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Mon Mar 28, 2011 10:26 pm
[ D E M O N T E M P L A T E ]

+ B A S I C I N F O +

Name: Tindera
Age: He look's 15 but he is really 500
Gender:Male

Shifter Appearance:
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True Appearance:
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+ P E R S O N A L I T Y +

Personality: Tindera is very laid back not having a problem with most people or thing's. He could care less what every one else is doing unless it involve's him. And if it does involve him he still does not take serious. For life is meant to be fun a lived to the funniest way possible. Tindera can usually be found training. For he love to stay in shape. So that he can show people how buff he is. Since he is very full of him self some time's. But it does not stop people from liking him. Since he is very fun to be around. Since he loves to make people Laugh.

He love's playing joke's one people like by taking there close. When they are in the shower or gluing them to there chair's. But never anything to serous that might get some body hurt or mad. Even tho a lot of people do get mad at his joke's. But even with his laid back joking side. Tindera can get very serious when the time call's for it . Since he know's to never joke when life's are on the line.

But Tindera become completely crazy when he is creating or working on a Experiment. It become's that the only thing he can think of is finishing the experiment at all cost if the cost are reasonable. Some say that when he is doing a Experiment he become's a psycho path. Not caring about other's. And that when Experiment's do not go as planned he become's very down on him self. Taking all blame on him self


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+ B A C K G R O U N D +

History .
Birth
Tindera was born to Zanza and Kira. His Mom Kira was a fine doctor one of the best in the clan, and his Father Zanza was one of the clan's best Fighter's in the world. Being able to take 3 people of his own skill all at one time. Which was also the reason he was selected as the back up leader of the clan. Beining in charge of a the thing's that the leader could not handle if he got to busy or if he where to die and they had not yet found a new leader . They where a small familly of six. All Boy's Tindera was the youngest of the six. But he was a very interjetic kid alway's running around and playing. Pretending to be a great Ninja like his father and other people in his village with his friend's. And with all of his brother's on there way to being great Ninja there was a lot of presshure on him to follow after them. Since Most of them where busy he did not get to see of hang out with them a lot. So he spent most of his time with his slightly older brother Niashi or Sashi for short who had just finished the ninja exam's. So Sashi would spend most of his free time he had training Tindera in the way of the ninja.Like alway's staying in the shadow's and only fight when forced to. So that he would be ready for his time to start the Ninja Academy in a couple of month's


As Tindera started the ninja training he was one of many kid's he where starting the training. Of the 18 Kid's who started Tindera looked the most promosing the teacher's thought. Being that his family was none for being great ninja. And that every one could tell that he realy wanted this by the way that he acted. He tried his hardest with each and every thing he did . Never giving up no matter how many time's he failed. He was dedicated and being one of the few Graceling that had the true knowledge of the clan ability's. So Tindera 's instructor's tried to give him harder work then the rest of his class to test his ability's. That started to make some of the parent's made that they where giving Tindera special attention. So they had to stop giving him harder work then the rest of the class. So he started to get restliss at the Academy and just stoped paying attention and started disrutping the class with prank's and other usless thing's. This was something that the instructor's started to get angery at.

So they did the only thing they could they told Tindera's Parent's but this did not help. For Tindera saw know point in him just going to the Academy any more he could do all the thing's they where teaching him with know problem. So what what was the point of him siting there and learning what he could allready do. It made not point to him. But no one could get into Tindera's head that there where a lot of thing's he was not ready for. So they did the only thing they could think of they proved that he was wrong and that he did not know every thing he needid to know. So they got his older brother ninja in his age group. So he Tried to talk some since into his brother but he could not get into his brother's hard headed head. For his brother was mad at him for leaving him and going of to be a great ninja with out him. So as Tindera looked at Niashi . Black and white's eye's , and told him "why should i listen to you.

