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A Change of Perspective
Wed Nov 22, 2023 1:31 pm
UPGRADE INCOMING
I. Upgrade Information
» Character Name: Lukas Atherisch
» Upgrade Details:
Letzt Stil permissions removed HERE, further detail in additional info.
- Spoiler:
- » Linkshändig: Lukas' leiden hant is strictly limited to being utilized when granted authority by a superior Vandenreich officer. As part of these measures, his seal is split into two levels. A level one authorization functions at a marginally lower output of 750%, while a level two authorization functions at a marginally higher output of 1100%, in comparison to his peers. In addition, certain abilities in this state become unlocked, or otherwise augmented. A second level release causes some unpleasant side effects as it ends - a range of maladies like muscle fatigue, fevers, and rapid dehydration - although he has become more durable to them over time. If a second level release is utilized within too short of a period of time, these effects become far more persistent, and may pass from temporary to permanent.
» Ahnengeist - Umarung: The offensive abilities of Ahnengeist are greatly magnified, taking away much of the utility and shifting of the base form. Applying the ability to absorb reishi to its maximum, the movements of the blade unleash currents of reishi for steigen, also being capable of a form of Sklaverei, becoming far more advanced with the addition of his second level release - allowing him to dominate an additional spirit class higher. His speed with steigen and raw offensive output are also notably increased, in spite of the sheer dwarfing size of it.
» Besiegen Regen: A technique requiring the secondary level of release, Lukas places the augmented Ahnengeist in front of himself, grabbing it with both hands before thrusting it skywards. As he does, the blade diffuses in shape, forming into several dozen, if not hundreds, of smaller swords. In a bright diffusion of light, the blades are launched skywards, forming into enormous arrows as they turn and slam towards specific targets. The aiming for this is particularly tricky, requiring at least one post of uninterrupted focus before utilizing. The amount of reishi used in this attack temporarily lowers Lukas' spirit class by a rank after use, lasting for at least the remainder of a thread.TO
» Geteilte Dichtung: Formerly, Lukas' leiden hant was enchanted with a seal known as linkshandig, forcefully locking away his Letzt Stil to multiple levels of Vandenreich command.
Having the restriction of his Letzt Stil removed, the act of utilizing it has become much less divided, not existing in multiple stages. No longer facing the drawbacks exerted on him by the higher form of release, he can make adequate repeat use of his Letzt Stil, although more than once in a day is still a far ways off.
» Ahnengeist - Umarung: The offensive abilities of Ahnengeist are greatly magnified, taking away much of the utility and shifting of the base form. Applying the ability to absorb reishi to its maximum, the movements of the blade unleash currents of reishi for steigen, launching him and anyone caught in its range great distance with each movement. Also being capable of a form of Sklaverei, it enhances the output of the Letzt temporarily if successful. His speed with steigen and raw offensive output are also notably increased, in spite of the sheer dwarfing size of it.
» Besiegen Regen: A technique formerly requiring the secondary level of release, Lukas places the augmented Ahnengeist in front of himself, grabbing it with both hands before thrusting it skywards. As he does, the blade diffuses in shape, forming into several dozen smaller swords. In a bright diffusion of light, the blades are launched skywards, forming into large arrows as they turn and slam towards specific targets. The aiming for this is particularly tricky, requiring at least one post of uninterrupted line of sight before utilizing. The amount of reishi used in this attack temporarily lowers Lukas' spirit class by a rank after use, lasting for at least the remainder of a thread.
» Leiden Hant: A massive variant of the leiden hant, this wrapping is bound from Lukas' fingertips to his shoulder on his left arm. Bound with a seal, Linkshändig, he is bound from using his Letzt Stil without direct permission from a superior Vandereich officer. Conversely, it is an extraordinarily troublesome sanrei alternative, forcing Lukas' reishi absorption to become monstrous - almost exclusively with his left hand. Otherwise, his abilities to absorb reishi are somewhat limited, a near 70% of his ability to absorb reishi within the arm.TO
» Leiden Hant: A massive variant of the leiden hant, this wrapping is bound from Lukas' fingertips to his shoulder on his left arm. It is an extraordinarily troublesome sanrei alternative, forcing Lukas' reishi absorption to become monstrous - almost exclusively with his left hand. Otherwise, his abilities to absorb reishi are somewhat limited, a near 70% of his ability to absorb reishi within the arm.
Mental Deduction:
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- » Personality: Lukas has an incredibly simple view of the world, a specific shade of black or white to stick to any situation. There is no grey in Lukas' mind, and the mere suggestion of anything else is met with an empty stare. This mindset is accompanied by the required muscle for various sorts of mental gymnastics, making him a particularly vulnerable target for manipulation.
This is paired with an incredible sense of ego, and a rather aggressive grasp of reality. In short, he is violent by nature, and would escalate to it in near any situation - if he were capable. Currently, he struggles with keeping these tendencies in check, although his motives are often seen as dubious when pried on the matter. Some flavor of nihilism runs in his veins, coming out in spurts when particularly contemplative; rare as they might be.
Focused on a enigmatic goal, he offers little insight into his inner workings. His past actions speak loudly to his lack of regard for life, and some idea of quincy superiority that taints the edges of his actions. If not for a rather immature view of the way things worked, Lukas could be considered a professional, in his own line of work. In regards to any other part of his life, recklessTO
» Personality: Lukas has an incredibly simple view of the world, a specific shade of black or white to stick to any situation. There is no grey in Lukas' mind, and the mere suggestion of anything else is met with an empty stare. Having exhausted much of his means for mental gymnastics, deflection remains the only tool readily available for other viewpoints.
