Frost flyer spell

Wed Apr 16, 2014 9:28 pm

•Name: Frost flyer

•Who Can Use it: Any demon

•Type:Offensive

•Prayer: Freeze his soul Zelhir (Zel-Hear)

•Effects: When the air in front of the caster is slashed a blue energy will appear then the area that was cut is turned to ice. From that ice several streams of ice that form butterflies are branched off and begin to head towards the target. If these butterflies touch the target or any building nearby it explodes releasing a gas that affects the targets nerves that when inhaled causes them to think that the temperature around the area damaged has dropped 30 degrees.

•Notes:
- With each post that the fumes are inhaled from the butterflies the damage continues to spread throughout the body and with each butterfly that has hit the target the temperature drops 10 degrees after the initial attack
-Also no matter how strong one is the distance of the attack will always stay the same. The max distance is 250 feet radius before they dissolve into energy and fade out of existence.(Exceeding this distance will cause serious strain on ones mind)
- The higher you control is over you Zoa kao the more you can control the attack and the directions it takes. Beginners have no control so all of their butterflies fly in one direction, forward.
-The amount of butterflies created varies as well as the strength of the butterflies themselves.
Grand Master- 15-20 butterflies(Can control the butterflies but reaction time is much slower than normal)
Master-10 butterflies(Can control the butterflies but reaction time is much slower than normal)
Advanced-8 butterflies(Can control the butterflies but reaction time is much slower than normal)
Adept- 5-6 butterflies (Can control the butterflies directions but must remain in the same spot.)
Beginner- 3-4 butterflies( is not able to control their direction.)

In order to control the butterflies the caster must project the his/her own energy into the surrounding area and use the giant dome like structure as a large steering wheel. He/she will also continue to coat the butterfly in his or her own energy just before thay are formed. This gives the user something to latch onto with the extra energy in the air so that he may actually move the butterfly.

Also the fumes last as long as the spell is active and for Beginner-Adept it will take them one post to recover from the spell since their ability to control their energy is still somewhat new.

Duration- 3 posts(this only applies if the butterflies have yet to stretch forward to the maximum length)
Cooldown- 2 posts
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Fri Apr 18, 2014 7:02 am

Hmm everything onstantly freezes? I dont like the sound of that, maybe because of your wording. I suggest basing it off the opponents strength so one butterfly when you can contr up to 20 cant just lol freeze them hahah. Take that into consideration when editing, post here when you think its ready for a recheck.

Fri Apr 18, 2014 9:46 am

I think I have it now

Fri Apr 18, 2014 11:02 am

Aight im going to drop in and actually do something for a change and check this for ya.

so for starters i'll say this straight id much prefer it if you make it something like the butterflies explode out causing some damage when they touch something and that target they hit will have its temperature dropped say 30 degrees allowing for some sort of actual freezing as well as making it so that this makes it work more as an offensive thing.

also how does this attack head for a target, does it constantly follow them like a homing missile? if so id like a little more of a explanation towards it, do you control all the direction of it? if so then maybe explain if there's any downfalls ie adepts and beginners would be unable to move while doing this if not either of these maybe just change it to the direction that person has slashed at or something similar all in all it needs abit more explanation to it.

next comes the idea of who can use it, whats to make it so that only those with a stable mind can use it, for the very least at least put in that this is a demon magic spell so one must be demon to use it, and then why would they need resolve this seems to have no link to ones inner feelings so it seems as though a clear mind though helpful doesnt really affect this that much.

Once these changes are fixed just post again and staff will recheck it for you.

Fri Apr 18, 2014 3:42 pm

I think I got it all worked out now

Fri Apr 18, 2014 11:52 pm

ya know what, im fine with this one, decrease the cool down to 2 posts instead of 3 and everything is perfect by me

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