GLaDOS
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Re: GLaDOS
Thu Mar 31, 2011 2:23 pm
Application Checklist
- Name [X]
- Appropriate Age [X]
- Gender [X]
- Appearance Present [X]
- Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
- Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
- 10 sentences for personality [X]
- History is of appropriate length [X]
- Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
- Powers are described reasonably enough [O]
- Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
- Skills are not filled in [X]
- RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
- RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]
Comments/Notes: Almost there, but I see your lack of describing a few things as a problem
Explain the EXACT quantity of droids that can be made in Android Hell, for both normal and enraged. Can she make 50? 100? 1 million? Don't bring it up to ridiculous levels, now.
Explain how much neroutoxin is released per post, and the rate of expansion for the gas. Exactly HOW deadly is it? Can it kill a 0 tier who takes a single whiff of it? Please explain more for both ordinary and upgraded version. That is all.
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Re: GLaDOS
Thu Mar 31, 2011 8:53 pm
I hereby approve of this with a tier of
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Re: GLaDOS
Fri Apr 01, 2011 8:19 am
Approved under agreement with Raen.
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Re: GLaDOS
Sun Aug 07, 2011 10:34 am
I shall be adopting if possible!
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An android. That was what she was acknowledged as. Even though her appearance was constructed to be female. She was an android. What else would she want to be? There was no better being. She was far superior to any of the feeble-minded sacks of meat that created her. GLaDOS had been constructed by shinigami, but in the time she had been alive.. she had far surpassed any of them. Their primitive intelligence was nothing compared to the exponential knowledge held by her. She had the most knowledge stored out of any one or anything in the entirety of soul society, didn't she? Of course.. it's what she was built for.. right? ... Of course it was. No mere shinigami could match the knowledge she contained..
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The android carried herself as if she knew she was better than everyone around her. Her eyes always faced forward, and rarely, if ever, actually observed any person around her. The only time she would bother to observe someone would be if she saw them as a threat, in which case she could examine their physical makeup in under thirty seconds. A useful skill for a higher-class being such as herself. GLaDOS had been called to twelfth division, on this particular day, to deliver a field report to the captain, Kurotsuchi Mayuri. Now.. there was a shinigami she could respect. One who would give his life and body for the sake of science.. GLaDOS was half convinced that he was an android as well.. GLaDOS' eyes scanned over the door to twelfth division as she arrived, entering the base and disreguarding the security neurotoxin as she moved down the ramp, opening the inner door and crossing to where Captain Kurotsuchi was, standing still.
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"Captain Mayuri Kurotsuchi.. I have a vital report to give you on order from the captain commander." GLaDOS started.
And so it began.
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An android. That was what she was acknowledged as. Even though her appearance was constructed to be female. She was an android. What else would she want to be? There was no better being. She was far superior to any of the feeble-minded sacks of meat that created her. GLaDOS had been constructed by shinigami, but in the time she had been alive.. she had far surpassed any of them. Their primitive intelligence was nothing compared to the exponential knowledge held by her. She had the most knowledge stored out of any one or anything in the entirety of soul society, didn't she? Of course.. it's what she was built for.. right? ... Of course it was. No mere shinigami could match the knowledge she contained..
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The android carried herself as if she knew she was better than everyone around her. Her eyes always faced forward, and rarely, if ever, actually observed any person around her. The only time she would bother to observe someone would be if she saw them as a threat, in which case she could examine their physical makeup in under thirty seconds. A useful skill for a higher-class being such as herself. GLaDOS had been called to twelfth division, on this particular day, to deliver a field report to the captain, Kurotsuchi Mayuri. Now.. there was a shinigami she could respect. One who would give his life and body for the sake of science.. GLaDOS was half convinced that he was an android as well.. GLaDOS' eyes scanned over the door to twelfth division as she arrived, entering the base and disreguarding the security neurotoxin as she moved down the ramp, opening the inner door and crossing to where Captain Kurotsuchi was, standing still.
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"Captain Mayuri Kurotsuchi.. I have a vital report to give you on order from the captain commander." GLaDOS started.
And so it began.
I envy because of the heart.
I glutton because of the heart.
I covet because of the heart.
I am prideful because of the heart.
I sloth because of the heart.
I rage because of the heart.
Because of the heart...
I lust for everything about you.
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I glutton because of the heart.
I covet because of the heart.
I am prideful because of the heart.
I sloth because of the heart.
I rage because of the heart.
Because of the heart...
I lust for everything about you.
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