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THE NATURE IRAMASHA TEMPLATE

Nature Iramasha Profile
宇宙の装備者


I. Basic Information


» Name: Luna
» Titles: None
» Iramasha Age: .01 Year.
» Regular Age: Less than a year.
» Gender: Female
» Orientation: Pansexual
» Affiliation/Rank: Rogue

» Type: Nature Iramasha [Cosmic]

» Theme Song: Moon - Yokko Kanno / Origa (Clicky!)

» Appearance Written:
Luna stands at a startlingly short height of four feet (adding a fifth foot for her ears) tall. While sporting an athletic build the young Iramasha’s frame is dainty and slim, lacking any of the muscle tone that would be expected of someone who might work out. Her body is smooth and unblemished, as if having never experienced a day of hardship in its existence, with skin tone between slightly pale and fair. While her chest and posterior are both mostly flat and undeveloped the former contains just enough fat to allow some definition, while the latter is just curved enough to be appreciated. Luna’s hair is a shade of silvery blonde, the same color as her rounded eyebrows, and would reach down to her ankles were she to loosen it up (although she typically binds it up into four massive loose ponytails with silken green ribbons). A pair of rabbit ears and a large poofy rabbit tail both share the same color, although they are a slightly warmer shade. Of course the most captivating part of her would be her eyes: her left eye is a bright pink-purple color while her right one is a brilliant blue, each speckled and sparkling on occasion with brighter blue or pink orbs. Her pupils are rings of black surrounding pink (left) and blue (right) orbs, and an unusual yellow shape can generally be seen within her eyes (most often than not in the shape of a heart).

» Physical Appearance Image:
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» Clothes:
Judging her only by the clothes which she fashioned for herself, one might easily ascertain that Luna is in fact not from any normal place, and while she occasionally wears other outfits this one is her most frequently worn. Multiple layers of silken fabric cover the upper portion of her torso, cutting off quickly to leave a majority of her midsection revealed, held closed by three ties and covered in an intricate pattern, with sleeves ending in cuffs adorned with golden trim and thin see-through silken leaves of white. An incredibly poofy collar of brown tops off her upper garments, detailed with silver cross-like stars. A pair of shorts made of similar fabric adorns her lower body, cutting off early enough so that most of her legs remain uncovered, and containing a ‘V’ shaped cut in the back for her tail to freely poke out through. These are slightly poofy and while they are less colorful they also have a fancy trim, only of a blacken silk thin enough to be slightly see-through. A pair of leather suspenders holds up an unusual skirt. The outer layer is a thinner leathery fabric and contains belts for holding multiple sturdy glass jars of a strange orange liquid, while the inner layer is a delicate silken white fabric, interlaced to create a ruffled effect. Strangely this skirt stops half-way, leaving the front completely exposed, and contains unusual bunny-eared trim. A pair of short leather boots cover her feet, and beneath these she wears a set of silken socks which are wrapped over the top and held to her upper ankles with ribbons of red and black, along with a couple of bunny-eared clasps. Topping off this unusual outfit is a hat which is covered with all the colors of the rest of her outfit, along with some of the same intricate designs (including bunny-eared trimmings).

» Other Appearance:
While most people try to hide their emotions behind one mask (like those who keep a constant neutral expressionless gaze) Luna is a person deeply entrenched within her emotions. Suffice it to say she has a terrible poker face: if she is happy, or sad, or angry, or in pain it will be easily visible, as she has issues covering these things up. As is expected at first glance Luna’s body is incredibly soft and smooth to the touch, with a normal level of warmth and no visible hair save that which adorns her head. Her body is also incredibly flexible, making it easy for her to pull off advanced acrobatic maneuvers. She often smells of fresh winter snow and her voice is always gentle though somewhat childish in tone. If one were to view her Aether they would notice a gentle outline of a faintly bluish-tinted white. As with any other creature with a tail Luna generally sits down upon her knees, even in chairs, as otherwise her tail would be in the way. The exception to this would be any sort of chair with an open back, which might prompt her to sit normally. She favors her right hand and is O+ blood typed, although not all of the traits associated with it necessarily fit to her personality.


