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Sat May 30, 2015 2:54 pm


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"I wouldn't do that if I were you..." A chipper voice came from behind the demonic nobleman. Her figure fluttering down behind him. Eyes of vibrant purple and yellow staring at the man. Her figure adorned in rather scantly clad pink drapery. Her long locks of uneven pink bouncing with her. Bright white and lavender wings spread out and flapping lightly to keep her at a constant yet readied hover. She tilted her head at the demon, staring at the back of his own.

"No really.. I wouldn't.. She will be very angry." She said before tensing at the appearance of another figure. She pulled back a bit, causing more distance between herself, the demon and the figure walking into the area. Along with her were eight other individuals, chatting calmly but quietly so not to disturb their mistress.

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The air in the room seemingly falling still and stale. The scent of long since dried blood quickly replacing the clean crisp air as the woman and her group approached. A grin on her lips as her figure remained cloaked from head to toe. A hood hiding all aspects of her face besides the grin dancing over such lovely deep pink lips. Her figure moving towards the man and standing between him and his target. Her eyes watching him silently though he could not see her.

"And who... Pray tell... Are you?" She asked with a rather emptied tone. Her lips holding the same grin all the same as she watched the man and kept herself between him and the stone. He wouldn't have had enough time to charge his attack enough to strike, she had gotten there mere seconds after he did. The cloaked woman moved her hand up to the hood of her cloak and tugged it back, revealing herself. She shook her head, letting pale pink hair bounce with delight. Her once magenta eyes had been seen enough torment to wipe away the hope and leave them merely red. Her eyes staring at the man with a piercing gaze though her smile remained inviting.

Without her even telling them to, her children made their way around their darling goddess and stood ready for what may come. In front of the woman were a paid of twin children, both with silvered hair. Their hands clean for the time being but small traces of blood could be seen under their fingernails. The only distinguishing way to tell the twins apart was by their eye colors. One baring green and the other with bright golden. The woman's hands placing upon the children's heads and stroked through their hair slowly. The twins glancing up at their mistress with delight which soothed her, only to remember they were nothing more then Gluttonous survivalists.

To the woman's left was a woman adorned in barely anything at all, only covered by a tight red lingerie outfit which showed more than it covered. Her hair of silver and eyes of gold made it seem almost as if she could be related to the twins. However, her sun-kissed skin, silver ears and tails made such a completely different story all too quickly. The fox-girl, known as Lust, merely giggled and winked at the demon before them. This quickly got a glare to her from the man to the pink haired woman's right. The man wore a worn and torn red yukata, open and revealing bandages which covered his midsection. Blood had stained the bandages but if it was the man's or not was questionable. His eyes an aggressive red giving him the right to the name of Wrath.

Just behind Lust stood a man with a woman on his shoulders. His figure strong and tall. His eyes a deep violet but flickering to green every now and again. He wore clothing to match that of a nobleman and the woman on his shoulders wearing a dress to match such as well. The woman's eyes didn't even bother to look at the lowly demon before her. She merely rolled her eyes and slid her perfectly manicured nails through her long beautiful blonde hair. Her eyes, also, being that of a deep violet. Pride and Envy being their given names and they held onto such delightfully.

Shifting behind the group was a drained looking young man, climbing his way next to the stone and leaning against it. His eyelids becoming more heavy before shutting and keeping perfectly still against the stone. It was to be expected of the one they called Sloth. However, in front of Sloth and standing just behind the woman, dressed practically like that of a butler, stood a man who only held a smirk. His hand was placed delicately upon the once cloaked woman's waist, gripping firmly but loose enough not to disturb his mistress. His eyes watching the man before him quietly. Out of the entire group, he seemed to be the only one brandishing a weapon. A large scythe partially wrapped in cloth. Greed, was the man's given name and like the rest, his actual name had long since been forgotten so there was no need to change it now.

"Where are my manners? I am Saderi. You can call me the Queen of Blood."


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Sun May 31, 2015 2:14 am
These are a number of complaints I've seen on your thread and what I want fixed.

"This isn't Kakeru which is good maybe I show a good fight and prove that I'm strong and mean business but there is a downside."

