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Jessy Nessa final shikai upgrade[finished]
Mon Jun 17, 2013 10:05 am
- Name Of Character: Jessy Nessa
- Link To Character Profile: https://www.platinumhearts.net/t8352-jessy-nessa-approved-1-5
- Reasons For Upgrading: Jessy is now a 1-5, and previously has not had access to all of her shikai. In this thread, she completed a task for which her zanpaktou spirit promised her the rest of her shikai abilities. As such, I wish to upgrade her shikai to reflect this.
What Are You Upgrading: her shikai, replacing the existing shikai with the one below (I just would find it easier then listing all the changes):- New Shikai:
- Shikai Description: Jessy's shikai is divided in to four seasons, each with their own form. periodically, the season will switch to the next season, and then the form will change with it. Currently, Jessy only has access to Spring and Summer forms, and so those are the ones described below.
While her shikai is in the season of spring, Jessy wears a leather gauntlet on each hand which extend to cover a bit of the arm. On the back of the hand and continuing down to the end of the gauntlet are metal protective plates, upon which are mounted 3 claw like blades, each extending 8 inches out from her fist. The claws are made of a black metal, the protective plates look like normal steel.
While her shikai is in the season of summer, the previous form dissipates, appearing to become mist, before a spear appears in her hand. From the tip of the blade down to the end of the shaft it is seven feet in length. The spear head itself is half a foot in length and shaped like a tooth, except the curved side is sharpened in to a cutting edge for the blade. A white tuft of fur is attached to the other end of the shaft.
While her shikai is in the season of fall, it becomes two ax like blades, each made to be weilded in one hand. Each begins as a normal zanpaktou handle, then a rounded metal pole sticks forth from that, 3 feet in length. About two feet up, another pole crosses it, moving 4 inches from the other pole. After these 4 inches, it spreads in to an ax blade, a half circle with a radius starting at the cross pole and extending two feet outward from the center point.
While her shikai is in the season of winter, her zanpaktou transforms, becoming two strips of leather, each wrapped around one of her fists. Metal studs poke out from the leather, meant to cause small puncture wounds whenever she punches someone. A thin layer of white fur covers the inside of the strips of leather, poking out slightly.
Shikai Abilities:
The flow of the seasons: Her shikai flows with the season's of the savannah, moving from one to another in the order they come. When she first releases her shikai, it appears in the season of spring. Every two posts that her shikai is active, the season switches to the next season, spring to summer, summer to fall, fall to winter, and then winter returning to spring.
Season of Spring Abilities
Fighting Style: While in shikia, her fighting style adapts to become a mixture of hakuda and swordplay, a unique style that changes the range of attacks constantly, making it much harder for the opponent to dodge.
Speed and mode of movement: In shikia, Jessy's speed is doubled, and she can also move on all fours to obtain shunpo like speeds for up to half a minute before stopping for fifteen seconds, though she must travel in a straight line for this.
Slicing Air Claw: While in shikia, she can swing her claws and create a highly focused arc of high pressure air. It can tear though cloth easily, but the most that will happen to someone's flesh is a shallow cut, as the air will disperse before it has time to make a deeper one. She can only use this ability 6 times while maintaining shikia, using it a 7th time will work, but she will be forced back in to sealed form and be unable to release for the remainder of the battle.
Tiger's Pounce: With this attack, Jessy tries to either stab or make a downward slash with both of her guantlets, and two white furred tails sprout from the ground, winding around the targets legs, entangling them for 15 seconds.
Season of Summer Abilities
Heat mirage of the tiger: When she uses this attack, the blade of her spear releases an immense amount of heat, warping the light ray in the air around her. This results in an illusory clone appearing slightly off center from the real Jessy. As it is an illusion caused by warped light rays, it copies all of her movements, it just always remains an inch off center. If one attempts to block her spear attacks, they might block the illusion instead causing her attack to hit them as they block thin air. After making one spear attack, the heat dissipates, and the illusory clone dissipates.
Burning Embers of the summer fire: Using this ability, Jessy slams the spear head in to the ground, and four burning log chunks appear. The flames have completely enveloped the black pieces of tree, creating a circle, 6 inches in diameter, of flame, floating in midair in front of her. They then fly towards her target, attempting to crash in to them. If one manages to make contact with their target, it will explode in a fiery blast about as damaging as a Hadō 33 - Sōkatsui cast by someone of her tier with her skill level of zanjutsu in Kidō ability.
Season of Fall Abilities
Earthquake: Jessy slams one of her axes in to the ground in front of her. From that point, the ground splits apart, causing a an opening, five feet wide, to appear from where her ax hit, extending 250 feet outwards. This fissure is 1,000 feet deep, and takes 5 seconds to form.
Rising Earth: Using this ability, a spike of earth rises from the ground nearby her. The spike is 5 feet in diameter at the base, and extends 10 feet upward, tapering to an extremely sharp point. The center of the base of this spike must be within 150 feet of her.
Season of Winter Abilities
Cold Claws: Using this ability, five small claw like blades made of ice appear around her fist, shooting forwards as she punches towards the enemy. They spin around on a circular motion, as if on the edge of a rotating circle. These ice claws move at the same rate as her punch, and can fly up to 150 feet from the point where she released them before they fall apart to nothing.
Burial of the Ice King: Snow forms in the area around her, forming in to a tiger like shape, about twice as big as her. It leaps towards her enemies, attempting to cover them with the snow it is made of. The snow will circle around up to two enemies, surrounding them in a 1 foot thick casing of snow which then freezes, becoming ice. She cannot use this technique more then twice within a thread.
- Any Extra Notes: If there is any problems with the new abilities of her shikai, please let me know so that I may fix them.
- Approved By: (ONLY THE PERSON WHO APPROVES THE UPGRADE WILL PUT THIS HERE! WE WILL EDIT YOUR POST AND ADD OUT NAME HERE!)
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Re: Jessy Nessa final shikai upgrade[finished]
Thu Jun 20, 2013 6:40 pm
«I'VE GOT NO PROBLEMS WITH IT»
Following reading everything mentioned in the upgrade section above, I don't see a problem with this taking place. Therefore, I'll give it the approval it needs to be placed into Approved Upgrades and move on from there.
Might I also add, that in the future, if you need a WIP moved, you should probably use this thread in the link below if you want it to be moved faster:
https://www.platinumhearts.net/t9712-the-staff-moving-locking-archiving-request-help-thread
Might I also add, that in the future, if you need a WIP moved, you should probably use this thread in the link below if you want it to be moved faster:
https://www.platinumhearts.net/t9712-the-staff-moving-locking-archiving-request-help-thread
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