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Tsubine
Tsubine
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Joined : 2010-07-09
Posts : 3923
Age : 30
Location : Gracemeria

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Thu Sep 26, 2024 6:29 pm
UPGRADE INCOMING

I. Upgrade Information

» Character Name: Kei Saionji
» Character Application: https://www.platinumhearts.net/t23552-spirit-class-6-kei-saionji

» Upgrade Details:
Personality: I've re-written Kei's personality to be more in-line with the character, as well as to try to flesh her out more. I felt she was perhaps a little too flat and went back to the drawing board.
Spoiler:

Zanpakutō Rewrite: Kei was one of my first apps on site after returning, and, frankly, I think the Zanpakutō is more reminiscent of what would be acceptable where I had been previously. It's been something I've been wanting to fix for a long time, but I didn't have an idea for it. I also think it's too developed of a Zanpakutō and does not fit with the character. In addition, with a change in how reflection/absorption Zanpakutō work, I've opted to re-write her Shikai into something more fitting for the character with solid room for growth.
Spoiler:

Hoho: Requesting a drop from Adept to Beginner. After getting a better understanding of the skill system from when I made her, I feel like Kei is a solid Beginner in Hoho instead of Adept.

Zanjutsu: Simply a rewrite based on her new Zanpakutō
Spoiler:

New Custom Kidō: This is more something I feel like fits within her capabilities and is something I'd just like to have codified rather than a floating ability that's not specified. It falls under her Shūshoku (modifiers) rather than being an entirely new Kidō.
Spoiler:
I. Supporting Material


» Summary: See above sections for details on each section.

» Threads: There's not really a thread for any of this; most of this is just reflection of the character almost two years later and realizing I had fallen short in many aspects as well as needing a new Zanpakutō that is more easily understood, falls better in line with the site, and fits the character better. If there is a thread that shows her skill in Kidō to provide an example as to why she'd be able to create something like the added custom Kidō, it would be First Division Ferocity. In this thread, Kei had a short spar with a Shikai and Shunkō-enhanced Igen where she briefly held her own against him with just Kidō while also explaining to him how to better utilize Kidō in combat.

I. Additional Information

Yes, she's still gay.

END OF UPGRADE


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ForgottenMercy
ForgottenMercy
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Joined : 2021-06-04
Posts : 4664

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Rhythm Adjustments (Kei Sidegrade) Empty Re: Rhythm Adjustments (Kei Sidegrade)

Sun Sep 29, 2024 7:44 pm
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Due to the extent of the Zanpakuto change in combination with the change to both her personality which is changing a bit of what she is as a character, I'm going to rule that this change will need to take the form of a reapplication. Please make a copy of her application with the changes and submit them for grading.
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