Bri

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Name: Bri Kynzi
Age:17
Gender:Female


Personality:Bri has a very positive attitude. She is very playful,
and loves to talk but she is very shy around new people.
Her hobbies are clothes designing and drawing. She, unlike
most girls fear nothing other then being called fake. Her favorite
foods are anything but eggs. She is often drinking sweet tea,
or Dr.Pepper. She is usaully calm but she does have a temper
alike to her relatives. Bri is very eager to become friends with
anyone and she never judges by a persons looks. She loves to go
camping, and she dissaproves of violence other then sparring.
She loves horror movies, the blood the gore, the twisted tales.
The biggest thing about Bri is that she is an animal girl. She
LOVES animals, she will either always have a bird on her shoulder,
or always have an animal by her side, even when you don't see them,
they are always there. Its like the animals have the same attraction
to her as she does to them. There isn't one animal that she can say
she doesn't like. She is an honest girl, she has never told a lie
unless she must, to spare someones feelings, or to keep someones
secert a secert.
Appearance:
Bri is a small girl with beautiful light blonde hair that cascades down her back near reaching her waist. She has bangs that are styled in a sassy cutted way that shades part of her dark blue eyes. she has a very slim face and she is very skinny and petite. Her clothing style is anything black, but preferably mini skirts, tank tops, crop tops and lacey things. Her fingernails are usaully always painted. She is pale with a slight tan in places.

Height:5'6
Weight:124


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Background:Bri was born in California and at the age of 3 her
parents divorced. One year later her mom took her to a babysitters
house, and left her there, after 8 years of being taken care of and
raised there, the sitter couldn't handle another mouth to feed with
how bad the economy was, so at 12 she was sent to an orphanage.
After 2 years she was finally adopted by a newlywed couple named
Alexa and Greg. She was raised in their home and treated like their
own until the age of 16 when Greg died of a massive heart attack,
Alexa was heartbroken so Bri knew it would be best if she just left,
so she put up all the money she had saved in the last 4 years and
rented an apartment. She has lived on her own ever since. She got
a job at a local store until she was old enough to try for collage,
when Greg died she dropped out of school, knowing there was no
way she could handle work and school.

Roleplay Sample: Bri stands at the top of the highest mountain in the world, peaking over the edge. She sharpens her dagger for the long trip down, bringing only a waterbottle and a small backpack. She tightens her rope and tests out the strength, then she jumps off of the cliff. She glides down the steep and slopy mountain with grace. As it gets dark Bri slows down looking for a place to rest. She notices a light nearby so she slows herself to a stop and trys to follow it. Then she notices a trail of smoke going into the night sky, A fire. She makes her way to the fire that is flaming brightly. She looks around but she senses no sign of other life. She lays out a small blanket from her backpack and sleeps next to the warming fire.

• Name [X]
  
• Appropriate Age [X]
  
• Gender [X]
  
• Appearance Present [-]
  
• Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [-]
  
• Appearance is Not Claimed [-]
  
• 10 sentences for personality [O]
  
• History is of appropriate length [O]
  
• Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [-]
  
• Powers are described reasonably enough [-]
  
• Application/RP Sample is not in First Person []
  
• Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  
• RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  
• RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]
  

Comments/Notes: Righto *Cracks Knuckles* We need to get down to work on this.
Starters.

10 sentences for Personality and I'm not counting the last sentence as one as it doesn't really have to do with her personality. You're appearance also needs more work on, e.g.
As you don't want your character to have powers strike the whole thing out up to Chi Powers. Use the strike command which is a S with the Line in it.
Background also needs more work on. Include things like, her life during orphanage and the school. How her parents died, her life as she grew up e.t.c
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