This is paired with an incredible sense of ego, and a rather aggressive grasp of reality, although it has been honed with his freedom. In short, he is violent by nature, although he has some measure of control over it. While he would prefer to end any conflict with blood, he has managed to restrain the immediate bloodlust. Some flavor of nihilism runs in his veins, coming out in spurts when particularly contemplative; rare as they might be.
Focused on a enigmatic goal, he offers little insight into his inner workings. His past actions speak loudly to his lack of regard for life, and some idea of quincy superiority that taints the edges of his actions. If not for these past actions, Lukas could be considered a professional, in his own line of work. In regards to any other part of his life, adjusting, but coming to terms with how the world accepts someone like him.
Having become progressively more socialized(1)(2), along with multiple(3) examples(4) of angling for his own benefit that are successful. Lukas has had a severe shift in perspective, particularly aided on by his near death experience(5). In the following recovery, he took steps at further mental growth(6), intending to leverage black-mail(7) against Cyrus. Rather than commit to the plan, he recognizes that he can realistically get most of what he wants with a fraction of the fuss(8). These adjustments in personality showing a newfound ability to plan ahead and then recognize flaws to adjust on the fly, while also possessing a better understanding of his spot in society as a whole.
General Speed:
Over the span of multiple combat encounters, Lukas has utilized his speed to its fullest(5)(9)(10)(11). Combined with training(12) and a far more casual usage in more socially oriented threads(7), I believe he has gained a sufficient understanding and flow of movement to break through to the next rank.
» Minor Corrections:
» Losgefunkt Geist: A simplistic application of Lukas'
» Geistertreffen: A technique born of Lukas' reishi absorption when channeled into his spirit weapon. When not manifested with, or charging reishi for Eindringlicher, the hollow core of Ahnengeist can be used to take in opposing energy attacks. While not an exact science, it should be assumed anyone a
» Supporting Material:
All threads annotated above:
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I. Hazard Rating Information
» Power: B
» Influence: F
» Resources: D
» In-Character Summary: Lukas has progressively gotten stronger since his last revision of Hazard Rating, and when compared to other existing characters his Power makes sense as a B, particularly with regaining free access to his Letzt Stil.
I. Additional Information
The change to his Letzt is not an upgrade aside from being able to be freely used. The other abilities have been slightly tweaked to correspond.
These are both upgrades I intend to put forth regardless, but if the material is found lacking for both at this time I am perfectly fine with stripping it down to either. I'm also unsure of whether or not to include some more threads illustrating his speed, as several of those have been mentioned in previous upgrade threads. I would really like to get this approved before we kick off the next act of Africatastrophe.
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Re: A Change of Perspective
Mon May 13, 2024 8:49 pm
[mod]In regards to this upgrade:
Limiter removal is approved.
Mental Deduction:
This is an excellent example of personal and emotional growth for the character, and certainly shows him becoming more social. However, none of this material seems relevant to his mental acuity entering above the realm of superhuman.
Lukas's ability to try and get what he wants (Which seems to be the crux of these examples)has certainly shown some growth, however this would only be relevent for a mental deduction upgrade of a much lower level. His current Mental deduction (Adept) is what we would expect of someone on the high end of human capability, going into superhuman on the top end of things, which at this point is not being demonstrated. On the subject of blackmail, this is not an exercise that necessitates mental finesse. Blackmail is a concept founded on happening upon, or digging for, information that would give you an unfair advantage and is predacated more on opportunity, luck, or having sources with which to attain said information. It is not an example of superhuman intellect, which is what staff would expect from an appeal for Advanced mental deduction. Given the presented material, this upgrade is denied.
General Speed:
The majority of this seems to fall under training, some combat, and socials. While this can qualify as a base for an intended upgrade into Elite in the future, It should be stressed that Elite is what Master used to be. It is the absolute peak of what one should be expected to be capable of as anyone other than an absolute freak or miracle. In none of these threads is his speed the main attraction at play. At no point does he find himself pushed or pressured specifically to be faster. Therefore, between the more general nature of these examples, as well as the lack of narrative pressure that seems at play in these threads, this is not sufficient to welcome Lukas into the absolute limits of Speed for spiritual beings. [/mod]
Limiter removal is approved.
Mental Deduction:
This is an excellent example of personal and emotional growth for the character, and certainly shows him becoming more social. However, none of this material seems relevant to his mental acuity entering above the realm of superhuman.
Lukas's ability to try and get what he wants (Which seems to be the crux of these examples)has certainly shown some growth, however this would only be relevent for a mental deduction upgrade of a much lower level. His current Mental deduction (Adept) is what we would expect of someone on the high end of human capability, going into superhuman on the top end of things, which at this point is not being demonstrated. On the subject of blackmail, this is not an exercise that necessitates mental finesse. Blackmail is a concept founded on happening upon, or digging for, information that would give you an unfair advantage and is predacated more on opportunity, luck, or having sources with which to attain said information. It is not an example of superhuman intellect, which is what staff would expect from an appeal for Advanced mental deduction. Given the presented material, this upgrade is denied.
General Speed:
The majority of this seems to fall under training, some combat, and socials. While this can qualify as a base for an intended upgrade into Elite in the future, It should be stressed that Elite is what Master used to be. It is the absolute peak of what one should be expected to be capable of as anyone other than an absolute freak or miracle. In none of these threads is his speed the main attraction at play. At no point does he find himself pushed or pressured specifically to be faster. Therefore, between the more general nature of these examples, as well as the lack of narrative pressure that seems at play in these threads, this is not sufficient to welcome Lukas into the absolute limits of Speed for spiritual beings. [/mod]
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