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Re: Ichigo Kurosaki, Pride of Soul Society [APPROVED, 0-2++]
Thu Dec 29, 2016 1:30 am
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- Gender [X]
- Appearance Present [X]
- Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
- Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
- 10 sentences for personality [X]
- History is of appropriate length [X]
- Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
- Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
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Comments/Notes: Given that this is a Canon, all the info checks out. Custom added things also check out, as well with changes to the history. Let it be known to any staff that read this that despite the Hybrid Issues we have with Ichigo, Shikokai and any Hollow Abilities are entirely separate meaning that Ichigo won't be able to use Hollow Abilities and skills while entering Shikokai. Nice RP sample friend, definitely felt like Ichigo.
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Re: Ichigo Kurosaki, Pride of Soul Society [APPROVED, 0-2++]
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Re: Ichigo Kurosaki, Pride of Soul Society [APPROVED, 0-2++]
Mon Feb 13, 2017 8:04 pm
AIGHT. I got some plans to adopt this biscuit of a Shinigami. Will try to have a RP sample out in the next week; at the least. If it's past a week and no rp sample has come up please do ask me about it as I could be busy with school stuff. But, yes, I am going to try for this biscuit.
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Re: Ichigo Kurosaki, Pride of Soul Society [APPROVED, 0-2++]
Tue Feb 14, 2017 8:08 pm
Attempt incoming
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400 years… Yes, 400 years. It had been 400 years since Aizen, since he had awakened the latent Quincy abilities that had been lying deep within his being. It had been 400 years since Aizen, but, only about 242 years since he himself had died; natural causes of course. Ever since then, Ichigo had been honing the abilities he had once thought lost to him; those of a Shinigami. Of course, this meant that he was no longer a substitute Shinigami. No, he was a full on, honest to god, Shinigami. That was certainly something strawberry was proud of; wait, no, Number 1 Guardian. Obviously, that’s what his name meant, nah, totally did not mean strawberry.
It would be a lie to say it had been 400 years since he saw Rukia. After all, he did live in the Soul Society for a time after he died. It would be hard not to see someone who you basically served with. Anyone would find it kind of hard not to associate with someone you work with and have known for quite a length of time. Of course, it was hard to say that Ichigo wasn’t exactly a busy individual; he did much during the time he was still a part of the Soul Society. Hell, he would have even been considered as a member of the 0-Division. The secret division, which could be known as a type of “Royal Guard”, that was made primarily of those who were exceptional and defended the Soul King. However, he was unable to join due to him being a Vizard; possessing both the abilities of a hollow and a Shinigami. Due to this, Ichigo was treated more as a house guest than anything else. He then spent much of his time mastering the new abilities he had gained; wanting to make sure that these abilities were again in his control. Of course, it was after some reluctance due to how long it had been since Ichigo had touched upon his old abilities. Regardless, he soon took to the abilities and mastered them after quite a long time; accidentally spending longer than he expected to.
Eventually, he had returned to both the Seireitei and Earth. He straightened up some matters with the Gotei United, as thing had changed since he was last among all the other soul reapers and people he knew. After doing all that, Ichigo eventually left the Seireitei, and Soul Society, to return to Karakura town so he could relax for a time; even with the war against the faction known as “Shadowfall”. Ichigo could only think of this all as another time where suffering would occur. And, well, he believed it was his duty to try and help with this how he could. Of course, this meant that Ichigo was likely going to try and go at a lot of this alone before friends intervened and assisted him. It had happened in the past, and will likely happen again. However, he was being far more careful this time; planning what to do and trying to help the Gotei and their allies by supplying them with whatever information he could. Even then, in Karakura town, it was just one of those boring days…
It would be a little strange to say that Ichigo would be sitting in the Kurosaki clinic randomly; just kinda sitting there. No, he was living alone in an apartment in Karakura Central. The place wasn’t too big, nor to small. But, it was still cramped from time to time when he didn’t clean it. Then again, he wasn’t exactly one to clad his apartment with dirty clothes and random waste. No, just like he did things in the world of the living, he kept the place relatively clean and made sure it didn’t get too dirty at any given time. Of course, it would get dirty whenever he got lazy or wandered away from his apartment to take care of some stray hollow or any sort of being that may be trying to attack Karakura. This also meant he may miss certain events when Karakura gets attacked. Something of such happened not too long ago, but, it was one of those things where he wasn’t paying attention to much and didn’t get the exact details. He was more worried about the citizens of Karakura to get exact details. Even afterwards, he only got vague details from the surrounding officers and any people who would tell him. Something about a rogue man attacking Karakura and him getting quite literally incinerated by a red haired woman commanding the element of fire. Many overheard her last name, which was stated to a certain Yuudeshi. Ichigo simply shook his head at those notions of course; it was doubtful there were any relative of old man Yamamoto. Even if he did have any relations with others besides his apprentices; Ichigo had no idea if anyone could be related to Genryusai Yamamoto.
