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-Basic-

Name: Anteros
Secret identity: Anteros
Race:Olympian God
Age:At least 2000 years old
Day Job: He owns a restaurant and is the most famous bartender in the East Coast.
Character alignment: Chaotic Neutral
-Likes and Dislikes-
THIS IS OPTIONAL
Likes: [what they like]
Love: [what they love can be people, places, or things]
Dislikes: [What they don't like]
Hate: [what they hate ex. veggies, needles, hospitals, etc... ]
Fear: [ what they fear ex. clowns, snakes, aliens, etc...]
Passion: [what are they passionate about? something other then people the love ex. passionate about music, martial arts, cars, etc...]

-Appearance-

Appearance:
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Hight: 7 feet. (varies)
Weight: 175 lbs (varies)

[left]-Important Info-

Personality: Anteros is a very eccentric God. Even though he is the God of reciprocated love he isn't as structured as he is supposed to seem. He follows his heart and does what he things is right. Some would say he's good, some would say he does whats best for himself, but in the end hes just a neutral party that just doesnt want to see harm come to others. Being a God of love he has no real clear-cut sexuality changing his preferences at the drop of the hat, but he respects that people are supposed to find their very special person and doesn't interfere with much peoples lives.

Background: Not much is known about Anteros' past, mainly because he has lived for so long that he himself doesn't even remember. He does remember how and why he was created. When his older brother Eros was born his mother and father, Aphrodite and Ares, though that Eros was lonely and didn't have someone to play with, what is the point of having people fall in love with someone if the other person can't accept the others feelings and love the in return, that is what Anteros means. As time passed Anteros and Eros grew up together and they are the closest brother in all of Olympus, complemeting each other in the perfect way. But as the years turned to centuries and so on Anteros wanted to see what the outside world was like, to see what he and his brother were doing to people.

Before he left his mother told him that Fortune and Poseidon wanted to speak to him in private. He went to the private meeting place and just like he was told Fortuna and Poseidon were there waiting for him. They told him that they had special gifts for him since he was going to go live with humans, gifts that would help him in times of need and that they could not keep on mount Olympus because if they did it would be a very obvious place to look for these dangerous powers. Fortuna gave him the "Cards of Luck and Loss" cards that held the powers of luck in them, granting Eros the ability to change the luck people have in their lives, but giving luck to people means that someone has to get bad luck so the universe is still in balance and doesn't cause mass damage. Poseidon gave him a special power that few other in the universe know exists, a power called "Sirenix". He told Anteros that when he enters this state he would be abloe to control vast amounts of water and have powers similar to what the sirens can do, but the most important part of it is that he can open a portal to what is called "The Infinite Ocean". The Infinite Ocean is a realm that contains infinite water and the bounds of what powers it contains are unknown even to the God of the Sea.

After Anteros left Olympus he somehow ended up in San Francisco. When he got there he saw new about these humans that had superpowers and that fought crime, he thought it was cool that these people could do such good and really not ask anything in return from others. These people were known as the "Teen Titans" a group of young guy and girls that fought crime there. He though that this was normal and just went on with his new normal life on Earth. After a few months in a club he frequented he saw a very cute guy and then their eyes met. At that instant both of them just stopped and walked towards each other. Because of his powers Anteros instantly knew the name of this person, his name was Miguel. After meeting they talked for the rest of the night non-stop, they had so much in common. When the club was about to close Miguel said "Lets go back to my place." and grabbed Anteros' hand. At the instant of hand grabbing he saw everything that Miguel was, his childhood, his family and his secret identity. This Miguel was the hero called "Bunker", Anteros knew that it would be really bad if he just told him outright that he knew Miguel's secret identity, so he just went along with it until he felt it was the right time.

Months passed as Anteros and Miguel got closer and closer as a couple, they seemed to be the perfect match for each other, both so vibrant and happy nothing seemed to phase them. During this time Anteros had opened a restaurant in a town named Happy Harbor, and he had to leave so that he could be a better owner. Anteros told Miguel that he had to leave soon and that he had to come clean about something. He told Miguel that from day one he knew his secret identity as a Teen Titan and that he, Anteros, was a God. for a little while Miguel was silent as he was processing all this information and the told Anteros that he was going to Rhode Island with him to work at the restaurant. Anteros was probably more shocked that Miguel had decided something so important so quick. The week afterwards Miguel told the Titans that he was leaving for Happy Harbor and that if they ever needed something to just contact him in whatever way they could, or maybe even visit. After that goodbye Anteros and Miguel went off to live new adventures in Happy Harbor.


