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Fri Aug 19, 2016 10:26 pm
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Basic Information
_____________________________

- Name: Taichou Ryakketsu (Ryakketsu Taichou >> 略決泰肇
- Titles: Ryakkun (When confused for a male by her name) "Little Ryakketsu," ; sole heir of the Ryakketsu clan.
- Age: 600 years, appears around 19/20 years of age.
- Gender: Female.
- Affiliation/Rank: Rogue.

- Appearance Description: Taichou is 160cm in stature, and 64kg in weight. Her physique is muscular, but moreover toned, with curves in all the right places; an annoyance of hers, as she more often than not curses about having large hips, and a large bosom, being that they get in the way of her work, in combat. Her black hair pools at her waist, and though her locks are luscious, she has four white strands that weave their way through the rest of them. Her eyes are umber, and her complexion is fair. Along her left side, on her torso, tattooed in traditional Irezumi fashion, lies a snake, wrapped around severed heads (namakubi), symbolizing the circle of life and death.

Clothing wise, Taichou can be found in one of two things: a short sleeved kimono patterned with waves, with designs embroidered and standard geta, or more commonly, a tattered deep red shitagi, with a silver and dark blue patterned kosode, dark blue hakama (to match the kosode), a silver hakama-himo (sash/obi), white tabi, and waraji (straw sandals). She had inherited the garments from someone close to her late parents, who resided in District 1 of South Rukongai.


- Appearance Picture: Taichou Ryakketsu - Character Application  [4-5] CBobRHu

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Personality

- Personality: Taichou's personality is often viewed as arrogant and snide, as she is the type to observe the behavior of others, out of pure curiosity, but once you get to know her, her entire demeanor changes. You see, she was born in the Soul Society, her mother and father being murdered brutally while she was in utero >> with both of her parents being Shinigami, residing in the Human World after being exiled.

Upon her birth, from the minute she entered the Soul Society, the memories of her parents often overwhelmed her own. Being that she was alone for most of her formative years, she was forced to fend for herself while living with the memory of her parents' brutal murder by the hands of Yakuza over a gambling debt, and was considered a ruffian by the others that resided along side her in her district of Rukongai given that she had no "family."

Aside from this, Taichou has a tendency to keep to herself. She enjoys the simple things in life, like watching the clouds pass, and the sun set, just overall being lazy as she feels like she has to answer to not one entity; but there's also the other side of her coin... Taichou seeks to follow in the footsteps of her parents, and become a Shinigami, (as it's technically her birthright given her lineage) so that she never has to experience the pain of a lost loved-one again, and can protect them, always.

Positive attributes:
- Loyal
- Hardworking
- Determined
- Intellectual
- Caring despite her hard exterior

Negative attributes:
- Sarcastic
- Lazy, likes to sleep and drink sake a lot
- Violent/easily provoked
- Focuses too much on the memories of her parents


_____________________________

Special Traits

- Natural Attributes: Taichou naturally possesses Great Spiritual Power, but this is dampened by the fact that Taichou has no means of training to increase it, in the slums of Rukongai, so as it stands in its dampened state, her Spiritual Power is considered "Average," and she can only sense others' Reiatsu when they're in very close proximity to her.

-Purification/Restoration: A trait that Taichou discovered while she'd get in fights over food with other children, she noticed that she had the ability to heal her own wounds, and when she'd be left with only scraps of food, often bruised and damaged, she realized that she could use the same restorative power to rejuvenate the scraps into something edible.

-Inverse Purification/Restoration: Along with the aforementioned trait, the inverse of this ability is also true. While it doesn't apply to wounds or damage to other Spirits, Taichou can also cause physical objects to decay, and seemingly deteriorate into nothing.

Her aging is also hampered, even for a Plus.

_____________________________


Background History

- Background: The Ryakketsu clan was established in the 3rd year of the Choho era (year 1001), by her great-grandfather, and Shinigami, Ryakketsu Zentarou who was exiled to the Human World.

Sired by Zentarou's grandson, exiled Shinigami Ryakketsu Kaku, and a Shinigami mother, Taichou was conceived in the Human World in the year 1600, near the end of the Sengoku period. Given that it was near the beginning of the Edo period, Ryakketsu Kaku was an avid gambler, often gambling against the Oyabun of his region.

One day, Kaku bet too much, and lost large. Unable to pay for his debt, the Oyabun of his local Daimyo sentenced him, and his then pregnant wife to death by execution at the hands of Samurai. Before the two were executed, Kaku was subjected to helplessly watching his beloved wife be brutally raped by their executioners.

Thus, Taichou was thrust into the Soul Society seconds after her, and her parents' "death." Fueled by the knowledge that she and her parents can be reunited once the Cycle of Souls is completed, Taichou desires to become a Shinigami like her parents, and ancestors before her, for the greater good of the Human World, and to protect any future loved ones she might have.

