[Sueki] Nina Valérian

Four hundred and thirteen however appears the way she like it

The actual age it stops at changes depending on the person.

She may leave blood seals on objects to detonate at will.

Sueki require sex to survive.

Definition of Sex wrote:sex
/seks/
Noun
(chiefly with reference to people) Sexual activity, including specifically sexual intercourse.

Practically speaking, violence is her sex,

Being forever exposed to wicked feelings ranging from flirtatious whims to whispers of mates in their peak of twilight didn't grant her eternal youth only. Indeed, originally the procedure would leave any ordinary Sueki always refreshed but in her case, the condition is rather distinct, it like an overflowing that exceeded already the limitations of what her body would normally perceive so instead of burning out, Nina evolves with every passing second for the better. Hence, she now garners a superior able body in terms of strength, agility, reflexes, speed, endurance, stamina and much more, for the description of each trait would take long words of writing and it wouldn't be enough. But it is safe to assume as well that her body is comparable with that of an arrancar's hierro. And please don't forget the raging fury within her mind to spend the surplus of never ending energy, Nina always itches for a bloody fight.

Dabbling with the dark arts for centuries, Nina became a witch..dun-da-daah. But seriously she has her own Grimoire which holds knowledge about creation of magical objects like talismans and amulets, how to perform magical spells, charms and divination and also how to summon or invoke supernatural entities such as angels, spirits, and demons. Alchemical transmutation circles are drawn by her own blood at different parts of her own body serving as a medium to help perform her abilities. Weaving clothes made from blood is one of her assets as well as performing space alchemy by stimulating bloody glyph to draw transmutation circle almost anywhere.

The call
l'appel

Nina calls on spirits in order to help her, mystical beings of the west or east, the alchemical symbols would channel their powers, she calls..

Undine - the Summon Spirit of water.

Limited to healing abilities as a normal Sueki with the exception of course to her shadow state, Nina would form water from moisture and engulfing the wounds in questions to start the procedure of healing. By offering blood in the mix, she can heal grievous wounds and regenerate lost limbs or organs as well. Nina can use the ability on herself or allies from a distance. Healing or regeneration will take time according to the severity of wound or injury, it is not constant.

Salamander - the Summon Spirit of fire.

Ladies and gentlemen, it is fire and fire is self explanatory. Not really, I guess. It ranges from fireballs to fire breath. With sacrificing blood, the flames' color get to change to blue. Fireballs tends to have explosive effect and fire breath would burn things to cinders.

Gnome - the Summon Spirit of earth.

A playful affinity, the ability to change environment to her advantage. By stomping the ground in a dancing stance, she can produce a boulders of rocks for defense or offense by throwing them at her foes or playing a game of hide and seek. By offering blood as a sacrifice, Nina can change the terrain around to own bidding. As an example, burrowing tunnels, constructing buildings, or raising a maze..

Sylph- the summon spirit of wind.

The power of stealth attacks, hence who can see the wind? Anyhow, Nina emulates having two guns by her hands, as the index finger is the barrel and the thumb is the eyesight then the remaining is pretty simple, pulling the invisible trigger to launch bullets made out of air. By sacrificing blood, the range and prowess of her surreal guns - akin to stats of a M1911A1- increases to that of a sniper rifle rifle.

Blood sacrifice
Sacrifice de sang

By offering her blood, Nina can make her attacks more potent as previously described. In the same time, she can borrow one of her shadow abilities for a short period time - 1 post - per blood sacrifice. The amount of blood offered per transaction is quarter a pint. She can use many disciplines at a time.

Book of Daedalus
Livre de Dédale

Such is her grimoire, indeed she can communicate with sprites and other scampi entities. In this book, all information regarding about anyone is stored. The book helps her finding them in the times of need through a map continuously changing on it's own to pinpoint her allies and foes. It provides her as well with telepathy to speak through far long distances and to teleport alone or with anyone.

There is also a mind game where she could duel against her adversaries in a virtual dreaming world rather than the real one, Nina does that only when she is in a playful mood however she will not be able to control her real body under such circumstances therefore she can trap her opposition from long distance where it considered safe. No one dies if loses in the game, there is another beneficial advantage other than that Nina would be able to render one of her foes useless along the course of the battle, since he or she wouldn't be able to use his body in the process.

