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taihou Empty taihou

Sat Jan 29, 2011 5:30 pm
Custom Kidou

  • Name: Taihou (cannon)
  • Type: Offensive
  • Number:59
  • Effects: This spell is highly costly in reiatsu, and is more suited for the skilled shinigami, perferrably with Bankai. A benign, brightly glowing red beam emits from the user's palm, the ray being as fat as the user's hand, and easy to discern, especially in darkness. dictating the destination of the attack for 3 seconds. The "targeting" beam can be moved around by moving the palm. After the three seconds are up, the beam goes from a rich crimson to a bright white, while expanding in radius by one foot. The spot that the white ray hits shall explode, the minimum being an equivalent to 1 Kiloton of dynamite. The exposion itself will be shaped like a crimson dome, rapidly expanding before it fades away. The minumum range being 12 meters in diameter. Anything that gets caught inside of the blast will be exposed to extreme amounts of searing energy. Anyone who is nearby will be flung into the air, while suffering lesser buns from being nearby the attack. The ray has a total lifespan of 4 seconds, 3 when red, and one when white. Although it's lifespan is relatively short, it leaves a destructive blast, and gives the opponent time to get out of the way.
  • Incantation:In this dire time of need call upon the piecing gaze of the dragon.
    With a single stare from its hue brings about great destruction.

  • Notes:
crossing and touching the beam when red will not cause any harm. The ray can be deflected by any means used to deflect and redirect energy. The user should keep a good distance away from the target, as the resulting blast can cause damage to him as well. The size and damage caused by the blast an be increased with the use of more reiatsu. The spell cannot be cancled once casted.


Last edited by Ræn on Sun Jan 30, 2011 3:00 pm; edited 3 times in total


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taihou Empty Re: taihou

Sat Jan 29, 2011 5:43 pm
Incantation isn't viable
This doesn't seem strong enough to be number 72


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taihou Empty Re: taihou

Sat Jan 29, 2011 8:44 pm
Fixed


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taihou Empty Re: taihou

Sun Jan 30, 2011 12:23 am
Other than the incantation, it's approvable.
Incantations should be a crappy two-line poem-like saying involving non-specific mythological figures.


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taihou Empty Re: taihou

Sun Jan 30, 2011 3:01 pm
added the cheesy incantation.


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taihou Empty Re: taihou

Sun Jan 30, 2011 7:10 pm
Approved then.


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