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Wed Nov 22, 2023 1:31 pm
UPGRADE INCOMING


I. Upgrade Information


» Character Name: Lukas Atherisch

» Upgrade Details:

Letzt Stil permissions removed HERE, further detail in additional info.
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Mental Deduction: Adept ⮕ Advanced

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Having become progressively more socialized(1)(2), along with multiple(3) examples(4) of angling for his own benefit that are successful. Lukas has had a severe shift in perspective, particularly aided on by his near death experience(5). In the following recovery, he took steps at further mental growth(6), intending to leverage black-mail(7) against Cyrus. Rather than commit to the plan, he recognizes that he can realistically get most of what he wants with a fraction of the fuss(8). These adjustments in personality showing a newfound ability to plan ahead and then recognize flaws to adjust on the fly, while also possessing a better understanding of his spot in society as a whole.


General Speed: Advanced ⮕ Elite

Over the span of multiple combat encounters, Lukas has utilized his speed to its fullest(5)(9)(10)(11). Combined with training(12) and a far more casual usage in more socially oriented threads(7), I believe he has gained a sufficient understanding and flow of movement to break through to the next rank.

» Minor Corrections:

» Losgefunkt Geist: A simplistic application of Lukas' spellcraft steigen. Drawing the spirit weapon back for a thrust, rather than focus a hirenyaku reishi on the sole of his feet, it is adhered to the blade's hollow core. Activating the technique, Lukas is pulled along by the blade at accelerated speeds, capable of further augmenting with his own natural speed rather than overwrite it. More taxing than his general hirenyaku steigen, and requiring more focus, this can only be used once per thread. Incompatible with any other technique that charges or manifests in its core, it's fairly easy to read.

» Geistertreffen: A technique born of Lukas' reishi absorption when channeled into his spirit weapon. When not manifested with, or charging reishi for Eindringlicher, the hollow core of Ahnengeist can be used to take in opposing energy attacks. While not an exact science, it should be assumed anyone a tier spirit class higher could create an attack too large to be taken into the housing, and shatter the spirit weapon in functionality until manifested again - assuming Lukas survives the damage. By opening the blade's core, and then closing it around an attack, the energy can be launched back in the form of a modified Eindringlicher; matching the output of the attack used for its source. This does not count towards the general use of Eindringlicher, being entirely reliant on timing and an outside source of reishi.

» Supporting Material:

All threads annotated above:
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I. Hazard Rating Information

» Power: B

» Influence: F

» Resources: D

» In-Character Summary: Lukas has progressively gotten stronger since his last revision of Hazard Rating, and when compared to other existing characters his Power makes sense as a B, particularly with regaining free access to his Letzt Stil.

I. Additional Information

The change to his Letzt is not an upgrade aside from being able to be freely used. The other abilities have been slightly tweaked to correspond.

These are both upgrades I intend to put forth regardless, but if the material is found lacking for both at this time I am perfectly fine with stripping it down to either. I'm also unsure of whether or not to include some more threads illustrating his speed, as several of those have been mentioned in previous upgrade threads. I would really like to get this approved before we kick off the next act of Africatastrophe.

END OF UPGRADE
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Mon May 13, 2024 8:49 pm
[mod]In regards to this upgrade:

Limiter removal is approved.

Mental Deduction:
This is an excellent example of personal and emotional growth for the character, and certainly shows him becoming more social. However, none of this material seems relevant to his mental acuity entering above the realm of superhuman.
Lukas's ability to try and get what he wants (Which seems to be the crux of these examples)has certainly shown some growth, however this would only be relevent for a mental deduction upgrade of a much lower level. His current Mental deduction (Adept) is what we would expect of someone on the high end of human capability, going into superhuman on the top end of things, which at this point is not being demonstrated. On the subject of blackmail, this is not an exercise that necessitates mental finesse. Blackmail is a concept founded on happening upon, or digging for, information that would give you an unfair advantage and is predacated more on opportunity, luck, or having sources with which to attain said information. It is not an example of superhuman intellect, which is what staff would expect from an appeal for Advanced mental deduction. Given the presented material, this upgrade is denied.

General Speed:
The majority of this seems to fall under training, some combat, and socials. While this can qualify as a base for an intended upgrade into Elite in the future, It should be stressed that Elite is what Master used to be. It is the absolute peak of what one should be expected to be capable of as anyone other than an absolute freak or miracle. In none of these threads is his speed the main attraction at play. At no point does he find himself pushed or pressured specifically to be faster. Therefore, between the more general nature of these examples, as well as the lack of narrative pressure that seems at play in these threads, this is not sufficient to welcome Lukas into the absolute limits of Speed for spiritual beings. [/mod]
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