All you did was leave me here to rought after you told me we would alway's be side by side". As Tindera said this he started to build up anger. Then he lunged at Niashi with a Kuni in his hand Screaming "Die you back stabing trader"! So Niashi did the only thing he could do he fought back. As Tindera was inche's away from him Niashi pulled out a small knife. Then he ducked as Tinder thrusted the kuni at his throught and hit him right in the stomach with the knife. As Niashi did this Tindera would fall to the ground trimbling. As Niashi looked at his brother's trimbling body he could only think that he had took it to far. So he Picked up his brother and ran back to there house in the village. As Niashi entered the living room of there house holding his trembling brother's body. His Mother Kira went into a tremble of shock as she looked at her youngest son Tindera Trembling on his brother's shoulder's dripping blood . She then took a instint look at her other son Niashi and in very angry tone said " Niashi what have you done to my baby boy.

Niashi looking at his mom with a very worried face said " well i wint to talk some sinse into him but he attcked me so i stabbed him with a knife , but i may have over done it just a little bit. So you may have to heal him before he die's mother". With a very evil look Kira looked at her older son Naishi and said "Lay him down on the couch and get me some hot towl's and. ice cold water". "And Niashi i am not threw with you just remember that. With that Tindera's mother Kira started using the clan's secret style medicine on him to heal up the main part of the ingery. Then took a dry towl and put in the bucket of ice cold water and put it on tindera's forhead. To cool down his fever. As Niashi whached his mother healing his little brother. He could only think of what she would do to him when she was threw. Niashi new that his mother was crazy and come up with a harsh and tuff punishment. Like the time she left him and his older brother Zanji in the desert for lying to her.

But she did come back for them after two week's. But those two week's in the desert realy did change Niashi and his brother Zanji they learned how to diffind for them self and not take stuff for granted. But Niash did not want to leave his brother Tindera's side after he was the one to do this to him. It took Tindera's mother Kira a little longer then she had thought it would to heal Tindera but she did it. As Tindera Started to wake he could not remember anything after he lunged at his Brother Niashi. Then all Tindera could think of was that he had acadentlly killed his brother.

But then he heard his brother's voice and could see the bandage's around his Stomach. And he new that Niashi had done some thing to him. So as Tindera tried to get up from the bed his mother and brother walked in and told him not to strain the wound he was not completly dead yet. So he set back down and ad his mother and brother told him what had happened. And then Tindera knew that he was not ready. So he would start paying attention at the dojo again and train hard to beat Niashi One day. But Tindera could not get stronger on his own to beat his brother. Know matter how hard he tried. So one day when he was training a strange man showed up. This man Could tell That Tindera wanted power. So he walked over to him and said " I can give you what ever you want i can make you the most powerful person in the world. If you do a small favor for me in return for all that power".

As Tindera herd This man speak these word's he could only think of beating his brother. So before The man could finish he said yes. So the man gave him a pin and and a contract and told him to sign it. But with out even reading it Tindera signed. And next thing he New he was this man's guard. Forced to do what ever he was told. This was how Tindera got into the demon world. But during Tindera's time as Miko's guard Tindera found out that his family had been lying to him. Since one day while Miko was gone Tindera read some of his demon type book's and he found out that he became what is called a Fenrir demon. Witch was a dog demon. But he also found out that his mother and father where also demon's who had once been Guard's for the Demon King Touketsu. And when he was sealed up they went into hiding. And to hide Elendril and his brother's power's. They gave them Wolf Bane a type of Potion that suppressed the power's of Fenrir demon's. And when Tindera Confronted his parent's they told him Every thing of how they had to hide out to keep him and his Brother's safe. But Elendril was not happy about his parent's Secret's and Stormed off never to see them again. Going back to Miko and finishing off his Contract as a guard to him before becoming a full member of sin fall. But even after all that time with Miko Tindera new nothing of him. And this alway's bothered him. But he did not let it get to him that much.

