikai, the ablities themselves don't seem overpowered, its the scale you put them on. Just remember, this is Shikai. Please nerf the ablities so they fit a shikai release. Your no Yamamoto.
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Sun Sep 18, 2011 3:06 pm
Seems to be fixed. Approved for 2-2
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please remove from inactive.
Sun Feb 12, 2012 9:50 am
i am going to start playing again. if someone could remove from inactive i'd appriciate it. greatly. =)
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Re: Naru naru
Tue Mar 19, 2013 12:48 pm
This app got archived m'dear!
Moving from Innactive to Archived! Post Here if you pick up this character again. However, these seem to be doubles and what not, so you problably have an old copy anyways~
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