Questo The Hohl

Race: Hohl Arqurero
Name: Questo Itamai
Height: 6"2
Restu Color: Red
Weight: 197 Age: 16
Face Claim: https://imgur.com/GepEJID
(Guessing I put back story here? I don't know, the other pages dident work, I hope his one does, only a couple did.)
How he became A Hohl Arquero: Soul Takeover
Back story: Born to a drunk abusive father, but a caring mother that swore he could change him, (the father) The mother was also a quincy (Yeah, I can change that) His mother trained him, Into his Older ages (Late 15.) When she suddenly disappeared, his father kicked him out of his house, enraged by the Lost of his mother and kicked out of his home, he became more aggressive, he got his Hair style during his time out, liking it but knowing many, many may hate it. due to his fathers habit, he hated Alchol and swore to never drink it, not even once. But also during this time, is when he became a Hohl, he also remained his job of Hunting hollows, but wondered what would happened if he used soul take on one, knowing it may his most stupid idea, but also thinking may give him more power, he hunted far and wide for a hollow to try it on, he found one he thought would work the best on, he did it, then became a Hohl, he got this Early 16, about 2 weeks after being kicked out, he still has it to this day, Unknown to what it might do, he never tried to remove it, he kind of WANTED something to happen, carving that power he wanted, since he allways did want more power! (Also I forgot to add but he use to Hunt Hollows for sport, why not rite?)
Eyes: Dark Brown.
Stronger Side: Quincy, since he really just got these Hohl stuff, no idea how to use it.
Any other stuff I forgot?

Not used, go to the bottom one, that I wrote.

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• Appearance Present [X]
  
• Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  
• Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  
• 10 sentences for personality [o]
  
• History is of appropriate length [o]
  
• Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [o]
  
• Powers are described reasonably enough [o]
  
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• Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[x]
  
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• RP Sample is 10 sentences [o]
  

• Willpower/Determination: N/A
  
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General Skills

• Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  
• General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  
• Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  
• Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  

Racial Skills

• Acid Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  
• Garganta : Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  
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Here is the code, just click the button that says "click for copying code" and cntrl-c and you'll have the same code.

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[b]- Name:[/b] (What is your characters name? First and last name, middle names are fine if you want)
[b]- Titles:[/b] (Does your character have any sort of special title rank, nickname or alias?)
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[b]- Appearance Description:[/b] (Please Put 1-2 Paragraph's on your character appearance.)

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[b]- Personality:[/b] (How does your character act? Think of the different types of traits that make your character who they are and write 1-2 paragraph's at least in this section for it.)

[b]- Likes:[/b] (This is self explanatory. What does your character like?)

[b]- Dislikes:[/b] (This is self explanatory. What does your character dislike?)

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[b]- Hollow type:[/b] (What type of Hollow is your character? Is it a Lesser Familiar, Gillian, Adjuchas, Vasto lorde or Xeno Hollow? Remember, you cannot start off as Vasto Lorde without special permission)

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[b]- Background:[/b] (This is a rather important aspect of your hollow's application. It describes who they were in the previous life, how they became a hollow, their training and etc. So please be specific in this part of your characters profile and be sure to have at least 2-4 paragraph's.)

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[b][u]General Skills[/u][/b]
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[*][b]General Speed:[/b] Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
[*][b]Strength:[/b] Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
[*][b]Weapon Skill:[/b] Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
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[b][u]Racial Skills[/u][/b]
[list][*][b]Acid Skill:[/b] Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
[*][b]Garganta :[/b] Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
[*][b]Cero/Bala:[/b] Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
[*][b]Regeneration:[/b] Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
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If you go to the top on the right hand side of your app there will be an edit button, you can edit it from there. ^^ Good job on your first try though, you did a pretty good job without any guide.
Tier: N/A

(Just doing the things that I missed, if that's ok?) Gender: Male. Personaility: Loud, angry, sarcastic, annoying, Serious (When he wants to) Power Hungry (Not really the evil kind, not world domination or anything.) Now! The sample! "Are you sure you wanna go through with this? I could just fire my bow, and your dead." "Fine then! lets begin then shall we?!" *He would draw His Red Restu Quincy Bow And Fire 3 Arrows in quick suprission* "Go die.......you little a...." *He would fall down being knocked out with ounds all over him* (Now....le other things!) Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

•General Speed: Adept

•Strength: Adept

•Weapon Skill: Advanced
(Reasons why his starts Are all kind of set up lik dis)
Since his training with his mother mostly was balanced, she allways wanted to do Weapon skill just in case her little boi got attacked, since she allways thought that would be his best bet to live, he allways worked on it, making it Advanced, also the others is just from normal traning, with his mother and Doing some crimes, trouble things.) Now to add more to history! (dis is gonna be spread out... a lot) His training with his mother started at the young age of 5, he really dident learn anything that was important, but after all those years, would of made a effect, he father use to beat him, his mother allways wanted to change his father, they often argued, he got kicked down stairs, punched even whacked by a bat by his father, he barly ever had good moments with his father, going close to none. (Pretty sure the other one was 3, so yeah, 4.) Now Moves! Cero/Bala: Beginner, he barly uses them and has no idea how to trigger them qq.

