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Magi Lenz [Approved, Shinigami; 3-3++ (3-5+ sealed)] [Hazard Rating D]
Sun Jul 07, 2019 10:38 pm
» Name: Magalene "Magi" Lenz
» Alias:
» Age: 132 [Appears 10]
» Gender: Female
» Association: Gotei United, Seventh Division
» Height: 124cm
» Weight: 36kg
» Appearance Image:
A petite sphere of flames that burns with the heat of a thousand suns. A candle would be unnoticed in her presence as she ensures the attention of the room always falls into her hands. Loud and noisy, and full of a juvenile decree, Magi holds a claim to the "Loud Mouth" of the Gotei. A title that is well suited for a being that has no volume down button and can only be muted by direct order. In which, you would find, that she obeys rather well as long as it is justified. For if an unjustified order brazened her lobes, she would waste no time in getting into the face of the issuer.
An ankle biter, amongst other things, she can burn those that get to close to her nerves with her silver tongue, foul words often spewing from her. Whether it be in anger or joy, she has grown to love the click of particular vulgarities. Though, the truth behind it all is the insecurity of her tiny frame. She feels a need to fill the void with things that "adults do" to justify her age. Another thing that seems to set her off is unavoidable flat-chested jokes. While she doesn't dress in a way that hides her features, the lack of them tends to be a common joke among fresh crowds. Her desire to be in the middle of everything often leads to whispers among those she is around, but her keen ears pick up the words and set her off on a rampage.
Though, this fierce storm that seems to beckon toward trouble can often time lead to friendship as she is somewhat caring and giving for most. She often will lend words of kindness to those that need it, even if they aren't asked for. It's all done in a selfish act; however, as she only does it because it makes her feel warm inside to see others smile, but where's the harm in that?
When it comes to combat, whether it be a friendly training session or a heated battle against foes, her resolute is steel and claims herself to be the "tip of the spear." Meaning, she is the pinnacle of battle resolve in her little world. However, some could agree to this as she is an unyielding foe to go against, her energy seems endless as though she was a child among a world of adults.
Being a child in mind and body, her frontal lobe has yet to develop at the same rate as a human would naturally. Thus, she is prone to making rash decisions and not thinking of the consequences and believes that her word is absolute and should not be argued or debated. This brings a question to her loyalties, whether they are formidable or not, but she has always let her actions be the frontrunner to these debacles.
Another puerile asset that seems to control her persona is her lack of patience. If it were to be put to a number between one and ten, it would fall somewhere just under one. If it exists at all, there is an outstanding line that she will tolerate, beyond that she won't stop complaining or speaking up about it. She's not a fan of things not going her way, and it is extremely apparent.
Born in the Rukon District 44 to two spirits that found love after death. Magi had always been a little ball of joy for the two. She was full of glee and laughter and always brightened the lives of everyone in the district. She could remember walking through the streets at the ripe age of five, her hand enclosed in her parents'. Their conversation was always full of a delightful pleasure that spread out to others that they passed. The couple was always the recipients of random free items from the other folks of the town.
Her mother and father owned a small pottery stand that was frequently attacked by bandits and always found themselves struggling to make ends meet. The parents didn't mind. No, they smiled through the pain as though it had never even existed. They were always claiming that they needed it more than them. Magi could see through the lies. She could see her family continuously knocked down a notch, financially. The portions of food that they consumed at each meal dwindling with each breach in their home business. Magi couldn't understand how the two took the beatings, but it was something that a young girl could ever fathom to understand. As it was just life, the couple had been through the trials and tribulations of life upon Earth and wished for things to be different within their second chance. They had Magi, after all, and that was all they could ever ask for. A cold hatred began to stew within Magi, one for those that committed crimes to survive when the realm they lived in thrived with opportunities similar to the ones her parents had spent their valuable time creating.