Ichigo shook his head as he thought of those details he obtained from what had happened. Nothing too terribly important right now, but, in the event of it would have been a bit of an annoyance if he was there. Ichigo simply sighed and popped his neck, rubbing the back of it softly as he looked around his room; that of his apartment. Ichigo could only sigh as he stood up and went to go off and clean up a little before he popped out of the Gigai he was in and go out for a little to see if he could find out anything or maybe even figure out if there were any hollows threatening the city; or maybe even worse. Ichigo sighed softly and could only help but let loose a yawn as he rubbed his eyes a little. Despite being a near immortal being, it was quite hard for him to not find himself getting tired enough to take at least one or two additional naps during the day. Totally not because he was now over 400 years old. Actually, it was doubtful it was that thanks to the vast amount of energy coursing through Ichigo’s body. The Shinigami sighed softly and walked into the bathroom of the apartment; soon exiting and then looking at main living area of the apartment. Ichigo scratched the back of his head and sighed.
“Gah… Dammit, looks like I’ll have to clean this place when I get back. If I remember to do so at least.”
Ichigo yawned again, opening his mouth widely as he retrieved a phone from his pocket. He looked at the interface and tapped a couple things before sighing and placing the phone down on the table and slowly emerging from the gigai he was in. He sighed and slowly moved the gigai over to the couch, flopping the body that looked exactly like him down onto the furniture. He picked up the device and stared at it for a couple of moments before he jumped through the wall; quickly exiting the city to the far outskirts of Karakura town.
Ichigo landed outside of the city, far outside of the city, and pulled out the phone that he had and looked at the blank interface for a moment before he pocketed the device and went back to methods of which he used in the past to find hollows. Which was normally them simply appearing and wanting to eat him because of his soul’s quality; which was thanks to his spiritual pressure. Or, he could depend on the method with which most Shinigami used when trying to find any energy trace; which was to actually sense the energy around him. He rubbed the back of his neck and simply stood there; sensing around him a little.
It was quite clear that, even after many years, Ichigo’s skill to sense energy was not the best. However, he could still sense these things quite easily despite how unspecialized he was with the more spiritual side of things. He sighed softly and simply decided to take a stroll to the Karakura forest; a place that may as well be hollow filled. And probably just where troublesome hollow may be.
Ichigo walked into the forest rather cautiously before he sighed softly and jumped upwards. From there, he surveyed the area until he noticed a stray hollow stomping around in the forest. He landed in front of the hollow and stared at it for a moment before he drew his Zanpakuto, only one of the blades this time, and then sighed.
“Yo.”
Ichigo continued to stare at the hollow as it roared at him; making his hair move a little from the amount of air the hollow was expelling from its body from the roar. He cleared his throat and coughed slightly waving his hand in front of his nose.
“Yeesh! And I thought most hollow’s had breath that was bearable. Your breath is even worse than normal!”
Ichigo pinched the bridge of his nose before he chuckled as the hollow roared in annoyance. He sighed and shook his head; allowing himself to catch his thoughts as the hollow prepared to strike. Time seemingly slowed, Ichigo thought for a moment, and then he looked directly at the hollows and then swung his sword upwards. The single blade of his dual Zanpakuto cutting straight through the hollow’s mask. He watched as the beasts screamed for only a moment before it was simply gone; the hollow dissolving into nothingness as it was purified. Ichigo placed the sword in his right hand on his shoulder and smiled. Whether or not hollows were evil beings in nature; it was a good thing when they returned to being a pure soul.
Ichigo popped his neck and shook his head. He didn’t mind killing hollows since it was to protect others and the action normally did purify the hollow so the soul could live in the Soul Society and be reborn anew. He looked around and started to move back to Karakura; at least until he ran into a kid. At least it looked like a kid. Ichigo walked up to the kid and noticed that it was cowering; cowering from something. Ichigo walked up to the kid and lightly placed his hand on the kid’s head.
“Hey there, everything okay?”
