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Stings Upgrade
Sat Mar 15, 2014 3:46 am
- Name Of Character: Sting Chikara
- Link To Character Profile: https://www.platinumhearts.net/t11107-sting-chikara-approved-tier-0-3
- Reasons For Upgrading: As the Black Ops Commander his arsenal of powers is ever increasing.
What Are You Upgrading:
Electro Defense: This is a passive ability that covers Stings body. It consists of a large networking of Electro Energy that creates an electric field 1-3 centimeters around his body. On regular bases its only 1 centimeter deep while in combat situations it can range from 2 to 3 centimeters. With it being a natural passive, he cant increase it by more than a centimeter or two while in the combat state. This large network is transparent but upon contact from the opponent it absorbs pressure and redirects it across the whole network thus dealing minimal to no damage until the defense is penetrated. It works well against explosions and punches alike. In terms of explosions, it redirects the energy of a nearby explosion across the surface of the defense; it does this by equally distributing power or energy absorbed across the network and thus minimizing damage. As for punches, it receives the impact of a punch prior to instantly distributing it across the large networking of electrical energy. Similarly, if his attacked with weapons or liquids, the technique can then be noticed as a yellow grid appears across his body when the impact of the attack is overwhelming; as the powers distributed the grid begins to fade once more. The liquids stay on that layer prior to descending to the bottom or being turned to steam by the excess current radiating across the defense. In terms of acids, they are neutralized through an electrolysis reaction as the hydrogen ions react with the defense and neutralize the acid.
Electric Current Armor: Much like the Electro Defense, when this is active it works almost like a passive. Orange, electrifying energy smothers Izanagi, it can be seen to the naked eye as it flares around his body. Sting begins by wrapping his body in a layer of thin electricity and instead of using the electricity for offense it’s used to stimulate the nervous system of his body. This ability speeds up the naural synapses to react faster and push the physical power of his body to the absolute limit, this allows for tremendous raw power. The armor is combined with Hakuda, Strength and Speed creating a deadly combination. The power level of the Electrical Armor varies but when at its maximum level Stings hair spikes up and his eyes illuminate, it’s that his ascended state allows him to react far faster than others on his level. It makes it hard for the opponent to keep up with him which shows the extent to which his speed is amplified. The maximum speed stage allows him to move at Speeds nearing the both Shunpo and Shadow step without having to use either of the tertiary abilities. He moves at a speed that only a few can comprehend; the raw capability of this power minimizes the opponent reaction time to a minimum. The ECA induces attacks. Spiritual abilities are adsorbed onto the lightning armor; they are then shifted to Stings rear alongside the flow of the current, prior to being released. The strength increase is bone shattering, Sting already utilizes electricity to deal the upmost damage but while in this state the speed of his movement is released into the punch as in effect he is using his opponent as a barrier to stop by still moving at full speeds but simply transferring all the kinetic energy generated by his movement alongside his amplified strength into the opponent in order to come to a sudden halt. Because of this his hits may feel overwhelming, heavy and excruciatingly painful. Because of the level of this ability, Sting can only support its spiritual upkeep for 3-5 posts while at 0-5 tier. 4-6 at 0-4 tier and 5-7 at 0-3 or higher tier. Because of the devastating damage caused by this technique and the synapse amplification it can be noted that Stings reflexes after the use of this ability decrease for the duration of three posts, after that, he must wait an additional 2 posts prior to regaining the ability to reactivate the technique. To clarify, he cant use the UCA for a total of 5 posts, his reflexes return to normal after 3 posts, then he has to wait an additional 2 posts before being able to re-activate it.
Lariat: Sting formulated a technique that complimented his ECA. This technique can be used while in the ECA release. He simply performs the Lariat wrestling technique while coated in his frightening electric Reiatsu. The attack is fairly straightforward; it’s quick, powerful and easily capable of knocking an opponent down because of the umph generated from the ECA upon contact. A direct hit from this ability can rip away at the area because of the magnitude of the impact; it can rip the skin and bones straight off the body of those who are weaker than him in terms of spiritual capabilities. In effect, the ability deals more damage to those of lower tier in comparrison to those of similar tier. Those who don’t guard against the technique will hit a critical point as the Lariat is a basic extension of the ECA; it’s a physical capability that atop his Hakuda expertise can deal overwhelming damage. Because of his immense strength, he can utilize this technique outside of the ECA, it may not be as powerful but it still has the power to brake or even shatter bones. Against those of his level, this ability is still as deadly but some have passive spiritual ability’s that guard them, abilities that act like shields and armors can potential divert the impact and ease/lessen the damage. - Any Extra Notes: http://www.fun2video.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/09/don-king-indian-funny-boy.jpg
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Re: Stings Upgrade
Sat Mar 15, 2014 9:01 am
Electro Defense: This is a passive ability that covers Stings body. It consists of a large networking of Electro Energy that creates an electric field 1-3 centimeters around his body. This large network is transparent but upon contact from the opponent it absorbs pressure and redirects it across the whole network thus dealing minimal to no damage until the defense is penetrated. It works well against explosions and punches alike. In terms of explosions, it redirects the energy of a nearby explosion across the surface of the defense; it does this by equally distributing power or energy absorbed across the network and thus minimizing damage. As for punches, it receives the impact of a punch prior to instantly distributing it across the large networking of electrical energy. Similarly, if his attacked with weapons or liquids, the technique can then be noticed as a yellow grid appears across his body when the impact of the attack is overwhelming; as the powers distributed the grid begins to fade once more. The liquids stay on that layer prior to descending to the bottom or being turned to steam by the excess current radiating across the defense. In terms of acids, they are neutralized through an electrolysis reaction as the hydrogen ions react with the defense and neutralize the acid.
Ok, it's a passive. However, is it always on? That's a rather steady use of reiatsu, in my opinion. 1-3 centimeters is a bit much too, is it unregulated due to an inability to be controlled or is he able to regulate the size of it? There needs to be some limitations if it is always on. 1 centimeter if it is always on and then 2-3 centimeters while in combat or in other situations.
he must wait an additional 2 posts prior to regaining the ability to reactivate the technique.
This looks good and all, until this sentence. So say he was to only use the ability for 3 posts as he fights off a few low-level opponents. He defeats them in three posts, then more show up after he has deactivated the ability in the next post. Since he was only in the state for 3 posts is he able to just turn it back on, or do the limitations still effect him?
it can rip the skin and bones straight off the body of those who are weaker than him in terms of spiritual capabilities.
I can see this happening to someone that is a low tier, but a 0-4 and a 0-5 are also spiritually weaker. You need to make this a bit more clear.
Lemme know with a post when you have fixed these things. Other than that, it looks good.
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Re: Stings Upgrade
Sat Mar 15, 2014 9:19 am
All done.
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Re: Stings Upgrade
Sat Mar 15, 2014 12:08 pm
Approved.
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