I don't see how Damien would know of Kakeru.
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"But she said something about their being a mistress that is something the mad demon didn't believe if she was a mistress why is she not with a human doing some BDSM stuff right now. Another thing would be domination right now of someone else but hell no the noble demon wasn't convinced at all that this was a mistress that be a fucking joke around the demon world. Something was bothering him and it was her power for some odd reason this woman was no joke she had some power on her but the evil kind."

Lack of knowledge and on top of such, nothing was said to him in the slightest. His character knows nothing of Saderi as she only asked him who he was.
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"The next problem was where the hell did these children come from something the noble demon wasn't ready for at their were two of them and he thought it was no problem. Then a group came into the works if she was this blood queen and these must be her blood children no question this woman must have someway learned the powers of the seven sins."

Saderi Gave each of them a name of the seven sins but did not state such to the man in the slightest. there is NO WAY for him to know what everyone could do or what their names are.
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"The magical trap was set and then the noble demon looked at the blood queen and then calmly approach her wanting to know why she wouldn't want to fight him fairly but to use such tricks like sending children"

When did he have the chance to set this? He came in and immediately went to attack the stone with the blade.
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"Please forgive me whoever you are and hopefully your children will forgive me too. You were quite stunning but really I didn't see the point of fighting a woman like you hopefully the teleport vacation I gave you will do something for you.....I can't lose sight on the task at hand though. Sidera, I hope you have fun in Karakura town"

The mentioning of them being children wasn't even stated as such information for him to know. Secondly, he is misunderstanding how they WALKED IN to the room, all talking and mingling and just walked right in front of him...

If these issues aren't fixed, then what is most likely going to happen is that your character will be skipped and he'll be kicked out of this thread. If it is repeated, you may be barred from using your character in general. I've been rather lenient on you, but you need to understand that you can't meta game or power play on people. So, to refresh your memory, I'm going to re-paste the rules

Metagaming: What is metagaming? Metagaming, for the most part, is taking knowledge that YOU yourself know OR knowledge YOUR CHARACTER shouldn't know and placing that into the role play. So, say that John is walking down the street and suddenly he engages in a fight with Jin. If you yourself looking at Jin's app and saw that he had a weakness against water, it would be absurd for your character to randomly come to that conclusion and summon some sort of water kido to kill your opponent just because you knew it. This is a clear cut case of meta-gaming and will not be tolerated on the site. Just because YOU understand a character's profile, doesn't mean YOUR character does without any evidence to back these claims up.


Power Playing: Just what is powerplaying? We have a character named Adam. Adam is rushing to fight his opponent, Jack. In the midst of his against Jack, Adam decided to go in punch him in the face. What is the problem, though? It went along the lines of this: "Adam leaped into the air in order to punch Jack in the face and watch him fall flat on his back as he blacked out." What is the problem with that? You are controlling your opponents reactions and forcing the hit on them; which is against our rules. It should go along the lines of this: "Adam leaped in the air and attempted to land a punch against Jack's face. If he succeeded? He'd go on to bask in Adam's swift defeat as the damage done to him had the potential to leave him flat on his back." This is acceptable because it isn't forced, you describe the possibility and repercussions of your attack while allowing them to react to it.


You'll have 72 hours to fix it before my actions go in effect. I suggest you just re-do the post and try not to metagame this time around.


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Wed Jun 03, 2015 9:21 pm


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The young creature wasn't sure how to respond to the scene before her. Was he taken back or just shocked to see the woman as she had walked in with her group of followers? She hasn't done much besides just walk in with them as they all took their places comfortably around her. The deep crimson gaze remained fixed on the demonic male as she tilted her head. He spoke in such a way which riddled her, but it didn't truly come to a shock. She wasn't one to be fond of outsiders and currently, his actions could be seen as an act against her land. However, he seemed to hastily retreat. A few of his words keeping with her before he vanished from sight. Once he was gone, any thoughts linking to him faded as well. She didn't care for creatures which threatened then ran, it was cowardly and boring but it make things function for her benefit.