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+ P O W E R S +

Natural Abilities: all of the Demon ability

Unique Abilities: Fire Ability: The pyrokinetic ability to create and control fire .Fire is the element of power, consisting of overpowering force tempered by the unflinching will to accomplish tasks and desires. The Fire ability use the internal body heat as a source to create fire. With this ability The user is able to shoot Fire stream's make fire Blade's ,Fire shield's and other thing's. He can also control the size and intensity of any nearby flames and can draw them in and manipulate them at wil. The Fire is 600 C
Enhanced speed : Because Tindera is a Fenrir demon witch is a type of WerWolf demon he has enhanced speed making him faster then average demon he level

Enhanced Strength : Fenrir demon also get inhanced strength making them stronger then average demon there level.

Razor Claw's and Fang's : Fenrir Demon's are able to grow razor sharp claw's that can cut threw still. Tindera has the ability to make the claw's grow at will. He also has sharp large canine fang's that are very sharp that can easily rip flesh and meet from Bone's

Advanced eye's and Ear's : Tindera has very good eye's and hearing. Because of his Fenrir demon trait's. He can see up to 5Meter's straight when he focus's his eye's. He can also see in the dark very well. His hearing is very well as well since he is able to hear a Pen Drop from 3Meter's away

Tail's : Tindera can make his tail's sprout out the back of his back he get's 1 tail in regular form and 3 in his Shishi Modo form and 5 in his Mukō Jōtai. Each tail is pure white and can also hold there element at the in of it like in the picture. But Tindera is able to move the tail's as tho they where arm's. The tail's are also able to to expand up to 15M They are also razor sharp. Note if a tail it cut off it will grow back in 1 post


Shishi Mōdo Appearance:
Spoiler:


Mukō Jōtai Appearance: He look's the same but now he will have all five tail's

Mukō Jōtai Abilities:
Note he also get's all of his other power's
Water Ability : Water controlling is one of the four elemental Bending Arts, the hydrokinetic ability to control water, as well as its many forms Water Temperature Manipulation: Tindera also possess the ability to alter the physical state of the water they manipulate between liquid, solid and gas at will. Water Pressure Manipulation: Tindera is also able to manipulate water pressure, allowing their techniques to grasp other objects or cutting through without simply parting around them. Since water is incompressible, it can be used as a semi-solid while being able to move and flow like a liquid. Water can be pressurized to such a level where it can slice through metal. Tindera can be mold water into a variety of shapes and can be used to deflect an attack, trap opponents in a viscous body, reshaped and propelled at attackers before they can recover, or solidified into a shield of ice. Tindera can also make Ice and water Disk and Ice and water bullet's.

Wind Ability : The aerokinetic ability to control and manipulate currents of air. By using circular, evasive movements, Tindera build's up massive momentum; this buildup of energy is released as massive power. It also allows for wind-based counter-attacks that knock opponents off-balance, mimicking the sudden directional shifts of air currents. Attacks vary from simple gusts of wind to miniature
tornadoes and cyclones, maintaining the circular theme. Even a simple movement can create an air gust air punches or air kicks are small, compressed formations of air that can be fired off the fists or feet of Tindera. Air Bomb A technique which creates a powerful, outward-moving air current in all directions around the bender. Tindera can also use a Air Spout Tindera is able to rotate and control the direction of the Air Spout enough to levitate im off the ground and remain in the air for as long as he wish's to or can maintain .


Tindera has a seal that let's him only use his Mukō Jōtai form for ten post then he must have a 3 post cool down before he can use his Shishi Mōdo and another 3 before he can use his Mukō Jōtai form again. Tindera was born with the Seal and all he know's is that is has something to do with Touketsu

Tindera is also weak against very High pitch sound's because of his advanced Hearing.