Thus, in the moments she was to be playing with the neighborhood kids, she would rally them all together to learn how to fight. She wanted to be ready for the next time the thugs made their way into her family's business again. The kids practiced swinging swords in back alleys using sticks that they had hand shaved to look like the black-clad warriors that protected the realm. With each day, their swings became more and more precise. She had her eyes set upon the katana that decorated their mantle in the tightknit abode. The only time she would find herself able to get her hands on it would be at night. She would make out in the late night, escaping her parent's night cuddles and taking the blade outside become practiced with a real edge. This was about the time that she began to notice a change in her bodily functions. A spiritual force was taking over her being and running rampant as she lost control of her emotions during her training session, planning her defense in her mind that was thriving with anger. While the energy was wild, she was able to make better use of her body naturally. The odd occurrence that took place would raise a brow from those that were spiritually aware of different power levels, and she would be exposed in her efforts to gain strength.
As her parents were made aware of her actions, they couldn't help but cry with joy that their baby wanted to protect them. Her father took the opportunity and ran with it, despite his wife not wanting to put their daughter in harm's way. Though the smile they hid behind was just an act. The father had known how to use the weapon that she had been using, as he sought refuge within the Rukon Districts to escape the battlefield. His power had grown dormant, but he didn't wish for all that he had to be taken from him because he held that sword that symbolized his duty to the Gotei. Recognizing the girl as a reincarnation of himself, he aided her in her ability with the sword. He struggled to try and help her manage her unruly spiritual pressure. Promising to take matters into his own hands if they were ever put in danger again, he wished to send her to the Shinigami Academy. Her mother grew furious with her husband's decision, lashing out in a way that Magi had never seen before. She could tell how important she was to her mother.
"Don't worry. I'll come back. Just like Pa." She spoke with reassurance. She seemed to understand the pain that her mother felt as Magi, too, could feel the pain of being separated with them. As her father had explained to her, she could do the many realms a great justice with the power that she held within her. The words were able to give her mother the strength to let go. Thus, Magi and her few friends joined the Shino Academy.
The years that the, now, teenagers would spend in the Academy would flourish them into exceptional members of the Gotei. Though Magi always seemed to stand out due to her extravagant spiritual power, she would learn what it was to be the center of attention all the time. She would grow kind to the feeling. The truth of her strength was that she held a surplus of spiritual pressure for the frame that she provided. In return, it stunted her growth. Her body attempted to nourish the spiritual pressure rather than the physical appearance of her body. Thus, her mind and body would remain like a young child to this day.
Her skill in Zanjutsu and Hakuda were the leading factors in her selection for graduation. Her Hoho and Kido being lackluster due to her inability to control her energy. She would be placed in the Thirteenth Division of the Gotei in an unseated role until she learned to better harness her power. As a member of the Thirteenth Division, she would be given the city of Miami, Florida within the United States to protect from the unworldly villains that plagued the lands. Though, it wouldn't last long as her power seemed to devastate the infrastructure of the city more than the Hollows did. When she would return after a few years on Earth, she would be introduced to a technological device that she could place over her eye. This device was a black hole of sorts that absorbed the excess spiritual energy that poured from her body nonstop. Though, it would take her body a while to cope with the side effects of the missing energy that flowed from her frame.
In time her body would gain its prior strength once more, and she would return to the world of the living. This time she would be stationed within New York City the Demon Capital of Earth. She would come to witness many battles among supers that she couldn't hold a candle to. Though, in these battles, Demon below her power threshold and slightly above it would make themselves present. To which she would struggle to tranquilize. Though the deed would be accomplished, she saw Demons to be formidable foes that she could lean on for growth. Their numbers seemed to be neverending. So Magi would find herself a busy girl during the twenty years she spent within New York. She was constantly waging war with the Demons and Hollows, though she came to find that New York was a lost cause and would make reports to the Gotei.
In an all-out effort to try and rid the land of the Demons and help the human race prevail within the city, the Thirteenth Division would send famous fighters to put a dent in their numbers. The Gotei squad would soon find themselves way in over their heads as the Demons didn't seise or let up in the least. The operation was a suicide mission, and many abandoned their posts, not wishing to lose their lives in such a way. It wasn't until Mana Asthavon showed face sending a few of their troops to the void of existence that they would be permitted to retreat. The numbers they lost were detrimental, but Magi's experience with the Demon's in her time on patrol gave her the upper hand in surviving and helping those within her unit survive. Though the mission was a failure, she would be commended on her efforts and given the 6th seat. The Gotei was putting New York on the back burner for the time being, withdrawing their patrol units from Demon territory.
