Renesmee Oriameratsu

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Name:Renesmee Oriameratsu (Character name.)

Gender:Female(Male or female)

Age:She is 16 but has the looks of a 21 year old(real age and how old they look)

Personality:She is a kind and sweet girl,she can be a bitch and will kill anyone that attacks her or her loved ones.
(Everyone has a general personality)

Appearance:Renesmee has dark brown hair that hangs to her mid back, she has emerald green eyes which turn Yellow when attacking or defending herself, which include during sex,and when she is horny weird i know but still,she has pale skin (what they look like pics are welcomed )

Background/History: Renesmee was left is Houston,Texas as a Orphan the only thing connecting her to her pass was the note saying "This childs name is Renesmee", since her birth she has been going from foster home to foster home.After five years of foster care a family from japan came to Houston and wanted to adopt and american girl. This family was caucasion race though they wre born in japen makeing them Japenise. They were named Kazuka Oriameratsu and Meroko Oriameratsu, they also had a younge nine year old son named Zusuki Oriameratsu. They adopted the younge Renesmee and gave her the family name, accepting her into the family
Renesmee had a nack for Gynastics, she loved doing things like rings,the bar and of corse her favorite Ribbons. Renesmee trained for five years to become great at what she did, she had very good balance and strong upper body strength. Renesmee was popular in school, most students respected and loved her for talents and her kindness.
At the age of fourteen her family died from a attack from a hollow,Renesmee watched as her family was eaten by the hollow. Her family had no clue it was near by untill it was too late, though Renesmee screemed and pleeded for them to run, they didnt. So Renesmee ran and ran as the Hollow chased her,It wasent untill she reached the near by river that it was able to grab her,as the hollow lifted her to his mouth,she noticed a black butterfly then a sword which stabed into the mask of the hollow,her body instantly being droped onto the ground. Renesmee stared up at the male who had killed the monster,the male noticed her looking at him. his eyes seemed to be hurt as he stared at the younge girl, the male picked Renesmee up and covered her eyes,soon Renesmee felt sleepy and passed out in the males arms. The male carried her to the soul socity, where he raised her, It wasent till she was sixteen had Renesmee found out the reason why.
Renesmee Had been born originally in the Soul society, Her parents where known as Mizuki Kashikata and Zekensu Kashikata. The male that had rescused her was Zekensu's best friend, As a baby the parents she had never known had left her in the human world so she could grow up happy and unburded by the soul society. Renesmee requested to see her parents but the male just shook his head, "They died...by a hollow attack" was his only response before took her hand and led her to the school, This is where she spent the rest of her days training to fight. She deiceded she would fight and kill any hollow that came her way, they had taken both her familys and they wont take anyone else close to her,this is her mission (At least 3 paragraphs)

Zanpakutô Spirit: Gabriella roullet, it comes as the form of a black wolf,gabriella is a cock and smart alleck that loves to fight hollows,she also cares for others but it is hard to get her to admit it, it lives in the snow(Describe the physical manifestation of your sword. Include its name, appearance, personality, and where it lives.)

Sealed Zanpakutô :It looks like twin swords (what does the sword look like when its not released?)

Shikai Description:durning shikai Renesmees eyes turn pure yellow,her swords become a fan of swords (You or your sword's new appearance)

Shikai Abilities:MY shikai powers well one of then is the Crimson Blossums, a shower of sakura blossums surround the oppenet and when the oppents gaurd is down attacks,the sakura blossums sliceing the oppnent to sheads, in actuallty the sakura blossums are sharp and hard
My second attack is "the Sakura wave" I wave my fan and a wave of sakura petels wash over the oppenent,agine becomeing like blades and cutting the oppnent,though that is a trick,as the sakura blossums cut the oppent it sucks some power from the oppent, makeing them weaker (What are the abilities your Shikai has? Do not overpower your shikai.)

Release:(What you have to say in order to release. try to be original.)

Shinigami Skill Level:Kidou:adept Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Shinigami Skill Level: Swordsmanship:advanced Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Hollow Skill Level: Sonido:adept Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Hollow Skill Level: Cero/Bala:beginer Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level: Hand-to-Hand:advanced Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master

Bankai Description:Renesmee eyes become Crimson red during this fase, Gabriella (the swords) slipt into two large fan like swords (The appearance of you and the sword, assuming it still is a sword)

Bankai Abilities: During this fase her sakura abilitys become more crule
Her fans are now Black instead of pink, As she slashes her fan the energy leaks out and causes a strong wave of energy that seems to engulf and consume the oppenent, the sakura wave is mostly the same,except the flower petels now change to black and they look more dagger like then flowers (Your sword's abilities now that it is in its ultimate stage)

Vizard powers:has immense healing powers(what powers your vizard has)

Hollow form:she looks like a black wolf which purple marking all over her (minus the hair) (If they lose control...what do they look like?)

Hollow mask:Renesmee has been able to keep her mask on for a total of 8 hours before she passes out, her mask is a weird sort, it looks like a wolf with purple marking all over it, the left eye haveing a mom shape scratch in it (A picture of their mask and how long they can have it on)

Resurrección: (ONLY IF DISCUSSED WITH FROST OR OTHER ADMIN) (Describe their transformation including abilities and appearance.)

Roleplay Sample:The warm summer breeze blew threw the air on this summer night, in a small city where anything and everything happens. A young girl walked along the park side walks, she had no where to go tonight since she had arrived at the new town in hopes of finding some way to live, The girl was around the age sixteen, with a pale complexion, small but curvy frame. She had a fit and well placed body that made most high school girls jealous, as she walked through the park the moon shimmers would bounce off her skin and reflect a light pale. She glanced around the park area seeing no one was around this late at night, her emerald green eyes just starring off into the distance for a moment.

As a strong breeze passed threw her long, wave dark brown hair fluttered in the wind. She chuckled softly when she realized she had not brought a jacket with her when she had ran away from her old home town, She had a small gym bag and a purse along with her. The very outfit she wore seemed to make her look like she was going out partying then a run away, She wore a devil wears prada green t-shirt, her favorite black skinnys, and a pair of black knee high boots. She walked over to the swing sets her boots slightly clacking; she dropped her bags and sat down upon on of the swings. She couldn’t help but think she’d be sleeping outside for a while, “eh at least I choose the summer to run away” She spoke softly as a soft chuckle escaped her glossed lips

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Where it stands now I can only make this a 3-2 or 3-3. In order for me to grade this higher your gonna have to put alot more detail into your app.

Also,take note of the things I saw on your app.

1. Add your release phase. If she doesn't have one, state the reason.
2. DO NOT FILL OUT YOUR SKILLS UNTIL WE GIVE YOU A TIER
3. Where your app stands now, I cannot give you a Bankai.
4. Add at least a paragraph or two on Personality.
5. Give more information on her hollow form

You have seven days to fix this before I deny it.

Date of this post 6/21/10