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Upgrade for Artorias #2
Sun Jul 26, 2015 5:23 pm
- Name Of Character: Artorias Erobern
- Link To Character Profile: Here
- Reasons For Upgrading: Awesome Point Transaction
What Are You Upgrading: Adding an Ability- Ability:
- Resilience:
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Description: Resilience symbolizes the solidity of Artorias' soul and being, his courage to never back down from protecting what he holds dear. It is linked to his soul and can be summoned without energy expenditure at will. The body of Resilience is an immovable point in space, unable to be moved unless in accordance to Artorias' will. The space within it is locked, not allowing any force or energy through, able to withstand any attack that may hit it. Although impassable, Resilience does not negate that which hits it, so energy may very well blow out to the sides upon impact, but may not get past. Resilience is capable of blocking attacks that can cut through space, though it can be moved by them.
Resilience's height is 1.83 Meters (6 Feet), at it's widest is .76 Meters (2 Feet, 6 Inches), and at it's midpoint is .6 Meters (2 Feet).
Resilience has no handle, and will move in accordance to it's owner's will.
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Re: Upgrade for Artorias #2
Tue Jul 28, 2015 2:41 pm
[mod]Hello, upon reading the description of this power upgrade, I'm going to have to deny it.
There are many many things wrong with this, a lot of which aren't balanced at all. if you want to try again, I would like to point out some of the things wrong with it in the list below
If you find a way to balance these out, then we'll revive it once more, but this is my final judgement.[/mod]
There are many many things wrong with this, a lot of which aren't balanced at all. if you want to try again, I would like to point out some of the things wrong with it in the list below
- requires no energy
- immoveable unless at only his will or space attacks
- able to withstand any attack
If you find a way to balance these out, then we'll revive it once more, but this is my final judgement.[/mod]
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