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Tsunayaroshi Daitei
Wed May 05, 2021 11:30 pm
INFORMATION DOSSIER
Basic Information
» Name: Tsunayaroshi Daitei » Alias': Dai-tan » Age: 100-ish » Birthday: Sometime in the winter » Gender: Male » Race: Vizard » Affiliation: Shin'o Academy, Student; Tsunayashiro Family, Main Branch Bastard » Alignment: True Neutral » Marital Status: Single » Nationality: Seireitei » Religion: Agnostic » Sexuality: Omnisexual » Height: 5’9” » Weight: 175 lbs » Hair Colour: Dark Brown » Eye Colour: Brown |
Psychological Analysis
» Emotionally Confused: Nobody ever gave Daitei the manual on how to interact with people, or what he should feel at any given moment. So, like most people, he's had to learn the proper emotions for things and the right way to talk to people, though after a certain point he stopped really caring for the correcting of himself and chose to stay stunted in that regard. This side of him tends to be unsettling to others as he doesn't normally convey what he would be expected to feel in crucial moments.For example. when fighting someone he might be smiling or crying rather than being angry because either his fist hurts or he's thinking of something else entirely unrelated. At his father's funeral, he laughed and smiled through the entire thing because he chose to remember the good times rather than come to terms with the bad.
In conclusion, he's just... different when it comes to emotions.
» Lack of...: Anything, really. Unless Daitei himself is in some grave danger or someone he holds dear is in trouble, he generally doesn't care about a lot of things. When he was living in the slums with his mother, where crime-riddled the streets and he didn't know where his next meal would come from or if he even was going to be alive the next day when shit happened it just happened and that was it. When his friends died, sure he was sad but what was he going to do about it? What could he have done? He's just a slave to the whim of fate so wasting his energy and time caring about things that have happened or might happen or will happen isn't worth it.
He's pretty much numb to the whole life experience.
» Kind Hearted: Underneath his shell, Daitei harbors a spirit of goodwill in between the inner hollow and his layers of skin and flash. Joking aside, if he wasn't so socially awkward and distant from people he would probably be more popular among his peers for his good attitude and quirky nihilism. While he still puts himself above everything else, the state of others comes in the close second over material things and unnecessary wants.
» Affection Whore: Someone, please, just love this boy. He needs it, he wants it, unbeknownst to him, he craves it.
BACKGROUND INFORMATION
Despite being a child of nobility, Daitei's life has done nothing but suck ass.
To start off, he was born out of wedlock, with his father being part of the Tsunayaroshi's main branch and his mother hailing from the Kyujin family, a branch family of the Tsunayaroshi. In the defense of his father, he was not aware of Daitei's existence for many years. Anyways, the Kyujin were an odd family as their roles and traditions have taken a wild shift since their rise to nobility. In the beginning, they known for being a family that had some of the brightest minds of the Gotei, though they were also incredibly possessive and humble so rarely were the members in any notable positions of power. However, after the Karakura Incident, a bright mind had shifted their ways completely and made the Kyujin what they are today. Now, they are a small family of exclusive vizards that follow a weird sacrifice ritual where the parent's inner hollow is resealed into the child but kills the parent in the process. Following Daitei's ceremony, since his mother was particularly liked in the family due to his birth, Daitei was abandoned into the Rukongai shortly after.
He grew up in the Noroi district, 79th of the East Rukongai, and had to fend for himself. During this time he would grow incredibly close to his inner hollow as it had already grown attached to him, and as time went on they would only become closer. Hankon acted as a sort of mother figure for him, having a more direct form of communication and role in his life than inner hollows normally would. Along with this, he would befriend other children in Noroi and the occasional adult that would offer to take them in. Over the span of 10 years, he would gain and lose 5 parental figures and 7 of his closest friends, nearly destroy his ability to gain or hold meaningful relationships.
At 10 years old, his father would learn of his existence and adopt Daitei almost immediately. This would probably be the highlight of Daitei's life as his father would end up being the best thing to happen to him. Despite his experiences, despite his personality, Daitei's father was understanding and would always give him the time and room that he needed. Even when Daitei was being difficult, his father would never reject him. He made him feel wanted, made him feel like he mattered. For the next 20 years, Daitei was happy. During this time his father would casually teach him how to wield a sword, wishing for Daitei to follow his footsteps in the Gotei.
But then he died.
The good part of Daitei's life was over and he was thrown right back into despair. Because he didn't cry at his father's funeral, a man who was generally liked by his family, rumors began to spread about Daitei and his family members started to gravitate away from him. He basically became the black sheep of the Tsunayaroshi.
He didn't care though, being alone was something he was all too familiar with.
POWERS AND ABILITIES
TBA
EQUIPMENT & INVENTORY
TBA
» Zanpaktuo Spirit Name: Uh... it used to be Shishato. Special circumstances have since changed that fact. (It should be stated that he did not know this information.)