Wings of Icarus
Ailes d'Icare

From her own blood, Nina can construct weapons to aid in her own endeavors, such like swords, knives, spears and reform back to blood again once they fulfilled their roles. However the true form if this weapon is micro blood wires, very small to be seen through eyes and she had a lot of them, so sharp that it can cut steel, so strong and resilient and could be used to entrap enemies and entangle them and ensnare. With proper use, Nina can elevate into higher grounds or descend to lowers with ease and really quietly while ensuring her safety.

A Lunatic Esper
Une esper lunatique

Nina is by no means a naturally born Sueki, therefore such an ability wasn't gained through her unholy rebirth. It was something that she carried out from older human self, the means to understand and feel the sentiments of others with empathy, mayhaps an experience formed by a mind that cared long time ago. But now, this power is a little bit different. True, Nina can see through others' emotions and body signals with so much clarity, by which she would be able to make reasonable decisions under the most dire circumstances. Not only that, she can sense entities both powerful and weak from afar as her Sueki brethren would be included in the whole equation, and here come her own haunting where Nina esper abilities were enhanced to feel even the sexual arousal and deep desires being fulfilled through whatever forms of earthly pleasures, it like hearing hundred if not thousand of whispers and screams of ecstasy on a continuous endless basis whilst others are dwelling in their own profound trance. Nina's body is already producing the enzymes and hormones known for such process without an end keeping her youth for longer times...Beware, there are consequences for this lady is a little bit in the head, so shake well before use.

Diablerie

"They gorged on the right, but were hungry, and they devoured on the left, but were not satisfied; they devoured the flesh of their own kindred.." - Isaiah 9:20

The act of Diablerie, involves Nina draining another Sueki of blood and then devouring their soul. The practice holds a great deal of allure, for it bestows the greatest pleasure imaginable which is better than sex, and grant greater power, she also found a way to devour souls of other species bu that is quite recently. This is how Nina survived most of the four centuries. Eventually gaining knowledge from each cannibalistic act henceforth, she gains more experience and powers when she drinks her enemies blood.

Currently, Nina has superb skills in and as..

Xingyiquan
Two-handed (Highland) claymore
Gunslinger

JJ wrote:Sorry if the post seems a bit sporadic, tis just how I feel like I'll be able to best check this application.

In lieu to your helpful recommendations, the following has been modified..

And would you kindly tune down the volume, there are some parts where aggression was felt so I beg your pardon, this poor one is accustomed to formality and cherishes courtesy, so please forgive and hang out with me so that we can better the power section to meet the site's standards.

Four hundred and thirteen however appears the way she like it

Fixed, removed 'The way she like it'

Sueki require sex to survive.

Sex. S-E-X.

Definition of Sex wrote:sex
/seks/
Noun
(chiefly with reference to people) Sexual activity, including specifically sexual intercourse.

Thank you very much for reminding me.

Practically speaking, violence is her sex,

Violence is not sex. You cannot change that fact. If you are a Sueki, the only way to acquire proper survival is to perform sexual intercourse or masturbation, to achieve climax. Anything else does not work. Eating ones own eggs gives the same nutrition that was once had; that is not why Sueki need sex as an obeisance. It is because in the moment of climax, energy is released, and they absorb that energy into themselves. That is why such a way of "fulfilling" the obeisance does not work.

Edited 'Violence is her sex' to 'Violence stimulates her sex drive' and added 'However, she had to fulfill her sexual tendencies through killing her victim by sucking them dry then performing acts of necrophilia to satiate the lustful urges.'

That would lead us into I want to make a Sueki:
1- Vampires (I am close to WoD and VTMB}
2- They resemble somehow the Bounto
3- Like any Game, I band with a friend of mine here

Call me old fashioned, but I find RPing sex as indecent..I am not in for the Sueki for this specific trait. Please show leniency.

Being forever exposed to wicked feelings ranging from flirtatious whims to whispers of mates in their peak of twilight didn't grant her eternal youth only. Indeed, originally the procedure would leave any ordinary Sueki always refreshed but in her case, the condition is rather distinct, it like an overflowing that exceeded already the limitations of what her body would normally perceive so instead of burning out, Nina evolves with every passing second for the better. Hence, she now garners a superior able body in terms of strength, agility, reflexes, speed, endurance, stamina and much more, for the description of each trait would take long words of writing and it wouldn't be enough. But it is safe to assume as well that her body is comparable with that of an arrancar's hierro. And please don't forget the raging fury within her mind to spend the surplus of never ending energy, Nina always itches for a bloody fight.