-Powers -

SuperPowers:
Like all Olympian Gods he has the following abilities:
Superhuman Strength: All Olympians are superhumanly strong with the average male being able to lift about 30 tons and the average female being able to lift about 25 tons.
Superhuman Speed: All Olympians have the potential of being able to run and move at speeds much greater than the finest human athlete.

Superhuman Stamina: The musculature of all Olympians produces considerably less fatigue toxins during physical activity than the muscles of human beings. The average Olympian male and female can exert themselves at peak capacity for about 24 hours before fatigue impairs them.
Superhumanly Dense Tissue: The skin, muscle, and bone tissues of all Olympians are about 3 times as dense as the same tissue of a human body. This contributes, somewhat, to their superhuman strength and weight.

Superhuman Durability: The bodies of all Olympians are considerably more resistant to physical injury than the bodies of humans. Olympians are capable of withstanding great impact forces, exposure to temperature and pressure extremes, falls from great heights, etc. without sustaining physical injury.

Regenerative Healing Factor: Despite their natural durability, it is possible for any of the Olympians to sustain injury. However, if injured, their highly advanced metabolism enables them to recover with superhuman levels of speed and efficiency. As with most of their other powers, the speed and extent of these powers varies from one Olympian to another. Most Olympians, for instance, are not able to regenerate missing limbs or organs while a small minority can.

Immortality: All Olympians are functionally immortal. They are immune to the effects of aging and haven't aged since reaching adulthood. Their bodies are also immune to all known Earthly diseases and infection.

Energy Manipulation: All Olympians have some potential to manipulate magical or cosmic energies for some purpose. These powers are mostly limited to changing their appearance or shape, and teleporting across great distances. However, a small minority of the Olympians is capable of manipulating vast amounts of energy for a variety of purposes including teleportation, shape shifting, matter manipulation, augmentation of their physical capabilities, erecting powerful force fields, firing powerful blasts of energy for destructive purposes, granting superhuman powers to objects and beings, etc.

His specific powers are listed below: Much like his brother Eros, Anteros functions on the basis of love, but through the gives of the goddess Fortuna he has expanded powers over luck and a secret power that very few Gods know about.

Love is not blind: When Anteros looks at someone he can learn much about them and their life. He knows their name, but not their last names, and their true identity and he has access to view their love life on his cards (explained in equipment.) (Passive)

Gamble on Love: Once Anteros touches the person, with or without their permission, he gains the ability to change the path that their life will take for them to find their one true love. This comes from how he makes up the second part of love; while Eros makes the love connection Anteros makes the love reciprocal thus joining the two people in a bond. (Passive or at will)

Lucky, Lucky: At one point during his life Anteros was blessed by Fortuna, the goddess of luck. This allowed him to control the luck of those around him to tip the scales in their favor, but when you tip the scales for one side you tip them for the other, meaning that someone else has to take the short end of the stick and get the bad luck. Most times if it’s a minor thing nothing bad will happen, but as the reward gets bigger so does the penalty.

Sirenix: Sirenix is a long lost power that was given to Anteros by Neptune. This power, when called upon, allows him to channel the power of the sirens and add them to his powers and mix them with his. This also allows him to open the portal to a realm called the Infinite Ocean, an ocean world that connects to all other oceans in the universe. He has this power because if it weren’t in the hands of someone and just in nature, evil hands could enter the Infinite Ocean and have access to all worlds. The powers given to Anteros are the following
Underwater Prowess: Anteros becomes immune to pressure changes underwater and can swim as if he were flying. He doesn’t need to breathe underwater and can freely speak and use his magic underwater without any penalties.
Sirenix Song: When in Sirenix Anteros can communicate with underwater life no matter how big or small. This also lets him to put people under a spell that causes them to do as he says without a thought.
Water Control: Anteros has the ability to control any amount of water and use it as he desires. This also adds water and/or ice damage to his weapon attacks.




