Hyazamarui Kyazarui
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Hyazamarui Kyazarui
Wed Jun 08, 2011 8:51 am
[ D E M O N T E M P L A T E ]
+ B A S I C I N F O +
Name: Hyazamarui Kyazarui
Age: 4,500
Gender: Male
Shifter Appearance:
True Appearance:
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+ P E R S O N A L I T Y +
Personality:Hyazamarui is a Cold-blooded demon that shows No Mercy on anyone.He dares to kill someone in front of everyone in public.He doesnt get along very well with anyone around him.Everyone treats him as an enemy because he is one of the most evil demon.He never gives up in his fight even though he knows he is facing to the death.Even though Hyazamarui is evil and cold-blood, he would still trains with his father and respects him.He writes and draws with his right hand.He holds his sword with his left hand, not his right hand, but he holds his sword with his right hand in his shifter appearance because he wont be easily known by others that he was a demon.He always wanted to be stronger so that he can defeat anyone that stands in his path.He always turns to the left side whenever he looks back and rarely turns to the right side.But he turns to the right side in his shifter appearance.He hates his shifter appearance because he had to do the opposite way of his true way.His goal is to become the strongest demon and rule over the world.
He has hobbies and stuff even though he is a demon.His favourite food is meat but not human meat.He likes any kind of meat except beef.He has only 2 favourite drinks because he thinks that other drinks are bitter and too sweet.His favourite drinks are an orange juice and a green tea.He hates the most is mineral water but he often drinks it because his father always scold him for not drinking them.The mineral water has no taste at all for him.Its only a bitter water whenever he drinks it.He also hates clowns, because they look stupid and always pissed him off a lot.He has a fear of water, meaning that he has Aquaphobia because his element is fire, that his fire will be putted out if he touches any water but, he has no fear of water in his shifter appearance because he is not in his true form, means that he can touch water only in his shifter appearance.His favourite tree is Cherry Blossom because it looks good in spring.His most favourite season is summer, because its hot and lets him feel so comfortable in such a hot day.He hates winter the most, its freezing and his fire could easily turn into ice or even dissapear quickly before himself could get warm.His hobby is fighting and blood spilling around the place because he feels so excited when it comes to fight.His type is aggressive, fierce and evil.
He is a No Mercy one in every fight.He has different personality in Shishi Modo and in Muko Jotai.His favourite spot to kill is chest because its an instant kill if stabbed on the chest.His 2nd favourite spot to kill is neck, because once their neck was sliced, their heads would fell off easily with one kill.He always armed and ready in his fight before the battle against the enemy starts.He always make sure of his enemy's movement and remembers it.So that he can get used to the enemy's movements and easy to avoid every attack that the enemy gave.He doesnt like his enemy to cheat or escape in his battle because the fun fades away if the enemy cheat or escape.He likes a tougher and harder battles because he knows that it last longer the fight and its fun.
In his Shishi Modo personality, he is calm and very quiet in his fight.If anyone who dares to escape his fight, means that their lives, will be in an instant death.He always copy his enemy's attacks and movements so that it would be easier to fight.He can even avoid the enemy's attacks once he get used to it.He prefer his enemies to be tough and smart, because it might been more easier for him to fight and gains more knowledge of his enemy's attacks and abilities.He rather had his right eye closed in the fight and only fights with his left eye only.
In his Muko Jotai personality, he is quiet, fierce and aggressive in the fight.He never shouts or even make a noise when he runs, walks and jump.His movements is so quiet that no one can hear him.He prefer a quiet and fierce enemies because he want someone to have a balance fight with him and a quiet fight.If anyone makes a noise in his fight, he will stab them on the head.He likes a quiet and peaceful place and hates people making a lots of noise.Even though his sword, armor and his sheild were heavy and hard, but he can make a quiet noise easily wihout using a single effort to do it.He prefers an easy and quiet fight.