With her new position came new responsibilities. Those that she wasn't too entirely interested in, which resulted in a request to move herself to the Eleventh Division so that all she had to worry about was being strong. With little to no friction in the decision, save for the pleas to not leave the Thirteenth Division after all they had been through, she was transferred to the Eleventh Division. Here, her skill in power was frequently put to the test. The members of the Division, all kind to the act of battle, continually looking for a partner to train with. She would get to put her skill to the test; in doing so, she would be aided with the retrieval of her Zanpakuto's name. As she came to know Akuhebi, she would find that his powers fit perfect for her overflow of spiritual pressure. While the beast didn't enjoy being the partner to a little girl and she always bad mouthed him when he would say such, the two were a formidable pairing.
Time carrying on in its natural course, Magi would find herself going on many ventures that put her in tough situations and against admirable opponents. She would struggle on some and complete others with ease. She'd use the trials and tribulations of life to sharpen her will and her skill with a blade. The action that the members of the Eleventh Division got to participate in lacked in comparison to that of being stationed within the World of the Living. Not to mention, her time in the Seireitei became a lonely experience for her as her development flourish beyond that of the other members. The higher seats were not having time for duels against her. They all sought out the Captain to test their blade and didn't take Magi seriously.
When the Gotei would shift to the Gotei United, bringing the Divisions to seven from thirteen. She would have herself in the newly renovated Thirteenth Division, now the Seventh Division that attended to Earth affairs. With a new climax of her power in arm's reach, she wished to fulfill her duties no matter what they were so that she could get that taste of battle as frequently as she once did.
» Name: Eyepatch Power Seal v2(Bunny Edition)
» Description: Similar to the eyepatch that Zaraki Kenpachi wears to limit his power to fight on par with his foes in essence. However, it works differently as technology has improved over time. With the new and improved version of the Eyepatch Power Seal, the key feature is not letting the Spiritual Power go to waste. Rather than a mouth eating the excess spiritual power it is harnessed through a miniature Senkaimon of sorts and delivered to the Research and Development Division of the Gotei 13. The Division then uses the reiatsu given to them for various purposes including the Gotei's defenses. The eyepatch isn't used to limit her power, but rather to control it as it is something she has never been capable of doing on her own, the tangibility of her reiatsu being a danger to herself and those around her.
»Kido: Magi is unable to properly use Kido due to her inability to control Akuhebi from ruining it. Despite the eyepatch hindering his passive effects, he still has a great control of her spiritual pressure.
»Shunpo: Magi is unable to use Shunpo as well, and cannot create foot thresholds. Again, due to the passive effects of her Zanpakuto tampering with her reiatsu.
» Zanpakutô Name: Akuhebi(悪の蛇- Serpent of Evil lit. English translation)
» Zanpakutô Spirit Appearance:
» Zanpakutô Spirit Personality:A stubborn being that is naturally malicious, a spirit that seeks freedom from his home and wishes no tether to humanity. Instead, he often speaks of the destruction of humanity and how he wishes he didn't have such a "pure" Shinigami as his partner. Unamused by the puerile antics produced from his wielder, he often comments on the child's behavior negatively. However, he lends his power to her because he doesn't take kindly to other beings taking up his ideologies. He wishes to be the one to destroy humanity, not other beings.
» Inner World:
» Sealed Zanpakutô Appearance:
» Sealed Zanpakutô Power: Magi's reiatsu has a physical nature to it, though it is a wild creature in and of its own. The reiatsu acts upon Akuhebi's will rather than that of her own, and she is unable to control the power, circumstance taking no effect on whether it is dormant or not. The devastation of this power is small but will grow in power as she does over time. The reiatsu acts as tiny blades that are steadily cutting the surface, or object they touch. Though, these small blades cannot invade another being's reiatsu as the mixture dilutes the effort to a nonexistent status.
Through the use of her Eyepatch Power Seal, she can keep this power under control.
» Shikai Release Phrase: Anata no tsubasawohirogeru, Akuhebi(あなたの翼を広げる Spread your wings, Serpent of Evil lit. English Translation)
» Shikai Release Action: Removing her eyepatch, her sword shatters into reiatsu and connects with the extreme power that is flowing around her before her body is engulfed in it. The reiatsu begins to harden and grow into the visual form of her Shikai. A painful experience for Magi as her body is carved into by the reiatsu becoming one with her body.
