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Thu Aug 28, 2014 8:30 pm

«1ST Post Of The Challenge Done»

Welp, the first post of the challenge was a pretty easy one for me. I had a blast with it because Cirno was starting to go back to normal after a few months of recovery following the whole ordeal with Australia and Reigen.

The bulk of the post was meant in fun spirit, but Eric and his monologues had given birth to a plan by Cirno and her guards. They were able to play his demonic strengths, aggression and reputation for wrecking everything in sight within their favor.

None of them were in the same class of him, but they saw him growing more irritable and knew he was going to attack. Therefore, Cirno swapped out herself and the other Iramasha guards on the field with fragile ice clones. Then, with the presence of Angel Iramasha, they were able to inject Holy Energy into the clones in order to make Eric sick, weakened and overall damaged by him constantly punching against these holy particles due to the fact he is a demon.

Then, the whole ordeal with the King of Baka's and knocking him off the island with a ice sculpture of her butt made me lul a bit. She seems to be back in good spirits and that is a nice thing to see. All she wanted to really do with that post is have a bit of fun with everything.

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Thu Aug 28, 2014 8:38 pm

«2nd Post Of The Challenge Done»

'kk, in this post, I am beginning to feel that Cirno probably took off more than she could chew. Through this thread she has fought against Eric's army, Kyokotsu, Eric himself and now Moonie Iramashsa all in one go. So she is definitely getting into her return thread with a strong comeback.

Throughout this post, I feel she was under some pretty intense pressure to keep her comrades alive, dealing with the traumas of Australia in a more mature way and overall trying to hold her own against two creatures who are powerful enough to be considered Demon Kings.

I also felt like she was trying to really break through to Moonie. She did not like seeing someone going through such pain. She was able to pick on that because the guy was literally screaming out for someone to help him in her point of view. And with the anguish that came from Australia in general, it reminded her of her own grief before Reigen snapped some sense into her.

Therefore, it was a rather touching moment for her to endure Moonie's attacks and try to reach out to him towards the end. God knows where this thread is going to go next, but I'm looking forward to her next round whenever I get to writing it up.

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Thu Aug 28, 2014 8:48 pm

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I'm not sure what happened here, mentally speaking, but I think I just wanted to break from my usual style of writing and create something -- interesting. Really, I just wanted to experiment a bit and the results were fun to say the least.

There was a break-in at one of Shadow Fall's prisons by a jumbo-sized demon presence, but Neoveta saw to it that his original plans were thwarted by acting like such a nut. The entire prison was broken down, particle by particle, and teleported to Malaysia to secure the guards and prisoners. So it turns out that he was speaking to nothing more than holograms meant to project what would have happened if Shadow Fall's defenses weren't upgraded.

By the time she tracked him down, her voice and body itself seemed to have a hard time sustaining its existence. The girl was tripping over her words, no one could quite understand them all and she was trying to sync her perception of the world and slow things down as her mind was always rapidly advancing.

I think it was kind of cute, in a way, that she really didn't want to fight him. She just wanted him to stop doing things that would make him her enemy, because that would mean she had free grounds to eat him and she didn't want to. Overall, the post is just something you gotta read to fully understand nonetheless.

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Thu Aug 28, 2014 9:00 pm

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Ah, Neoveta is such a sweetheart in some ways. I really liked the way this post came out in terms of the writing style for her becoming more apparent. The way it comes across seems unique to me, anyway.

Nevertheless, I figure it was cute because Damien spoke of Mana giving birth to his creation from their fight with Eric in Demon World a year ago. After recalling Mana's fragmented memories within her shell, Neoveta confirmed and felt -- relieved -- that she had a brother perhaps.

After confirming that, she really didn't have the nerve to really do much of anything to her own kin. Although the way she dealt with his attacks was kind of funny and the whole thought process behind it. At least she seems to be communicating with her mind now, anyway.

Nevertheless, she made her own choice and wanted to let him go since no harm was done to the prison in the long run. And if Mana wanted a challenge like him to linger around? Far be it from her to get in the way with that. She had an odd way letting amounts of order and disorder equalize and turn the world around in Neoveta's point of view.

The only thing left to determine is if he'll take the scapegoat and flee to the Sirsa Lands in Demon World.

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Thu Aug 28, 2014 9:12 pm

«5th Post Of The Challenge Done»


Woo, woo, woo~ The wicked ol' witch of the west has decided to pay a visit in the Sirsa Lands. With all the other Demon Queen's and King's coming to this location to pay tribute to the death of the king of this nation, The Demon Queen of the Capital Nation paid a little pitstop.

After being invited by Dayalu to join this ceremony, Mana saw fit to make her presence known at this get together. However, despite her larger than life entrances, she seemed rather dull and was doing it out of an obligatory need. So it was amusing to her so flippant and disenchanted with everything going around her; much to the disdain of some people at the meeting.

Now that she has met up with her sister, however, she seems quite intent on nudging it along. So we'll see where this thread goes and hopefully Zero will post in it soon with Dayalu.

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Sat Aug 30, 2014 10:01 am

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Ah, it feels nice to conclude a thread. We managed to get that whole ordeal between Damien and Neoveta settled in over a few days.

I feel it was nice to have them become family through the blood they shared through Mana. I also believe his message of peace was processed through Neoveta's mind enough to where she seriously considered altering her methods a bit. So it is going to be interesting to see how she grows from this.

With all that said, I'm also glad that this post allowed me to narrowly finish my Weeklong Miniburst as I was feeling pretty gloomy this week, lol. I'll see if I can get a final post in within the next two hours before my deadline is up.

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Sat Aug 30, 2014 12:32 pm

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And with that, I'm ending out my week long challenge with a clusterfuck of a post that was Neoveta, Deveta and Khala coming to pick up Iriko!

Jebus, they got the call that Iriko wanted to see them so they literally brought Hell into the Soul Society and leapt through the boundaries needed to reach him. Although, in the process, a few hundred people were reduced to a puddle of blood in their outpouring of emotion.

So I can say, without a doubt, demon emotions are hella intense. Christ. This one is something that you just have to read.

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