Tindera can also only use 2 element's for a post. He also can not use opposite element's in the same post. Tindera's Air Attack's can get up to Ninety mile's a Hour. His Fire attack's can get up to 120 mile's in his last form about 90 in his second form and 60 mile's in his first form. His earth attack's can move at 90 mile's an hour in his second and third form. His Plasma and Lava can move at 90 mile's in his second form and 120 in his 3rd form. Tindera's Earth attack's can block tack's up to one tier Higher then him. As his water attack's can only but out fire one tier lower then him. And his Fire lava and Plasma need water one tier higher then Tindera's to be put out

No
Air and Earth
Fire and Water
Lightning and Wind
Plasma and Water
Lava and Water

Tindera's power's are more described at these link's
Fire = http://avatar.wikia.com/wiki/Firebending
Water = http://avatar.wikia.com/wiki/Waterbending
Air = http://avatar.wikia.com/wiki/Airbending
Earth = http://avatar.wikia.com/wiki/Earthbending
Elendril is only a master of the Fire Element
Element power list
Fire
Plasma
Lava
Earth/Lightning
Air
Water



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+R P S A M P L E +

Role Play Sample:[link]http://narutodivinity.darkbb.com/t272-entering-the-village [/link] ( i am oblivion )

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+ S K I L L S H E E T +

(DO NOT FILL THESE OUT UNTIL TIER IS GIVEN!!!!)

Racial Skills
  • Za Koa Manipulation: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Spells/Summonings: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Jigoku Sokudo Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Akuma Kyōdo: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


General Skills
  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


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  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
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  • Powers are described reasonably enough [O]
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Comments/Notes:Trying to use multiple elements is a big responsibility, and thus, I see a multitude of problems with your powers.

Shishi Mōdo Abilities: [i]
He also get's power's from stage one
The Earth Ability:the geokinetic ability to manipulate earth and rock, in all its various forms. With the earth ability Tindera is able toevitating nearby pieces of earth and stone of numerous sizes. Also can forcibly sink his opponents into the ground, imprisoning them or even suffocating them in earth. he can cause Earthquakes/Fissures. And much More like shaping earth into item's and even create a wave of earth that they ride on and use as a form of transportation.

Explain the FULLEST EXTENT this ability can be used. Can he craft entire mountains? Can he unleash an enormous flurry of boulders? Can he utilize a wave of earth, a large earth spike, AND an earthquake all at once? Is the earthquake a meager tremor, or something that ca bring down an entire city (it better not...)? Please give MORE DETAIL.

Lava Ability : By putting his fire and Earth ability together Tindera get the ability of lave. He can do all the same the thing's with earth and fire with this one like Making a Lava wave that burn's everything that it touches. this ability is 1000 C

Can it really burn EVERYTHING it touches. That is a big no. Please explain what things it cannot burn, in terms of tier, endurance rank, element, etc. It cannot burn EVERYTHING it touches, especially if it is just at 1000 C. The description itself is vague. Can he make globes of lava? eject streams of lava? Exactly how much lava can be ejected? Enough to fill a volcano (it better not...)? How exactly does the magma move, like a ball thrown, or a slowly creeping floor? What's its range? EXPLAIN MORE

Plasma ability :Plasma ability: By Putting Lightning and Fire together Tindera get's Plasma. The user is capable of calling moderate [8-10 ft.] sized waves of Plasma at a time to their will as well an virtually manipulating it into shapes and objects of will. He can make A ball, the size of a typical baseball, of Plasma is formed into the user's hand. The ball is condensed through squeezing until it's the size is that of a normal tennis ball. It is then thrown or dropped wherever the user wishes. It will blow up within a couple of seconds of being released from the user's hand. The ball of condensed plasma will literally explode due to the already excited atoms being compressed and looking for a way to escape. The explosion releases a combination of flame and static with the magnitude of an actual frag grenade. He can also make it rain plasma and many other thing's. The Plasma is 1500 C

Lightning ability : Tindera has the ability to shoot lightning out of his hand and feet. at 500 thousand voltage. He can also shape the lightning into the shape of weapon's like a whip.