I. Personality Traits


» Personality:
Adaptable + Luna is a very adaptable person thanks to her open-mindedness. While this has obvious benefits during combat (as she can quickly formulate new strategies) it also has plenty of social applications. Adapting herself to a new culture comes easily and may even bring her some level of excitement. She can also learn new things more quickly as she leaves her mind open for easy molding. Luna’s adaptability seems to be something she was simply born with and is driven by a deep seated and endless supply of curiosity.

Compassionate + Luna is an endless well of compassionate love. She loves the very concept of love itself and strives to spread it by whatever means possible to everyone she meets, regardless of their feelings towards her. If there might be a peaceful resolution to any situation then she will pursue it passionately. Luna is also very nurturing towards those that she feels might need it. This compassion is perhaps due to her naivety and ignorance, as she has yet to experience many evils.

Energetic + Luna is perhaps the very definition of bubbly excitement. There is seemingly no end to her happy energy, as she always remains optimistic and gives everything 110% of her effort! Even the most mundane of things can often set this off, especially if it is something brand new to her. Her youth is most likely the root of her endless energy and optimism.

Reliable + Luna is quite reliable when she is needed. Not only is she fiercely loyal towards any friends she might make but she is also completely honest with them. If something is asked of her she will typically get right on the task, working restlessly until it is finished! She trusts others easily and it is easy to see why others might trust her just as easily. Her reliability is entrenched within her due to her desire to make more friends.

Willful + Luna’s willpower is augmented by her endless supply of optimism. By force alone it is incredibly difficult to break her down as she believes that right will generally always win out over wrong. If she is acting to help someone she cares about then it will be tough to force her into giving in, and she will often risk life and limb to do the right thing, regardless of the potential punishment. Luna’s force of will stems entirely from her optimism: if one were to break that down then her willpower would soon follow the same fate.

Directionally Challenged – Luna is horrible with finding her way to new places, easily getting lost even with directions (which, unless written down, she will generally forget anyways). Any sort of internal compass that a person might find has been strangely misplaced in her case. Even traveling short distances might get her lost, and because of this she is often late to any meetings or with regards to any sort of plan.

Forgetful – For whatever reason it is difficult for Luna to remember many different things. She has the most troubles with specific numbers, but names of specific people or places also often baffle her. It takes her a while to remember either, and often plenty of practice, but eventually she will at least learn a person’s name. Book work is also especially difficult for her.

Gullible – Luna easily trusts her friends, but she is also quick to trust a stranger, and even someone that might be perceived as an enemy. This is an unfortunate side effect of her optimism. Simply put: she will trust strangers and enemies alike because she believes that everyone has a good side to them, and that finding that good side is easy with enough effort! As such it is simple to trick her into things, or to make her believe in something, no matter how outrageous it might be. This particular weakness stems from both her optimism and her desire to help and believe in others.

Ignorant – Luna is, simply put, ignorant. She hasn’t been around very long and hasn’t had any sort of teacher to teach her about the world, nor did she have any parental support. This certainly isn’t helped by her gullibility, and often times this will be what gets her into the most trouble. Still, this is an issue that could be fixed, provided she is given a proper education from a proper mentor. Otherwise it might end up messing her up completely.

Reckless – Because she puts all of her effort into getting things done and because of her curiosity Luna will often dive right into new things without first figuring out whether or not it is a good idea. A mixture of boundless energy, curiosity, and optimism for things turning out just right certainly don’t help with this trait. In combat this is perhaps one of her greatest weaknesses, as reckless attacks will often leave her injured or in trouble.

» Likes / Dislikes:
Luna’s three favorite things in life are exploring new things or places, parties, and visiting her lonely home. Her favorite color is green as it represents the life spread across Earth’s surface. If she had to choose just one food as her favorite then it would be carrots, although her favorite smell would be the tropical scent of the ocean. She hates anything painful, fighting in general, and studying. Her least favorite color is red because it reminds her of blood, her most disliked food is octopus because of the suckers, and she hates the smell of onions.