Ichigo smiled at the kid some and then noticed the chain coming from the chest of the child. Ichigo soon gained a frown as he noticed that the kid was clearly dead; likely not having a mom or dad to be with the kid at the moment. Ichigo sighed softly and pulled out his Zanpakuto; accidentally scaring the kid in the process.
“Hey, Hey, it’s okay. Don’t worry, you’ll be in a better place soon; so go ahead and pass on.”
Ichigo smiled at the kid, ruffled the kid’s hair, and then placed the buttcap of his Zanpakuto on the kid’s forehead; performing the Konso ritual to send the kid to the Soul Society. Afterwards, he then looked in the direction the kid was staring; trying to find whatever he was staring at. Nothing, there really was nothing there. Ichigo frowned still, staring in the direction as he felt a strange energy from that area. On second thought, there was something there; and it was no regular hollow.
Ichigo tightly grasped the handle of his other blade, drawing the blade seamlessly as a hollow-type creature emerged from the shadows. Without so much as a word, sound, or even some movement; the beast charged head first at Ichigo. The beast was received with a sigh as Ichigo slashed at it; the creature simply jumped out of the way and made an interesting hissing noise. Ichigo raised an eyebrow at the beast as it turned around to attack Ichigo from behind; the being only being met with the blade in Ichigo’s left hand and a small smile. He spun around and aimed a strike at the hollow’s head; lopping off some of its flesh instead of doing something like destroying the mask or beheading it.
Ichigo frowned a little as he noticed the beast now trying to escape towards Karakura. Even if it could get into the guarded areas; the outskirts were still vulnerable. Ichigo grit his teeth and went after the beast; bashing it aside with a quick attack from his sword. Words would be wasted on this beast, very, very, wasted. Ichigo placed both of his swords together as he stared at the hollow.
“Ban-KAI!”
A rather giant surge of energy burst towards the hollow as Ichigo launched into his Bankai. He sighed softly as he appeared in his Bankai. Ichigo popped his neck softly and swung his blade in front of him. Without even a word, just a thought and a swing; a vast Getsuga Tenshou burst forth from the blade and cascaded towards the hollow like a rushing wave of water. The being that looked to be a hollow staggered in place and attempted to avoid; only getting cut in half due to the futility. Ichigo sighed and looked at the beasts as the Getsuga Tenshou rocketed up towards the sky; not leaving a single trace of energy as the beast writhed on the ground. Ichigo simply swung his sword and cut the rest of the body in half; leaving the beast limp and dissolving into nothingness after a moment.
Ichigo simply stared at where the beast was a few moments ago before he turned away and walked back towards Karakura. He rubbed the back of his head for a moment before he disappeared with Shunpo; reappearing where he lived currently. Maybe he should actually go back to where the Kurosaki Clinic is. After all, he quite literally has no idea if the place is there anymore given how long it has been. Ichigo chuckled softly and sat down next to his gigai before he felt his phone vibrate. He picked it out of his pocket and then answered it; hearing a very familiar voice bursting out of the receiver. He smiled softly as he listened.
“Yeah, I’m on my way.”
He soon hung up and then got back into his Gigai. It sure as hell had felt like a long day already, but, after all; his life hadn’t exactly been that of not-busy after all. After all, he had people to defend; he wasn’t gonna let Karakura, or this world, fall into destruction. Not now, not ever.
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400 years… Yes, 400 years. It had been 400 years since Aizen, since he had awakened the latent Quincy abilities that had been lying deep within his being. It had been 400 years since Aizen, but, only about 242 years since he himself had died; natural causes of course. Ever since then, Ichigo had been honing the abilities he had once thought lost to him; those of a Shinigami. Of course, this meant that he was no longer a substitute Shinigami. No, he was a full on, honest to god, Shinigami. That was certainly something strawberry was proud of; wait, no, Number 1 Guardian. Obviously, that’s what his name meant, nah, totally did not mean strawberry.
It would be a lie to say it had been 400 years since he saw Rukia. After all, he did live in the Soul Society for a time after he died. It would be hard not to see someone who you basically served with. Anyone would find it kind of hard not to associate with someone you work with and have known for quite a length of time. Of course, it was hard to say that Ichigo wasn’t exactly a busy individual; he did much during the time he was still a part of the Soul Society. Hell, he would have even been considered as a member of the 0-Division. The secret division, which could be known as a type of “Royal Guard”, that was made primarily of those who were exceptional and defended the Soul King. However, he was unable to join due to him being a Vizard; possessing both the abilities of a hollow and a Shinigami. Due to this, Ichigo was treated more as a house guest than anything else. He then spent much of his time mastering the new abilities he had gained; wanting to make sure that these abilities were again in his control. Of course, it was after some reluctance due to how long it had been since Ichigo had touched upon his old abilities. Regardless, he soon took to the abilities and mastered them after quite a long time; accidentally spending longer than he expected to.
