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Rachel Dare, Gate of Dreams[Approved 2-1+]
Tue Apr 16, 2013 3:54 am
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» Name: Rachel Dare
» Titles: The Gate of Dreams
» Race: Human
» Age: been alive for 18 years, looks 12 years old
» Gender: Female
» Affiliation/Rank: she is in high school, as she is a slow learner. however, she has not found any group to join that would fit her as of this time.
» Appearance Picture:
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» Personality:
- Spoiled: Rachel is a doorway to dreams, pulling the objects of her desires in to reality. As such she is used to getting what she wants, and if this is a physical thing there is usually no problem as she can create it herself. However, when it comes to dealing with authority or how people behave towards her this becomes a problem. She is used to getting what she wants, and saying no to her can result in a temper tantrum or a fight if not controlled correctly.
- Energetic: Rachel has an enormous amount of energy, even for someone with a young body like hers. She seems to never tire out, always on the move. She has no trouble running for long periods of time, and it is rare to even see her need to catch her breath.
- Doesn't trust: Rachel talks to almost no one outside of her family and doesn't have any friends. This isn't because she prefers to be alone, but because she has difficulty coming to trust people. It is like she has this natural fear of other people until she gets used to them, and only then can she start trusting them. However, she seems to get along fairly well with her class president at karakura high school, talking quietly to that person instead of ignoring them like she does to every other student.
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» History: It was 18 years ago when she appeared on this planet with nothing but the clothes on her back. No history, no name, no parents, as if she had just appeared out of thin air. Despite her unusual circumstances she was taken in by an orphanage in the town she had been found in, a bustling area called karakura town. It was here that she would spend the first fifteen years of her life, playing with the other kids, doing chores, and going to school. However, nobody could fail to notice that she didn't age one day in all these years. She was sent to many doctors, one after the other, but none could figure out a reason why she didn't age. After five doctors tried and failed the orphanage gave up, resigned to the fact that she would age. She did learn slower than others, she successfully completed about half a year worth of school work during a normal semester while at the orphanage.
In her fifteenth year a family came to visit the orphanage. They were no ordinary family though, they had strong spiritual powers within them, and they adopted Rachel, curious about the unnatural energy they had felt about her. In her new home thing were much nicer, and even though they had started to train her in martial arts and to utilize her powers, her learning sped up. As her eighteenth year on this planet has just started, along with the school year, she is almost ready to graduate 9th grade.
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• Natural Attributes:
Unnatural energy signature: To those who can sense energy, Rachel's energy feels extremely unnatural, they can innately understand that her energy is not of this realm.
Eternally young, and Semi-Immortal: Rachel has not aged a day since the day she came in to existence, and she will never end up aging so long as she lives. She will live forever unless killed by unnatural means, her bod being eternally young. The lack of aging is due to how she came to exist. The energy that gave birth to her was enough to force a plane of existence out of its normal place in the planescape, and it will forever sustain her at this age.
Well trained in martial arts: Rachel has been trained well in martial arts, and has about the same skill as someone who has been practicing for five years.
• Powers:
Stormreaver Inheritance: Rachel was "born" when Quor Tarai channeled the Stormreaver's magic in to a dream. This impacted Rachel, leaving an imprint of the Stormreaver's abilities upon her soul. The Stormreaver's abilities are based off of lightning and thunder, and this is the basis of Rachel's abilities.
• Pure Abilities:
Electric absorption: Rachel has learned to see electricity and to draw it in to herself to fuel her abilities. She is constantly absorbing the static electricity in the air, this is not considered a source she can draw on due to it being a source she naturally draws on to get her base power.
Electric bolt: Using this ability Rachel discharges a ball of electricity from her hand towards her enemy in order to shock them with it.
Lightning whip: Using this ability Rachel forms a thin tendril of electricity in her hand. This tendril is 8 feet in length and lasts until Rachel dispels it. Anyone but Rachel touching the tendril gets shocked as if they had just been hit by a bolt of lightning.
Lightning Punch/Kick: Using this ability, Rachel charges her spirit energy, moving it in circles, with circles next to each other rotating in opposite directions. This causes a large electrical charge to gather around her fist as she punches, pouring in to her opponent when she hits them.