» Fears:
Luna has yet to fully experience life, and so there is very little that she actually fears. Her greatest fear is being alone, as it has been something that she has already had to deal with. She was born into the world alone and her time spent on the Moon thus far has been similarly lonely. Otherwise anything that might bring her pain is nearly as scary. While certain situations may allow her to bypass this particular fear it is still something that will, at the very least, cause her to pause. Being bound up in any way is also quite the scary concept for her, as it would restrict her freedoms, and it is something which may lead right into the same pain that she already fears.

» Moral Code / Goals:
At this point Luna’s moral code is very simple: do good things for people and try one’s best to bring out the good in everyone! It is very simplistic, but then so is she. It ties well into what she is at heart: a good person trying to do good things for people, who she believes at heart are good. Currently she has four main goals in life. The first is to make as many new friends as possible. Secondly, and perhaps most important for the majority, is to bring an end to any wars or big conflicts which might plague Earth, or anywhere for that matter. Thirdly she also wishes to experience as much as she possibly can and to learn more about life in general. Finally she wishes to bring life to her home, the Moon, so that it will never again be lonely.

» Other Personality:
Luna’s alignment would be, if nothing else, chaotic good, simply because she doesn’t know much about laws and believes that good should triumph everything else whenever possible. She currently holds no prejudices as she hasn’t actually met anyone else, and so that is to be seen. Nor has she had any sort of sexual experiences, however if anything she would be classed as pansexual simply because love triumphs over all!


I. Character History


» History
For thousands upon thousands of years there was desolate silence, interrupted only occasionally by a meteorite here and there, briefly visiting though ultimately and instantly disappearing. It stood overlooking Earth, a silent protector shielding the life covered planet from many an impact. It provided light for many creatures during an otherwise darkened night. It guided the calendar for civilizations, affected tidal forces, and without it life itself might not have come into existence. In some cultures it was worshipped as a god, or a goddess, or some other divine creature. Many names were given to it, but perhaps the most important one in this particular story is Luna.

One day an icy asteroid passed near the lonely Moon, having spent many years hurtling, also alone, through the empty vast darkness of space. Captured by the Moon’s gravity it circled around. For days they were companions, and neither was alone, but then another smaller asteroid bumped into the Moon’s new friend, and it was flung once more into the depths of space. Saddened by the loss of its friend, and hoping to escape its new loneliness, the Moon created its first child: a creature later named Mjesec Vorgukliendid, otherwise known as Moonie. The child fed from its flesh, it was alive, it grew, but they did not speak, for they knew not how. Despite its creation the Moon was, once more, alone.

The relative silence that had developed was finally broken as Man sent objects up to its surface, and in a relatively short time they too arrived. What was once deemed an impossible task had been achieved. No longer would the Moon be alone: Earth’s children had visited. They would not stay long, but this simple fact meant that, given enough time, they might return and settle down. Earth had many children, now the moon would too, especially once its only child met with Earth’s. Sadly these visits came to a halt, and for many years the Moon was left lonely once more.

Four years ago the Vanguard arrived, only this time they stayed. A base was constructed. Finally life would remain. However these creatures were different. They brought with them a seed in the form of their greater spiritual presence. The Moon could finally give birth to another child of its own, but it needed something else, as giving birth to its first child had drained it. As luck would have it an old friend returned.

After being flung away from the Moon the icy asteroid had wandered the cosmos, nearly colliding with other celestial objects, and on many occasions it was caught within their gravity. However it always remembered its first friend, and fate decided that they were destined to remain together. After being knocked around by many smaller rocks it was finally freed and guided back towards Earth. With a great crash it embraced its old friend, reunited after thousands of years, and with enough energy to give birth to something new.