_____________________________

See Skill Sheet for More Information

General Skills
  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Focus: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


_____________________________


Roleplay Sample

- Roleplay Sample: Taichou sighed, her diaphragm rising and falling as she did, with a subtle "huff," like sound. The corners of her mouth then curled downward, in a frowning fashion, while she gazed at her tattered, bloodstained kosode. The young woman's thoughts swirled around within the confines of her psyche; she associated the pattern embroidered on her kosode to that of her late father's, in the memory of moments before his execution.
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Sat Aug 20, 2016 1:52 pm
Hiya! I'm Gamedragon, one of the moderators here, and I'm happy to say that I'll be checking this application for you! First, I'd like to say that if you think that any of my decisions here are false or perhaps not accurate enough, I am perfectly fine with you private messaging me about the details so we can hash it out, or asking another staff member for advice. I am on vacation, so if I take a bit to respond, I am dearly sorry. I always check the site every night when I get home though, so don't worry that I'll keep you waiting for too long! With that little tidbit out of the way, let's get to the check~!

Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [?]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [0]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [0]


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: N/A
  • Mental Deduction: N/A
  • Pain Endurance: N/A
  • Focus: N/A


Comments/Notes: The first thing I need to ask for is the name of your faceclaim! I wasn't able google image search it, so I couldn't figure it out on my own. I just simply need to check and make sure that no one else has claimed it or reserved it, no biggie!

The next thing that i'd like to have elaborated on would be the powers! They're okay, I'd just simply like to know the extent of them and how much they'll drain her of her energy. Such as her purification power, would she be only able to restore scrapes and bruises, or could she possibly restore an entire sword and regenerate wounds? Along with knowing how much it may drain her, such as restoring an apple to edible condition only making her exert the same energy as lifting a big book, or fixing someone with too many cuts and wounds to count making her extremely exhausted and unable to keep healing? Just knowing the cost would help, and just remember to make it reasonable for how strong it would be!

The last issue is just size of the RP sample. Making it up to 10 sentences would make it -perfect-!

That's really the only things I need to say and request. Take your time with the edits, and if you feel as if maybe I'm not being the most reasonable or fair, you are entirely free to request another staff member or private message me to discuss what could be the issue. I won't take up anymore of your time, please have a wonderful day~!
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taisuki
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Sat Aug 20, 2016 5:04 pm
EDITED VERSION

Spirit (Plus) Template

Basic Information
_____________________________

- Name: Taichou Ryakketsu (Ryakketsu Taichou >> 略決泰肇
- Titles: Ryakkun (When confused for a male by her name) "Little Ryakketsu," ; sole heir of the Ryakketsu clan.
- Age: 600 years, appears around 19/20 years of age.
- Gender: Female.
- Affiliation/Rank: Rogue.

- Appearance Description: Taichou is 160cm in stature, and 64kg in weight. Her physique is muscular, but moreover toned, with curves in all the right places; an annoyance of hers, as she more often than not curses about having large hips, and a large bosom, being that they get in the way and impede her movements. Her black hair pools at her waist, and though her locks are luscious, she has four white strands that weave their way through the rest of them. Her eyes are umber, and her complexion is fair. Along her back, and front from her shoulders, to the back of her knees, Taichou is tattooed in traditional Irezumi fashion, with a snake, wrapped around severed heads (namakubi), symbolizing the circle of life and death.

Clothing wise, Taichou can be found in one of two things: a short sleeved kimono patterned with waves, with designs embroidered and standard geta, or more commonly, a tattered deep red shitagi, with a silver and dark blue patterned kosode, dark blue hakama (to match the kosode), a silver hakama-himo (sash/obi), white tabi, and waraji (straw sandals). She had inherited the garments from someone close to her late parents, who resided in District 1 of South Rukongai.


- Appearance Picture: Taichou Ryakketsu - Character Application  [4-5] CBobRHu

_____________________________

Personality

- Personality: Taichou's personality is often viewed as arrogant and snide, as she is the type to observe the behavior of others, out of pure curiosity, but once you get to know her, her entire demeanor changes. You see, she was born in the Soul Society, her mother and father being murdered brutally while she was in utero >> with both of her parents being Shinigami, residing in the Human World after being exiled.

Upon her birth, from the minute she entered the Soul Society, the memories of her parents often overwhelmed her own. Being that she was alone for most of her formative years, she was forced to fend for herself while living with the memory of her parents' brutal murder by the hands of Yakuza over a gambling debt, and was considered a ruffian by the others that resided along side her in her district of Rukongai given that she had no "family."

Aside from this, Taichou has a tendency to keep to herself. She enjoys the simple things in life, like watching the clouds pass, and the sun set, just overall being lazy as she feels like she has to answer to not one entity; but there's also the other side of her coin... Taichou seeks to follow in the footsteps of her parents, and become a Shinigami, (as it's technically her birthright given her lineage) so that she never has to experience the pain of a lost loved-one again, and can protect them, always.

Positive attributes:
- Loyal
- Hardworking
- Determined
- Intellectual
- Caring despite her hard exterior

Negative attributes:
- Sarcastic
- Lazy, likes to sleep and drink sake a lot
- Violent/easily provoked
- Focuses too much on the memories of her parents


_____________________________

Special Traits

- Natural Attributes: Taichou naturally possesses Great Spiritual Power, but this is dampened by the fact that Taichou has no means of training to increase it, in the slums of Rukongai, so as it stands in its dampened state, her Spiritual Power is considered "Average," and she can only sense others' Reiatsu when they're in very close proximity to her.

