Kakushi Misuto, the Hidden Mist [Approved 2-1]

Thu Mar 03, 2011 10:39 pm

+ B A S I C I N F O +

Name:
Kakushi misuto
Age: looks 17;
is really 255
Gender: Male
Shifter Appearance: Kakushi Misuto, the Hidden Mist [Approved 2-1] Laxus

Black eyes, a curved face and a quirky smile constantly on his face. Wears a red fleece jacket with the words Mist on the back and jeans. Weighs 150 pounds and is 6 feet tall. Scars are visible on his hands and on the back of his neck. He also wears a golden wristband on his right hand and is rarely seen without it.

True Appearance: One half of his face turns to fire and the other to ice while still maintaining its shape. Grows to 10 feet and his jacket merges with his body, which causes his upper body to ignite into great flames. Meanwhile his legs grow and freeze, with a strong 4 toed appendege on the end. His eyes become alternate to the sides of his face. His hair becomes midnight black and he grows one horn in the back of his head. His hands become bronze with sharp claws and he radiates anticipation for battle.

+ P E R S O N A L I T Y +

Personality: Tends to be very analytical and logical about a situation. If he sees a problem, he does his best to solve it while using it to help him at the same time. He is an amateur inventor and likes to think about different things that could be improved in the modern world. This often leads to him making worthless sketches that drain his little confidence, but he can't seem to break the habit.

As a person, he tends to stick to himself or very close friends. He is typically shy but when enraged will show no mercy until his goals have been accomplished. When he meets new people he is unsure of how to react and this is sometimes seen as a weakness. He tries to seem unthreating at most times as he is often seen with his shoulders hunched. When he is despaired he goes to be by himself and refuses all offers of help from those around him. He also finds it difficult to communicate his feelings with others and this can lead to misunderstanding and Kakushi feeling out of touch with the world. Overall, he prefers to work alone and tries not to interact with other people but always seeming to wish for company.
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+ B A C K G R O U N D +

History: Was a low class demon who was looked down upon in Sin Fall. He left to Earth and trained there against weaker humans and others he could defeat easily while learning more about his demon powers and to study the marvels created by humans. He began to become very lonely after some time and searched for things on Earth to do that could help ease his pain and curiosty of the world around him. Evantually returned to Sin Fall, much stronger than before, to try and create something to outclass anything built before or after.

When he returned, he continued to be ridiculed by the same demons as before. This time, however, Kakushi simply blew them away, earning the respects of the demons around him. This encouraged him to try and move forward in the ranks of Sin Fall. He decided to return to Earth to train more and study more.

This time, however, he was attacked by a band of vengeful, and spirtually aware, humans who wanted to kill him in retalition for their dead comrades. In the ensuing battle, Kakushi is aided by some demons that came with him to learn how to improve. Together, they managed to push back the humans and survive. He studied and learned much more than before, and aided the other demons in their training.

+ P O W E R S +

Natural Abilities: Can shift appearancances to human or to his demon form, as needed.
Has the Demon Flash Step.
Has Akuma Kyōdo
Unique Abilities:
Flash Freeze: fires two streams of blue flames that fan out for a reach of 20 feet that reaches 5 feet per second and a width of 10 feet to begin with. It can be extended to 70 feet by 50 feet with it extending at 10 feet per second.
Freeze Flash: Encases one target enemy in a shell of ice that is small but creeps very slowly towards the enemy, and it can be broke by any kind of fire, electric, or explosive attack. It can also be destroyed by light, so it sticks to the shadows. It burns the enemy for 5 seconds with an encasement of 15 feet that can be broken. It can be increased to 8 seconds and an encasement of 30 feet that is diffucult to break.
Shishi Mōdo Appearance: Sheds his skin and becomes light on his upper body and darkness on his legs. He sprouts a wing of fire on his left and a wing of ice on his left side. On the right side of his face he is covered in darkness, and the left side has light.
Shishi Mōdo Abilities: Darkness Blast: Fires a beam of dark energy much like a Cero for 100 feet in front of him 15 feet wide. Takes 10 seconds to charge
Light Flare: Blinds the enemy from seeing Kakushi for 10 seconds if the enemy's eyes are open. Requires 3 seconds to charge.

Satsugai Tsūru: Kakushi uses a chain whip with a small scythe attached at the hilt that can transform into a spiked club or a long scythe.
Mukō Jōtai Appearance: Grows another head that is flame orange while his changes to lime green. The orange head is insane and only cares about destruction. The green head becomes purely and utterly logical. When he goes into Mukō Jōtai one head randomly assumes control of the body.
Mukō Jōtai Ablities:
Orange Head: Fire Blast: self explanatory for 20 feet and a radius of 7 feet that extends by 2 ft. per second.
Darkness Eye: changes all eyes to midnight black and legs grow to 4x their size for 10 seconds and speed increases by 1.5x

Green Head: Freeze blast: just like fire blast, but freezes for 5 seconds.
Analytical Eye: All eyes glow and upper body shines so bright the enemy is blinded for 2 seconds. Kakushi identifies the name of 1 weakness of the enemy, if they are same tier or lower.