From the crater rose a conscious, a creature of pure spiritual energy, which clinged to its father’s icy core. Day by day it grew more powerful, suckling upon the energy provided by mother Moon and by the Earth’s children which had settled upon her surface. The icy core was absorbed into the child’s body as it finally took to floating in the vacuum of space. Sensing the Vanguard’s energy, the new lifeform drifted forth in ethereal form. It took a year, but finally she’d arrived.

When the child arrived she was initially scared. The creatures were large, and there were many of them. However a voice spoke to her. It was kind, and gentle, and told her not to worry, for they could not see her. Trusting the voice, she approached, and from that day forth she observed the children of Earth. She learned their language, and about Earth, and that her mother’s name was Moon. Her mother had other names, and so figuring that she would not mind the child took one of them for herself: Luna.

For four years she learned from and observed the various creatures, never seen but often present. The initial three years were primarily spent learning the basics, like language and how to move like one of them, to stand up and walk. She’d even managed to form some semblance of a body. Her mother was proud, and the two spoke to each other every day, however the Moon knew that it could not teach the child much, as it too was ignorant of the ways of life. Her child would need to be among them, but she did not have the energy to make that happen.

Suddenly Earth’s children were attacked, invaded by some outside threat. The Moon was helpless to defend them, but she knew that her child was not. This calamity introduced a sudden great wave of spiritual energy, and Luna was told to embrace it. By doing so she would gain a body. She would be seen by them, she could interact with them, and she could finally have what the Moon could not: friendship.

While initially frightened by the idea the Moon promised that she would be fine, that they would never be truly separated, and that she would have a proper life. And so, with great hesitation, Luna took in great quantities of the freed spiritual energy, which had been converted into Aether by the Moon. In a brilliant flash of light she was born into the physical realm, taking inspiration from the tale of the Moon rabbit (as it was one of her favorite), although not too much, as she wished to be somewhat relatable to the Earth children.

With a body of her own, and desperate to protect her mother, Luna set off towards the raging battles, hoping to bring an end to the fighting.

CONTINUED BELOW


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Fri Jul 08, 2016 1:19 am
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THE NATURE IRAMASHA TEMPLATE

Powers
宇宙の装備者


I. Natural Abilities


» Natural Abilities

Accustomed to Space:
Luna was born in space and finds it quite comfortable. Like her water bear friends, Luna is able to survive in incredible environments. Intense pressure, incredibly cold or hot temperatures, and even airless environments are no issue, as she doesn't actually need to breathe. Normal foods are not a requirement for her: she can survive on the fundamental forces alone. Just like the water bear she is incredibly durable despite her adorable, frail appearance.

Acrobatic:
Luna is quite flexible. If she wanted to participate in gymnastics, or to pull off some fancy acrobatic feats, then it would come quite easily to her! Her balance is also exceptional, perhaps due to her ears, or perhaps due to the multitude of senses she is able to use.

Adaptable:
Luna is incredibly adaptable. Not only will she typically come up with unusual and sometimes even inventive ways to overcome obstacles, but she is also a naturally gifted learner. She will catch on to new concepts quicker than most people, especially those things that are learned by doing as opposed to book work. However unlike her friend Haru she tends to take a little longer in on-the-fly situations, as she focuses more on thinking things through and less on "gut feelings".

Cosmic Sensing:
Luna is able to sense a lot of strange things. She can detect dark energy, electromagnetic fields, gravity fields, and even the very faint weak and strong forces. With enough focus she is able to visualize these, although at the moment it doesn't come easily, as she is still learning. Radiation is also something she can sense, although currently she can't quite pick out specific types. On top of all this she has extraordinary hearing abilities, due to her large bunny ears! Of course that is relatively tame in comparison with the other sensory abilities.

Leg Strength:
However strong Luna's body might be it is little in comparison to her legs, which are three times as powerful. She can leap incredible distances and to astounding heights in a single bound, and her legs are durable enough to withstand the forces of any impact made after these leaps. Of course this doesn't mean they are any more durable than the rest of her body, simply that they are accustomed to dealing with the impact of her returning to the ground!

