Liu Xīnshén - Overseer Of The Underworld [#2 Hell Guardian] [Approved, 0-2/0-2+; Rakshasa] [0-4++; Hell Beast]

Term Flux: Just make note that, since it uses Liu's demonic energy as the medium to execute World Flux--and by extension, Term Flux--Liu must also accurately gauge the energy output of the opponent's ability, barrier, or otherwise, and provide higher output to dissolve it successfully.

An instance of this occurring would be that if she were able to perceive a powerful barrier, Liu could otherwise attempt to dissolve by spouting something like this: "Term Flux: Dissolve That Barrier" After uttering those words, in this scenario the energies of World Flux would become active and the opponent would see something akin to a blood red light beginning to devour their shield

Mystic Liberation - Sting Release: Make note that Sting Release cannot raise Liu's pain tolerance to Master of she's passively at Elite, or to Grand Master if she's passively at Master. However, she will generally be superior to anyone else of the same level of pain tolerance whilst utilising Sting Release.

Henceforth, after this mental gate is released, the threshold for pain that Liu can tolerate will often go above one skill level for a duration of five to seven post.

Flux Discharge - Unified Release: I'm pretty sure this is a typo and you meant this to be the other way around, since Unified Release sounds like a supportive ability to enhance the people around her. So I guess just fix this to make sure it's still accurate and anybody who needs to read Unified Release won't be confused.

This enhancement technique of Flux Discharge is less based around augmenting Liu's own strength as opposed to bolstering the potential of others around her.

Chéngfǎ: Because we're restressing the individuality and strength of the zero tiers, I'd like the amount of 1-tier clones to be reduced to 6, and 0-tier clones reduced to 3, and those clones would be around 0-5 tier specifically (assuming she has 3 active simultaneously, with higher sub-tiers if the number of clones are reduced).

Number Of Replicas By Tier

4 Tier: 1,000,000
3 Tier: 100,000
2 Tier: 100
1 Tier: 10
0 Tier: 5

Mìfēng Liányīqún: Nothing wrong with it, but because of the updates to the skill sheets, you need to also include the reduced power of blows from the in-between levels of strength as well. Just spread out the percentages amongst the levels since it shouldn't be necessary to know specifically the descriptions of the levels of strength to disseminate the percentages (even if you do, you already know what strength is described as amongst the new levels)

Hù Ēndiǎn: The augmentation is fine, fifteen is a lot but reasonable given the form and Liu's level of power. That said, the math here doesn't seem right, unless I'm not reading it right the math doesn't add up. Might just be another typo or I'm illiterate.

Furthermore, given their combined state of living, Xuǎnzé also receives a fifteen times augmentation boost in her Tukaṛā Saitāna. These represent the three halves of her spirit: Liu, Nizhuan and Xuǎnzé. Each of these fractions of herself account for five units that add up to ten in order to multiply.

Juédìng Lù: Just to clarify, Xuanze taps into the possible outcomes of an action and, reaching into the alternate universes where these possible outcomes factually occur, superimpose that alternate reality with the current one? So in the example provided, the alternate reality tanks the hit that she should have.

Imagine if there was an energy blast hurdling towards you, but instead of hitting you, it hit it's reverse image and canceled each other out. The same logic could apply if Xuǎnzé wished to use this ability in order to neutralize an attack from causing harm to her body.

This ability is really strong, and while the greatest limitation is the enormous amount of energy it can use and the overtime taxing drawbacks since it requires a lot of focus and mental dedication, but it should also be a bit more restricted in the amount of times she can use this in a post, sheerly due to the overwhelming potential for this ability. That said, using it fairly liberally 1-2 times per post is fine, with the taxing coming in at 3-4 posts, and really pushing herself to the extreme at 5-6 posts where the taxing repercussions are immediate and more drastic at that point. Disseminate the drawbacks over the course of usage more to balance out the ability better.

Furthermore, she is limited to only being able to use this move 2-4 times a post; if she goes 5-6, she will undoubtedly tax a lot of her resources because it is being used in rapid succession. Therefore, this is an ability where Xuǎnzé must consider if it is worth using or not. The power of choice is a dangerous thing to utilize. For it can lead to unforetold riches, or unforeseen dangers that would make one regret using this move.

Juédìng Fùyuán: To keep it balanced and fair, with the IC explanation being that using energy on yourself and cycling it like that typically makes effects of external abilities retrofitted for yourself less effective in a 1:1 ratio of energy use to ability efficacy, that Xuanze healing herself and preventing life-threatening injuries has a larger, two post cooldown. Especially considering if Xuanze takes on Nidzhuan's trait of insane durability, it's hard as is to heal her own body.

It is possible for Xuǎnzé to reverse life-threatening injuries, null ill-advised effects to her body and otherwise negate the line of actions and effects that it took for certain attacks to reach her. But, since this is a heavy power, it does not necessarily equal to being able to be abused non-stop. This ability is limited to only being able to be once per post with a onepost cool down.

Néngyuán Cúnzài: It should be noted that feeding off surrounding energy can sustain this form adequately, but taking damage and thus losing chunks of energy, in addition to the energy losses from sustaining this form, means a stagnated energy acquisition from feeding on the energies around her, or if she isn't as actively engaged and can focus more, a slower regeneration of energy reserves.

Therefore, Xuǎnzé often just feasts off of whatever energy she can generate or find while in this form in order to sustain it and keep herself from meeting her own end.

Néngyuán Cúnzài: It should be noted that feeding off surrounding energy can sustain this form adequately, but taking damage and thus losing chunks of energy, in addition to the energy losses from sustaining this form, means a stagnated energy acquisition from feeding on the energies around her, or if she isn't as actively engaged and can focus more, a slower regeneration of energy reserves.

Therefore, Xuǎnzé often just feasts off of whatever energy she can generate or find while in this form in order to sustain it and keep herself from meeting her own end.

Zhǐ Mìfēng Jiàn: I'd say the seals shouldn't be effective against the same person for the rest of the duration of that fight. Reason being, considering the amount of seals she can use and the duration of them, these seals can be incredibly inhibiting. Putting a strength seal on Radioactive, or a Spiritual Seal on Mana is absurdly limiting for the two of them. Of course, their assets aren't entirely dependent on strength and magic respectively, but it's such a major blow that can potentially be repeated in one thread, assuming the thread goes on for that long. On top of that, it synergises so well with Liu's other abilities to weaken the opponent or empower herself against certain traits or abilities that it's fairly broken with the potential of repeat usage. Additionally, only one seal should be active on a person at a time, and placing a different type of seal on someone with a seal on them already should be ineffective. Something that only requires the very speedy Liu to just place the seal on you and expend a small bit of energy should be able to both negate your strength as well as energy by such a large degree.

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• Comments/Notes: Maintaining her tier at 0-2 due to her position not just in Hell as a crucial layer, but also as a very important figure to Demon World itself; lowering Nidzhuan's tier to 0-4++, however, as she has an important role in natural law, but not as much when it comes to the organisations and the active interactions on-site at base. When Xuanze comes up, 0-2+ due to the insane augmentation she receives from all three parts of Liu, as well as further potential energy enhancements through her other abilities.
  
• Tier: 0-2/0-2+ in Tukaṛā Saitāna ; 0-4++ Hell Beast