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+R P S A M P L E +

Role Play Sample: Kakushi was feeling divided and impatient as he tapped his foot waiting at the library. Why do mortals take so long to decide on material? He fumed hotly as he finally made his way to an open computer and sat down. What should I research today? He wondered, in his element clicking away at the keyboard. Kakushi knew he always felt at home at a keyboard, a marvelous piece of technology if he had ever seen one.

Someone walks in from behind him and Kakushi barely glances back at the new comer as he sits in the chair right next to Kakushi. He has a black mustache and a black suit, looking very businees like. His pants, however, are white jeans! He is carrying an important looking suitcase with a keyboard on it. Kakushi finds himself wondering what it does. This man appears to be critacally examining the immediate area and, with a sigh, unexpectly speaks to Kakushi.

"Why do they take so long?" the man asks, sounding irratated as he gazes around the room. Kakushi is stunned. Was the man reading his thoughts? That can't be good. He thought to himself as he considered the man's words.

"What do you mean?" Kakushi replies, feeling startled and beginning to tap the desk in front of him with his nails.
"You know, all these slow mortals." the man smiles, looking for a second like a cat thats found his prey. Kakushi is worried to find out what he's got himself into this time...
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+ S K I L L S H E E T +

(DO NOT FILL THESE OUT UNTIL TIER IS GIVEN!!!!)

Racial Skills

Za Koa Manipulation: Advanced
Spells/Summonings: Adept
Jigoku Sokudo Adept
Akuma Kyōdo: Adept

General Skills

Durability: Adept
General Speed: Advanced
Strength: Adept
Weapon Skill: Adept

Fri Mar 04, 2011 4:27 am

Application Checklist

Name [x]
Appropriate Age [x]
Gender [x]
Appearance Present [x]
Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [O]
Appearance is Not Claimed [-]
10 sentences for personality [O]
History is of appropriate length [O]
Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [O]
Powers are described reasonably enough [O]
Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
Skills are not filled in [X]
RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
RP Sample is 10 sentences [O]

Comments/Notes:
Oh boy...where to begin. Alright, good attempt but there are some major problems with this app. The first, and largest one, is that you posted it in the accepted profiles section. I'll give the benefit of the doubt and say it was a mistake; it should have been posted here, the Unchecked Applications Board. Now that that's out of the way;

Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible
You shifter appearance could use more description. As for your true appearance, its a little short.

10 sentences for personality
Simple enough; this is a little short as well.

History is of appropriate length
Again, lacking length.

Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered
Powers are described reasonably enough
Basically, most of your powers are well described, such as how long it takes the flames to extend or anything like that. In addition, Freeze Flash and Revenge of the Sugiura have no visible way to be avoided or canceled out.

RP Sample is 10 sentences
Again, short on the length. Didn't get much of a feel for your char either to be honest.

All of this means that for the moment, I have to deny this app until things are brought up to snuff. If you've got questions, hop into the chat box and ask; people won't usually bite your head off in the first 5 seconds 0_-

Tier:
To be determined after powers are fixed.

Fri Mar 04, 2011 3:40 pm

Moving to WIP until completed/ Edited.

Thu Mar 10, 2011 5:29 pm

I've reviewed this again and, after checking with some other staff and checking up on Sugiura history, it wouldn't make sense for a Sugiura to become a demon.

Also, the ability that locked down guardian beasts is too strong an ability in general and thus cannot be approved.

Fri Apr 01, 2011 3:12 pm

i've changed his history and removed blocker move. I believe he is ready for review.

Mon Apr 04, 2011 4:41 am

Application Checklist

Name [x]
Appropriate Age [x]
Gender [x]
Appearance Present [x]
Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [x]
Appearance is Not Claimed [x]
10 sentences for personality [x]
History is of appropriate length [x]
Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [x]
Powers are described reasonably enough [x]
Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [x]
Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[x]
RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [x]
RP Sample is 10 sentences [x]

Comments/Notes:
Everything seems in order now; approved as long as no one else finds problems with it.

Tier:
3-1

Mon Apr 04, 2011 11:53 am

You forgot to move the thread, Genpaku.

Wed Mar 14, 2012 6:03 pm

Bumped to 2-1

Tue Apr 07, 2015 8:35 pm

This is being moved to archives.

Thank you very much for your service over the years.

If you are ever needed again, you shall be re-summoned once more and moved back to Approved Applications.

Until then, sleep well, my dear friend. Thank you for the good times and for having put up with me for so very, very long.

Side note: Why was he still in Approved Demons? He got eaten a long, long time ago... xD

But... goodnight, my first character. The Graveyard in my mind is where you shall eternally reside. And in Schrödinger's belly.

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