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Ganzo-Suguira WIP
Thu Sep 09, 2010 11:26 am
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General Information
Name: Ganzo
Appearance Age: 27
True Age: 412
Gender: Male
Element: Ganzo's element is reiatsu. However it is not only mastery of reiatsu control, he has incredible speed. His guardian beast is a dual fusion, giving him to arts to levels of power. He can manipulate reaitsu in many ways as well as move at incredible speeds which gives him many other uses.
Overall Appearance
Personality: Ganzo is typically the quiet type but he has a strong sense of justice. He doesnt like fighting much, but if he feels something is wrong he will step in. Ganzo will not interact with someone unless he knows them well or if they come to him. He is not cold, he will be friendly, but that is only because he gives everyone a chance to impress him enough to be friends.
Appearance:
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Weight: 171 pounds
Natural Abilities
Guardian Beast
Sacred Weapon: Ganzo has a glove. It isn't visible unless he summons it to his hand, and he does not need to say anything to summon it. Once it is on his hand, he has a mastery over reiatsu control. When using his power his glove lights up with a purple energy. Also when he summons this glove, he gains greater ability over speed. He can move faster than shunpo. He has not crossed paths with anyone faster then him. His speed often creates a personal dilemma for himself. He uses his speed to kill rather then his reiatsu powers.
Guardian Beast:
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Guardian Beast's World:
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Techinques: This is where you post what your guardian beast allows you to do, whether it be elemental or spiritual. Each guardian beast holds a power over a certain element or something you can control.
Magic:
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- Ganzo has such a vast conrol over the Suguira magic because of his mastery over reiatsu. He has slowly been training kido however he has not mastered it yet
Hoi: Designates a person as the target of the spell.
Joso: Designates an area as the target of the spell. Needs a high focus (Sacred drawn) and more Reiatsu.
Ketsu: Creates a barrier around the target enemy or area. The barrier can be used as a defensive messure around oneself, or to trap enemies for a short period of time. Enemies of the same or higher strength can break the barrier with a bit of effort. With a drawn Sacred, the barrier gets stronger.
Kai: Releases the barrier without causing damage.
Metsu: Collapses the barrier inwards, damaging all trapped inside. The more Reiatsu is used, the more devastating the explosion inside the collapsing barrier is. Can be used without a Sacred, the sword makes it stronger, however.
Tenketsu: Opens a dimensional rift in the barrier, disorting the Reiatsu of the one trapped inside, weakening the victim with time. Enemies that are far weaker than the user can be killed by this effect. Can only be used with a Sacred.
Zekkai: Using negative energy, the Suigara fires out an energy attack at the enemy, or repells an attack. A dark aura circles around the user of this technique. It does not require the use of a barrier beforehand, but a Sacred is needed. Since this increases negative feelings inside the user, frequent use is not recommoned, since it can cause depressions, destructive bloodrages or even suicidical thoughts.
Shinkai: Often called the strongest of the Suigara magics, this either creates a huge energy shield in front of the user to not only block, but reflect incoming attacks, or fires out many energy blades onto the target. This technique drains a huge amount of Reiatsu from the user, but has extreme force. If a target gets specified with the weaker spells, the attack has homing abilities. Without a Sacred, it can be deadly to even attempt to use it. Weaker Suigara would kill themselves by casting this.
Nenshi: Another way of binding, this creates a glowing energy thread in the collor of the Reiatsu of the user. It can be used to bind an enemy in place, struggle or torture him. It is connected directly to the palm of the user. This can be used without a Sacred.
Sekkai: Developed to be used against Suigara techniques and Bakudo, this can disrupt barriers by quite a bit, making it easier to break free.
Shuufuku: A healing spell that heals wounds and restores damaged objects. It first creates a weak barrier around the object or person, and then restoring Reiatsu is funeled into the barrier.
Shikigami: This creates small paper dolls that the user can use as measures of spying on enemies, since the user sees everything the small papercut does.
Musou: A technique to highten the body of the user. Pumping Reiatsu into the muscles, they get faster, react better and stronger, but give up capabilities with magic casting at the same time. Lasts for about 20 minutes.
Gekidou: is a Special Sugiura Magic that can, Create a strong Prism made out of the color of the user's Reaitsu around the opponent, effectively catching them and trapping them inside the prism. Similar to Six ways of binding light, it explodes when you make contact on the user, by an attack or even a punch, often causing damage into the body of the enemy from the powerful reaitsu being pushed down on their body. This Can be used without a sacred and depends more on the reaitsu of the user. In order to completely trap them however, you must be able to fully see them and they have to be at least a bit of a mile close into your radius to do so.
Kido: Ganzo can use up to level 71 kido.
Guardian Beast Unsealed
Joushou:("Ascending") Joushou is the first stage of a Suguira's power. This is like their Shikai. It is only tapping into a small percentage of their power, exactly 25%. It is mainly the form that they dream of, and it is up to the Guardian beast to decide if the wish is to be granted or not.
Zenou: ("Almighty") This form is their version of Bankai. This takes many years to learn, and then many many more to perfect. This is only tapping into 50% of their power. Their speed, strength, stamina, and durability increases quite a bit.
Kyuu Kyou:("Ultimate") The final stage of a Suguira's power. This is 100% of their power, and their soul. Their abilities are increased substantially, and most of the time Kyuu Kyou is forbidden to be released. Few have mastered it, for it is so taxing to release it. It is manifested as the true form of one's soul.
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Re: Ganzo-Suguira WIP
Fri Sep 10, 2010 2:13 am
Alright, I will be judging your app when it's done. Until then, I will be pointing out what needs to be changed. Immediately I noticed that you have reitsu mastery at only age 412. IMO, I would think you would need to be around 5000 for the prowess you describe. Also you cannot be the fastest, nor can you move faster than shunpo. Also Suguiras can use only up to level 40, and I doubt you've got control that far, since you'd probably need to be around 8000 for that kind of power.
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Re: Ganzo-Suguira WIP
Sat Sep 11, 2010 11:27 am
Thank you, I will take that into consideration for when I finish but please let me finish. This is still WIP because im undecided on what it is my character will be like. I've changed it three times..
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