Malice Borealis

My Combat Issue

» Name Of Characters Involved: Bikuta Von Kircheisen and Malice Borealis
» Character Apps: My app is unimportant. However here is Malice Borealis
» Issue:
First: Idk what Malice is doing half the time due to poor grammar and just lack of detail.

Second
Look at these two things then tell me what is wrong. They can be found within his application.

ubject: Malice Borealis [APPROVED, 3-1 Base, 2-2 Full Power]

Ok, that's fine he was accepted at 2-2 so it's expected for the character to not be at 2-2 at their base power...

Oh wait...

Tri State: Another peculiarity is that her shikai has 3 stages, due to the rising power she possesses and that fact she further developed and refined the levels of defense she has , the levels of shikai go as the following, Sealed Shikai, Fairy Release, and then Ice Fairy Release. These are the 3 stages of power, her weakest state being the sealed shikai and her strongest being the ice fairy release, though due to being tri state each release has a power jump, so say she was 2-1+ in sealed shikai, and jumped to Fairy release? She would be 1-4+ then, and then say she moved into ice fairy release ? Well then she would be 1-2+ that is how it breaks down each release

So he has either failed to provide proof of improvements on his character's application, or has went and edited his application without approval.

Mary who? Mary Sue.

Heavy Ice User: Malice Boreas is known to be a heavy ice user, one that focuses skill on both the strength , the cold and the durability of his/her ice. This is the main effect in her sealed state, it comes directly from being a child of a unknown ice user , as She manifested heavily as a ice user . In retrospect Malice manifested the manipulation and expert accuracy in his/her ice techniques that you see at a very young age, and from there he began to further and create a concept of “Depth” and “Cold” and “Density” about this ice, focusing on the factors of a ice’s toughness and ice’s resilient nature and using these to his/her advantage and most certainly making it so that his/her techniques would reflect this very accurately.

How young is a very young age? I'd say a very young age is about 5-13 years old... impossible. More detail explaining how old she was or whether we are talking young in human years or young in dog years or young in spiritual years. I shouldn't have to read the character's history in order to find this out, I'm not going to read every history of everyone I RP with. I'm going to read their skills and personality and that's about it. If he's going to put this in with his skills then he needs to explain it more.

Oh hey, Mary, you're back already?

1: Child Of Boreas: Malice is a child of Boreas, meaning that she is an intense ice user through and through, a child of literally ice and envy she is the 2nd generation of ice users in this case, of great strength and great power from bygone ages. Thanks to this the oldest child of Boreas is without a doubt strong and able to take out a beating, this is also why her ice is as strong as it is, and at the same time is able to quite literally be what you might consider to be a threat on the battle field, it is thanks to this that her ice itself is both as strong as it is and at the same time is as versatile as it is.

Second generation yet they were able to teach her to manipulate ice at an expert level at a very young age.

Do I need to keep going?
»Possible Resolution: I'm requesting a regrade on this application.

I'm pulling myself out of the thread to diminish any further conflict, however I do believe he should be taught, not how to write properly, but how to write better. Commas and periods work wonders as well as proofreading if need be. Everything he writes is a bunch off hoopla. I hardly ever know what is going on until further posts come out. I was going to wait, but I only see things getting worse from here by the conversation we had on the Xat..

Sorry if I'm causing trouble!

First:

We don't punish people for being grammatically inept. Shizuo's English is atrocious, its why I don't play with him. Do the same if you can't stand it.

Second:

The first ability is using those numbers as a frame of reference. She currently would be at 3-1 in her base state, when entering the next phase her reiatsu output would jump to 2-4, then 2-2 with the next release. It could, and should, be worded better but again, lacking structure and English skills is not something we punish people for. If he, for whatever reason, is trying to utilize his powers as anything above a 2-2, then staff intervention is needed. Until then, there's nothing wrong here.

We also do not deny or punish people for making Mary Sue characters short of ridiculing them for being unimaginative and boring people. In addition, a "young age." for a Shinigami is typically anything south of one hundred and fifty years. She's not developing these powers in a decade, it's closer to centuries. While he's boring, he's not violating any rules.

The best resolution here is for you to do what you're doing and remove yourself from the thread with him, he is simply not violating any rules that merit a re-visitation of his application.

Very well, thanks Imakuran.

I wasn't seeking punishment. I just wanted his app to be revised so others can better understand it, but I guess that's his decision then if you can't technically make him do it. So, I guess if he wants the "non-boring" people to rp with him then he'd might take this thread into consideration. If not... then that's his choice.

I withdrew my character from the thread that I was in. Which is pretty much going to kill the thread, but not my problem.