Daisuke

Name: Daisuke

Age: 16

Sex: male

Appearance: under his cloak he hides more then just his attitude, but he hides a almost transparent shirt, from being stretched so much, that is a faded gray, that obviously doesnt fit him. His pants are almost the same, just they actually look like they would fit him, they are torn at the knees from being overly used and roughly at that. His shoes look no better, they are dirty and destroyed nearly, the glue holding the sole's of the shoes to the fabric is coming apart and flap on the ground as he walks.

Background: When Daisuke was born he had a tragic accident his parents were killed by hollows, shinigami came and rescued him from the hollows before they devoured him, but his parents souls were to late, and had already been devoured by the hollows, The shinigami, not knowing what to do with the child, left him, he was later found by a female, that he soon learned to call mother, she was a tech freak and loved to make herself little robot helpers in the end, they back fired and killed her, and nearly killed Daisuke, other then he learned how to fight with tools, and natural instinct, helped him. He was so terrified afterwards, his godmother had died, his blood covered his hands and soaked his hair, he had blurred vision from the tears he cried, what he didn't know this was his second time in his life losing one who cared for him.

He later grew up on his own, he loved to live near area where he could swim, he loved how the water moved over his skin and made him feel alive. Made it feel like the sin's of life were just washing away, until something snagged his foot underwater, when he noticed what he was he was surprised he hadn't noticed his foot had slipped through the rocks into a crack. As he pulled his foot he noticed he was stuck, it was either break his foot and try his chances with moving towards shore, or allow himself to eventually grow tired and drown. He knew the logical way was wait it out, but he couldn't wait for someone to come and help, he decided to later break his foot to swim out, seeing his foot torn and mangled with dead skin hanging and bleeding in the water disgusted him.

When he later healed he returned back to the water this time a bigger body of water, the ocean, he swam out and let himself relax, once again a mistake, for he had stumbled upon the territory of a hollow like shark, and the shark appearance alone was enough to terrify him of the ocean when it jumped out of the water and took him under the water using its stomach, having landed on his stomach and dragged him down, as he went he couldn't help but breath in gulps of water, the only way he got lucky was that they swarmed each other fighting over him, as he swam away to the surface, getting help and soon eliminating the hollows, but this opened a door way to fear which quickly entered, and ever since he has had a fear for large lakes and the ocean.

He later learned of KJ, and how he had advanced technology and provided it to almost anyone as long as they paid for the advancements on the spot with heavy amounts of pay. He studied this technology and learned that KJ some how mass produced the items so that he would never run out of said demanded item. He vowed that some day he would save up for enough money to be able to work with KJ at the cyberbrain and earn a honest living and probally a good ammount of knowledge.

Personality: He is kind and will help anyone in need. Though he is lazy and usually is found sleeping on the sidewalk at times, or in someones restaurant and or store, sleeping, he though has come to make a fond addiction to find KJ. He loves anything mechanical and certainly anything KJ, you own it, he may try removing it to look at it and or mess with it abit to learn how it tinks. He is very energetic when he isnt sleeping, which helps when he is searching through Karakura for KJ's cyberbrain enterance, so that he can see if he can learn abit from KJ or become friends.

Likes: Food, Reading Magazines, Mechanic's, KJ's work.

Dislikes: Crappy Mechanic's, shitty last moment work.

Fear: Being killed

Powers: For a human he is almost like a quincy just in a way he uses a tool, almost like a quincy's tool, or a nulls tool, it is that of a sword hilt, the sword is almost a mimic of Nikilo Flamme's null tool, yet instead of the blade appearing, it has to do something specific to appear, or be rather interesting, it is able to suck any material into it hilt, to create a blade of such elements, he suck in the ground, he has a blade able to strike with the power of the ground, sucks in a fire, it becomes solidified magma, that is still able to set on fire, he takes water, it becomes solidified ice so that it is possible to hit with. It has also been said to have been able to at one point asorb a cero or a deadly attack, also anything used to become the blade, is then destroyed litterally from existence the moment he destroys the blade, making it become nothing but a sword hilt again.

LIST OF ELEMENTS ABLE TO TRANSMUTE.