Eventually, he had returned to both the Seireitei and Earth. He straightened up some matters with the Gotei United, as thing had changed since he was last among all the other soul reapers and people he knew. After doing all that, Ichigo eventually left the Seireitei, and Soul Society, to return to Karakura town so he could relax for a time; even with the war against the faction known as “Shadowfall”. Ichigo could only think of this all as another time where suffering would occur. And, well, he believed it was his duty to try and help with this how he could. Of course, this meant that Ichigo was likely going to try and go at a lot of this alone before friends intervened and assisted him. It had happened in the past, and will likely happen again. However, he was being far more careful this time; planning what to do and trying to help the Gotei and their allies by supplying them with whatever information he could. Even then, in Karakura town, it was just one of those boring days…
It would be a little strange to say that Ichigo would be sitting in the Kurosaki clinic randomly; just kinda sitting there. No, he was living alone in an apartment in Karakura Central. The place wasn’t too big, nor to small. But, it was still cramped from time to time when he didn’t clean it. Then again, he wasn’t exactly one to clad his apartment with dirty clothes and random waste. No, just like he did things in the world of the living, he kept the place relatively clean and made sure it didn’t get too dirty at any given time. Of course, it would get dirty whenever he got lazy or wandered away from his apartment to take care of some stray hollow or any sort of being that may be trying to attack Karakura. This also meant he may miss certain events when Karakura gets attacked. Something of such happened not too long ago, but, it was one of those things where he wasn’t paying attention to much and didn’t get the exact details. He was more worried about the citizens of Karakura to get exact details. Even afterwards, he only got vague details from the surrounding officers and any people who would tell him. Something about a rogue man attacking Karakura and him getting quite literally incinerated by a red haired woman commanding the element of fire. Many overheard her last name, which was stated to a certain Yuudeshi. Ichigo simply shook his head at those notions of course; it was doubtful there were any relative of old man Yamamoto. Even if he did have any relations with others besides his apprentices; Ichigo had no idea if anyone could be related to Genryusai Yamamoto.
Ichigo shook his head as he thought of those details he obtained from what had happened. Nothing too terribly important right now, but, in the event of it would have been a bit of an annoyance if he was there. Ichigo simply sighed and popped his neck, rubbing the back of it softly as he looked around his room; that of his apartment. Ichigo could only sigh as he stood up and went to go off and clean up a little before he popped out of the Gigai he was in and go out for a little to see if he could find out anything or maybe even figure out if there were any hollows threatening the city; or maybe even worse. Ichigo sighed softly and could only help but let loose a yawn as he rubbed his eyes a little. Despite being a near immortal being, it was quite hard for him to not find himself getting tired enough to take at least one or two additional naps during the day. Totally not because he was now over 400 years old. Actually, it was doubtful it was that thanks to the vast amount of energy coursing through Ichigo’s body. The Shinigami sighed softly and walked into the bathroom of the apartment; soon exiting and then looking at main living area of the apartment. Ichigo scratched the back of his head and sighed.
“Gah… Dammit, looks like I’ll have to clean this place when I get back. If I remember to do so at least.”
Ichigo yawned again, opening his mouth widely as he retrieved a phone from his pocket. He looked at the interface and tapped a couple things before sighing and placing the phone down on the table and slowly emerging from the gigai he was in. He sighed and slowly moved the gigai over to the couch, flopping the body that looked exactly like him down onto the furniture. He picked up the device and stared at it for a couple of moments before he jumped through the wall; quickly exiting the city to the far outskirts of Karakura town.
Ichigo landed outside of the city, far outside of the city, and pulled out the phone that he had and looked at the blank interface for a moment before he pocketed the device and went back to methods of which he used in the past to find hollows. Which was normally them simply appearing and wanting to eat him because of his soul’s quality; which was thanks to his spiritual pressure. Or, he could depend on the method with which most Shinigami used when trying to find any energy trace; which was to actually sense the energy around him. He rubbed the back of his neck and simply stood there; sensing around him a little.
