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Fri Dec 30, 2016 10:42 am
The user launches a series of solid hand-sized black Balls at the opponent, forcing them straight into the ground. Then, several platforms, alongside the opponent, are lifted into the air, with the user striking the opponent hard enough to blow them onto another floating platform. After that, four more invisible clones are created, which punch the opponent with force enough to send them straight into the ground. Finally, the user then creates a giant magnetic ball to create multiple satellites and drop them on the opponent.

So is she dropping full sized meteors on the opponent, or is she just dropping large chunks of energy at them? As I don't think she'll be able to do that at the tier I'll give her. I'd recommend scaling this based on what tier she'll have.

"I.E. make estimates for 4 tier, 3 tier, 2 tier etc"

An illusion that relies on the sound of the flute. Whoever hears it will be assailed by the vivid sensation that their limbs have been fastened with sturdy ropes, thus becoming unable to move about freely. Even with physical intervention from an outside force, the body is robbed of all mobility, and consciousness itself progressively fades away. At the same time, they are fed morbid hallucinations, which makes it also possible to run them down mentally. Given that the means of transmission is sound-based, it has a large range of effectiveness, on top of which it can be applied even without knowledge of the enemy's position, which makes for an exceedingly convenient technique.

I'd base this off mental deduction and give people a chance to fight back against it based on the willpower system.

You can read it here: https://www.platinumhearts.net/t148-major-updates-skill-sheet-system-put-this-in-your-application-when-your-finished-and-accepted#65257

Mental Deduction: Mental Deduction refers to a characters ability to see past what the eye can see. What I mean by this is that say your character is trapped within an illusion, would they have the mental deduction or power to overcome it? Or, for instance, would they be able to use their mental wits to overpower a possession? Could they stop themselves from being manipulated or controlled by a technique? Things like this are where Mental Deduction come in and give your character in edge in these situations. The higher your Mental Deduction is, the more your character will be able to fight off mentally.


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Tue Jan 10, 2017 12:32 am
The user launches a series of solid hand-sized black Balls at the opponent, forcing them straight into the ground. Then, several platforms, alongside the opponent, are lifted into the air, with the user striking the opponent hard enough to blow them onto another floating platform. Finally, the user then creates a giant magnetic ball to create a satellite 2 miles wide and drop them on the opponent.

This is more than likely going to be a weaker tier character, so I'd make a scale for each tier level she gets on and I'd probably add a charge-up time.

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https://www.platinumhearts.net/t17108-the-powerscale-of-the-ph-verseprone-to-edits-at-any-time#110573


An illusion that relies on the sound of the flute. Whoever hears it will be assailed by the vivid sensation that their limbs have been fastened with sturdy ropes, thus becoming unable to move about freely. Even with physical intervention from an outside force, the body is robbed of all mobility, and consciousness itself progressively fades away. At the same time, they are fed morbid hallucinations, which makes it also possible to run them down mentally. Given that the means of transmission is sound-based, it has a large range of effectiveness, on top of which it can be applied even without knowledge of the enemy's position, which makes for an exceedingly convenient technique. It takes a person with Advanced Mental Deduction to break out

How long do the effects last? Add that in there.


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Mon Jan 16, 2017 10:37 am
» Atma Vatou Abilities: When rung this grants her the ability to summon her father’s Living dolls he created which essentially are there to help her.

You should expand more on the ways that they help her, how strong they are, how many there are and so on.


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Sun Feb 05, 2017 11:47 am


«-PREPARE TO BE REVIEWED-»



« Application Checklist »

• Let's Get Down To Business •

  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


« The Willsheet Checklist »

• And Comments/Fixes •

  • Willpower/Determination: Adept
  • Mental Deduction: Adept
  • Pain Endurance: Adept
  • Focus: Adept

  • Comments/Notes: N/A

  • Tier: 4-5]


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