"Well that was certainly a treat..." Sarcasm dripping from her lips as the woman rolled her eyes. Slowly she unclasped her cloak, letting it fall to the ground and reveal her attire. Though she had donned on a black cloak, under was a lovely simple white day dress which covered most of her being. However, the dress itself has splotches of red stains which seemed to have dried up and stained into the fabric. Such was so all over the dress, even on the back. How would such reach even on her back? Looking closely, it looked as though most of the crimson blood has come from above, as though rained down on her and let her dance in it. It was quite the sight to say the least. Even white heels had splattering of red, the soles under these shoes had also been stained red as though they had been walking through the puddles of blood.

"You certainly have a knack for dealing with new comers, Saderi. Know that?" The floating angelic creature moved towards her mistress and smiled. She was a practical embodiment of warmth and stability. Though she seemed to remain distant from the creations of sin which followed her mistress around. A look of disgust on her face as she looked upon them and the dress which Saderi wore. Slowly shaking her head, the young angel let out a sigh of disappointment. Her lips parting to speak but only to be caught off by her mistress.

"Enough of this. Help me retrieve the blade before it is too late and others come for it. Our people want light... Let then now learn that as long as there is light-" The woman's words were cut off by the sound of another who walked in along. The other creature was cloaked from head to toe, nothing on them being revealed except the sound of their voice as they finished Saderi's words.

"There will always be darkness kept in check."




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Well they were definitely on some persona level shit here, as Kakeru thought about the words that Sidera told him about the woman and he sensed her as well, and the light did bring the monsters from the darkness into the focal ground. For Kakeru, this day couldn't of gone longer, he had to kill Eric Zarathos, and then bequeath a sword to Sidera. The sad thing was that when he was supposed to be given his holy blade from his family.. he never had gotten it. Sideri would have a warning to her now that he had  walked back into play. Cold air began to seep in as he noticed that the door was open to here. "Huh... Guests never expect people to just wander into here..." The King of the West was speaking of the ton of people within the area well the grouping from their signature, well would of, but mostly was directing it at Sidera. He didn't like this, they were walking into a trap in his mind. He'd take the point on Sidera because he would be even more devastated if she were to die. This was someone he cared for, no one would do things to the people he cared for, yes even Acel he had care for, but it seemed like he had to wait for to adjust her locational coordinates and catch up. Kakeru's mind was focused now officially setting himself into the room. "I honestly wouldn't do that...Miss... or Queen... not too sure of which you are at this moment, but you didn't ask me nicely about taking royal property... Why don't you tell me why you'd want a weapon like that." Said in a cold, sarcastic tone in the midst of the room. Yes he was aware of her people. but he made no threatening stances, he just waited quietly. He was watching them, and he was sure he was being watched so he had no need to go into a battle like mode yet.

His long blonde hair swayed for a moment by the movements he'd make as for a moment he'd be taken into his world as he could hear Kanaku laughing softly telling him about the inverse worlds and how that he could just separate from him. In fact, he wanted to, to test his metal against his own, but Kakeru soon said, this isn't the place to fight, because if they fought each other there area would more than likely would be destroyed. So no he'd say focusing back on the situation. Sideri could tell his power was that of a king, and someone who wasn't afraid of it. Unlike the gentleman before him this wasn't a woman he was fighting, if he had to fight, from the talk before hand, the Queen next to him wanted to show her power to not only rule, but lead and fight, and he honestly couldn't take that away from Sidera, she wanted to lead, and he wouldn't do anything else than support her and take on additional adds if necessary. The frayed edges of his clothing danced a bit as he'd realize he'd asked her things and never gave this woman who looked like a ruler in her own right his name. "Tsk, Tsk, I gotta be more aware of who I'm speaking to some times... Forgive me, I'm Kakeru Leonhardt the King of the Western Sugiuran Realm. I'm the person you should be asking about the weapon... as in if you can use it or not. From where I'm standing it looks like you're going to steal it, which wouldn't be nice... I would have to fight, and I already had to kill a  dropped on the head demon named Eric Zarathos... so please don't make me have to discipline you..." The king was a ruler and in his own rights he was ready to take her on, but he couldn't shake that feeling this was Sidera's fight. Yukianesa was still grasped lightly in his right hand, but he made no movements towards the blade, nor did he see nor hear them making movements to strike. Therefore he didn't have to make the movements into a fighting like position for now. Kanaku wanted to play with him, and he couldn't shake that feeling he could peel away from him and fight him. It didn't feel good in his mind, and yet he managed to keep him suppressed still. He'd just focus on then controlling himself and Kanaku.