To ascend to her released Shikai state, Magi MUST remove her Eyepatch.
» Shikai Appearance:
Akuhebi's Disciple:
Akuhebi's Successor:
» Shikai Abilities:
Akuhebi's Disciple: Akuhebi's power grants her a significant boost in her strength and battle prowess. Her body is clad in a hardened reiatsu that serves as armor growing in density over three posts before she ascends to her next state. She gains a large claw that is used for close-quarters combat, the potency of her attacks with the claw raising to 50% of her potential power throughout three posts. She gains a tail that she has will over that is akin to that of the claw in its power and growth over the ascension period.
This ascension allows her power to grow by up to 50% for three posts, her blows becoming more devastating as time progresses and her spiritual pressure is converted into Akuhebi's might.
- Hindering Slash: An ability that has a similar quality to that of Ichigo's Getsuga Tensho. She can cast a large moving blade of reiatsu from her claw's strike, that is compromised of several million smaller modules of reiatsu. The attack makes an obscure buzzing sound from the collaborative work of the blades working like a sea of bees in search for honey, traveling at speeds matched by this age's sports cars. The blade can easily cut through a foot of Titanium at its max power, but doing so will increase the amount of time she must remain a Disciple to Akuhebi as she expends the collected reiatsu in this attack. As the blade makes a point of contact, it slowly dissipates as the edges meet with another energy, diluting its potency before it finally vanishes. This ability can be replicated through the use of her tail as well, but the attack is more widespread and less devastating to a single point unlike the claw's.
Akuhebi's Successor: As her power jumps from 50% to 100% through the completion of her arsenal she is also granted the ability to produce foot thresholds and make use of Hoho at a standard that is far below Shinigami of similar power as her. Gaining complete control over her reiatsu at this point, which is the embodiment of her power spike. Her armor encompasses more of her body and holds a density similar to that of titanium. Her claw gains density and she gains another upon her rival hand, her tail growing in length and density as well. Her spiritual pressure continues to feed into her arsenal as a means of maintaining the form.
Hindering Slash is rejuvenated into a more formidable power that can battle against opposing energies for a longer amount of time. And it no longer is consequential to use for her Shikai power. The ability is able to be used in excess, though it will obviously fatigue Magi and pull her from her Shikai faster if it is used improperly.
She is able to maintain her Shikai in this final form for a total of 10 posts(Reduced by one post for each post containing a Hindering Slash as a Disciple), which would render her unable to fight with the assistance of Akuhebi's spiritual power as he falls into a deep slumber for the next six to eight hours. She is still able to use her Zanpakuto, though her spiritual pressure will be greatly depreciated from the lack of her Zanpakuto's spiritual pressure. She will be able to use Hoho and make foot thresholds during this time as well, but with little experience.
General Skills
- Durability: Beginner
- General Speed: Adept
- Strength: Adept
- Weapon Skill: Advanced
Shinigami Skills
- Hoho: Untrained(Adept in Shikai, Beginner after Shikai)
- Kidō: Untrained
- Zanjutsu: Advanced
- Hakuda: Advanced
Will Skills
- Willpower/Determination: Beginner
- Mental Deduction: Beginner
- Focus: Beginner
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Re: Magi Lenz [Approved, Shinigami; 3-3++ (3-5+ sealed)] [Hazard Rating D]
Mon Jul 08, 2019 12:30 am
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- Name [X]
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- Gender [X]
- Appearance Present [X]
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- History is of appropriate length [X]
- Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
- Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
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Will Skills- Willpower/Determination: Beginner
- Mental Deduction: Beginner
- Focus: Beginner
Hazard Rankings- Power: D
- Influence: D
- Resources: D
Comments/Notes: Good app, I think she could go up to adept willpower and determination with childish stubbornness so feel free to bump if up if you'd like but otherwise you're good.
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With Eyepatch: 3-5+
Without Eyepatch: 3-3++
Hazard Rating: D - Name [X]
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Re: Magi Lenz [Approved, Shinigami; 3-3++ (3-5+ sealed)] [Hazard Rating D]
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