-Weapons andEquipment’s-

Weapon(s): Cards of Luck and Loss
These cards were given to Anteros by Lady Luck herself, the goddess Fortuna. They give him control over luck but on both sides, if he gives someone good luck someone has to get the bad luck. He usually takes up the bad luck in a form that won’t be to terrible, usually in something falling from the sky and falling on him, such as empty planes, lightning and trucks. Besides control over luck the cards bestow upon him several other abilities (listed below).
Precognition: With these cards and his own powers something interesting happens; Anteros can have quick glimpses at the future. Most of the time he uses this to see how people’s relationships are linked and what events will happen to these relationships in the future, but this ability can also be used in battle to predict what will happen in the next turn (until his next post) making more likely to avoid enemies attacks and protect his allies more effectively.
Tower: This ability enlarges a card as it becomes a floating shield that can withstand several tons of pressure against it. The shield is also fire proof and does not conduct electricity. Several cards can be put together and made into several shapes to provide maximum coverage.
Lucky Slots/Not-so-Lucky Slots: This ability turns some of the cards into rolling panes that after a turn stop and reveal a favorable or unfavorable result (regarding to Anteros, Favorable or unfavorable towards him), the better the lineup the better the effect. These effects are circumstantial to the thread it is used in. These are the order of the lucky slots: 7>Bar>Grape>Cherry. These are the order of Not-So-Lucky Slots: Skull and crossbones>Black Cat>Loser>Oops.

He is also currently the only "male" member of the Star Sapphires. He can use most of their power rings abilities but since he is new they arent very well developed but being a being of Love Anteros mostly uses his Star Sapphire abilities to bolster his own God abilities, enableling him to use his powers through the violet light of Love.

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Equipment(s): (Example: Utility belt)

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Alright, I'm going to be reviewing this power set for you. Furthermore, use the "Help Center" next time instead of going to character permissions. There is where we usually assist people with these sort of matters. Character Permissions is just for people who want to include other characters in their application or something.
"Superhuman Strength: All Olympians are superhumanly strong with the average male being able to lift about 30 tons and the average female being able to lift about 25 tons." - Since we have alot of people running around with superhuman strength on the site, I don't have much of a problem with this. However, if you are planning to port him here, you might want ot get rid of the Olympian thing.

"Superhuman Speed: All Olympians have the potential of being able to run and move at speeds much greater than the finest human athlete." - Again, we don't have issue with superspeed, but you'll probably have to get rid of the Olympian thing. Outside of that, you probably should add a bit more detail to this. Is it on par with shunpo/soindo? How much does it boost his speed? You don't need to put it in number form, but it just felt a bit short for me. I'd increase it to a paragraph.

Superhuman Stamina: The musculature of all Olympians produces considerably less fatigue toxins during physical activity than the muscles of human beings. The average Olympian male and female can exert themselves at peak capacity for about 24 hours before fatigue impairs them. - Since I'm not sure how being an Olympian would work on PH, I'd probably remove that and say this guy's body was constructed in such a way that it allowed for those toxins to grant him immense stamina.

Superhumanly Dense Tissue: The skin, muscle, and bone tissues of all Olympians are about 3 times as dense as the same tissue of a human body. This contributes, somewhat, to their superhuman strength and weight. How far does his superstrength go? Can he crush cars? Can he destroy buildings? Can he destroy entire city blocks? Can he take out forest? Can he destroy Mountains? Alongside that, how much has his defense increased from something like density?

"Superhuman Durability: The bodies of all Olympians are considerably more resistant to physical injury than the bodies of humans. Olympians are capable of withstanding great impact forces, exposure to temperature and pressure extremes, falls from great heights, etc. without sustaining physical injury." - I don't have much of a problem with this.

"Regenerative Healing Factor: Despite their natural durability, it is possible for any of the Olympians to sustain injury. However, if injured, their highly advanced metabolism enables them to recover with superhuman levels of speed and efficiency. As with most of their other powers, the speed and extent of these powers varies from one Olympian to another. Most Olympians, for instance, are not able to regenerate missing limbs or organs while a small minority can." - I don't have an issue with him being able to regenerate limbs/small organs. Just keep it at that level and possibly repairing bones over time.

Immortality: All Olympians are functionally immortal. They are immune to the effects of aging and haven't aged since reaching adulthood. Their bodies are also immune to all known Earthly diseases and infection. - I'd reword that to Semi-Immortal for this site. This is because we allow that sot of immortality on the site, if it deals with not aging, being immune to natural death and essentially, IF THEY ARE NOT KILLED, they can live forever. If you do it like that, I can allow this.

"Energy Manipulation: All Olympians have some potential to manipulate magical or cosmic energies for some purpose. These powers are mostly limited to changing their appearance or shape, and teleporting across great distances. However, a small minority of the Olympians is capable of manipulating vast amounts of energy for a variety of purposes including teleportation, shape shifting, matter manipulation, augmentation of their physical capabilities, erecting powerful force fields, firing powerful blasts of energy for destructive purposes, granting superhuman powers to objects and beings, etc." - I'd probably limit the teleporation to short distances, until he gets stronger. Alongside that, I'd limit it in battle like the Iramasha does. Furthermore, matter manipluation should be limited, if, there at all until he increases in strength. That will require more detail, drawbacks and so on. Everything else is alright with this section.