Moon Speak:
Luna claims that she can speak to the Moon, and potentially to any other cosmic entity or planetary body (including asteroids and comets). Whether she is just crazy or is actually speaking to such things is anyone's guess, however, as others have not claimed to get answers back as she does.

I. Equipment Section


» Equipment

Moon Juice:
Luna carries with her four flasks buckled into her half-skirt, each containing an unusual orange liquid. This is something she calls Moon Juice. In fact it is actually more akin to cosmic juice, as it is a mixture of the four fundamental forces and dark energy. If she is in an emergency and needs an extra boost of power she may drink from one of the flasks, which will begin to rapidly recover the energy of any Iramasha who might drink from them (of course this takes time, at least a post to start in the first place, and the speed of recovery is based off the natural recovery ability of whoever is drinking it). Other types of creatures can use the juice contained within, however it will only be half as effective. Refilling them is only a matter of time, although she can speed up the process by returning to space (it would take roughly an entire thread on Earth to refill them, and half the time in Space). Regardless, she only has four flasks, so once those are used up she will need to make some more. It also makes the drinker feel really, really good! Liquid courage, in this case, is almost literal: whoever does drink it will become courageous, hyper, and probably pretty reckless, so it might not be very good in situations in which a calm, cool head is required. The liquid tastes of a carrot-orange mixture.

I. Racial Abilities & Skills


» Aether Magic

Nothing yet!

» Aether Arts Techniques & Abilities

Meteor Stance:
Luna's primary method of close quarters combat is the Meteor Stance, so called because it often involves powerful leaping kicks! It also involves gravity. A lot of gravity. For starters, she will lower the gravity around her body, allowing her to make incredible leaps into the air. Then, by reversing it, and making the pull of gravity upon her body greater, she is able to drop down towards her opponents with incredible force, crashing into them or the ground or whatever she ends up hitting like a meteor! Of course this is the most obvious use of gravity within this fighting stance. She can also create gravity wells within her limbs. These will attract nearby objects, say her opponent's face, so when she goes in for a strike she is much more likely to hit them, as they are pulled right into her attacks! Of course anyone who is strong enough could simply pull themselves away from the miniature gravity wells, and usually it is only great for those who are close to the strength of her Aether Arts. Using this for too long can become very draining due to the rapid switches in gravity, however, and creating gravity wells within her limbs will damage them for some time if she is not careful. As such, she can keep this up for roughly four posts before she starts to grow tired, and up to six posts before her limbs begin to give out from the stress, after which point she will need time for recovery (generally at least four posts).

Static Burst:
If Meteor Stance is not enough, Luna has a secondary option available to her, and that is Static Burst. First she manipulates the electromagnetic pulses firing between her nerves, speeding them up in order to super charge her muscles and both her body's and brain's reaction times. Essentially she uses this to boost her own fighting ability, doubling her reaction speed, movement speed, and the strength of her body. Secondly she will use this against her opponents: by temporarily halting the firing of nerves within locations struck with these static bursts she can effectively disable them! Against stronger opponents this might be painful, however it won't do much else, and it will really only paralyze the struck limbs of those as strong or weaker than she is (and usually only for a couple of posts). Of course using this on herself is incredibly draining, and will rapidly wear out her muscles to the point of exhaustion and painful cramping (that is, enhancing her own body with this can only be sustained for about three posts before exhaustion and cramping kicks in, at which point it will take at least four to cool down and recover from).


» Aether Stones:

Luna doesn't really know how to create Aether Stones yet.

I. Aether Class


» Aether Class Name: The Nature Iramasha of Cosmic Forces

» Aether Class Power: (What is the primary power of your Aether Class?)

» Aether Class Abilities: (What abilities does your Iramasha gain from this Aether Class?)

» Sub-Aether Class Power: (Sub-Aether Class Power refers to additional powers which are directly connected to your Iramasha's Element. For example, Cirno Iramasha's Aether Class was named "The Angel of The Ice". So she had Sub-Aether sorts of wind, ice, snow, cold and angelic prowess. Use something similar for your own as this section is optional.)

