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Michael Evans [APPROVED, 5-3]
Wed Apr 17, 2013 9:32 am
» Name: Michael Evans
» Titles: -none-
» Age: 18
» Gender: male
» Affiliation/Rank: N/A
» Appearance Description:
In terms of appearance, he is a bit average height, being 5’9’’, and has a slightly athletic build going for him, because of his interest in track. He is usually seen in a black t-shirt, tan cargo pants, as well as rather old-school Sneakers. He is usually listening to dubstep on his MP3, or occasionally doodling in his notebook.
He has medium length brown hair, which is usually messy (he refuses to cut it regardless) and has heterochromia, with his left eye being an electric blue, and the right being a vibrant purple. He also is frequently seen with a Rook chess piece dangling around his neck.
» Appearance Picture: N/A
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» Personality:
The first and foremost thing about lee is that he is quiet. He takes his time to view the worlds wonders (or lack thereof) and will generally take it slow. His isn't stupid, however, and will react to any biting insults pointed towards him, or who he deems an ally. Michael has been known to stand up for what or who he believes in; regardless of the authorities’ decision on the matter. another thing about him is also generally kind to others, and will help any possible way he can, but won’t go completely out of his way to help someone either. he is also known to help the underdogs, as you will see him jumping in to try and even the odds. (which usually results in embarrassment, as he has been known to jump into a few 'heated' sparring matches.)
In battle; (that is to say he gets in one in the first place) will be generally guarded, as well as distant. he will usually test out the opponent to see how his opponents react to different stimuli. Close combat is not his strong suit, but is trying hard to change that fact. Michael will usually be training with CQC weapons whenever he can get the chance; but you will see him generally using hit-and-run tactics; using guns, throwing knifes and stealth against an opponent.
» Likes:
Drawing
Track
Pizza
Not Fighting
The Color Green
» Dislikes:
Stupid People
Insults –too anyone, not just himself
Authority Figures
Yellow
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» Background: Michael Evans Was Born on March 16, 2395, to one Martha and Thomas Evans, a kind, loving couple who were going to raise him as well as they could. Sadly, the two were involved in a car-crash in 2399. After that he went into an orphanage, where he learned to survive on his own for a long time. At the age of 12, He underwent Soul State Evolution, able to do more than a regular human could. But that came with a price; he started to see a number of creatures, including what he was told, hollows, a malevolent creature what has a mask and a hole in its heart.
At the age of fifteen, after he got into high school, there was a sport that caught his eye. Track. He loved the feel of adrenaline flowing through his veins, and loved being the fastest person on track. His Soul State helped him with that, making him somewhat faster than others his age. His first fight was with a rather burly bully by the name of Shawn Keegans, and was beaten pretty badly, and that’s when he chose the decision to at least know HOW to defend himself, rather than train to fight period.
At the age of sixteen, he was introduced to Chi, and was amazed on what he could do. He saw people take hits and give them that were equally powerful, and had begun training into it. He had heard that if you were Awakened; you could craft an anima stone and use magic that could be potentially powerful, but he didn’t want to carry around a rock that could easily taken away from him.
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» Natural Attributes: Faster than others his age, Survival Instinct
» Racial Powers:
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Powers
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General Skills
- Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
- General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
- Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
- Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Will Skills
- Willpower/Determination: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
- Mental Deduction: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
- Pain Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
- Focus: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Human Skill Sheet
- Anima Stone Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
- Soul Sorcery: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
- Soul Dash: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
- Soul Detection: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Chi Skills
- Geppo: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
- Vindeca: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
- Tekkai: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
- Yang Surge: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
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» Roleplay Sample: 15 year old Michael Evans had been sitting on the rooftops of his school while drawing and listening to some rather hard Dubstep drops when he felt a nudge. This shocked him out of his trance, as he usually goes into after he puts in his `buds and starts drawing. He looked up to see a boy around his age staring at him with what seemed like curiosity. “What are you drawing?” the boy asked politely, and by the look on his face, was an honest question. Michael looked down at what he was drawing. It actually seemed to be the area around him, including parts of the town he could see on top of the roof. “Uh…” the 15 year old trailed off, unsure of what he was drawing as well. He chuckled, surprising the boy looking over his shoulder. “W-what?” the boy stammered, confused at Michaels sudden action. He looked up at the boy. “It seems I don’t know what im drawing myself.” He smiled, confusing the boy even further. The boy looked at Michael. “I think I’ve seen you around…Michael, is it?” he asked, and Michael nodded. “What’s your name?” he asked politely. The boy grinned. “Names Jonathan. Jonathan Spencer.” He said, offering his hand. Michael awkwardly took his hand over his shoulder and shook it. “Nice to meet you, Jon.” Michael grinned. He patted the ground beside him. “Here sit by me. I’ve got some dubstep if you want to listen…” the 15 year old offered, lending him a `bud…
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Re: Michael Evans [APPROVED, 5-3]
Wed Apr 17, 2013 2:07 pm
Not sure if I should be doing this, but since it is a new person and it isn't much I'm saying, I'm going to go ahead.
