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Tips and Pointers [Private/Makoto]

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Thu Jan 30, 2020 4:54 am

LIANA UNOHANA

"It was splendid. A much better display than someone of your skill level should be capable of, well done Arima-san. There are places to improve upon, of course, but you've definitely exceeded your peers here. If I had to say, I believe the potency in the actual attack could be worked on. In terms of chanting, I think you'd be capable of cutting some parts out to shorten the chant without losing power, though that comes down more to experimenting with the spell yourself."

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Thu Jan 30, 2020 5:30 am
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MAKOTO | VOICE OF THE SWORD

Her lips parted in a pleased grin when she heard the compliments and criticisms from the Captain of the Kido Division no less.

"The potency huh? I appreciate that captain. I really do."

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Thu Jan 30, 2020 5:58 pm

LIANA UNOHANA

"I'm glad I could help. Is there anything else you'd like to ask about? Do you need any other types of advice, or a different demonstration, perhaps? Or even anything beyond kidou courses?"

Of course, Liana was referring to any of the other fundamentals, but the woman was open to demonstrating and advising on any number of topics.

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MAKOTO | VOICE OF THE SWORD

When prompted about anything else Makoto looked at her thoughtfully. There probably was more, no there definitely was more she wanted to ask but decided against it. If she tried to improve too many things at once it would take away time and growth from the others. One and then the other until everything was perfected.

"Not right now Captain. If it would be possible though I would appreciate having the opportunity to study under you more once I have taken your tips and attempted to successfully implement them and then move onto something else."

Assuming that was it she gave a bow and departed to resume her duties.

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