» Sub-Aether Class Abilities (These are just abilities that come with your Sub-Aether Class Power)

I. Nature Aether Abilities


Animal Mimicry:
So far Luna is able to speak with the only creature that she knows within space: the humble tardigrade, otherwise known as a water bear. These are micro-animals, growing anywhere between less than .1 mm to 1.5 mm. They can survive between -272 C and 151 C, they are able to withstand the vacuum of space, pressures found at the bottom of the ocean, incredibly lethal doses of radiation, they can withstand being dehydrated for years, and they can even live without food or water for up to thirty years. Rarely do these creatures get the chance to visit space, but on the few occasions that they have Luna has discovered an ability to speak with them. It is no wonder then that she too is able to mimic these fascinating creatures, and is equally and possibly more difficult to destroy via forces of nature alone.

Recovery Speed:
Due to the varied nature of Luna's being she has a couple options when it comes to her recovery. While in space she has easy access to dark energy, which is found generally everywhere. Stamina is recovered pretty quickly if she gets a few moments to chow down upon some of the energy (with a couple of turns she might be able to recover any lost energy, provided she is not interrupted). Light wounds can be healed within a post, though something like a broken bone or a ruptured organ would take longer (two posts generally). Recovering a limb can take up to three posts (or four for larger ones). However on Earth this becomes a problem, as there is far less of it available. In this case she can draw upon Earth's gravitational field, and even partly from the Moon when it is full enough. Unfortunately these forces are not as powerful or as abundant, and so recovery times for everything are doubled.

Nature Alteration:

Unknown!


I. Aether Armament


Aether Armament Name: Mother Moon

Aether Armament Appearance:
Luna's Aether Armament is the Moon itself. Or, rather, it is a projection of the Moon. Worn upon Luna's right middle finger is a silver ring, embedded upon which is a miniature version of the moon. It is even made of the same material. When it is activated this miniature moon disappears, instead appearing overhead. Currently it can be enlarged to the size of a small car. Of course the moon stone on this miniature projection is more durable than the stone found on the real moon, as it is a much concentrated version, and she will generally use her powers in order to utilize it as a weapon. She also likes to talk to it. As her power grows so shall the projection's size, density, and durability.

Aether Armament Abilities:
Mother Moon is a miniature planetary body. It provides Luna with comfort, support, a constant source of cosmic energy (it will essentially supply her with a slight though constant source of dark energy), and a large object with which to fling at opponents (unassisted it will hit only a little harder than she can, although should she unlock the ability to alter gravity around other objects then it could be flung like a meteor). It can even come in handy with protecting her, if need be!

VII. Ether Morph - Immersion


(You can have this release at any Aether Control, but it is recommended you have it at adept for it to be stable.)

» Ether Morph Immersion Incantation (Is there any sort of phrase used to unlock their Ether Morph? This is optional.)

» Ether Morph Immersion Appearance (What does your Iramasha look like during their release?)

» Ether Morph Immersion Abilities (What abilities does your Iramasha gain, or approve in during this release?)


I. Ether Morph - World Fusion


(You can have this release at any Aether Control, but it is recommended you have it at master for it to be stable.)

» Ether Morph World Fusion Incantation (Is there any sort of phrase used to unlock their Ether Morph? This is optional.)

» Ether Morph World Fusion Appearance (What does your Iramasha look like during their release?)

» Ether Morph World Fusion Abilities (What abilities does your Iramasha gain, or approve in during this release?)


I. Ether Morph - Peak Eclipse


(You can have this release at any Aether Control after 0-3, but it is recommended you have it at grand master for it to be stable.)

» Ether Morph Peak Eclipse Incantation (Is there any sort of phrase used to unlock their Ether Morph? This is optional.)

» Ether Morph Peak Eclipse Appearance (What does your Iramasha look like during their release?)

» Ether Morph Peak Eclipse Abilities (What abilities does your Iramasha gain, or approve in during this release?)