Just a heads up, the site is based in the year 2413, so a character born in 2095 would be over 300 years old, not 18.
Edit: Also, I would suggest taking a look at the WIP Checking Thread.
Anyway, If any staff member feels that my actions were problematic, please talk to me, I only wished to help a new member out by doing this.
Just a heads up, the site is based in the year 2413, so a character born in 2095 would be over 300 years old, not 18.
Edit: Also, I would suggest taking a look at the WIP Checking Thread.
Anyway, If any staff member feels that my actions were problematic, please talk to me, I only wished to help a new member out by doing this.
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Re: Michael Evans [APPROVED, 5-3]
Wed Apr 17, 2013 2:48 pm
-blushes- typo. sorry `bout that.
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Re: Michael Evans [APPROVED, 5-3]
Wed Apr 17, 2013 5:27 pm
Well, you need to change the other date(s) in his history as well. Right now it seems his parents are dying 296 years before he was born.
"Beauty is in the eye of the beholder."
"Of course it is. Are YOU going to question beholder's artistic sense?"
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Re: Michael Evans [APPROVED, 5-3]
Wed Apr 17, 2013 5:36 pm
alright, date corrected
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Re: Michael Evans [APPROVED, 5-3]
Mon Apr 22, 2013 5:28 pm
Aivee Check Incoming!
Thank you Tina! Nothing was wrong with what you did, but next time I suggest giving it over to a PM! That would help a lot more.
Now Tina had a pretty good eye. However, the most glaring thing dear little one, is that you don't describe your powers. Sure most people get a good idea, but I would suggest elaborating, and explain what exactly he can do with his power at this point in time. That would be super, super helpful!
Also, your personality is only 6 sentences; we need 10. But that's a minor hump; I'm pretty sure if you cut up a bit of your run-on sentences, it could work. But yeah, that's just about it~
Now Tina had a pretty good eye. However, the most glaring thing dear little one, is that you don't describe your powers. Sure most people get a good idea, but I would suggest elaborating, and explain what exactly he can do with his power at this point in time. That would be super, super helpful!
Also, your personality is only 6 sentences; we need 10. But that's a minor hump; I'm pretty sure if you cut up a bit of your run-on sentences, it could work. But yeah, that's just about it~
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Re: Michael Evans [APPROVED, 5-3]
Tue Apr 23, 2013 3:08 pm
Edited, kept out Kinetic control. (because, no matter how i look at it, i can't seem to find out how to employ Kinetic energy in an RP.)
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Re: Michael Evans [APPROVED, 5-3]
Tue Apr 23, 2013 4:11 pm
Do not worry nya! The Pawesome Aikuko-Nya is here!
This applications is minesh, nya~! So's let's get down to the ameowzing checking nya!
Applicashion Checklist nya~
- Namezies Nya~ [X]
- Appropriateded Age Nya~ [X]
- Gender Nya~ [X]
- Appearancu Presented Nya~ [X]
- Appearancu Described-nya in Appropriateded Lengthzies OR Picturies is Visible Nya~ [X]
- Appearancu is Not Claimeded Nya~ [X]
- 10 sentencus for personalites Nya~ [X]
- Histomi is of appropriateded lengthzies Nya~ [X]
- Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered Nya~! [X]
- Powers are described reasonably enough Nya~! [X]
- Application/RP Sample is not in First Person Nya~ [X]
- Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow) Nyaaaan~ [X]
- RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) Myan~? [X]
- RP Sample is 10 sentences Myan~! [X]
Will Skills
- Willpower/Determination: Adept
- Mental Deduction: Adept
- Pain Endurance: Adept
- Focus: Adept
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[list][*][b]Willpower/Determination:[/b] Adept
[*][b]Mental Deduction:[/b] Adept
[*][b]Pain Endurance:[/b] Adept
[*][b]Focus:[/b] Adept
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Comments/Notes: Nyan ~! Welcomeow to PH! x3~
Tier: 5-3
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Re: Michael Evans [APPROVED, 5-3]
Sat Jun 29, 2013 1:25 pm
Aivee Clean-Up Time!
This member has left the site or is inactive! Therefore, I am placing this into archives! Don't worry, if you want it back, simply post Here!
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