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Henrex
Henrex
Tor'uk
Joined : 2016-01-20
Posts : 5100
Age : 24

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Sun May 02, 2021 4:35 pm
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» Item Name: Sharkskin Rail
» Item Type: Vastime Nation

» Used For: Offense

» Item Description:


The Sharkskin Rail is rather simple in appearance. Taking the appearance of a standard gun, with a rather drab paint job of grey and white, along with a slightly elongated barrel, Sharkskin is quite the simple item. The gun fires off standard-sized Vastimian Ammunition, although with a bit of a twist on the effects. While the usual Vastimian Ammo is commonly associated with piercing physical defenses, Sharkskin's ammo is meant to pierce spiritual defenses. This is something that can piece low-level (Adept) defenses rather easy, as the energy and metal that is compressed to form the ammo are from Henrex himself. But, nevertheless, this has its fair share of downsides. While this has special properties, as Henrex designed this to be a variant of the Hellhammer -- the standard sidearm for Vastimian soldiers -- it shares many of its drawbacks with the original. Hosting only seven rounds before taking a post to reload, and having a rather slow firing speed in general leaves it as a pretty situational item.

» Obtained From: Henrex created this item himself, with resources from Vastime

» Notes: N/A


Last edited by Henrex on Sat May 08, 2021 2:13 pm; edited 1 time in total
Shizuo
Shizuo
Gremlin
Joined : 2011-09-01
Posts : 2813
Age : 27
Location : Google Maps

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Sharkskin Rail [Vastime Equipment] [2021 Revamp Collection] Left_bar_bleue59000/99999Sharkskin Rail [Vastime Equipment] [2021 Revamp Collection] Empty_bar_bleue  (59000/99999)
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Sat May 08, 2021 1:49 pm
[mod]please better define what low level defense entails, as it is right now that is too vague a description. You also state that this gun has a fair share of downsides, but don’t actually list them here in the equipment. Wether or not this shares similarities with another equipment, please add in the drawbacks / downsides of the equipment here so that they are accessible to staff to read while grading. Finally I’d like you to define the reload speed of the gun, since as it stands you could technically reload/fire it infinitely each post.

In short you have to fix the following: add description on what low level defense actually means. Add in downsides and drawbacks of the weapon. Define how long it takes to reload the gun. [/mod]


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Henrex
Henrex
Tor'uk
Joined : 2016-01-20
Posts : 5100
Age : 24

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Sat May 08, 2021 2:15 pm
I've made the clarification to "low-level" defense and reload time. But, adding in other drawbacks is complicated because the only "drawback" that was listed in the Hellhammer's description was that it has seven rounds, so I added in a lower firing speed to balance it out and make it stand out as a weapon. Putting in any more would be challenging, and...it's a gun.
Slayer
Slayer
Thicc Boi
Joined : 2016-10-29
Posts : 738
Age : 22
Location : The Dance Floor

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Sharkskin Rail [Vastime Equipment] [2021 Revamp Collection] Left_bar_bleue7900/999999Sharkskin Rail [Vastime Equipment] [2021 Revamp Collection] Empty_bar_bleue  (7900/999999)
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Thu Jun 17, 2021 11:09 am
[mod]Approved.[/mod]


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