I. Skill Sheets


(To Find Out about what these skills are for, please READ THIS THREAD before you try doing anything to it. After you have read it, do not fill your skills out until a staff member has graded your thread. The staff member checking your app will also give you Will Skills in which you can add to your app when approved.

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Iramasha Skill Sheet
  • Aether Control: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
  • Aether Magic: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
  • Aether Arts: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
  • Aether Stones: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master


Nature Iramasha Skill Sheet
  • Recovery: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
  • Nature Transmutation: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master


General Skills
  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Focus: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


[WILL SKILLS ARE NOT FILLED IN UNTIL A MOD/ADMIN REVIEWS YOUR APP]


Roleplay Sample


» Role Play Sample:

Awakening Despair [w/Nagato]

Victorian Treat [w/Yuuki]

The Wolf and the Madman [w/Vanyel]

Train me, damnit [w/Hayden, Henrex, and Rachael]

Liu vs Yuki [The Colosseum of Madness Event][w/Liu]

END OF THE IRAMASHA APPLICATION


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Comments/Notes:

Not a necessary change, just a personal request, I would like a note added under leg strength that their jump strength doesn't directly translate to durability but I'm sure you know that!


Moon Juice:

What exactly will the juice do? How long does it last? How many times can it be used per thread? Per post? Are there negative effects? Can anyone drink it or just her? Need some more specifics on this one.

Meteor Stance:

Need a note here that the gravity changes drain her considerably. On top of that, I need a post/thread count for how many times she can shift gravity like this. Also, need some way for opponents to resist/break free of the pull. It can be a skill or tier thing and I'll leave it up to you how you wanna balance this but it needs a bit of tweaking.

Static Burst:

A lot of opponents she will face have resistances to paralysis techniques like this so keep that in mind. On top of that, I need more detail on how much the charges boost her personally as well as how long the enemy will be stunned/disabled for. If it would simply shock stronger opponents and disable weaker ones, I need to know that as well. Also, how many times it can be used per post/thread.

Animal Mimicry:

The resistances to extremes is fine, but the last sentence kinda bugs me. It'd help me out a lot if you could at a note saying that she's more difficult to destroy by forces of nature or “natural causes” if you will.

Recovery Speed:

If this is for stamina, I need to know if it's unlimited or if she can only recover it for so long. If this is for health/wounds I need to know how much she can heal, the severity of injuries she can heal (just small cuts and bruises? Or severed limbs?), if there's any negative side effects, how much it drains her, how many posts it takes to heal specific injuries, how many times she can use this per post/thread, etc. Also, I'm assuming by the wording that this process gets stronger when she is space in which case I need comparisons as to how much stronger it is when she's outside of earth. I'm a bit iffy on her being able to pull from ALL of those forces on earth to heal her, and would like you to either choose one or make the amount she can pull from each relatively small to even out.

Nature Alteration:

This is way too vague for how powerful its implications are. She can accelerate nature, change the weight of things, shift/stop charges, AND manipulate forces and elements? That seems like a bit much and would advise you to reconsider this ability as I'm not sure what the direction you were going for here was.

Mother Moon:

I need the note about her Moon replica being “much more durable than the actual moon” removed, as the ACTUAL moon just took several hundred thousand fucktons of abuse and is still in orbit somehow so there's no way her defense would be even stronger than that. On top of that, I need to know how much cosmic energy it supplies luna, how durable it is (remember, BALANCED), and how much damage it would do upon impacting an opponent.


Once these issues are fixed, I'll be ready to give her a tier!


Tier: N/A


I envy because of the heart.
I glutton because of the heart.
I covet because of the heart.
I am prideful because of the heart.
I sloth because of the heart.
I rage because of the heart.
Because of the heart...
I lust for everything about you.


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  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


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  • Willpower/Determination: Advanced
  • Mental Deduction: Adept
  • Pain Endurance: Adept
  • Focus: Adept


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I envy because of the heart.
I glutton because of the heart.
I covet because of the heart.
I am prideful because of the heart.
I sloth because of the heart.
I rage because of the heart.
Because of the heart...
I lust for everything about you.


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