"His specific powers are listed below: Much like his brother Eros, Anteros functions on the basis of love, but through the gives of the goddess Fortuna he has expanded powers over luck and a secret power that very few Gods know about. "

Love is not blind: When Anteros looks at someone he can learn much about them and their life. He knows their name, but not their last names, and their true identity and he has access to view their love life on his cards (explained in equipment.) (Passive)
The part about him learning alot about a persons life just by looking at them? Yea, that is definitely heavily restricted here. The only way that could remotely work is through the will system. Though, I don't have a major issue with knowing a name.

"Gamble on Love: Once Anteros touches the person, with or without their permission, he gains the ability to change the path that their life will take for them to find their one true love. This comes from how he makes up the second part of love; while Eros makes the love connection Anteros makes the love reciprocal thus joining the two people in a bond. (Passive or at will)" - Yea, that won't be allowed here. That seems God Mod and forced upon the character. So I'd probably remove that for PH standards.

"Lucky, Lucky: At one point during his life Anteros was blessed by Fortuna, the goddess of luck. This allowed him to control the luck of those around him to tip the scales in their favor, but when you tip the scales for one side you tip them for the other, meaning that someone else has to take the short end of the stick and get the bad luck. Most times if it’s a minor thing nothing bad will happen, but as the reward gets bigger so does the penalty. " - I was planning on making a character that was based around luck as well. So, with that said, I may be able to help you in this regard as it seems...lacking. I believe there should be a limit to how much luck he can drain from an area, limit it to being used a few times a post and facing some sort of cooldown as well. Outside of that, it can be allowed, but you might have to rework and add more detail to a power like that.

Sirenix: Sirenix is a long lost power that was given to Anteros by Neptune. This power, when called upon, allows him to channel the power of the sirens and add them to his powers and mix them with his. This also allows him to open the portal to a realm called the Infinite Ocean, an ocean world that connects to all other oceans in the universe. He has this power because if it weren’t in the hands of someone and just in nature, evil hands could enter the Infinite Ocean and have access to all worlds. The powers given to Anteros are the following" - Not sure how to feel about that one. As long as he doesn't flood the world with it, I don't think I'd have a problem with it.

Underwater Prowess: Anteros becomes immune to pressure changes underwater and can swim as if he were flying. He doesn’t need to breathe underwater and can freely speak and use his magic underwater without any penalties. - I don't have a problem with this. I just ask that you add some more detail to it.

"Sirenix Song: When in Sirenix Anteros can communicate with underwater life no matter how big or small. This also lets him to put people under a spell that causes them to do as he says without a thought. " - I will not allow the spell, but it's fine to communicate with underwater life. It's even possible to control NPC water life, but I will not allow you to control IC characters like that.

"Water Control: Anteros has the ability to control any amount of water and use it as he desires. This also adds water and/or ice damage to his weapon attacks." - Care going into greater detail about this? Does it drain him to control large bodies of water? How much energy does it take to bend it? How much of it at one time can he control? What is the limit to this water control?

I'm not even going to get into the weapons until that much is fixed.



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Precognition: With these cards and his own powers something interesting happens; Anteros can have quick glimpses at the future. Most of the time he uses this to see how people’s relationships are linked and what events will happen to these relationships in the future, but this ability can also be used in battle to predict what will happen in the next turn (until his next post) making more likely to avoid enemies attacks and protect his allies more effectively.

That should have a limit of x number of uses per thread.

tar Sapphire Energy Conduit: The rings use Star Sapphire energy, supplied by a Power Battery, which in most cases takes the form of violet light. Star Sapphire Power ring's, have the ability to affect and use fundamental forces of the known universe, including electromagnetic energies such as gravity, radiation, heat, light, and powerful blasts of concussive force. The ring can also create fields of force formed from an unknown energy that was bound by the users' love. The limitations of such use are the skill, knowledge and imagination of the user. The power of love is apparently more powerful in numbers allowing for various star sapphires to group together to increase the effect of their power.

It can control one element. Nothing more.

Energy Blasts: The ring can be used to fire blasts of violet energy or create weapons such as projectiles of them. The ring can project beams of force powered by the love of the user. The weapons power is more an indication of the love of the user.

Same as above.

