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Re: Anastasius [APPROVED 1-1++/0-5+] [HAZARD RATING: A]
Wed Jun 26, 2019 1:08 pm
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• And Comments/Fixes •[/center]
»Quema de estaca-Stake Burning: please quantify the degree of damage the burning does to him, also give a upper duration of use before critical damage occurs. Utilization until being rendered unconscious after an indeterminate amount of time is not an adequate drawback for such a potent technique.
Personality: I noticed you deleted a large portion of his personality. I’m going to give you time to rework this since as it is right now I will be forced to drop your will skills accordingly.
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« Application Checklist »
- Name [X]
- Appropriate Age [X]
- Gender [X]
- Appearance Present [X]
- Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
- Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
- 10 sentences for personality [X]
- History is of appropriate length [X]
- Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
- Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
- Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
- Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
- RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
- RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]
« The Willsheet Checklist »
• And Comments/Fixes •[/center]
»Quema de estaca-Stake Burning: please quantify the degree of damage the burning does to him, also give a upper duration of use before critical damage occurs. Utilization until being rendered unconscious after an indeterminate amount of time is not an adequate drawback for such a potent technique.
Personality: I noticed you deleted a large portion of his personality. I’m going to give you time to rework this since as it is right now I will be forced to drop your will skills accordingly.
- Willpower/Determination: NA
- Mental Deduction: N/A
- Focus: N/A
- Comments/Notes: N/A
- Tier: 1-3+ [1-1 in ressureccion] (pending fixes)
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Re: Anastasius [APPROVED 1-1++/0-5+] [HAZARD RATING: A]
Wed Jul 03, 2019 12:41 pm
[mod]
N/A
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« Application Checklist »
- Name [X]
- Appropriate Age [X]
- Gender [X]
- Appearance Present [X]
- Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
- Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
- 10 sentences for personality [X]
- History is of appropriate length [X]
- Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
- Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
- Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
- Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
- RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
- RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]
« The Willsheet Checklist »
• And Comments/Fixes •
N/A
- Willpower/Determination: Elite
- Mental Deduction: Advanced
- Focus: Advanced
- Comments/Notes: N/A
- Tier: 1-1++ [0-5+ in ressureccion]
- ShizuoGremlin
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Re: Anastasius [APPROVED 1-1++/0-5+] [HAZARD RATING: A]
Wed Jul 03, 2019 12:46 pm
Anastasius's Hazard Level:
- Overall: A
- Power:S
- Influence:A
- Resources:C
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Re: Anastasius [APPROVED 1-1++/0-5+] [HAZARD RATING: A]
Mon Dec 06, 2021 8:00 pm
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