...Well, that makes it easy to understand what you mean in each area... Not really, sorry. You need to talk about each area in some amount of detail if you want them to be recognized, otherwise you could simply just say "They are all Grandmasters because of this trait.". Finally, you cannot be evolving "every second" without performing any work or effort, please remove that. I can understand if when she was embraced she gained a superior body, but as for passive evolution without effort? That's a no.

Removed the whole power and added 'willpower' instead.

Dabbling with the dark arts for centuries, Nina became a witch..dun-da-daah. But seriously she has her own Grimoire which holds knowledge about creation of magical objects like talismans and amulets, how to perform magical spells, charms and divination and also how to summon or invoke supernatural entities such as angels, spirits, and demons. Alchemical transmutation circles are drawn by her own blood at different parts of her own body serving as a medium to help perform her abilities. Weaving clothes made from blood is one of her assets as well as performing space alchemy by stimulating bloody glyph to draw transmutation circle almost anywhere.

You must describe this "Grimoire" stuff in more detail. Where it comes from, why she is able to manipulate it, direct examples of what it does as well. Space alchemy, I'm afraid, you must remove - manipulation of space is far too advanced as a casual added on ability. Finally, if you summon other creatures, you must describe each she can summon in detail so she cannot randomly just pull them out of her violent va----.

Please check her Umbra state power first, this phrase is just an introduction of her shadow state power. And perchance, did you read a novel by the name of 'The song of ice and fire' Well, actually summoning dark things from her member is a good idea, however it is not the issue here.

The call
l'appel

Nina calls on spirits in order to help her, mystical beings of the west or east, the alchemical symbols would channel their powers, she calls..

Undine - the Summon Spirit of water.

Limited to healing abilities as a normal Sueki with the exception of course to her shadow state, Nina would form water from moisture and engulfing the wounds in questions to start the procedure of healing. By offering blood in the mix, she can heal grievous wounds and regenerate lost limbs or organs as well. Nina can use the ability on herself or allies from a distance. Healing or regeneration will take time according to the severity of wound or injury, it is not constant.

Salamander - the Summon Spirit of fire.

Ladies and gentlemen, it is fire and fire is self explanatory. Not really, I guess. It ranges from fireballs to fire breath. With sacrificing blood, the flames' color get to change to blue. Fireballs tends to have explosive effect and fire breath would burn things to cinders.

Gnome - the Summon Spirit of earth.

A playful affinity, the ability to change environment to her advantage. By stomping the ground in a dancing stance, she can produce a boulders of rocks for defense or offense by throwing them at her foes or playing a game of hide and seek. By offering blood as a sacrifice, Nina can change the terrain around to own bidding. As an example, burrowing tunnels, constructing buildings, or raising a maze..

Sylph- the summon spirit of wind.

The power of stealth attacks, hence who can see the wind? Anyhow, Nina emulates having two guns by her hands, as the index finger is the barrel and the thumb is the eyesight then the remaining is pretty simple, pulling the invisible trigger to launch bullets made out of air. By sacrificing blood, the range and prowess of her surreal guns - akin to stats of a M1911A1- increases to that of a sniper rifle rifle.

That, is a very very lot of different elements that can be used while in a sealed state. Please take only one or two and drop the others.

Removed all powers except the spirit of undine and added further explanation "However, it must be noted that she is a powerful healer and regenerator, Nina can also alter her looks and body proportions which is akin to changing her appearance to a small child or old crone through this ability."

Blood sacrifice
Sacrifice de sang

By offering her blood, Nina can make her attacks more potent as previously described. In the same time, she can borrow one of her shadow abilities for a short period time - 1 post - per blood sacrifice. The amount of blood offered per transaction is quarter a pint. She can use many disciplines at a time.

What is a discipline? How much is a quarter a pint of blood to her subjectively? What shadow abilities are you referring to?

Please refer to her umbra state abilities.

Book of Daedalus
Livre de Dédale

Such is her grimoire, indeed she can communicate with sprites and other scampi entities. In this book, all information regarding about anyone is stored. The book helps her finding them in the times of need through a map continuously changing on it's own to pinpoint her allies and foes. It provides her as well with telepathy to speak through far long distances and to teleport alone or with anyone.