Fire, Water, Earth, Ice, Trees, Ground, Metal, cero in its strength and durablity, bala in its light weightness, explosions to a minor,

(You CANNOT fill the skill levels in until your tier is assigned. )
Skill level: Hand to Hand: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill level: Speed: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill level: Powers: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master

Strengths: Fighting along side team mates,

Weakness: His own blood, massive bodies of water

RP Sample: Dace's first post


He was walking down a hallway, a never ending hallway of doors, he didn't open any of them, he just continued to walk, he knew what was behind each one, nothing. He just kept walking and walking towards the flickering light at the end of the hallway. As he walked he saw that the light would move ever so closer towards the other direction he was going, so in terms, it was probably an illusion, or just a fucked up world. Though it seemed ever step he took, he got a step closer, and it moved just half a step less then him, so eventually, if he continued he would make it towards what seemed to be the only light in the place. He continued to walk until he noticed a door to his right, it was slightly open, all the other doors though, were perfectly shut, so how did this one door remain open? He didn't bother to look, he had been to this place before, and never truly saw the exit till now. So he decided to continue moving towards the door until, a white light drowned him out.

Put a WIP in your profile name.

Hiya I'm Soulless, I'm gonna review your profile today! Feel free to PM/IM/PC me any questions/concerns/complaints about the review. Now that introductions are done, let's get us started shall we?

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Let's at LEAST have the appearance be a PROPER SENTENCE! Damn, I know this site shouldn't be asking for much but at least give the site the appreciation for a proper sentence. While I'm on that, please remove emoticons in the profile- unless it is your character typing the profile and not you there should be no reason that you should bleed your personality into the profile in such an untactful manner. Also, add more description to the appearance place. I don't know his pants, his general clothing, height, weight, build, first impressions when looking at him, nothing. I see a shoulder-up picture and a 'ok the hair is more blonde than int he picture'. Hair =/= the whole person. Please put more description into the appearance, it just looks lazy as it is now.

So.. he dropped out of school and then magically learned an ability. How does that even make sense? Please explain! Also, how did his parents feel about him dropping out? Why was he so interested in hollow carcasses? Why did he drop out? C'mon history isn't a 'this happened then this happened' in such a dry-and-cut way. Your character's history shapes who he is today, so please explain further how he got his powers, other than 'he got them!' because it provides no explanation and is therefore somewhat hard to believe.

He likes mechanics, is helpful and energetic while awake but he is lazy and sleepy at the same time. Ok, but that's kinda flat. Add more dimensions to this character, I want to know how he views his world, why he likes mechanics so much. If he fears death- why? What does he think of nulls, hollows, everything else? How does his love of hollow carcasses spawn into a love for mechanics? What is so intriguing about the machinery that he goes so extreme as to mess with other people's items?

As for copying, I think it's kinda hax because if you copy a bankai it don't matter how long you have it for it's still hax. Could you either say something like 'mimic' rather than copy, and then say whatever he mimics is still at his level tier? For example if he mimic's a 0-1 captain's bankai, his bankai would not be as powerful and still be within his general tier's range of power. Similarly if he picked up a bala weaker than he is, he can mimic it but it'd be more powerful- up to his level? I think it would be a suiting limitation to keep him from being too hax.

So his strengths are teamwork and his weaknesses are... his own blood? You didn't mention THIS in your personality! Please explain why in your personality, since the relation is not very obvious. Is he scared of it or something?

Fix these things, then I'll figure out what tier Daisuke belongs into.

Editted abit, hope it seems abit better, changed the power also.

Hey, I'm Urufu, and I will be reviewing your app now.

Basically, everything fits and looks good. However, I need more information on your power. I need you to write out Every single thing he can absorb, what it does to his sword, how that part is destroyed, if there is any special way to do it, and how long it will last if it doesn't get destroyed naturally. After that, I will review again, and it should be approved. Remember, if it isn't in the list, you can't absorb it.

list made.....

No Darkness, No light, No human skin, No anything on the periodic table. Do you even know what is on that table? Pick six from the table.

Alright, but you still never explained what your sword would like like when it absorbed those things.

Approved, 2-2

Skill level: Hand to Hand: Adept
Skill level: Speed:Advanced
Skill level: Powers: Adept