It was quite clear that, even after many years, Ichigo’s skill to sense energy was not the best. However, he could still sense these things quite easily despite how unspecialized he was with the more spiritual side of things. He sighed softly and simply decided to take a stroll to the Karakura forest; a place that may as well be hollow filled. And probably just where troublesome hollow may be.
Ichigo walked into the forest rather cautiously before he sighed softly and jumped upwards. From there, he surveyed the area until he noticed a stray hollow stomping around in the forest. He landed in front of the hollow and stared at it for a moment before he drew his Zanpakuto, only one of the blades this time, and then sighed.
“Yo.”
Ichigo continued to stare at the hollow as it roared at him; making his hair move a little from the amount of air the hollow was expelling from its body from the roar. He cleared his throat and coughed slightly waving his hand in front of his nose.
“Yeesh! And I thought most hollow’s had breath that was bearable. Your breath is even worse than normal!”
Ichigo pinched the bridge of his nose before he chuckled as the hollow roared in annoyance. He sighed and shook his head; allowing himself to catch his thoughts as the hollow prepared to strike. Time seemingly slowed, Ichigo thought for a moment, and then he looked directly at the hollows and then swung his sword upwards. The single blade of his dual Zanpakuto cutting straight through the hollow’s mask. He watched as the beasts screamed for only a moment before it was simply gone; the hollow dissolving into nothingness as it was purified. Ichigo placed the sword in his right hand on his shoulder and smiled. Whether or not hollows were evil beings in nature; it was a good thing when they returned to being a pure soul.
Ichigo popped his neck and shook his head. He didn’t mind killing hollows since it was to protect others and the action normally did purify the hollow so the soul could live in the Soul Society and be reborn anew. He looked around and started to move back to Karakura; at least until he ran into a kid. At least it looked like a kid. Ichigo walked up to the kid and noticed that it was cowering; cowering from something. Ichigo walked up to the kid and lightly placed his hand on the kid’s head.
“Hey there, everything okay?”
Ichigo smiled at the kid some and then noticed the chain coming from the chest of the child. Ichigo soon gained a frown as he noticed that the kid was clearly dead; likely not having a mom or dad to be with the kid at the moment. Ichigo sighed softly and pulled out his Zanpakuto; accidentally scaring the kid in the process.
“Hey, Hey, it’s okay. Don’t worry, you’ll be in a better place soon; so go ahead and pass on.”
Ichigo smiled at the kid, ruffled the kid’s hair, and then placed the buttcap of his Zanpakuto on the kid’s forehead; performing the Konso ritual to send the kid to the Soul Society. Afterwards, he then looked in the direction the kid was staring; trying to find whatever he was staring at. Nothing, there really was nothing there. Ichigo frowned still, staring in the direction as he felt a strange energy from that area. On second thought, there was something there; and it was no regular hollow.
Ichigo tightly grasped the handle of his other blade, drawing the blade seamlessly as a hollow-type creature emerged from the shadows. Without so much as a word, sound, or even some movement; the beast charged head first at Ichigo. The beast was received with a sigh as Ichigo slashed at it; the creature simply jumped out of the way and made an interesting hissing noise. Ichigo raised an eyebrow at the beast as it turned around to attack Ichigo from behind; the being only being met with the blade in Ichigo’s left hand and a small smile. He spun around and aimed a strike at the hollow’s head; lopping off some of its flesh instead of doing something like destroying the mask or beheading it.
Ichigo frowned a little as he noticed the beast now trying to escape towards Karakura. Even if it could get into the guarded areas; the outskirts were still vulnerable. Ichigo grit his teeth and went after the beast; bashing it aside with a quick attack from his sword. Words would be wasted on this beast, very, very, wasted. Ichigo placed both of his swords together as he stared at the hollow.
“Ban-KAI!”
A rather giant surge of energy burst towards the hollow as Ichigo launched into his Bankai. He sighed softly as he appeared in his Bankai. Ichigo popped his neck softly and swung his blade in front of him. Without even a word, just a thought and a swing; a vast Getsuga Tenshou burst forth from the blade and cascaded towards the hollow like a rushing wave of water. The being that looked to be a hollow staggered in place and attempted to avoid; only getting cut in half due to the futility. Ichigo sighed and looked at the beasts as the Getsuga Tenshou rocketed up towards the sky; not leaving a single trace of energy as the beast writhed on the ground. Ichigo simply swung his sword and cut the rest of the body in half; leaving the beast limp and dissolving into nothingness after a moment.