Thunder Punch: After making a punch, Rachel can quickly withdraw her hand while at the same time blasting the area her hand had been in with her spirit energy, causing a thunderous sound in the area, harming others with the loud noise. Depending on the distance from the attack, the victim's natural and/or unnatural resistance to loud noises, this can could pain, temporary deafness, permanent deafness, disorientation, and/or damage to the ears. This attack can be combined with a Lightning Punch.
Lightning Feet: This is her equivalent to the shinigami flash step, she charges the soles of her shoes or feet with electricity, allowing her to move at flash step speeds for a short while. This causes a crackling, sizzling sound as she moves, the lightning interacting with the air next to it as she moves. She uses her Power Control skill in order to indicate how proficient she is in this maneuver, like a shinigami would use the hoho skill to determine their abilities with flash step.
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Sacred Release
• Sacred Release Appearance: While in her Sacred release, Rachel's body is surrounded by a 1 inch layer of yellow glowing electricity. Otherwise there is no change.
• Sacred Release Powers:
Release requirements: The very nature of Rachel's sacred release is that she compresses a huge amount of electrical energy within her body before letting it explode outward within her. Thus, to even activate her sacred release Rachel needs an enormous amount of electrical energy, something she can only obtain by draining electricity from an external source. Something like a power line, electric socket, power plant, things of that nature.
Electricity manipulation: In this form Rachel can manipulate electricity as if it were just another limb on her body. If she attempts to manipulate electricity caused by an enemy's technique, she will only gain control of their electricity if her control skill (Power Control) is greater then their control skill. However, if her control skill is equal to her opponents control skill, if her and her opponents tier are within 1 major rank of each other (a 1-1 is within a major rank of a 0-2 to a 1-5), then the technique stops, frozen in its current state until one of them decides to give up their attempt to control it. Otherwise, the one with a higher tier takes control of the technique, though they will find that there is some resistance, making them clumsy with it.
_____________________________Ascended Sacred State
•Ascended Sacred State Appearance: (Describe what your human looks like when they release their spiritual power. This is essentially equivalent to a Shinigami's Bankai.)
• Ascended Sacred State Powers: (Does your human get any additional powers from this transformation? For instance, if you had the power to control Fire in your base, could you control heat and magma in this state? Or would you gain something else?)
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» The Spirit's Name: Quor Tarai
» The Spirit's Race: N/A
» The Spirit's Gender: N/A
» The Spirit's Age: unknown
» The Spirit's Written Appearance: Quor Tarai is the spirit of , the plane of dreams. It doesn't appear as anything more then a vaporous fog, or something similar. This is because Quor Tarai's form is not something the human mind could take, just seeing it would cause someone's soul to disintegrate. Thus, Qour Tarai does not allow her to see its true form.
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» The Spirit's Personality: Quor Tarai is an extremely patient spirit, able to wait for eternity to see its plans come to fruition. Quor Tarai is also very shrewd and cunning, able to deduce things others wouldn't. Quor Tarai puts its goals above everything else, not caring who gets hurt or what it has to sacrifice to attain what it wants.
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» The Spirit's History: How old Quor Tarai is is a debatable matter, some would argue only since humans came in to the picture, others may say since life itself formed, while others may argue since the universe began. However, which one it is is irrelevant in Quor Tarai's eyes. Quor Tarai has no idea when it came in to existence, as far as it is concerned it existed since the beginning of time. For billions of years Quor Tarai let itself go on naturally, allowing the birth of creatures known as the quori, not caring what they did. However, an event approximately 500,000 years ago angered Quor Tarai, and it is on the path for vengeance.
Approximately 500,000 years ago, in a corner of the universe millions of light-years away, the Quori born on the plane of dreams invaded a small planet, intent on stopping all change. However, this was a planet ruled by dragons and a giant empire, and combining their knowledge and an ancient device, the king of the the giant empire, the stormreaver, managed to push the plane of dreams away from our plane, the material plane, making it impossible to open up portals to it, or otherwise travel there except during dreams.