Explain the exact span of the whip. Can the whip be used PERMANENTLY? Can it only be used for a few posts, or for a single attack? Is the whip the ONLY thing he can make out of lightning? How great are the arcs of lightning? What is the damage of the lightening in relative terms to other tiers, people with higher endurance skills, and size? Again, DESCRIBE MORE

Mukō Jōtai Abilities:
Note he also get's all of his other power's
Water Ability : Water controlling is one of the four elemental Bending Arts, the hydrokinetic ability to control water, as well as its many forms Water Temperature Manipulation: Tindera also possess the ability to alter the physical state of the water they manipulate between liquid, solid and gas at will. Water Pressure Manipulation: Tindera is also able to manipulate water pressure, allowing their techniques to grasp other objects or cutting through without simply parting around them. Since water is incompressible, it can be used as a semi-solid while being able to move and flow like a liquid. Water can be pressurized to such a level where it can slice through metal. Tindera can be mold water into a variety of shapes and can be used to deflect an attack, trap opponents in a viscous body, reshaped and propelled at attackers before they can recover, or solidified into a shield of ice. Tindera can also make Ice and water Disk and Ice and water bullet's.

How strong is the water and ice? Can it trap a 0 tier in water? Can it pierce through the body of a tank with master in endurance (it better not.) How long can the water imprison someone. HOW MANY can it imprison? How much water and ice can be made at once? how many discs can be fired out? To the point where it's Touhou up in this joint? MO DESCRIPTION

Wind Ability : The aerokinetic ability to control and manipulate currents of air. By using circular, evasive movements, Tindera build's up massive momentum; this buildup of energy is released as massive power. It also allows for wind-based counter-attacks that knock opponents off-balance, mimicking the sudden directional shifts of air currents. Attacks vary from simple gusts of wind to miniature
tornadoes and cyclones, maintaining the circular theme. Even a simple movement can create an air gust air punches or air kicks are small, compressed formations of air that can be fired off the fists or feet of Tindera. Air Bomb A technique which creates a powerful, outward-moving air current in all directions around the bender. Tindera can also use a Air Spout Tindera is able to rotate and control the direction of the Air Spout enough to levitate im off the ground and remain in the air for as long as he wish's to or can maintain .
Exactly how big are these mini tornadoes and cyclones? How strong are they? How does it effect higher tiers or those with a high skill in strength. Can these techniques be used in unison? Can they be SPAMED LIKE HELL (better not)?
Tindera has a seal that let's him only use his Mukō Jōtai form for ten post then he must have a 3 post cool down before he can use his Shishi Mōdo and another 3 before he can use his Mukō Jōtai form again. Tindera was born with the Seal and all he know's is that is has something to do with Touketsu
(Even if this is for a limited time, he should not be able to span the hell out of his attacks. At least not enough to make it as if he was unleashing elemental danmaku.
Tindera is also weak against very High pitch sound's because of his advanced Hearing.

Tindera can also only use 2 element's for a post. He also can not use opposite element's in the same post. Tindera's Air Attack's can get up to Ninety mile's a Hour. His Fire attack's can get up to 120 mile's in his last form about 90 in his second form and 60 mile's in his first form. His earth attack's can move at 90 mile's an hour in his second and third form. His Plasma and Lava can move at 90 mile's in his second form and 120 in his 3rd form. Tindera's Earth attack's can block tack's up to one tier Higher then him. As his water attack's can only but out fire one tier lower then him. And his Fire lava and Plasma need water one tier higher then Tindera's to be put out

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General Skills
  • Durability: Advanced
  • General Speed: Advanced
  • Strength: Adept
  • Weapon Skill: Adept


Racial Skills
  • Za Koa: Adept
  • Spells/Summonings:Advanced
  • Jigoku Sokudo Advanced
  • Akuma Kyōdo: Adept
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Tue Oct 25, 2011 10:20 pm
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Tue Oct 25, 2011 10:24 pm
... This is not the current Tindera. Present one link here:

http://bleachplatinumhearts.forumotion.com/t3975-tindera-new-revamp#27392




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