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+ B A C K G R O U N D +
History
Hyazamarui was borned as a fire demon.His mother was a demon and his father was a demon as well.But both of them has a different element.His mother was a fire demon and his father was a dark demon.After Hyazamarui grew up, he was known as the most evil and fierce demon.He always went out from his house and challenge someone into his fight.He always win wihout even losing once but he thinks that he dont have enough power and strength to conquer the entire world himself.So, he starts training with his mother and father.His mother taught him how to use and control fire.His father taught him not to fear the darkness and taught him some of the dark abilities.His father said that he could combine his dark abilities with fire abilities but it might take a risk.After hundreds of years later, his father and mother prepared to teach Hyazamarui to summon and using demon magic.
After 2 thousand years of training, he finally mastered the summoning and the demon magic.He also gained a new form called "Shishi Modo".He had the ability to use the new form and become stronger.He has achieved all kinds of abilities but not yet known but it is called "Kage Chokyo-shi","Jigoku Sokudo" and a "Shifer Appearance".His shifter appearance could gain an appearance of a human so that he wouldnt be easily suspected and being spotted as a demon.He decided to achieve an ability called, "Boru Shi".He decided to train with his father and mother for 2 thousand years more to gain the ability, if he doesnt gain the ability, he will train with his father and his mother for 300 years more.
After another 2 thousand years later of training, he still didnt gain to ability called, "Boru Shi", but he gained called, "Akuma Kyodo" that was similiar to the Hierro that an arrancar uses.So, now he didnt yet obtain the ability, he decided to train with his parents 300 years more before he went out for himself and train himself as well.but its a different training than before.Now his parents will taught him how to control and use Za Koa Skill.He was ready to train with his parents for 300 years more to become more stronger and powerful enough to conquer the entire world himself.But he will still respect his parents even though if he did succeed doing it by conquering the entire world because he knew that his parents raised him and made him strong.
After 300 years later of training, he finally had the ability called, "Boru Shi", now he can be stronger and more powerful to defeat anything that stands in its path.
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+ P O W E R S +
Natural Abilities: Shishi Mōdo,Kage Chōkyō-Shi,Jugoku Sokudo,Shifter Appearance - Achieved after 2,000 years of training. (Started to have his first training in the age of 200)
Akuma Kyōdo - Achieved after another 2,000 years of training. (Second training in the age of 2,200)
Bōru Shi - Achieved after 300 years of training. (Last training in the age of 4,200 and the current age is 4,500)
Unique Abilities: Crawling Flames - A Large carpet of flames would be summoned on the ground and goes straight foward.The range is 100 meters away and the damage is minor.
Darkness Sheild - Summons a darkness sheild around the user, protecting him from most of the attack.The darkness sheild cannot protect the user from cero, bala and any strong attacks.The darkness sheild only protects from weak attack like a normal slash etc.Its resistance is darkness and fire.It has no damage and range.It protects the user depends how much chaos energy he uses.If it use a large amount of chaos energy, it protects from cero for only 3 seconds.Bala for 5 seconds.If average amount, no protection from cero.Bala for 3 seconds.If small amount, only protect from weak attacks.
Inferno - Slams his fist down towards to the ground, summoning a large, fiery flame from the ground and burns the entire area within 100 meters wide.Deals a medium wound/damage.
Dark and Fire Blast - Charges a dark sphere on the left hand and a fireball on the right hand, then puts his hands together, combining the dark and the fire, then fire out a high concentrated blast, causing a massive explosion that was 100 meters wide.Dealing a fatal wound for those who made a full contact with it.Medium wound/damage for those who made a half contact with it and minor wound for those who made a small contact with the explosion.
Shishi Mōdo Appearance:
Shishi Mōdo Abilities: Fire Slash - It turns the great sword into a flame sword, then swings the flame sword downwards, with no range.Deals a fatal wound when it was hit on the shoulder, the fatal wound only works once per day.Minor wound on every part of the body except for the shoulder.Able to make the enemy on fire when it makes a single contact with it.