Ichigo simply stared at where the beast was a few moments ago before he turned away and walked back towards Karakura. He rubbed the back of his head for a moment before he disappeared with Shunpo; reappearing where he lived currently. Maybe he should actually go back to where the Kurosaki Clinic is. After all, he quite literally has no idea if the place is there anymore given how long it has been. Ichigo chuckled softly and sat down next to his gigai before he felt his phone vibrate. He picked it out of his pocket and then answered it; hearing a very familiar voice bursting out of the receiver. He smiled softly as he listened.
“Yeah, I’m on my way.”
He soon hung up and then got back into his Gigai. It sure as hell had felt like a long day already, but, after all; his life hadn’t exactly been that of not-busy after all. After all, he had people to defend; he wasn’t gonna let Karakura, or this world, fall into destruction. Not now, not ever.
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Re: Ichigo Kurosaki, Pride of Soul Society [APPROVED, 0-2++]
Thu Feb 16, 2017 6:37 pm
[adm]Alright, after speaking with Dark in PM, and reviewing the RP sample, this definitely gave me some Ichigo vibes. I'll be approving this! If any staff or member, etc have a problem, contact me, and me alone. Otherwise...
APPROVED!
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Re: Ichigo Kurosaki, Pride of Soul Society [APPROVED, 0-2++]
Tue Feb 27, 2018 11:26 am
«- PREPARE TO BE REVIEWED -»
« Application Checklist »
- Name [X]
- Appropriate Age [X]
- Gender [X]
- Appearance Present [X]
- Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
- Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
- 10 sentences for personality [X]
- History is of appropriate length [X]
- Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
- Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
- Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
- Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
- RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
- RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]
« The Willsheet Checklist »
• And Comments/Fixes •
- Willpower/Determination: N/A
- Mental Deduction: N/A
- Pain Endurance: N/A
- Focus: N/A
- Comments/Notes: I don't really have any issues with this, aside from the skill sheets. As of now, Ichigo's skill sheets will be the following:General Skills
- Durability: Advanced (Adept while in Ress)
- General Speed: Grand Master
- Strength: Elite
- Weapon Skill: Trained
Racial Skills
- Hoho: Grand Master
- Kidō: Beginner
- Zanjutsu: Grand Master
- Hakuda: Experienced
Vizard Skills
- Power Augmentation Elite
- Cero: Beginner
- Mask Protection: Elite
- Hollow Control: Expert
Hollow Skills
- Acid Skill: Untrained
- Garganta : Untrained
- Cero/Bala: Expert
- Regeneration: Beginner (Elite while in Ressureccion)
Will Skills
- Willpower/Determination: Grand Master
- Mental Deduction: Experienced
- Pain Endurance: Elite
- Focus: Advanced
- Code:
[b][center][u]General Skills[/u][/b][/center]
[list][*][b]Durability:[/b] Advanced (Adept while in Ress)
[*][b]General Speed:[/b] Grand Master
[*][b]Strength:[/b] Elite
[*][b]Weapon Skill:[/b] Trained
[/list]
[b][center][u]Racial Skills[/u][/b][/center]
[list][*][b]Hoho:[/b] Grand Master
[*][b]Kidō:[/b] Beginner
[*][b]Zanjutsu:[/b] Grand Master
[*][b]Hakuda:[/b] Experienced
[/list]
[b][u]Vizard Skills[/u][/b]
[list][*][b]Power Augmentation[/b] Elite
[*][b]Cero:[/b] Beginner
[*][b]Mask Protection:[/b] Elite
[*][b]Hollow Control:[/b] Expert
[/list]
[b][u]Hollow Skills[/u][/b]
[list][*][b]Acid Skill:[/b] Untrained
[*][b]Garganta :[/b] Untrained
[*][b]Cero/Bala:[/b] Expert
[*][b]Regeneration:[/b] Beginner (Elite while in Ressureccion)
[/list]
[b][center][u]Will Skills[/u][/b][/center]
[list][*][b]Willpower/Determination:[/b] Grand Master
[*][b]Mental Deduction:[/b] Experienced
[*][b]Pain Endurance:[/b] Elite
[*][b]Focus:[/b] Advanced
[/list]
I've adjusted the skills to better fit the character and replaced the old Racial Skills with the new, updated ones. Furthermore, the Shikokai has been removed after discussion with both staff and darkfunnel. If anyone has problems or concerns, contact me.
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