Force Field: The ring can create various force fields of various sizes and shapes to protect the wearer and others around him or her. With the cosmic scope of a Star Sapphire's duties, it is only natural that the power ring is designed for operation in space. The ring creates a force-field around the wearer, protecting her from the hazards of the void including filtration of stellar radiation and microscopic particulate matter which would ordinarily be fatal should the space debris strike the ring wielder at high speeds. An atmosphere appropriate to the ring wielder's biology is created inside the force field, body temperature is maintained and waste products are removed. Gravitational stresses which could cause injury are stabilized for the ring wielder. Theoretically, a ring wielder could use the ring as his/her/its sole source of life support.

Needs a limit of how much force it can take and a max of one post that it lasts, with a cool down of 3-4 posts per thread.

Energy Constructs: The ring can form constructs of violet energy. The primary function of the Power Ring is to provide a weapon capable of transforming the wearer's thoughts into physical constructs through the wearer's mastery of love. A Star Sapphire can create any particular items or construct that they can imagine as long as they have the mastery of love necessary to will it into existence. The constructs are made out of violet energy, which is a tangible form of pure love, and they exist only as long as a Star Sapphire is fueling it with their mastery of love. Items created by the rings are not indestructible and are only as powerful as the inspired love of the Star Sapphire creating them. The types of constructs usually reflects the ring wearer's personality.

...Through the wearer's mastery of love. Whatever. Also say that they can't use status effects or special effects as they are made of the same energy.


Crystallization: A Star Sapphire has the unique power to crystallize others with the power of love. This power is not fully understood but they apparently put the victim in a form of suspended animation. The power is great enough to crystallize a entire planet in a limited amount of time.

No.

Flight: By the manipulation of anti-gravitons and directed molecular movement, the ring allows the user to fly at incredible speeds.

Change "incredible" to "normal", please.

Interstellar Travel: Star Sapphires can careen across the infinite blackness of space at incredible speeds. Due in part to their mastery of love as well as the manipulation of anti-gravity technology and molecular movement they feel no resistance in space whatsoever.

No No No No No No No

Limited Cellular Regeneration: This ring has a limited ability to heal physical injuries. Star Sapphire can use the ring to repair minor injuries in herself or others.

Fine.

Electromagnetic Scanning: The ring has a wide range of detection abilities based on the imagination of the user. If one can conceive of it, she can probably detect it. Magical effects like clairvoyance, seem to be beyond the scope of the ring. Most normal electromagnetic phenomena are within the range of the ring, including radio, television, infrared, ultraviolet, and high frequency band communications.

Possibly place a range on the detection, like within 100 feet.

Universal Translator: Keeping in mind the myriad of worlds, life forms, and cultures throughout the cosmos, the power ring can translate virtually any language in the universe, facilitating diplomatic encounters rather than violent confrontations.

Fine.

Material Alteration: The Star Sapphire's uniform is not made out of fabric. It is created by the Power Ring whenever the wearer wills to wear it. It automatically appears over the wearer's normal clothing, and vanishes when the wearer wills to return to their civilian attire. Most Star Sapphire's wear similar uniforms that are programmed into the ring by default. However, each Star Sapphire is able to adjust their uniform to fit their own needs, personalities and whims.

Fine.

True Love Sight: ability to ignite the glow of a star sapphire crystal on her person. Those who gaze at it can see their hearts desire, the love they are missing. Only those who gaze into the light of the crystal can know what they see.

...No. That... isn't even anything related to energy. What?

Love Attunement: a unique ability to sense when eternal love is in jeopardy. When a heart is being attack anywhere in the galaxy. By attuning the heart of the victim to the heart of the Star Sapphire, a tether is created connecting them across vast tracks of space. The tether pulls the Star Sapphire across vast tracks of space to the victim so that she may save love. This attunement allows a Star Sapphire to also tell when others are in need of love and the state of love in their hearts, providing great insight into the personal lives of others.

No.

Mind Alteration: As the power ring relies on thought and will to operate, mind tampering is not impossible, the real difficulty lies in properly applying the power. There lies a risk of catastrophic damage to the mind should mistakes be made. A Star Sapphire can induce a form of mind alteration, by presumably filling a hole in ones heart with the power of love. The subject is slowly over time altered mentally and emotionally to except the power of love. Thus transforming their minds and personalities to fit the perimeters of the Star Sapphire Corp code.

No.

Avarice Immunity: Star Sapphire Rings are immune to the Orange Light of Avarice as Fatality once demonstrated.

What? I think you need to just auto-remove this.





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Well, seeing how both me and JJ handled this, I'll be moving this thread into Resolved Cases. Not to mention this guy appears to have been finished awhile ago from what I understand.


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