Now, naturally Quor Tarai did not take kindly to this action, on the other hand Quor Tarai knew better then to act at that time, waiting for the giant magic and the emotions to calm down on both sides. However, the Quori were not going to wait, and they started moving on their own. By manipulating beings of this worlds dreams, they managed to get them to breed a being that the Quori could then inhabit despite the giant's magic. As the actions of the Quori forcefully pulled closer to the material plane, the giant's spell started to put pressure on the dimension. This caused pain to Quor Tarai, the same as if a human was slowly being crushed between to walls of steel.
Luckily for Quor Tarai, the Quori were defeated, their scheme figured out, and stopped. Once again was pushed away, the pain fading from Quor Tarai as the magic pushed it back to where it had been before. As the years went by while Quor Tarai waited for the giant's spell to fade, it changed how it dealt with it's realm. Taking a more active role in what went on, Quor Tarai made sure to get rid of any remaining Quori who might attempt another act like had happened with those before. While Quor Tarai waited it plotted, figuring out how it would draw itself back in to its original spot in the planescape.
Eventually, the giant magic had faded enough to put Quor Tarai's plan in to action. Using the power of dreams, Quor Tarai pulled the giant energy in to itself, focusing it in to one dream in particular, a human on earth that was dreaming about her 12 year old daughter. Preserving this dream, Quor Tarai focused the energy from the giant magic in to this dream. For a hundred years this continued, until the finally drop of energy went in to the dream, causing the dream to manifest within our realm. The result was, 18 years ago, the appearance of a never aging 12 year old girl in karakura town, and the trapping on Quor Tarai within this body, that was also a gateway, or portal, to the plane of dreams.
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» Spirit Powers: As the spirit of the plane of dreams, Quor Tarai can manipulate dreams, if Quor Tarai says something happens in a dream, it happens. However, the plane of dreams operates in a strange way. While there are beings that call the plane of dreams home, most people there are people from other realms that are dreaming. When you dream, your conscious leaves your body and transfers to the plane of dreams. There they enter a dreamscape, a little circular part of the plane in which their dream occurs. If they should ever be killed, or otherwise put in to danger, as well as when their dream ends, their consciousness is pulled back to wherever they originated from, reentering their body. This is what causes the sensation of falling that some people have when they wake up. This means that even if Quor Tarai tried to eliminate you while you were dreaming, you would just wake up in your real body.
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» Unique Traits: What Rachel has gained from being the gate to is the ability to pull any dream object in to the material plane, where we live. In addition, since she has Quor Tarai inside her she can cause anything to exist within dreams, allowing her to pull anything in to the material plane. However, even though she may be able to create any item in the dream plane, there are limitations in bringing it in to the material plane. First off, bring items though the gate is taxing on her body, and so she can only bring a limited number through the gate in a thread. In addition, due to the fact that Quor Tarai is unable to affect the material plane, if an item is too powerful she won’t be able to bring it through the gate as it would reject the material plane.
In addition, there is one other ability she has gained. When she sleeps, her body returns to the plane of dreams, and when she decides to wake up, she returns to the material world. However, she does not have to return to the same place she came in from, allowing her a means to travel almost anywhere in the world. She can also do this by entering a deep meditative trance. However, due to the time and concentration, it is impossible to use in combat.
» Forms:
» Drawbacks: Rachel has a limit to the number of items she can pull through from the other side of the gate, depending on her tier.
Upper 0 Tier (0-3+ and above): 17 item limit.
Lower 0 Tier (0-3 and below): 15 item limit.
1 Tier: 10 item limit.
2 Tier: 5 item limit.
3 Tier: 2 item limit.
4 Tier: 1 item limit.
5 Tier: 0 item limit.
If she reaches the limit, she can’t make any more items during that thread. In addition, so long as she has not reached the limit, ever 2 posts she regains one item creation use, though she can’t exceed her base item limit. Also, each individual item can’t be more powerful than her ziamichi’s tier. What this means is that if she creates an item, it can’t do something that a being of her ziamichi's tier wouldn’t be able to do. Should any member of a thread feel that an item she has created is beyond her ziamichi’s tier, and a staff finds it to be such, the post must either be changed in order to bring it in to order, or if I decide to or, for some screwed up reason, I am unwilling to back off after having it discussed with me, the object will vaporize upon appearing, losing my usage and destroying the item completely.