-Purification/Restoration: A trait that Taichou discovered while she'd get in fights over food with other children, she noticed that she had the ability to heal her own wounds, and when she'd be left with only scraps of food, often bruised and damaged, she realized that she could use the same restorative power to rejuvenate the scraps into something edible.

Over time, Taichou realized that she could use this ability to restore inanimate objects, but the catch was, the larger the object, the larger the amount of energy sapped from her. For instance, when restoring food, the level of exertion is similar to lifting something 22kg for an extended amount of time (10-20 minutes). But when restoring wounds, the level of exertion for Taichou is much greater, as it requires the stopping/controlling of bleeding, reformation of muscular tissue/tendons, and the regrowth of skin over the damaged area. Restoring large wounds leaves her exhausted to the point where she often is left unable to restore any other wounds.

As of late, Taichou has speculated that she could possibly extend this ability to restore weapons, but being as she doesn't have a weapon of her own, there's a level of uncertainty. Only time, and training will tell.


Her aging is also hampered, even for a Plus.

_____________________________


Background History

- Background: The Ryakketsu clan was established in the 3rd year of the Choho era (year 1001), by her great-grandfather, and Shinigami, Ryakketsu Zentarou who was exiled to the Human World.

Sired by Zentarou's grandson, exiled Shinigami Ryakketsu Kaku, and a Shinigami mother, Taichou was conceived in the Human World in the year 1600, near the end of the Sengoku period. Given that it was near the beginning of the Edo period, Ryakketsu Kaku was an avid gambler, often gambling against the Oyabun of his region.

One day, Kaku bet too much, and lost large. Unable to pay for his debt, the Oyabun of his local Daimyo sentenced him, and his then pregnant wife to death by execution at the hands of Samurai. Before the two were executed, Kaku was subjected to helplessly watching his beloved wife be brutally raped by their executioners.

Thus, Taichou was thrust into the Soul Society seconds after her, and her parents' "death." Fueled by the knowledge that she and her parents can be reunited once the Cycle of Souls is completed, Taichou desires to become a Shinigami like her parents, and ancestors before her, for the greater good of the Human World, and to protect any future loved ones she might have.

_____________________________

See Skill Sheet for More Information

General Skills
  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Focus: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


_____________________________


Roleplay Sample

- Roleplay Sample: Taichou sighed, her diaphragm rising and falling as she did, with a subtle "huff," like sound. The corners of her mouth then curled downward, in a frowning fashion, while she gazed at her tattered, bloodstained kosode. The young woman's thoughts swirled around within the confines of her psyche; she associated the pattern embroidered on her kosode to that of her late father's, in the memory of moments before his execution. Shaking her head briefly, the young Ryakketsu rose to her feet. Surging with a new-found confidence, she held her hands 4 centimeters above the torn, bloodstained areas of her kosode; wisps of her Reiatsu then swirling and flowing from the tips of her fingers, into the fabric of the garment, penetrating it, and pulling the stained blood from it. The stained blood upon its extraction, fell to the ground, like the falling of scabs once the flesh beneath is healed. With the blood stains now gone, Taichou shifted her focus to the frayed holes within the silk, exhaling, she closed her eyes, mentally visualizing each broken strand of silk joining together with its mate. This visualization was the catalyst, channeling her Reiatsu into every fiber of the kosode, mending it.
Her eyes slowly opened, as she lowered her her hands back down to her sides. Giving her newly mended outerlayer of clothing a once over, the female mentally applauded herself; lifting her chin, seeming to throw her head back, she fixed her eyes upon the clouds above her. Following this motion, the wind began to pick up around her, causing tendrils of her hair to spiral with each gust. The corners of her eyes crinkled, and her cheeks dimpled with a smile, as she said softly to herself, "Thanks, Dad..."

Note: I underlined all of the changes I made within the application. As for my face claim, I got permission from an artist on Deviantart to use a drawing of hers that was colored. These are the links, FC colored FC sketch, pre-coloring . I hope these changes help.
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Sat Aug 20, 2016 10:32 pm
Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Beginner
  • Focus: Adept


Comments/Notes: First of all, I'd like to say thank you for working with me and making the changes asked. Secondly, when you apply for the FC here: Boop! just mention that she was an original and preferrably send a link over to where you got it from. You don't have too, but on the incredibly rare chance someone else may want that character, it'd help! Welp, I hope you enjoy Roleplaying here and that everything goes great! If there are any issues, feel free to message any of the staff, and please, if you havn't already, join our Discord!

Oh, you're also free to replace the original post with the revised version, just so there aren't two applications in the same thread
Tier: 4-5[/quote]


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Tue Dec 20, 2016 7:09 pm
[mod]Moved to inactive due to Inactivity. Get in contact with staff if you want your character active again~[/mod]
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Wed Jan 11, 2017 9:10 pm
[mod]Moved out of inactive on request of creator.[/mod]
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