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Zaz
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Sun Jun 12, 2016 2:18 pm
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» Name Of Character: Chloranthy
» Link To Character: >Here<
» Upgrading: Tier upgrade to 3-5 and this in Natural Abilities:
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» Why: Explained >Here<

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Sun Jun 12, 2016 5:33 pm
[adm]Add a note stating that separating pieces of himself or changing his state of matter would be massively draining tasks, and I'll slap this with an approval [/adm]


I envy because of the heart.
I glutton because of the heart.
I covet because of the heart.
I am prideful because of the heart.
I sloth because of the heart.
I rage because of the heart.
Because of the heart...
I lust for everything about you.


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Sun Jun 12, 2016 6:20 pm
Added this piece right after the first sentence describing his vaporization:
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The part about him separating pieces of his body requiring large amounts of energy confused me. What the ability means is that if his body were to be in pieces, he can still control all of his body. It requiring large amounts of energy to separate may also be confusing in certain situations. For example, if someone were to cut his arm off, would they need a large amount of energy in order to force it to separate? Also, the ability isn't that overpowered, as if mass greater than his original mass were to exist, he already pays energy to upkeep it that increases as the amount greater increases. So, if he were to separate into many pieces without spending potentially quite a bit of energy, the pieces would be very small as it would just be his original mass.

And as a note, this does not mean that he wouldn't take damage if his arm were to be cut off. As his body is made of a unique substance that is not organic, he doesn't have any internal organs. This makes him a bit more resilient to attacks. Bladed attacks happen to be what he's most resilient to. This is because when they cut through him, they aren't hitting as much surface area as other attacks would, therefore damaging less of his body. However, what they do hit is indeed damaged.

However, if it is truly needed, I am open to suggestions on how to limit it further.
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Sun Jun 12, 2016 6:34 pm
Well I more or less meant that if he were to use that to avoid damage by separating part of himself as an attack would pass through, then reattaching it so that he doesn't actually take damage, then that process of avoiding an attack would take a lot of energy for him to use his body control in that way,

Otherwise, approved, but don't go too nuts on this. This has the potential to be kinda OP so we're gonna be keeping an eye on it.


I envy because of the heart.
I glutton because of the heart.
I covet because of the heart.
I am prideful because of the heart.
I sloth because of the heart.
I rage because of the heart.
Because of the heart...
I lust for everything about you.


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Sun Jun 12, 2016 6:38 pm
As all movement of his body is based off of his general speed, splitting cannot be instantaneous. To be used to dodge an attack, he would have to be quite a bit faster than the attack, at which point he could dodge through other probably preferable means as well. I added a note that specifies this point.
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