Sideri probably at this point notice that the inverse Kakeru was honestly Kanaku who was within him, a part of him that he had placed into a jail of Order, in the case Eradication was ever needed he would draw upon that sphere of power so to speak. At this point she could tell he would more than likely align himself with her, but this also meant that her power as a queen was strong enough to move him. He was curious on her, he was watching her and her control. She was beautiful and powerful, and yet he waited for hesitation from the female. He wanted her to waver, but yet he wanted to keep her. SHe was adorable in his eyes, and yet he was laughing that she was the inverse of Sidera, well not because he knew that, well besides the fact they fucking looked so similar that it was impossible to not think that. It would be the same if Kanaku came out, although he was a bit shorter, and his hair was much different in terms of style, but color was similar enough. Kakeru's energy was in check, but it was there saying Hi, i'm a really scary person, with even scarier darkness, that if i use it will probably kill everyone so please be nice okay thank you.~  Anyway, Kakeru took the moment to pause and let Sidera get her things in, but this was turning into a one sided conversation. Kakeru usually didn't mind these kinds of conversations, but this wasn't the time for monologues.

''I am the cold steel, the blade that will restore balance to this world, Nox Nyctores Yukianesa Activate!''

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Mon Jun 15, 2015 3:31 pm
[adm]Alright, I'm going to allow an extension in the period for Circa to post. The reason for this is because I was informed she was moving and I'll allow her a week or so to post before we need to do anything in this thread. I'm sending these warnings as I am attempting to speed things along in the event. [/adm]


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╔ Guardian ╬ Queen ╗

"There will always be darkness kept in check." Came forth the woman named Sidera as she walked into the large space. Kakeru by her side as she looked over the woman. Her hood was down, hiding nothing about her expression nor her features. It was quite obvious as to who she was as the winged guardian beast fluttered behind her mistress and just stared as the magenta-eye'd woman. The angelic creature seemed obviously confused at the sight before her, looking between her Mistress and the woman who stood beside the blonde man. Such was obviously rather confusing. If not for their tether and lack of complete emotions, the eight being around their mistress would have possibly been doing the same thing as the floating guardian. Kakeru's words cut throughg the silence which appeared after Sidera spoke. His words catching the darkened woman ahead to seemingly tilt her head. Sidera's hands remaining comfortably at her sides just under her cloak as she watched the other woman, waiting for an answer. However, the voice which appeared was not from who they expected.

"She is the Queen of Blood herself! Her Majesty Saderi Cruor! You will learn your place and speak to her accordingly!" The creature fluttered in front of her mistress where she then was between the two groups. Sidera's hand moving under the cloak to lightly grasp onto the blade which she had gained mere moments earlier and thus was not sure as to what the powers she had gained from it were. All she knew was that upon grasping it, the creation changed to being that of a small blade. It was simple and light which made it all the more ideal for the constantly moving woman. Her hand's grip remained gentle but firm around the new piece, as though reassuring herself on how she would fair in the use of it. However, Kakeru speaking took her off guard and brought her back to her senses. She didn't move to look at him, only grinning as he explained his title in their world and thus making her all the more excited for the situation. Though, Sidera could feel eyes watching her. Her gaze shifted over to the woman that could practically be called her clone and watched them. The clone's head tilting to they side, continuing to stare. There was a vibe of insanity and uneasiness dancing from the distant figure.

The feel of Kakeru's energy was telling Sidera all she needed to know. With a light hum, there were footprints slowly forming behind the woman. As she let a calm smile come over her lips, multiple figures began appearing behind Sidera. Four males made their way into the room, escorting Sidera's younger sister, Acel, along with them. The protective queen made sure her sister was safe with the best she could muster by sending Solomon, Preston, Rufus and Flynn to remain by her. As the group walked in, Flynn moved to her left and coiled his arm around the pink vixen, reminding her of the days he was alive but such quickly faded. A grin remaining on her lips as she watched the cluster before them.