» Control: 10
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NOTE: 's will have three to four skill sheets possibly. One for general skills, one for racial skills, one for the host's skill and possibly one for the spirit's skills if they are a different race.
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General
» Host Class: (Ranging from E to the weakest and A to the strongest; With S being a special class of 's. Don't do anything to this section, as staff will determine how strong your Class is from tier once approved. And yes, the Host can sometimes be stronger then the spirit.)
» Spirit Class: (Ranging from E to the weakest and A to the strongest; With S being a special class of 's. Don't do anything to this section, as staff will determine how strong your Class is from tier once approved.)
Skills:
0 Tier is allowed 1 Master, 2 Advanced for each section
1 Tier is allowed 2 Advanced for each section
2 Tier is allowed 1 Advanced, 2 Adept for each section
3 Tier is allowed 1 Adept for each section
4 Tier and below only get beginner.
General Skills
- Durability: Adept
- General Speed: Advanced
- Strength: Advanced
- Weapon Skill: Beginner
Human Reiatsu Sheet
- Power Control: Adept
- Energy Usage/Regeneration: Advanced
- Energy Resistance/Endurance: Adept
- Physical Augmentation: Beginner
Skills For Host
- Skill Of Powers: Beginner
- Control Over Spirit: Adept
- Seal Strength: Adept
- Sync-Rate: Advanced
Will Skills For Host
- Willpower/Determination: Adept
- Mental Deduction: Beginner
- Pain Endurance: Advanced
- Focus: Master
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General Skills For Spirit
- Durability: Advanced
- General Speed: Beginner
- Strength: Advanced
- Weapon Skill: Beginner
Will Skills For Spirit
- Willpower/Determination: Beginner
- Mental Deduction: Advance
- Pain Endurance: Master
- Focus: Master
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Re: Rachel Dare, Gate of Dreams[Approved 2-1+]
Tue Apr 23, 2013 10:46 am
Aivee check reserve!
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Re: Rachel Dare, Gate of Dreams[Approved 2-1+]
Wed Jul 03, 2013 4:39 am
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Re: Rachel Dare, Gate of Dreams[Approved 2-1+]
Wed Jul 03, 2013 6:28 am
Rachel is ready for rechecking now, so whenever anybody is up for that...
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Re: Rachel Dare, Gate of Dreams[Approved 2-1+]
Thu Jul 04, 2013 10:24 am
Application Checklist
- Name [X]
- Appropriate Age [X]
- Gender [X]
- Appearance Present [X]
- Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
- Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
- 10 sentences for personality [X]
- History is of appropriate length [X]
- Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [O]
- Powers are described reasonably enough [O]
- Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
- Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
- RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
- RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]
Will Skills
- Willpower/Determination: Adept
- Mental Deduction: Beginner
- Pain Endurance: Advanced
- Focus: Master
Ziamichi Will Skills
- Willpower/Determination: Beginner
- Mental Deduction: Advanced
- Pain Endurance: Master
- Focus: Master
Comments/Notes: discussed all the changes and all the things i didn't understand so I'm all good with this one.
Tier: 2-1+
Ziamichi Tier: 1-5
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Re: Rachel Dare, Gate of Dreams[Approved 2-1+]
Sun Jul 07, 2013 1:40 pm
It seems some parts of the drawback section of her ziamichi powers got cut out at some point (mostly the word 'ziamichi'). I have edited it where I spotted them, and will talk to lio about this when I see him. If he has a problem with it, I will change things to bring it in line with his thoughts.
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Re: Rachel Dare, Gate of Dreams[Approved 2-1+]
Sun Jul 21, 2013 12:23 pm
As per this thread, Rachel's powers have been upgraded, and her strength has gone from adept to advance.
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Re: Rachel Dare, Gate of Dreams[Approved 2-1+]
Sat Oct 19, 2013 1:00 pm
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