» Inner World: Daitei's inner world takes the appearance of a court built into the side of a mountain, with the balcony going just past the edge of the cliff. With the entire area circular, in the middle is another circular platform that acts as a fire pit. This fire pit can be lit at will, and when done so it becomes the home for a purple flame that illuminates the area. At the far end of the balcony is a throne on another raised platform that has a ramp going up to it. Behind the throne is a moon-like structure, along with the sky and the endless abyss just beyond the balcony.
Here's an album of pictures.
» Sealed Zanpakutō Appearance: In its sealed state, Hankon looks like a pretty normal asauchi except for a long, lightning-like black crack going down the middle of the blade.
» Inner Hollow Name Hankon (反魂, Anti Soul)
» Inner Hollow Description: Hankon takes the appearance of a small girl and her pet semi-disembodied wolf. Though two bodies, they share one soul. Before usurping Daitei's zanpakuto, Hankon wore a mask that looked like a painted porcelain mask, though since then she has a much more human appearance and lacks any sign on a hollow mask at the current moment. She has long blue hair that goes down to her waist, two curving horns at her temple, and sakura pink eyes. The final thing to note would be her size, as Hankon measures at 4'8" tall.
» Inner Hollow Personality: Despite being a regular hollow originally, Hankon is surprisingly human in her personality. She is mature, empathetic, and wise. Especially to Daitei, she's kind and has a motherly/soft side to her. She'd protect him with her life, but at points has shown to hold this bond incredibly high as she would become jealous incredibly easily lash out. When she lashes out, it tends to only affect Daitei negatively but she refuses to learn from her past mistakes, meaning that they would most likely and will happen again if he's not careful.
» Inner Hollow Powers:
» True Devour: Hankon was born with the ability to eat anything and everything that she sees fit, regardless of the rules of reality. Whatever that she is able to eat dies and is absorbed into her being, thus increasing her power. On a normal hollow, this would be a truly terrifying power, though Hankon is stuck inside Daitei and thus can't utilize it to its full potential. In theory, she could even devour the chains that keep her locked inside of Daitei, though she's grown somewhat fond of him and has decided against it.
» The Usurper: Not really an innate power of Hankon but more of something that she acquired in her time inside of Daitei. Long ago when he was on the cusp of figuring out his shikai, out of jealousy Hankon had used her ability to devour his spirit. This would nearly kill Daitei in the process, but due to the ability to absorb whatever she eats on top of the fact that there needed to be a spirit for his zanpakuto, through some weird soul shenanigans, Hankon had been designated as his zanpakuto's spirit while simultaneously being his inner hollow. This explains the weirdness of this application as where a spirit would be placed, it is now replaced with Hankon and her relevant information instead.
What this means for Daitei is that his releases all scale off of Hollow Control now instead of Zanjutsu.
» The Usurper: Not really an innate power of Hankon but more of something that she acquired in her time inside of Daitei. Long ago when he was on the cusp of figuring out his shikai, out of jealousy Hankon had used her ability to devour his spirit. This would nearly kill Daitei in the process, but due to the ability to absorb whatever she eats on top of the fact that there needed to be a spirit for his zanpakuto, through some weird soul shenanigans, Hankon had been designated as his zanpakuto's spirit while simultaneously being his inner hollow. This explains the weirdness of this application as where a spirit would be placed, it is now replaced with Hankon and her relevant information instead.
What this means for Daitei is that his releases all scale off of Hollow Control now instead of Zanjutsu.
» Hollow Mask Appearance: Due to special circumstances, he does not have a mask.
» Nai Shikai: Plot Locked
» Nai Bankai: Plot Locked
SKILL SHEETS & INFORMATION
General Skills
- Durability: Adept
- General Speed: Beginner
- Strength: Beginner
- Martial Skill: Adept
Will Skills
- Willpower/Determination: Advanced
- Mental Deduction: Beginner
- Focus: Beginner
Shinigami Skills
- Hakuda: Beginner
- Hoho: Beginner
- Kido: Beginner
- Zanjutsu: Untrained
Racial Skills
- Power Augmentation Advanced
- Cero: Untrained
- Mask Protection: Untrained
- Hollow Control: Beginner
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Re: Tsunayaroshi Daitei
Wed May 05, 2021 11:33 pm
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Re: Tsunayaroshi Daitei
Sun May 09, 2021 11:08 pm
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Age: "Doesn't remember" is not a no-go by itself, but the ambiguity of his current age, or even just a general idea of around how old he is now, in his history would make this an issue. Either give a bit more clarity in the history or at least a general idea in the basic information.
One in a Million: Without any actual mechanical explanation or makeup of this ability, at most I can only really take this ability as narrative flavouring. It's hard to actually adjust his rise in tier to be "faster" since it's totally dependent on your posting and progression. You could just make note ICly that "hey this kid's spiritual energy is getting larger pretty quickly huh", but that's about it.