"Queen of whatever... She's here after something that does not belong to her and we're here to confiscate it. Sorry to say, you won't be getting any new toys today." Sidera spoke with confidence. She knew she would have to be the one to fight her doppelganger and it wasn't going to be easy in the slightest. Her hands moving to the tether around her neck, holding her cloak upon her being before working it away with her fingers and dropping it. Upon seeing such, Solomon could only grin as he moved to Sidera's right and kept his arms folded. His smirk never wavering.

"Cooperate and no one gets hurt, princess."


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Ripping himself from the form of Kakeru materializing in front of the group on the side of Sederi's fun caravan as the Chaotic mix of blonde and black locks were readily apparent this was the other side of Kakeru's origin and the only form that could cause Kakeru great problems. A long nodachi like weapon appeared in his left hand as it was mix of the colors of Red, Lust, blood red, and hints of black. Furthermore, he wore the typical high schooler like clothing as his crimson red eyes were shining with not only power but desire as his chaotically toned voice came out as he spoke. "Mmn. what do we have here? Hehe... looks like I get to fight after all I'm excited. I wanted to kill that Demon Kakeru and you didn't let me, well I guess I'll just beat you and then take over and rule! Sounds like fun to me!" Sederi would notice right away that he was more akin to her liking and yet she would notice how unsettlingly happy he was to fight as she and well at this point others could notice the amazingly stark contrasts between Kakeru and Kanaku. The male laughed lightly as he gripped his unholy blade, and had a really goofy and happy smile almost too happy and too foreboding of what was to come.

"Ah! Forgive me! I'm Kanaku Ikko! The Breaker of Bonds, and the true King of the West.. unlike the man before you, I'll show them a real fun time!" He was clearly smiling, but his intent was less than nice at that point, well then again this was Kanaku they were speaking about this guy was chaotic as fuck. He was bouncing around so to speak as he'd look at Sederi. "Mmn.. I'd tap you, if I wasn't busy going on a one man war against Kakeru! Maybe later!" He'd say laughing as he'd look at Sidera "Mmn... you're hot too, but.. Nawh you smell of something funny." He'd look at Aceldama and shook his head. "You aren't even my type so nope!" In a matter of seconds he had basically made snap judgments on everyone he would potentially try to fuck and then moved a bit more forward towards Kakeru as he'd smirk a bit because it was time to fight. Spinning his blade above his head. Then the personality shift happened in his head as his normally bright smile shifted into a focused glare at Kakeru as he looked similar in expression to the male. His energy materialized around him. "The only thing I know at the moment... is that you will die Kakeru..." His tone dropped to monotone as he'd have energy upon the blade as it was shining red. Kanaku didn't honestly care of Sederi would yell at him or not he had no interest in the sword here anyway, he wanted honestly Kakeru's death, and that's what he would get!

Before anyone of them could stop either Kanaku and Kakeru both of them moved and jumped into the air to collide blades as a wave of the void would be pushed back against Sidera's side and a wave of absolute zero, and Life destruction would be sent back against Sederi's grouping doing nothing more than to both sides a showy display of how strong they were. Kanaku began to laugh as he was locked blades with Kakeru ignoring everyone else there focuisng on Kakeru only. This was the battle between these two there wasn't going to be a showy display of powers here, in their minds this was a fight between swordsmen and to see who was the better master of sword play. They were in the air out of the range of everyone at the moment as it was a battle between them, if someone was stupid enough to try to stop them from fighting more than likely they would be blood and ribbons in a matter of seconds. So it was best for them to stay away, and let them fight this out like men. It was funny in his head he was fighting Kakeru he wanted to do this so badly and yet he was getting his wish and he was happy, but also mad because Kakeru was being a bitch and not dying like a good little boy should, or well abdicating to him would be the way he wanted it so he could rule like he always desired. This was a battle between those of like minded desires, they knew that at any point they could kill each other, and that was going to be the fun part in the mind.

"Oh, before any of you get any ideas... if you interrupt me in this pleasurable fight I'm having at the moment, I will kill you mercilessly, and then plant your head on top of my blade like a hat and then have your body be ripped to tiny shreds! So please behave before the king." He'd say in a cold malevolent, possessive tone. He was happy and violent the best parts of being a chaotic being!



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