(More things I forgot.) Appearance Description: Has a Black Punk Mohawk, About Medium Build, 6"1, Some tats on his Neck and Arms, Black desgins really, (Hard to come up with things here) His Mohawk is about 5 Inces Tall and 3 Inces Wide.) His teeth are pretty clean, He smells kind of like Blood mixed with Chains, with A bit of cherry mixed in. He has Incredible eye sight, and Good hearing. (I cant come up with any more, also Im skipping it.) Likes: Heavy Metal, Power, Mohawks, Skulls. Dislikes: Vegees, Hipsters, Love songs, Presidents, "Fake" People. (Also I forgot DuriabilitY)
Duraibility: Adept (Like every thing else.)
How old he looks: He looks about 18-20ish?

And then I realized I could edit, qq.

Not being used, one at bottom is being used more.

As you already have come to understand, it needs to be in one, cohesive form in the first post. You'll then edit in any changes we may or may not need of you. Some things based on what you've written though.

You do not get to set your skills. The skills you receive are dependent upon the tier that is given from the staff member checking the app, which will henceforth be myself. It is from that tier that you determine what skills you are allotted and then is when you can customize them to what you want within that tier.

Oh, Ima just Copy and paste all of dem, then change them, then mak em one.

Race: Hohl Arqurero
Name: Questo Itamai
Height: 6"2
Restu Color: Red
Weight: 197 Age: 16
Face Claim: https://imgur.com/GepEJID
(Guessing I put back story here? I don't know, the other pages dident work, I hope his one does, only a couple did.)
How he became A Hohl Arquero: Soul Takeover
Back story: Born to a drunk abusive father, but a caring mother that swore he could change him, (the father) The mother was also a quincy (Yeah, I can change that) His mother trained him, Into his Older ages (Late 15.) When she suddenly disappeared, his father kicked him out of his house, enraged by the Lost of his mother and kicked out of his home, he became more aggressive, he got his Hair style during his time out, liking it but knowing many, many may hate it. due to his fathers habit, he hated Alchol and swore to never drink it, not even once. But also during this time, is when he became a Hohl, he also remained his job of Hunting hollows, but wondered what would happened if he used soul take on one, knowing it may his most stupid idea, but also thinking may give him more power, he hunted far and wide for a hollow to try it on, he found one he thought would work the best on, he did it, then became a Hohl, he got this Early 16, about 2 weeks after being kicked out, he still has it to this day, Unknown to what it might do, he never tried to remove it, he kind of WANTED something to happen, carving that power he wanted, since he allways did want more power! (Also I forgot to add but he use to Hunt Hollows for sport, why not rite?)
Eyes: Dark Brown.
Stronger Side: Quincy, since he really just got these Hohl stuff, no idea how to use it.
Any other stuff I forgot?



Gender: Male





Also, he was a troubled teen, just asking that, a real big trouble maker, also I know I forgot stuff, I allways do.







-Gender: Male. Personaility: Loud, angry, sarcastic, annoying, Serious (When he wants to) Power Hungry (Not really the evil kind, not world domination or anything.) Now! The sample! "Are you sure you wanna go through with this? I could just fire my bow, and your dead." "Fine then! lets begin then shall we?!" *He would draw His Red Restu Quincy Bow And Fire 3 Arrows in quick suprission* "Go die.......you little a...." *He would fall down being knocked out with ounds all over him* (Now....le other things!) Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


(Reasons why his starts Are all kind of set up lik dis)
Since his training with his mother mostly was balanced, she allways wanted to do Weapon skill just in case her little boi got attacked, since she allways thought that would be his best bet to live, he allways worked on it, making it Advanced, also the others is just from normal traning, with his mother and Doing some crimes, trouble things.) Now to add more to history! (dis is gonna be spread out... a lot) His training with his mother started at the young age of 5, he really dident learn anything that was important, but after all those years, would of made a effect, he father use to beat him, his mother allways wanted to change his father, they often argued, he got kicked down stairs, punched even whacked by a bat by his father, he barly ever had good moments with his father, going close to none. (Pretty sure the other one was 3, so yeah, 4.) Now Moves! Cero/Bala: Beginner, he barly uses them and has no idea how to trigger them qq.



Appearance Description: Has a Black Punk Mohawk, About Medium Build, 6"1, Some tats on his Neck and Arms, Black desgins really, (Hard to come up with things here) His Mohawk is about 5 Inces Tall and 3 Inces Wide.) His teeth are pretty clean, He smells kind of like Blood mixed with Chains, with A bit of cherry mixed in. He has Incredible eye sight, and Good hearing. (I cant come up with any more, also Im skipping it.) Likes: Heavy Metal, Power, Mohawks, Skulls. Dislikes: Vegees, Hipsters, Love songs, Presidents, "Fake" People. (Also I forgot DuriabilitY)
Duraibility: Adept (Like every thing else.)
How old he looks: He looks about 18-20ish?






) Age Of Death: (If u mean the hollow since hes a Quincy/ Hollow) 2155.
Type of Hollow: (If you still mean the one he got his Powers from.) Vasto Lorde if Possible, just tell me to change it if I cant.
Hollow: All of these will be decided if I can be a vasto or not, cant really decide these into that happens.