True Devour: This description alone isn't gonna work. As is, it's an absolute with no description on any parametres. As flavour-text it's fine, but the ability is entirely unbalanced. Especially the part of gaining power by eating something, which is mostly what hollows normally do. In fact, PH has a specific rule about hollows not actually gaining tiers or anything just from eating other hollows. I have some suggestions you could use to make it approvable:
- Hankon can eat most anything, though the denser it is, either physically or spiritually, the longer it takes, like an acid. Something thick or dense enough can effectively be inedible unless she ate at it, like an acid or natural erosion for a really, really long time (btw hollows have an acidic touch racial built in as well). The amount she could eat through at any given moment you can decide, or you can tie it to be determined to some other system, like tier. Do write out an actual description if you go either way on that.
- Hankon might not gain permanent boosts to tier or anything, but her power can temporarily be boosted within a thread from eating something. You can come up with a system to determine how much temporary strength she gains correlating to how much she's eaten. If you need help with that feel free to DM me so we have documentation.
- Her being capable of eating the chains that bind her to Daitei is fine, that's entirely IC stuff.
Hollow Control: I don't think advanced is appropriate for Daitei, especially considering Hankon is fully capable of just going ape-shit on her own, and that it's just her own preference to "behave" as a hollow. Especially if she can go so far as to consume his zanpakuto spirit without him even being aware of the fact. Beginner Hollow Control, if not untrained, seems more fitting.
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Application Checklist
Age: "Doesn't remember" is not a no-go by itself, but the ambiguity of his current age, or even just a general idea of around how old he is now, in his history would make this an issue. Either give a bit more clarity in the history or at least a general idea in the basic information.
One in a Million: Without any actual mechanical explanation or makeup of this ability, at most I can only really take this ability as narrative flavouring. It's hard to actually adjust his rise in tier to be "faster" since it's totally dependent on your posting and progression. You could just make note ICly that "hey this kid's spiritual energy is getting larger pretty quickly huh", but that's about it.
- Spoiler:
- » One in a Million: Where most royal families have the added genetic bonus of a larger reiryoku pool, Daitei takes it to the next level. Even since he was a kid, he’s had some incredibly high levels of spiritual power that were disproportionate to his age in a positive way. As a child, he would be able to contest with an average rank-and-file shinigami in terms of the spiritual pool. As a teen, if the position was decided on pure spiritual power, he could become a seated member.
In short, he's like a large spiritual battery that is continually charging. While not incredibly high at the moment, being somewhat stunted since his teenage years, there's the potential for a growth spurt of sort in the near future.
(OOC tl;dr he gains tier faster and has a large spiritual pool due to genetics)
True Devour: This description alone isn't gonna work. As is, it's an absolute with no description on any parametres. As flavour-text it's fine, but the ability is entirely unbalanced. Especially the part of gaining power by eating something, which is mostly what hollows normally do. In fact, PH has a specific rule about hollows not actually gaining tiers or anything just from eating other hollows. I have some suggestions you could use to make it approvable:
- Hankon can eat most anything, though the denser it is, either physically or spiritually, the longer it takes, like an acid. Something thick or dense enough can effectively be inedible unless she ate at it, like an acid or natural erosion for a really, really long time (btw hollows have an acidic touch racial built in as well). The amount she could eat through at any given moment you can decide, or you can tie it to be determined to some other system, like tier. Do write out an actual description if you go either way on that.
- Hankon might not gain permanent boosts to tier or anything, but her power can temporarily be boosted within a thread from eating something. You can come up with a system to determine how much temporary strength she gains correlating to how much she's eaten. If you need help with that feel free to DM me so we have documentation.
- Her being capable of eating the chains that bind her to Daitei is fine, that's entirely IC stuff.
- Spoiler:
- » True Devour: Hankon was born with the ability to eat anything and everything that she sees fit, regardless of the rules of reality. Whatever that she is able to eat dies and is absorbed into her being, thus increasing her power. On a normal hollow, this would be a truly terrifying power, though Hankon is stuck inside Daitei and thus can't utilize it to its full potential. In theory, she could even devour the chains that keep her locked inside of Daitei, though she's grown somewhat fond of him and has decided against it.
Hollow Control: I don't think advanced is appropriate for Daitei, especially considering Hankon is fully capable of just going ape-shit on her own, and that it's just her own preference to "behave" as a hollow. Especially if she can go so far as to consume his zanpakuto spirit without him even being aware of the fact. Beginner Hollow Control, if not untrained, seems more fitting.
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Re: Tsunayaroshi Daitei
Thu Sep 09, 2021 3:25 pm
[adm]Moving to WIP. When Slayer makes an update post, it can be moved to unchecked or pending character apps. [/adm]
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Re: Tsunayaroshi Daitei
Sun Mar 06, 2022 11:12 am
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