Dark Slash - It turns the great sword into a dark sword.Swings the dark sword upwards.Has no range.Deals a fatal wound if it was slashed on the chest but it has only 5 percent possibility to get a fatal wound on the chest.Minor wound on every part of the body except for the chest.
Satsugai Tsūru:
Hyazamarui has forged a fire sword after he learned the Shishi Modo.The fire sword was named as "Kaen", meaning of Fiery Blaze.
Mukō Jōtai Appearance:
Mukō Jōtai Ablities:
Dark and Fire Slash - This ability can be only used twice per day.The sword turns into a dark and fire sword, then swings it downwards first, releasing a dark element.Then swings upwards, releasing a fire element.Turns around to the right and swings the sword to the right, releasing both of the elements in a single slash.Deals a fatal wound even if it makes a small contact, half contact and full contact with it.
Hell Inferno - First, stabs the sword onto the ground, then summons a fiery flame and the ground would be on fire.Then summons a darkness and covers the entire area within 5 kilometers wide.The fiery flame would burn the entire area within 5 kilometers wide also.It deals a fatal wound within the entire area.Able to escape but must run out from the darkness.
[Mukō Jōtai is Unavailable until the tier has reached 1-3]
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Racial Skills
- Za Koa Manipulation: Advanced
- Spells/Summonings: Adept
- Jigoku Sokudo Adept
- Akuma Kyōdo: Beginner
General Skills
- Durability: Adept
- General Speed: Adept
- Strength: Advanced
- Weapon Skill: Beginner
"Though Every Fight Now and Then Does Make Life A Little More Interesting, Dont ya think?" - Kazuki Hikamori
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Re: Hyazamarui Kyazarui
Wed Jun 08, 2011 10:48 am
You've used that same true appearance for another your characters, a NPC of yours.
You do not get Muko jotai at the start.
Your powers!
Your Dark Coffin ablity is just a ripoff of Hado 90.... wont allow that since it is a VERY strong ablity..
Inferno. 500 metres wide!? Thats the size of 5 football pitches... no..
Dark and Fire Blast. 2 Kilometres. is 2000 metres. Thats the size of 200 FOOTBALL PITCHES!? WHAT!?
Fire Slash. Why does this only cause fatal wounds to the shoulder? Details man. Also, its godmod if it always does fatal
Dark Slash - What poision!? I've never heard of any poision while reading your powers.. and even then you need to be careful, and again, why is it only fatal to the chest? And the god mode thing I mentioned last is also there..
Al in all.. you need to fix this bud.
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Re: Hyazamarui Kyazarui
Wed Jun 08, 2011 11:26 am
The application is done and fixed.
Abilities - [Fixed]
Muko Jotai - [Will be kept until tier 1, fixed]
True Appearance - [Fixed]
All are fixed.
Abilities - [Fixed]
Muko Jotai - [Will be kept until tier 1, fixed]
True Appearance - [Fixed]
All are fixed.
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Re: Hyazamarui Kyazarui
Wed Jun 08, 2011 11:39 am
Soul Devourer. It'd be a instant kill anyway, if the soul is gone.. it seems like that cheek wound is just trying to cover the god mod. Change it... please.
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Re: Hyazamarui Kyazarui
Wed Jun 08, 2011 11:46 am
The application is done and fixed.
Soul Devourer - [Changed to darkness sheild, fixed]
All are fixed.
Soul Devourer - [Changed to darkness sheild, fixed]
All are fixed.
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Re: Hyazamarui Kyazarui
Wed Jun 08, 2011 12:27 pm
Finally approved.
Sorry for not tiering. 2-3+
Sorry for not tiering. 2-3+
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Re: Hyazamarui Kyazarui
Thu Jun 09, 2011 11:44 am
thanks for da tier. -_-'
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Mon Jun 27, 2011 6:39 am
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