There is also a mind game where she could duel against her adversaries in a virtual dreaming world rather than the real one, Nina does that only when she is in a playful mood however she will not be able to control her real body under such circumstances therefore she can trap her opposition from long distance where it considered safe. No one dies if loses in the game, there is another beneficial advantage other than that Nina would be able to render one of her foes useless along the course of the battle, since he or she wouldn't be able to use his body in the process.

You CANNOT know about everyone just because a book tells you about it, please remove that part, as well as the other parts that allow you to universally follow anyone. Secondly, remove the dream plane part, as once again that is far too much for a sealed state Sueki alone.

Edited as per recommendation.

Wings of Icarus
Ailes d'Icare

From her own blood, Nina can construct weapons to aid in her own endeavors, such like swords, knives, spears and reform back to blood again once they fulfilled their roles. However the true form if this weapon is micro blood wires, very small to be seen through eyes and she had a lot of them, so sharp that it can cut steel, so strong and resilient and could be used to entrap enemies and entangle them and ensnare. With proper use, Nina can elevate into higher grounds or descend to lowers with ease and really quietly while ensuring her safety.

Obviously, it would take a great amount of focus to be able to make such wire - how much of it is she able to create a post, and can she manage it if she is distracted?

Explanation added

A Lunatic Esper
Une esper lunatique

Nina is by no means a naturally born Sueki, therefore such an ability wasn't gained through her unholy rebirth. It was something that she carried out from older human self, the means to understand and feel the sentiments of others with empathy, mayhaps an experience formed by a mind that cared long time ago. But now, this power is a little bit different. True, Nina can see through others' emotions and body signals with so much clarity, by which she would be able to make reasonable decisions under the most dire circumstances. Not only that, she can sense entities both powerful and weak from afar as her Sueki brethren would be included in the whole equation, and here come her own haunting where Nina esper abilities were enhanced to feel even the sexual arousal and deep desires being fulfilled through whatever forms of earthly pleasures, it like hearing hundred if not thousand of whispers and screams of ecstasy on a continuous endless basis whilst others are dwelling in their own profound trance. Nina's body is already producing the enzymes and hormones known for such process without an end keeping her youth for longer times...Beware, there are consequences for this lady is a little bit in the head, so shake well before use.

What is the range on her esperness and the time a Sueki can last before they need to adhere to their obeisance is a set figure, so the part about it elongating them needs to be removed.

Edited as per recommendation, range added

Diablerie

"They gorged on the right, but were hungry, and they devoured on the left, but were not satisfied; they devoured the flesh of their own kindred.." - Isaiah 9:20

The act of Diablerie, involves Nina draining another Sueki of blood and then devouring their soul. The practice holds a great deal of allure, for it bestows the greatest pleasure imaginable which is better than sex, and grant greater power, she also found a way to devour souls of other species bu that is quite recently. This is how Nina survived most of the four centuries. Eventually gaining knowledge from each cannibalistic act henceforth, she gains more experience and powers when she drinks her enemies blood.

No. Sueki do not DEVOUR souls. Sueki do not do ANYTHING with souls. They are HUMAN BEINGS. Altered human beings, but still human beings. Eating the soul of another would destroy the original soul completely. Therefore the consumption of another just does not make any sense for a Sueki, in addition to the fact that they already consume others by just normally feeding on them. Finally, she is not strong enough to have developed something as painstakingly intricate as handling another person's soul.

Removed soul devouring, removed and added some details.

Currently, Nina has superb skills in and as..

Xingyiquan
Two-handed (Highland) claymore
Gunslinger

Please describe in more detail how she uses each of these traits.

Same here is done

But as a Sueki, Nina had her desires to fullfill however as an abnormal sueki, she consummates such lustful inclinations through a fierce fit of violence where she would tear flesh, maul and dismember her whom could called victim instead of mate, or whatever prey falls within the scope of her sight. The ovum begins to produce eggs which doesn't naturally receive sperm instead the already body undergone mutation devours the eggs thus producing certain supplies providing Nina with the nutrition needed during sexual course..Practically speaking, violence stimulates her sex drive, the more Nina fights, the more she get aroused..the more she wants to kill you to reach a state of twilight. A true sadistic masochist and masochistic sadist, where pain delights her and inflicting the same name in others arouse this abnormal Sueki, all complained with mad laughter, the most wicked of giggles and getting wet really fast. However, she had to fulfill her sexual tendencies through killing her victim by sucking them dry then performing acts of necrophilia to satiate the lustful urges.